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ѕριяιтвяє
08;zє~∂єρυту σƒ 
103;ινєяcℓαη (؟)
By: Bane and Vengeance Date: October 28, 2012, 10:13 am
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Name;;
[s]spiritkit spiritpaw[/s] spiritbreeze
Age;;
twenty moons old
Gender;;
male
Orientation;;
straight
Alliance;;
riverclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
well, before we go into detail, let's look at the overall
appearance of this tom-a lithe silver tabby tom, with emerald
green eyes and medium sized, clearly more graceful then most
toms, but you can still see his lean muscles rippling beneath
his pelt. Now, we can go into detail. See on his forehead, a
little black M-like shape? Now, zoom into this tom's face. In
his eyes, around the brilliant green, is a pale, turquoise-like
blue, and the green grows darker around the pupil. Go down a
little, to Spiritbreeze's nose. You can see that it's brick
red, and slightly rough to the touch. Move down to the tom's
chest. There you can see a little pure white diamond-like shape
on his chest, not perfectly created, but still easily
distinguishable as a diamond. Go underneath his stomach, seeing
fur that's still a little fluffy from his kit and apprentice
years, pure white like the mark on his chest. Now, move onto
his tail. It's completely ringed with black, silver in the
non-black places, and tipped with pure, night black fur. If you
move along his back, you can see the pure black stripes ranging
from his back down to around his stomach, and although his
stomach fur may be a little fluffy, most of the fur along the
rest of him is sleek and smooth.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
let's see, what qualities would be good in a deputy? Again, the
basics of Spiritbreeze's personality is that he's calm,
level-headed, understanding, pretty intelligent and ambitious-in
a good way. His bad traits would be that sometimes he's very
stubborn, and can sometimes be too cautious when thinking about
following his leader and leading his Clan alongside his leader
to battle-read his history and he has a reason for that. This
tom is also pretty fierce when he's in a temper, shooting out
insults like a machine gun shoots out bullets-and usually
hitting his target. Luckily for his Clan, and other Clans, this
silver tabby doesn't usually get angry much-he is calm mostly,
after all. Now, again, into details...the tom is calm, able to
not get into a temper and hold that for a long time,
level-headed, basically the same as calm, mostly, and this 20
moon old tom is also pretty understanding. He sort-of needs to
be to be a deputy, am I right? He can understand what cats
mean, and he doesn't rashly judge other cats. And this tom is
also pretty intelligent, good at drawing up battle plans-only if
very much needed-and new ways to catch prey if his Clan is going
hungry. The final good trait of this tom is that he's
ambitious, but in a good way. This silver tabby wants to make
his Clan the best in the whole Clan territories, respected the
highest of all the four lake Clans. (these Clans are by the
Lake, right?) Now, onto descriptions of Spiritbreeze's bad
traits! When he's stubborn, you would be able to move the Earth
from it's orbit then move this tom's mind onto a different
track, unless you give really good reasons-then he'd only try to
make you fight harder, and then-and ONLY then, will this silver
tabby give in-unless, of course, it's his leader he's arguing
against. Sometimes his Clanmates call him too peaceful, but
Spiritbreeze doesn't want battle between the Clans-only crazy
cats would [s]for example, Brokenstar[/s]. Even sometimes when
battle is needed, this tom is still resolute with not battling,
although if it's absolutely important to his Clan that they
battle, the silver tabby would give in to that easily. (In other
words, it'd be more like moving 3 four ton elephants with only
your hands)
History {at least six sentences};;
like most cats, this tom was born in RiverClan, to a father and
mother, both from RiverClan. However, when Spiritbreeze was
about 3 moons old, his parents had a huge disagreement about
something, and for the rest of his life, the tom was raised by
irritable parents, who seemed to hate each other. However,
there was a great battle and his mother died, struck down by a
rouge, and then the disagreement between his father and mother
seemed to lift, making his father grieve terribly for the silver
tabby's mom, and making him too dispirited to continue his
warrior duties and was sent to the elder's den. Luckily for the
young apprentice, his siblings had survived and they stuck
together, mourning their mother together, and supporting each
other in times of need. As he grew up, Spiritbreeze realized
that he couldn't stand to see any of his Clanmates be in despair
after a fierce battle. Soon, the silver tabby realized that he
wanted to be RiverClan's deputy, to lead them through hard
times, and keep horrible battles from happening so the kits,
apprentices, newly made warriors wouldn't have to suffer the
despair he had felt when his mother had died.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
*This Will Take Place After The Great Battle*
Brilliant green eyes stared down at the unmoving, light gray
body, broken in the morning light, blood spreading around the
form as if floating in a lake of blood. The stench of death
rose up to his nose; warmth had pressed against the apprentice's
side, but he didn't move, still in shock of looking down at the
dead she-cat. He crouched by the warrior, closing his green
eyes, eyes dulling over as the realization hit him.
Moonmist...his mother...dead..? That couldn't be...The young
tom pressed his nose into his mother's fur, his red nose
searching for a sign of life. Memories hit him as the young cat
refused to believe the RiverClan warrior was dead.
Claws flashing, fur flying, crimson blood pooling on the ground
everywhere. The tom looked around wildly for another opponent
to fight, then whirled around because of a sixth sense to see a
rouge leaping at him, but suddenly-a she-cat pounced in front of
him, slashing at his opponent. It was his mother, Moonmist.
The apprentice grinned and leaped into battle next to her,
beating the tom back. The she-cat grinned at him, and he didn't
notice that the rouge had done his damage-he had clawed her
stomach open, so the apprentice leaped off to find more rouges
to chase off, to protect his Clan...
Spiritpaw closed his eyes tightly, a shimmering, clear tear,
sliding out of his eyes and landing with a soft splash on
Moonmist's fur. The tom lifted his head, gazing down at his
mother, and murmured, "May you walk among StarClan,
Moonmist...let the prey run well for you, and may you find
shelter wherever you go..." He began to groom his mother,
brushing her fur back with soft, caring strokes of his tongue.
Finally realizing that somecat was beside him, the silver tabby
looked up sadly to spot his brother next to him, gazing down at
their mother with eyes brimming with tears. The young
apprentice stood up next to his brother and licked his cheek,
then lay down again to share tongues with Moonmist one last time
before she traveled to StarClan.
*NOTE: I usually don't go into as much detail as now, but :P
Comments;;
Do I really have to fill this out? XP
[s]*sigh* do I really have to do the role-play sample? Those
who know me on WCRPG know this isn't my first advanced D<
Oh well! :D[/s]
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Re: ѕριяιтвяє
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By: pepper â™” Date: October 28, 2012, 2:12 pm
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Name;;
[s]spiritkit spiritpaw[/s] spiritbreeze
Age;;
twenty moons old
Gender;;
male
Orientation;;
straight
Alliance;;
riverclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
well, before we go into detail, let's look at the overall
appearance of this tom-a lithe silver tabby tom, with emerald
green eyes and medium sized, clearly more graceful then most
toms, but you can still see his lean muscles rippling beneath
his pelt. Now, we can go into detail. See on his forehead, a
little black M-like shape? Now, zoom into this tom's face. In
his eyes, around the brilliant green, is a pale, turquoise-like
blue, and the green grows darker around the pupil. Go down a
little, to Spiritbreeze's nose. You can see that it's brick
red, and slightly rough to the touch. Move down to the tom's
chest. There you can see a little pure white diamond-like shape
on his chest, not perfectly created, but still easily
distinguishable as a diamond. Go underneath his stomach, seeing
fur that's still a little fluffy from his kit and apprentice
years, pure white like the mark on his chest. Now, move onto
his tail. It's completely ringed with black, silver in the
non-black places, and tipped with pure, night black fur. If you
move along his back, you can see the pure black stripes ranging
from his back down to around his stomach, and although his
stomach fur may be a little fluffy, most of the fur along the
rest of him is sleek and smooth.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
let's see, what qualities would be good in a deputy? Again, the
basics of Spiritbreeze's personality is that he's calm,
level-headed, understanding, pretty intelligent and ambitious-in
a good way. His bad traits would be that sometimes he's very
stubborn, and can sometimes be too cautious when thinking about
following his leader and leading his Clan alongside his leader
to battle-read his history and he has a reason for that. This
tom is also pretty fierce when he's in a temper, shooting out
insults like a machine gun shoots out bullets-and usually
hitting his target. Luckily for his Clan, and other Clans, this
silver tabby doesn't usually get angry much-he is calm mostly,
after all. Now, again, into details...the tom is calm, able to
not get into a temper and hold that for a long time,
level-headed, basically the same as calm, mostly, and this 20
moon old tom is also pretty understanding. He sort-of needs to
be to be a deputy, am I right? He can understand what cats
mean, and he doesn't rashly judge other cats. And this tom is
also pretty intelligent, good at drawing up battle plans-only if
very much needed-and new ways to catch prey if his Clan is going
hungry. The final good trait of this tom is that he's
ambitious, but in a good way. This silver tabby wants to make
his Clan the best in the whole Clan territories, respected the
highest of all the four lake Clans. (these Clans are by the
Lake, right?) Now, onto descriptions of Spiritbreeze's bad
traits! When he's stubborn, you would be able to move the Earth
from it's orbit then move this tom's mind onto a different
track, unless you give really good reasons-then he'd only try to
make you fight harder, and then-and ONLY then, will this silver
tabby give in-unless, of course, it's his leader he's arguing
against. Sometimes his Clanmates call him too peaceful, but
Spiritbreeze doesn't want battle between the Clans-only crazy
cats would [s]for example, Brokenstar[/s]. Even sometimes when
battle is needed, this tom is still resolute with not battling,
although if it's absolutely important to his Clan that they
battle, the silver tabby would give in to that easily. (In other
words, it'd be more like moving 3 four ton elephants with only
your hands)
History {at least six sentences};;
like most cats, this tom was born in RiverClan, to a father and
mother, both from RiverClan. However, when Spiritbreeze was
about 3 moons old, his parents had a huge disagreement about
something, and for the rest of his life, the tom was raised by
irritable parents, who seemed to hate each other. However,
there was a great battle and his mother died, struck down by a
rouge, and then the disagreement between his father and mother
seemed to lift, making his father grieve terribly for the silver
tabby's mom, and making him too dispirited to continue his
warrior duties and was sent to the elder's den. Luckily for the
young apprentice, his siblings had survived and they stuck
together, mourning their mother together, and supporting each
other in times of need. As he grew up, Spiritbreeze realized
that he couldn't stand to see any of his Clanmates be in despair
after a fierce battle. Soon, the silver tabby realized that he
wanted to be RiverClan's deputy, to lead them through hard
times, and keep horrible battles from happening so the kits,
apprentices, newly made warriors wouldn't have to suffer the
despair he had felt when his mother had died.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
*This Will Take Place After The Great Battle*
Brilliant green eyes stared down at the unmoving, light gray
body, broken in the morning light, blood spreading around the
form as if floating in a lake of blood. The stench of death
rose up to his nose; warmth had pressed against the apprentice's
side, but he didn't move, still in shock of looking down at the
dead she-cat. He crouched by the warrior, closing his green
eyes, eyes dulling over as the realization hit him.
Moonmist...his mother...dead..? That couldn't be...The young
tom pressed his nose into his mother's fur, his red nose
searching for a sign of life. Memories hit him as the young cat
refused to believe the RiverClan warrior was dead.
Claws flashing, fur flying, crimson blood pooling on the ground
everywhere. The tom looked around wildly for another opponent
to fight, then whirled around because of a sixth sense to see a
rouge leaping at him, but suddenly-a she-cat pounced in front of
him, slashing at his opponent. It was his mother, Moonmist.
The apprentice grinned and leaped into battle next to her,
beating the tom back. The she-cat grinned at him, and he didn't
notice that the rouge had done his damage-he had clawed her
stomach open, so the apprentice leaped off to find more rouges
to chase off, to protect his Clan...
Spiritpaw closed his eyes tightly, a shimmering, clear tear,
sliding out of his eyes and landing with a soft splash on
Moonmist's fur. The tom lifted his head, gazing down at his
mother, and murmured, "May you walk among StarClan,
Moonmist...let the prey run well for you, and may you find
shelter wherever you go..." He began to groom his mother,
brushing her fur back with soft, caring strokes of his tongue.
Finally realizing that somecat was beside him, the silver tabby
looked up sadly to spot his brother next to him, gazing down at
their mother with eyes brimming with tears. The young
apprentice stood up next to his brother and licked his cheek,
then lay down again to share tongues with Moonmist one last time
before she traveled to StarClan.
*NOTE: I usually don't go into as much detail as now, but :P
Comments;;
Do I really have to fill this out? XP
[s]*sigh* do I really have to do the role-play sample? Those
who know me on WCRPG know this isn't my first advanced D<
Oh well! :D[/s]
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[font=trebuchet ms]Amazing bio!!
Accepted as deputy. [/font]
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