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Carnivalkit of Riverclan
DIR By: Puffysky
Date: October 16, 2012, 5:32 am
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Name:
Carnivalkit - Carnivalglory
Gender:
Male
Age:
3 moons
Alliance:
Riverclan
Rank:
Kit
Appearance [at least four sentences]:
The kitten has an alluring orange pelt, that glimmers in the
sun. He had the brightest of yellow eyes, and a warm smile
always comes with his eyes. Carnivalkit's pelt is long, and
fluffy, giving him warmth in the winter, but in the summer, it
sheds, cooling him down. Last, he has a bright pink nose and
white, twitchy whiskers.
Personality [at least four sentences]:
Most of the kitten's personality will be developed later on in
roleplay, but I have a few basics. He is quite an energetic
kitten, always bouncing around like an insane dog. Carnivalkit's
energy sometimes causes him to be a tad annoying, at times. He
also may seem grumpy when he does not get his way with certain
things. Last, he is bright, always walking with a bounce in his
step.
History [at least six sentences]:
Carnivalkit was born a Kittypet, with a loving mother, he could
not say the same with his twolegs, though. They never bought him
little feathery toys of stuffed friends. He was one of two Kits,
but has no idea who his sibling is. After feeling neglected by
his two-legs, he decided to run away. This adventurous kitty
wandered into the forest, straight into Riverclan territory.
There, he was adopted by a queen, and has no memory of his old
family, or that he even has old family. Now, he gets a feather
whenever there is a bird on the freshkill pile.
Comments [optional]:
I love his name!
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Re: Carnivalkit of Riverclan
DIR By: Puffysky
Date: October 16, 2012, 1:34 pm
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Bump!
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Re: Carnivalkit of Riverclan
DIR By: Evie~
Date: October 16, 2012, 2:10 pm
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Looking great! In the 'appearance' section, the second word
should not be capitalized because it is not a proper noun. Same
goes with the word 'queen' in the history section. Change those
and you are accepted. :)
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Re: Carnivalkit of Riverclan
DIR By: Puffysky
Date: October 16, 2012, 3:06 pm
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Fix!
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Re: Carnivalkit of Riverclan
DIR By: Evie~
Date: October 16, 2012, 7:54 pm
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ACCEPTED !
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