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       ((found it hawky!)). Gingerspots of windclan
       By: :blue: Date: October 15, 2012, 8:04 pm
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       Ginger spots of Riverclan
       Meh, she can be a warrior...
       Name:Gingerspots
       Gender:female
       Alliance:windclan
       Rank:warrior
       Appearance (at least four sentences): she is a slim black she
       cat. She had ginger spots. Her eyes are a glowing blue.  Her fur
       is long and soft.
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       Personality (at least four sentences): gingerspots is a smart,
       intellectual kitty with a flare for drama. She is skeptic and
       hard to convince. She really likes to go her own path or no
       path. She is an independent, middle aged cat that seemed to find
       a way to question everything.
       History (at least six sentences):gingerspots was born in her
       clan like most of her clanmates. Her mother didn't offer her
       much, nor her father. Her siblings were very reliant on each
       other, but left gingerspots out. This is what made gingerspots
       independent. Ater that, her siblings got ambitions, they left
       with their ambitions, nev to be seen again. Her mother and
       father died, she never really liked them.
       Comments (optional): meh, sorry for not understanding this at
       first
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       Re: ((found it hawky!)). Gingerspots of windclan
       By: Silverhawk1 Date: October 15, 2012, 9:10 pm
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       Hey Blue! There's a few things you can fix in your bio.
       —The title of your post and the alliance section of your bio say
       Gingerspots is from WindClan, although the first sentence of
       your post says she's from RiverClan. She can only be in one
       Clan.
       —In all Clan names, "Clan" is spelled with a capital C.
       —Your sentences are quite choppy. Try combining some or
       lengthening them.
       —You need to put a space between the description of the section
       and the first word in each sentence.
       —The first word in each sentence needs to be capitalized.
       Bump your bio when you're done! ^^
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