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Pantherstride, deputy of Riverclan
By: Intensity Date: October 28, 2012, 3:27 pm
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[center][font=georgia]username: Intensity
display name: Intensity
activity level: 9/10
muse level:8/10
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name: Pantherstride
clan: Riverclan
gender:Male
appearance:
His Pelt
What would you say when you first saw Pantherstride? "What a
pelt!" His pelt is a simple black pelt. It isnt really shiny nor
smooth but the thing that makes you look at his pelt is the
ruffles. The ruffles are all lined together like ripples in the
night sky. You wonder, How'd that happen? Well nobody knows the
truth. Pantherkit doesnt know ethier. You could solve it then.
The mystery of the fur!
His Eyes
Oh his eyes, his eyes, his eyes. What a wonder! He has perfect
sea green eyes that gives the scene of an ocean. Always has a
hint of a sparkle in the corner. Pantherstrides eyes make an
illusion that his eyes are smooth waves rolling on the shore.
Very calming but fierce at the same time.
In General
Pantherstride in general is a big kit. He has a good structure
and you could say good looks. He's not the bragging and showing
off type so he doesnt really notice his looks. As a mature cat
you know he'll be twice as big as most cats and handsome too.
His legs have a sturdy build with good muscles but the part he
hates about himself is his paws. If you look under his paws you
will see he has soft silky fur at the bottem. Nothing like the
ripples in the night sky just smooth cute paws! And having soft
paws doesnt help his skills ethier. Their like kitty-pet paws
what do you expect? But he believes in himself that he would be
more skilled if he tries harder and harder at everything never
giving up.
personality: Funny but strict when needs to. Also active but
always thinks everything out before doing. Exactly like his
saying, Think before doing. Wise huh? Pantherstride wants to be
like his father, looked up by cats, brave and strong, helping
the weak and managing the pressure! He would do anything to
please his father 24/7 and get a thanks from him. To she-cats an
absoulute gentleman. Always complimenting them and helping them.
Pantherstride is very loyal and will never betray you. He
believes if you be good and faithful, Starclan would give you a
good path.
likes: Playing with kits, teaching
dislikes: Being mean, hates to fight
weaknesses: Sometimes can be too strict, sometimes too not
strict, goofy, climbing, fighting in undergrowth
strength: fighting in open land, hunting, leading
history: Pantherkit is a halfclan cat. He was born in Riverclan
but his mother was a loner. Pantherkit had 2 sibling. 2
brothers, 1 named Splashkit and the other was unknown.
Pantherkit was told he was dead 3 seconds after he was born. Now
about Splashkit. Splashkit was good at everything! If Pantherkit
did something his brother would do it, but would be better at
it. Pantherkit got jealous quickly.
When Pantherpawwas just a newly made apprentice he explored too
much and got captured in a hoarders house. He escapes quickly
showing his skills. When he got back Pantherpaw woke up and
Splashpaw was gone. There was only his scent. Pantherpaw
followed the scent and it led him to...The scene where Splashpaw
died. There was blood, and scratches everywhere. He found
Splashpaws body inside a bush his eyes staring up at the sky. He
promised to avenge his brothers death. He tracked the murderer
down and found him soon after he was made a warrior. The
murderer turned out to be..His brother. Pantherstride asked why
he had killed Splashpaw and his brother explained he was
forgotten about and was abandoned, for Splashpaw was everything
to everyone and nobody cared about him. Pantherstride didnt
think that was a way to deal with it and killed his 2nd brother.
Pantherstride became a well known and respected warrior. He also
became deputy of Riverclan after that.
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Re: Pantherstride, deputy of Riverclan
By: Silverhawk1 Date: October 28, 2012, 9:45 pm
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This bio is looking great so far, but there's one thing you can
do to fix it.
On multiple occasions, you called Pantherstride 'Pantherkit'. A
kit can't be a deputy, nor can a cat have two names.
Bump this when you're done!
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Re: Pantherstride, deputy of Riverclan
By: Intensity Date: October 30, 2012, 6:45 pm
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Bump
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Re: Pantherstride, deputy of Riverclan
By: Intensity Date: November 1, 2012, 4:53 pm
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[font=georgia]Bump...But I don't think somethings fair. I know
your bio has to be everything that qualifies to be accepted, and
you said everything was great except what I called him. So I
bumped it, and then because no one replied after someone else
got the deputy of Riverclan. [/font]
#Post#: 1080--------------------------------------------------
Re: Pantherstride, deputy of Riverclan
By: hawkfire Date: November 2, 2012, 11:28 pm
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[sup]I'm sorry, but I believe the RiverClan deputy was accepted
before you bumped it. If not, I'm sorry for the inconvenience.
This site is new and the staff are getting used to doing this,
since none of us have ever done it before. I apologize.[/sup]
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