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#Post#: 456--------------------------------------------------
-- Rockpaw of S h a d o w C l a n ---
DIR By: Rocknose
Date: October 28, 2012, 4:08 pm
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Name;; [right]Rockpaw[/right]
Age;;[right]8 moons[/right]
Gender;; [right]She-cat[/right]
Orientation;; [right]Straight[/right]
Alliance;; [right]ShadowClan Medicine Cat App[/right]
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
[right] Rockpaw is a slender silver-furred cat with thick black
tabby stripes. Her round eyes on her youthful face are a bright
electric green, unlike the blue ones of her brother. She has a
skinny face and muzzle with a small black nose and long feathery
whiskers, similar to her long-furred tail. Her pointed ears are
black at the tip, along with her tail.[/right]
Personality {at least four sentences};; [right]Rockpaw is a
really nice, sweet young she-cat, and any cat would want to
befriend her. She cares for everyone, even if they're in a
different Clan or not in a Clan at all. The apprentice greatly
despises fighting and tries to avoid it unless it is absolutely
nessecary. She is very bright and intelligent and loves learning
about almost anything, and she loves hearing or telling
stories.[/right]
History {at least six sentences};; [right]Rockpaw really doesn't
really have much of a history. She doesn't know who her parents
are, but apparently they died in some battle, according to
senior warriors and elders. She has three siblings: Smokpaw,
Lilykit, and Silverkit, and she was always closest to Smokepaw.
Lilykit and Silverkit were taken in a BloodClan kit raid quite a
while ago, and never made their way back. She then began taking
an interest in medicine, herbs, and remedies that she often
watched the medicine cat handle.Rockkit would always enjoy
helping to sort herbs with the medicine cat, and soon became a
medicine cat apprentice.[/right]
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
[right]A tired face peeked out of the ShadowClan medicine den,
watching as the sun climbed up in the sky. It was Rockpaw, the
medicine cat's young apprentice, who looked quite glum as the
sun's rays spead across the camp. Oh, no! She thought. I'm
supposed to be finished by now! The poor young cat had been up
all night, sorting and memorizing all of the herbs. She had
dumped them all in a big pile in the center around moonhigh, and
carefully began sorting them back. But there was still quite a
few more herbs in the big heap, and her mentor was going to
return from the moon(stone?pool?) to see what she'd done. Now I
have to work extra hard![/right]
Comments;; Nope.
#Post#: 476--------------------------------------------------
Re: -- Silverthief of B l o o d C l a n --- wip
DIR By: pepper ♔
Date: October 28, 2012, 4:32 pm
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I'm afraid BloodClan already has a leader. :c
#Post#: 504--------------------------------------------------
Re: -- Silverthief of B l o o d C l a n --- wip
DIR By: Rocknose
Date: October 28, 2012, 5:18 pm
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Yes, so I've noticed. :|
#Post#: 507--------------------------------------------------
Re: -- Silverthief of B l o o d C l a n --- wip
DIR By: pepper ♔
Date: October 28, 2012, 5:25 pm
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there are quite a few mca/mc positions, and maybe a few deputy
slots...
#Post#: 509--------------------------------------------------
Re: -- Silverthief of B l o o d C l a n --- wip
DIR By: Rocknose
Date: October 28, 2012, 5:27 pm
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Yuppers, I checked.
#Post#: 518--------------------------------------------------
Re: -- Rockpaw of S h a d o w C l a n ---
DIR By: Rocknose
Date: October 28, 2012, 5:52 pm
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BUMP!
I changed it.
#Post#: 543--------------------------------------------------
Re: -- Rockpaw of S h a d o w C l a n ---
DIR By: pepper ♔
Date: October 28, 2012, 6:38 pm
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Hey, Rocknose!
Your bio's looking great, but there is one thing.
xxx| You have quite a few choppy sentences in there. Can you
find them and fix them, please?
Thanks so much!
<33333 ------- Peppy
#Post#: 573--------------------------------------------------
Re: -- Rockpaw of S h a d o w C l a n ---
DIR By: Rocknose
Date: October 28, 2012, 7:53 pm
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Will do!
#Post#: 577--------------------------------------------------
Re: -- Rockpaw of S h a d o w C l a n ---
DIR By: Rocknose
Date: October 28, 2012, 8:00 pm
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Done! Bump!
#Post#: 578--------------------------------------------------
Re: -- Rockpaw of S h a d o w C l a n ---
DIR By: pepper ♔
Date: October 28, 2012, 8:06 pm
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Much better! c: However, you still have a few choppy sentences
in there. Can you fix them?
Thanks!
<333 ------- Pepper
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