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       Shadowfire of ShadowClan
       By: shadowclaw619 Date: November 18, 2012, 5:40 pm
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       Name Shadowfire
       Gender male
       Alliance ShadowClan
       Rank Warrior
       Appearance Black legs with white spots all over them. Reddish
       orange pelt with white dots. Black tail with white tip. Red
       tabby head with icy blue eyes.
       Personality Extermely scared because when he was a kit he snuck
       out of camp was almost killed by a hawk. Exetremely trustworthy
       because he was treated with respect when he was a kit. Caring
       because he hated to see someone hurt or bullied. Loyal because
       when was an apperntice his mentor punished him for various
       unknown reasons.
       History
       When he was a kit he snuck out of camp and was attacked by a
       hawk and almost killed. When an apperntice his mentor had
       extreme methods of punishment. Causing him to be very loyal
       because he was scared if he disobeyed he would be punished
       extremely. When a warrior his mate died in childbirth along with
       his kits. In a border skirmish he had is ear split but it
       healed. His life currently is normal but his experiences from
       the past still haunt him.
       #Post#: 1643--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Shadowfire of ShadowClan
       By: Silverhawk1 Date: November 19, 2012, 8:04 pm
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       Silver here.
       Your bio is looking great so far, but there's some things you
       can do to fix it:
       -There has to be a colon at the beginning of each section (ex.
       Appearance:)
       -Your sentences are very choppy. Try lengthening them or merging
       some together.
       Bump this when you're done.
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