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Purekit of Windclan---Briardrift of Windclan
By: Pure:) Date: October 28, 2012, 10:20 pm
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[font=times new roman]Name:
Purekit
Gender:
She-cat
Alliance:
Windclan
Rank:
Kit
Appearance:
Purekit is a very slender she-cat with a light grey pelt and an
sgile figure. She has one white spot over her right eye and a
twisted left back paw that she was born with. A white star shape
hides on the bottom pad of her twisted paw. This little she-cat
has baby-blue eyes and is blind in the one eye with the spot
over it.
Personality:
Purekit is a calm kit who would rather stop a fight than start
one. She isn't afraid to speak up, though but Sometimes
Purekit's stubborness can get her in serious trouble. She is
slightly a cry baby and just wants to be kind to everyone and
everything. Though Purekit isn't clan born she respects the
warrior ways and tries to obey the rules.
History:
As a newborn, her real mother, Green (Not a real character),
left her to die. She wandered around, yowling for warmth and
milk, completely confused. Finally the kit wandered onto
Windclan territory and stumbled into Briardrift. Purekit, who
was Pure at the time, was adopted by the mateless mother and
soon offically became a part of Windclan. Now, Purekit lives
with Briardrift happily and trains in the Warrior ways.
Comments: Erm...there wasn't anything for the age so I guess I
should say she is 4 moons old..
Name:
Briardrift
Gender:
She-cat
Alliance:
Windclan
Rank:
Warrior
Appearance:
Briardrift is a perfectly white she-cat with black paws. Her
left ear is brown along with her left front paw and her tail is
striped in black, brown, and copper. Briardrift has beautiful,
mysterious, round young eyes the color of aged copper, flecks of
metal-y copper-green in them; she is sleek and agile, and skinny
as a stick. On the wide bone (I don't exactly know what to call
it...a thigh?) of her right hind leg she has a scar in the shape
of a briar patch that runs all along her thigh(?). In other
words, Briardrift is a very beautiful young she-cat.
Personality (at least four sentences):
Briardrfit is a very kind, quiet she-cat who hates words and
speech. It's not thst she wishes letters they were never made,
just that she agrees with the saying 'Silence means a thousand
words.' In conclusion, she never really talks but when she does,
its choppy. She is friendly to all, very smart, quick-thinking
and silent.
History (at least six sentences):
Briardrift was born into Windclan and exceled swiftly. She was
origonally (Spelt that wrong. Help! DX) born to the name
'Swiftkit' but when she was just a moon old she fell into a
patch of briar. Since that day she has had a strange scar on the
wide part of her right hind leg thats shaped like a patch of
briar bush. Her name was then changed to Brairkit. Due to her
fast learning, she became an apprentice at five moons and became
a warrior only two moons later. Currently, Briardrift spends her
time in Windclan dreaming of becoming (Spelt that wrong, too!
D'X) the Deputy and maybe even the Leader!
Comments (optional): Briardrift is now eight moons old.[/font]
#Post#: 546--------------------------------------------------
Re: Purekit of Windclan---Briardrift of Windclan
By: hawkfire Date: October 28, 2012, 10:38 pm
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Hawky here.
These bios are looking great so far, but there are a couple
things you can fix.
•You have a couple spelling mistakes.
•Your sentences are a bit choppy. Try combining or lengthening
some.
•The personality section in Briardrift's bio is too short.
Bump this when you're done!
#Post#: 553--------------------------------------------------
Re: Purekit of Windclan---Briardrift of Windclan
By: Pure:) Date: October 28, 2012, 10:55 pm
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BUMP! :-*
#Post#: 556--------------------------------------------------
Re: Purekit of Windclan---Briardrift of Windclan
By: hawkfire Date: October 28, 2012, 10:57 pm
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Approved! Lol you spelled 'becoming' right. x3
#Post#: 558--------------------------------------------------
Re: Purekit of Windclan---Briardrift of Windclan
By: Pure:) Date: October 28, 2012, 10:59 pm
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Haha oops! XD I'm so dumb! :P
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