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Lockstock [Leader of Bloodclan?]
By: Tear1to1shed Date: October 28, 2012, 1:45 pm
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[sub]Name;; Lockstock
Age;; adult, full warrior age [not good with the whole moons
thing]
Gender;; Tom
Orientation;; Bisexual
Alliance;; Bloodclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Lockstock is a tall and slightly older looking Tom with ragged
tabby fur.
He has round ears, the left one is torn and has dark deep blue
eyes.
The tabby Tom has larger paws than most cats and some of his
whiskers are tangled.
Around his muzze where it is darker, it is starting to gray.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
Lockstock is an all buisness sort of cat who does not tolerate
back talk.
He is very stern and strict and can rub off as a mean kind of
guy very quickly.
Despite how strict he can be, he can be friendly to those he
cares for, and has a huge soft spot for kits.
He has a very cold sense of humor and can be considered sadistic
at times.
History {at least six sentences};;
Lockstock was living with a group of rogues who where
maliciously killing innocent cats,
And he was concidered their head guard and in charge of their
rules and diciplin.
Lockstock was asked by the leader to kill his firstborn kit and
his mate and he did so --
Though this seemed to change who he was and how he acted
drastically.
He worked along side a partner who had a huge secret crush on
him that Lockstock was not comfortable with,
But the two were practically two birds of a feather and got
along very well.
But things were t always so good after,his working partner was
killed in a rebellion attack.
he ran away from the group and seeked refuge in Bloodclan very
quickly, adapting to their ways and ideas so he could fit in.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
The sound of clumsy loud paws pattering against the soft earth
could be heard as Lockstock stepped out of the warrior den. The
large greying Tom let out an audible yawn and took a look around
with disinterested blue eyes.
looks like half the clan is still asleep. Wel'll need to get
started on tasks very soon.
He thought to himself before heading out to search for his
clanmates.[/sub]
#Post#: 365--------------------------------------------------
Re: Lockstock [Deputy of Bloodclan?]
By: »ℓooking up« Date: October 28, 2012, 1:59 pm
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Hey Tapioca!
Your bio looks good so far, here are some little things wrong
with it:
[x] the history should be six sentences, but I only see four
[x] your sentences are a bit choppy
[x] the deputy is already taken; but you can have the leader
-- »ℓooking up«
#Post#: 368--------------------------------------------------
Re: Lockstock [Deputy of Bloodclan?]
By: Tear1to1shed Date: October 28, 2012, 2:02 pm
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[sub]
Alright I'll try to fix this up.
Sorry, it was pretty okay for what I tried on my iPad xD I'll
redo it.[/sub]
#Post#: 370--------------------------------------------------
Re: Lockstock [Deputy of Bloodclan?]
By: »ℓooking up« Date: October 28, 2012, 2:04 pm
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Okay, bump when you're done!
-- »ℓooking up«
#Post#: 373--------------------------------------------------
Re: Lockstock [Leader of Bloodclan?]
By: Tear1to1shed Date: October 28, 2012, 2:13 pm
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[sub]bump[/sub]
#Post#: 385--------------------------------------------------
Re: Lockstock [Leader of Bloodclan?]
By: Witherstar Date: October 28, 2012, 2:31 pm
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[quote author=Tapioca link=topic=53.msg362#msg362
date=1351449950]
[sub]Name;; Lockstock
Age;; adult, full warrior age [not good with the whole moons
thing]
Gender;; Tom
Orientation;; Bisexual
Alliance;; Bloodclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Lockstock is a tall and slightly older looking Tom with ragged
tabby fur.
He has round ears, the left one is torn and has dark deep blue
eyes.
The tabby Tom has larger paws than most cats and some of his
whiskers are tangled.
Around his muzze where it is darker, it is starting to gray.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
Lockstock is an all buisness sort of cat who does not tolerate
back talk.
He is very stern and strict and can rub off as a mean kind of
guy very quickly.
Despite how strict he can be, he can be friendly to those he
cares for, and has a huge soft spot for kits.
He has a very cold sense of humor and can be considered sadistic
at times.
History {at least six sentences};;
Lockstock was living with a group of rogues who where
maliciously killing innocent cats,
And he was concidered their head guard and in charge of their
rules and diciplin.
Lockstock was asked by the leader to kill his firstborn kit and
his mate and he did so --
Though this seemed to change who he was and how he acted
drastically.
He worked along side a partner who had a huge secret crush on
him that Lockstock was not comfortable with,
But the two were practically two birds of a feather and got
along very well.
But things were t always so good after,his working partner was
killed in a rebellion attack.
he ran away from the group and seeked refuge in Bloodclan very
quickly, adapting to their ways and ideas so he could fit in.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
The sound of clumsy loud paws pattering against the soft earth
could be heard as Lockstock stepped out of the warrior den. The
large greying Tom let out an audible yawn and took a look around
with disinterested blue eyes.
looks like half the clan is still asleep. Wel'll need to get
started on tasks very soon.
He thought to himself before heading out to search for his
clanmates.[/sub]
[/quote]
Accepted as leader~
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Re: Lockstock [Leader of Bloodclan?]
By: Tear1to1shed Date: October 28, 2012, 2:34 pm
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[sub]
Thank you c:[/sub]
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