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Strikestar of Thunderclan
By: Goatee Date: October 13, 2012, 10:17 pm
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Can't believe it... You've turned it into advanced only, Hawkeh!
XD
Name: Strikestar
Gender: Male
Alliance: Thunderclan
Rank: Leader
Appearance (at least four sentences): Strikestar is a dashing
tom with a light brown pelt. He has bright green eyes, that
shine with fierceness. He has a scar placed directly on his
front leg, that goes down from the front and top to the back
middle. Last, but not least, his ears are white due to twoleg
meddling, something he was teased for when he was young, sadly.
Personality (at least four sentences): Strikestar is a bit
gruff and fierce on the outside, but on the inside, he's a
different cat entirely. His greatest quality is compassion for
others, even when it's another clan. Another good quality of is
that he would never order someone to do something he wouldn't
do, and would listen to the lowliest apprentice for advice when
need be. The greatest quality of his personality is that he
always puts others lives as more valuable than his, and would
die for his clanmates, even an elder or kit.
History (at least six sentences):Strikestar had a relatively
normal history. He was born in Thunderclan, and lived, yada
yada yada... But that changed. He got caught up in twoleg
business, and in the shenanigans that occured, they tried to
pour bleach on him. Fortunately, it only hit his ears, but he
was teased for it all the time. He dreamed of a Thunderclan
where everyone would be equal. Others spat on his beliefs,
claiming it was impossible, but he is trying to make that happen
now...
Comments (optional): Hastily typed. less so then the fail one
though. XD Incomplete.
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Re: Strikestar of Thunderclan
By: hawkfire Date: October 13, 2012, 10:27 pm
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[s]I had to do it, Goatee. >_>[/s]
Your sentences are a bit choppy. Try lengthening them or
combining some to make them longer. Bump it when you're done. ^^
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Re: Strikestar of Thunderclan
By: Goatee Date: October 14, 2012, 9:33 pm
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BUMP. XD I changed it. Slightly. XD
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Re: Strikestar of Thunderclan
By: hawkfire Date: October 14, 2012, 9:41 pm
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Approved! :>
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Re: Strikestar of Thunderclan
By: Goatee Date: October 16, 2012, 6:57 pm
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YAY! 83
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