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#Post#: 1661--------------------------------------------------
Smoke of Roaring Wildfire-- Lead prey-hunter of the ToRW
By: razor Date: November 19, 2012, 11:08 pm
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[font=kunstler script]Smoke of Roaring Wildfire[/font]
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Name:
[Smoke] of Roaring Wildfire
Gender:
tom
Alliance:
Tribe of Rushing Water
Rank:
Lead Prey-hunter
Appearance (at least four sentences):
This cat is disappointed by his appearance. Smoke is a light
gray short-hair, with what seems to be a bit lighter gray
stripes. The tom is actually handsome, he thinks he looks too
much like a she-cat. Why? This tom-cat is very slim, sleek, and
fast, traits perfect for a prey hunter, but all the traits most
she-cats have! On his chest, Smoke has an upside down triangle
of white that comes from between his shoulders, then goes down.
When the white creeps up to his neck, it covers his muzzle, and
ends just above it. He has thin, white rings around his eyes.
His eyes, his gorgeous eyes. Smoke's eyes are a very beautiful
hazel, that actually become a green closer to his pupils. This
tom has delicate white paws, and a clean, white tail-tip.
Personality (at least four sentences):
This tom can be, and is almost always very annoying. This cat
puts himself down, pressuring himself much too hard. This causes
Smoke to be rude to others, and pressuring them to do the best
as well. Very, very few cats are lucky they have this
prey-hunter as their friend, that showing how difficult he is.
History (at least six sentences):
As a kit, he was larger than his each of his littermates, though
they were both small she-cats. What he didn't know, is that it
ran in his family for them all to be prey-hunters. Most cats in
their family were small, lithe, and fast. Smoke, being bigger
than his littermates, like stated before, thought he was the
best. The strongest, the leader.
He realized he was not, though, when he became a prey-hunter
to-be.
Smoke realized that many other cats were larger, stronger,
[i]better than him. He would pick fights with the cave guard
to-be's, which caused him much pain. This was when he started
pressuring himself, and pressuring himself hard. The tom
couldn't switch and be a Cave-guard, so he had to be the
absolute best Prey-hunter. Best.[/i]
Comments (optional):
Okay, because creep is stepping down, I recieved Stoneteller
from her. I am willing to drop Smoke to a prey-hunter if it
means keeping one ToRW HP.[/center]
#Post#: 1662--------------------------------------------------
Re: Smoke of Roaring Wildfire-- Lead prey-hunter of the ToRW
By: hawkfire Date: November 19, 2012, 11:56 pm
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[sup]You can have her be the head, if you fix one thing about
your bio:
Your sentences in the appearance are a little choppy. Just try
lengthening them a bit.
Other than that, your bio looks great![/sup]
#Post#: 1664--------------------------------------------------
Re: Smoke of Roaring Wildfire-- Lead prey-hunter of the ToRW
By: razor Date: November 20, 2012, 12:23 am
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Bump--
[s]i hope[/s]
#Post#: 1668--------------------------------------------------
Re: Smoke of Roaring Wildfire-- Lead prey-hunter of the ToRW
By: hawkfire Date: November 20, 2012, 12:59 am
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APPROVED~!!
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