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{ a nice piece of chocolate....} ----- ready
DIR By: pepper ♔
Date: October 28, 2012, 11:07 am
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[center]Name;; Chocolatekit - Chocolatepaw - Chocolatecake -
Chocolatestar
Age;; Four seasons.
Gender;; She-cat
Orientation;; Straight.
Alliance;; ThunderClan
Appearance {at least four sentences};; Chocolatestar's slim,
lithe build is coated in milk chocolate. Or....it looks that
way.
With her light brown base fur, it appears that this RiverClan
feline s drenched in chocolate.
Dark chocolate slashes across her pelt, fighting for dominance.
Instead, it brings darkness and secrecy to her coat, and makes
her a tabby.
Silly Chocolatestar must have stepped in milk chocolate. Just
look at her paws, with their beautiful, creamy-white color.
Her tail, which is long and sleek, just like the rest of her
smooth, short pelt, blossoms out from her strong hind legs.
Minty green orbs liven up her pretty face, with their
compassionate glow.
Personality {at least four sentences};; Chocolatecake is a big
'ol softy. She's gentle and caring, with a firm and stern side
when dealing with naughty kits or warriors who break rules.
However, she does have a battle-loving, fierce, deadly side that
every leader must have. After all, it's not like she's a
medicine cat!
Another side of Coco is her courageous and brave side, loyal to
the end and extremely protective of her Clan.
Yet another is the arch side. Yes, Coco even has an arch side.
But all those sides make her into a phenomenal feline.
History {at least six sentences};; Chocolatestar was born a
loner with her four siblings. One of her parents, her father,
was RiverClan, while her mother was a loner. When she was born,
her father urged her mother to give the kits to him, so
RiverClan could turn them into noble, well-fed warriors, not
scrawny rouges.
Furious, her mother refused and tried to run.
Even though he didn't want to, he took the kits and took them
home to RiverClan.
As his kits grew, he became guiltier and guiltier, until he
finally fled to rejoin his mate, leaving the kits behind. But
Chocolatekit thrived, becoming the best apprentice, then a
warrior before all her siblings;; then a senior warrior;; then
deputy;; then leader!
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
not my first.
Comments;; This would be so much better if I actually had
muse..... ._.[/center]
#Post#: 267--------------------------------------------------
Re: { a nice piece of chocolate....} ----- ready
DIR By: Witherstar
Date: October 28, 2012, 11:09 am
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-Flails-
Um... I dunno whats wrong and whats right... I NEED MAJOR HELP!
xD
#Post#: 268--------------------------------------------------
Re: { a nice piece of chocolate....} ----- ready
DIR By: pepper ♔
Date: October 28, 2012, 11:11 am
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Well, do I have the required length in all sections?
Are my sentences choppy?
etc....
#Post#: 273--------------------------------------------------
Re: { a nice piece of chocolate....} ----- ready
DIR By: Witherstar
Date: October 28, 2012, 11:21 am
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--- Quote from: pepper ♔ link ---
>
> [center]Name;; Chocolatekit - Chocolatepaw - Chocolatecake -
Chocolatestar
> Age;; Four seasons.
> Gender;; She-cat
> Orientation;; Straight.
> Alliance;; ThunderClan
> Appearance {at least four sentences};; Chocolatestar's slim,
lithe build is coated in milk chocolate. Or....it looks that
way.
> With her light brown base fur, it appears that this RiverClan
feline s drenched in chocolate.
> Dark chocolate slashes across her pelt, fighting for
dominance. Instead, it brings darkness and secrecy to her coat,
and makes her a tabby.
> Silly Chocolatestar must have stepped in milk chocolate. Just
look at her paws, with their beautiful, creamy-white color.
> Her tail, which is long and sleek, just like the rest of her
smooth, short pelt, blossoms out from her strong hind legs.
> Minty green orbs liven up her pretty face, with their
compassionate glow.
> Personality {at least four sentences};; Chocolatecake is a big
'ol softy. She's gentle and caring, with a firm and stern side
when dealing with naughty kits or warriors who break rules.
However, she does have a battle-loving, fierce, deadly side that
every leader must have. After all, it's not like she's a
medicine cat!
> Another side of Coco is her courageous and brave side, loyal
to the end and extremely protective of her Clan.
> Yet another is the arch side. Yes, Coco even has an arch side.
> But all those sides make her into a phenomenal feline.
> History {at least six sentences};; Chocolatestar was born a
loner with her four siblings. One of her parents, her father,
was RiverClan, while her mother was a loner. When she was born,
her father urged her mother to give the kits to him, so
RiverClan could turn them into noble, well-fed warriors, not
scrawny rouges.
> Furious, her mother refused and tried to run.
> Even though he didn't want to, he took the kits and took them
home to RiverClan.
> As his kits grew, he became guiltier and guiltier, until he
finally fled to rejoin his mate, leaving the kits behind. But
Chocolatekit thrived, becoming the best apprentice, then a
warrior before all her siblings;; then a senior warrior;; then
deputy;; then leader!
> Role-play sample {required for your first advanced
biography};; not my first.
> Comments;; This would be so much better if I actually had
muse..... ._.[/center]
>
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[font=trebuchet ms]Accepted! ;3 <3
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Re: { a nice piece of chocolate....} ----- ready
DIR By: pepper ♔
Date: October 28, 2012, 11:34 am
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Lovely, thank you! c:
I'll move it. <333
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