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#Post#: 5643--------------------------------------------------
Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: Oreo Date: November 24, 2012, 3:09 pm
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[center]Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;
WindClan Maybe? I would like to be the Med. Cat.
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could be mistaken for a Ragdoll. She has a muscular
build, yet she somehow maintains her feminine build. Her fur is
think and soft, keeping her warm even on the coldest Winter
night. She has beautiful chocolate points, her while tail being
chocolate, and while her legs are chocolate, her paws are white.
The fur that isn't a chocolate brown is a cream color. her eyes
are a vibrant sapphire blue, gazing into the deepest part of
your inner self. hidden in her paws are long, sharp claws,
helpful as a wildcat. Her tail is long and fluffy.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the bravest there is, as well as a very smart feline. She is
energetic, and willing to learn from anybody willing to teach
her. She will go to Earth's end just to prove that she isn't a
pampered princess. She will go from fiercely defending a friend
to playing with the kits to let their mother rest. Overall,
Songwind is sweet, kind, energetic, and loving on her good side.
Her bad side will see a fierce cat hidden under that fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind is an ordinary cat from a look, but her History is
twisted. You see, Songwind was abandoned by her mother, who left
her in WindClan. Because her mother was the only queen at that
time, Songkit had to fend for herself. After about a moon
passed, she was not in good shape. This is when the med. Cat
decided to step in. The Med. Cat gave her herbs and juices to
help her get healthy again. Soon after, she became an
apprentice, and soon after that, a warrior. However, Songwind
wanted to be a Medicine Cat because of all the things she had
learned as a kit. So she asked the leader if she could change
and be the Medicine Cat apprentice.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low in catmint again, as well as
yarrow. she thought. She padded out of her den, going to talk to
the leader as a kit bounced up beside her. "Well, hello there,
Snowkit!" she meowed, sounding as happy as she possibly could.
"What'cha doin', Songwind?" Snowkit asked. "I'm just about to
talk to the leader. It looks like you siblings are missing you!"
she said, walking off as the kit bounded away to her brothers
and sisters.
Comments;;
If at all possible, can I be a mod?[/center]
#Post#: 5645--------------------------------------------------
Re: Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: pepper â™” Date: November 24, 2012, 3:14 pm
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[spoiler] [quote author=Oreo link=topic=376.msg5643#msg5643
date=1353791387]
[center]Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;
WindClan Maybe? I would like to be the Med. Cat.
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could be mistaken for a Ragdoll. She has a muscular
build, yet she somehow maintains her feminine build. Her fur is
think and soft, keeping her warm even on the coldest Winter
night. She has beautiful chocolate points, her while tail being
chocolate, and while her legs are chocolate, her paws are white.
The fur that isn't a chocolate brown is a cream color. her eyes
are a vibrant sapphire blue, gazing into the deepest part of
your inner self. hidden in her paws are long, sharp claws,
helpful as a wildcat. Her tail is long and fluffy.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the bravest there is, as well as a very smart feline. She is
energetic, and willing to learn from anybody willing to teach
her. She will go to Earth's end just to prove that she isn't a
pampered princess. She will go from fiercely defending a friend
to playing with the kits to let their mother rest. Overall,
Songwind is sweet, kind, energetic, and loving on her good side.
Her bad side will see a fierce cat hidden under that fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind is an ordinary cat from a look, but her History is
twisted. You see, Songwind was abandoned by her mother, who left
her in WindClan. Because her mother was the only queen at that
time, Songkit had to fend for herself. After about a moon
passed, she was not in good shape. This is when the med. Cat
decided to step in. The Med. Cat gave her herbs and juices to
help her get healthy again. Soon after, she became an
apprentice, and soon after that, a warrior. However, Songwind
wanted to be a Medicine Cat because of all the things she had
learned as a kit. So she asked the leader if she could change
and be the Medicine Cat apprentice.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low in catmint again, as well as
yarrow. she thought. She padded out of her den, going to talk to
the leader as a kit bounced up beside her. "Well, hello there,
Snowkit!" she meowed, sounding as happy as she possibly could.
"What'cha doin', Songwind?" Snowkit asked. "I'm just about to
talk to the leader. It looks like you siblings are missing you!"
she said, walking off as the kit bounded away to her brothers
and sisters.
Comments;;
If at all possible, can I be a mod?[/center]
[/quote][/spoiler]
[font=andale mono]Hi, Oreo!
You're bios looking good but there are a few problems;
- You have some misspellings.
- You have a few grammatical errors in there.
- You seem to start a lot of sentences with "she"
- WindClan already has a medicine cat
- Your role-play sample should be longer
- We are not currently accepting staff
Fix these and you're good to go! [/font]
#Post#: 5663--------------------------------------------------
Re: Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: Oreo Date: November 24, 2012, 3:32 pm
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[center]Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;
WindClan Maybe? I would like to be the Med. Cat apprentice?
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could be mistaken for a Ragdoll. She has a muscular
build, yet she somehow maintains her feminine build. Her fur is
think and soft, keeping her warm even on the coldest leaf-bare
night. This cat has beautiful chocolate points, her while tail
being chocolate, and while her legs are chocolate, her paws are
white. The fur that isn't a chocolate brown is a cream color.
Her eyes are a vibrant sapphire blue, gazing into the deepest
part of your inner self. Hidden in her paws are long, sharp
claws, helpful as a wildcat. Her tail is long and fluffy.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the bravest there is, as well as a very smart feline. This
feline is energetic, and willing to learn from anybody that is
willing to teach her. This defying she-cat will go to Earth's
end just to prove that she isn't a pampered princess. She will
go from fiercely defending a friend to playing with the kits so
their mother can rest. Overall, Songwind is sweet, kind,
energetic, and loving on her good side. However, her bad side
will show a fierce cat hidden under that fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind is an ordinary cat from a look, but her history is
twisted. You see, Songwind was abandoned by her mother, who left
her in WindClan. Because her mother was the only queen at that
time, Songkit had to fend for herself. When about a moon passed,
she was not in good shape. This is when the med. Cat decided to
step in. The Med. Cat gave her herbs and juices to help her get
healthy again. Soon after, she became an apprentice, patient and
willing to learn. After her training and patience, she became a
warrior However, Songwind wanted to be a Medicine Cat, because
of all the things she had learned as a kit. So she decided to
ask the leader if she could change and be the Medicine Cat
apprentice.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low in catmint again, as well as
yarrow. she thought. She padded out of her den, planning on
collecting more catmint and yarrow to stock up for the
leaf-bare. As she padded out of the den, a warrior met her
outside. “Hello, Snowfur.” She greeted. “Hello, Songwind. I
don’t mean to bother you, but what does a juniper berry look
like?” she worried warrior asked. “Now why would you need to
know that?” Songwind asked, curious. “No reason, it’s just
there’s a bush I’ve never seen before, and I think it might have
juniper berries on it, and you said you couldn’t find any.” The
warrior rambled. “Could you show me this bush? I have to collect
other herbs anyways.” Songwind said, following the warrior into
the trees.
Comments;;
Thank you for looking at my bio![/center]
bump!
#Post#: 5672--------------------------------------------------
Re: Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: pepper â™” Date: November 24, 2012, 7:54 pm
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[quote author=Oreo link=topic=376.msg5663#msg5663
date=1353792771]
[center]Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;
WindClan Maybe? I would like to be the Med. Cat apprentice?
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could be mistaken for a Ragdoll. She has a muscular
build, yet she somehow maintains her feminine build. Her fur is
think and soft, keeping her warm even on the coldest leaf-bare
night. This cat has beautiful chocolate points, her while tail
being chocolate, and while her legs are chocolate, her paws are
white. The fur that isn't a chocolate brown is a cream color.
Her eyes are a vibrant sapphire blue, gazing into the deepest
part of your inner self. Hidden in her paws are long, sharp
claws, helpful as a wildcat. Her tail is long and fluffy.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the bravest there is, as well as a very smart feline. This
feline is energetic, and willing to learn from anybody that is
willing to teach her. This defying she-cat will go to Earth's
end just to prove that she isn't a pampered princess. She will
go from fiercely defending a friend to playing with the kits so
their mother can rest. Overall, Songwind is sweet, kind,
energetic, and loving on her good side. However, her bad side
will show a fierce cat hidden under that fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind is an ordinary cat from a look, but her history is
twisted. You see, Songwind was abandoned by her mother, who left
her in WindClan. Because her mother was the only queen at that
time, Songkit had to fend for herself. When about a moon passed,
she was not in good shape. This is when the med. Cat decided to
step in. The Med. Cat gave her herbs and juices to help her get
healthy again. Soon after, she became an apprentice, patient and
willing to learn. After her training and patience, she became a
warrior However, Songwind wanted to be a Medicine Cat, because
of all the things she had learned as a kit. So she decided to
ask the leader if she could change and be the Medicine Cat
apprentice.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low in catmint again, as well as
yarrow. she thought. She padded out of her den, planning on
collecting more catmint and yarrow to stock up for the
leaf-bare. As she padded out of the den, a warrior met her
outside. “Hello, Snowfur.” She greeted. “Hello, Songwind. I
don’t mean to bother you, but what does a juniper berry look
like?” she worried warrior asked. “Now why would you need to
know that?” Songwind asked, curious. “No reason, it’s just
there’s a bush I’ve never seen before, and I think it might have
juniper berries on it, and you said you couldn’t find any.” The
warrior rambled. “Could you show me this bush? I have to collect
other herbs anyways.” Songwind said, following the warrior into
the trees.
Comments;;
Thank you for looking at my bio![/center]
bump!
[/quote]
[font=trebuchet ms]Better, but you still have a few problems.
- Your sentences are rather choppy
- WindClan already has it's two medicine cat apprentices
- You still have some grammatical errors in there.
Bump when you're done![/font]
#Post#: 5677--------------------------------------------------
Re: Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: Oreo Date: November 24, 2012, 8:25 pm
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[font=georgia][center]Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;
It doesn’t matter the Clan, just an MCA.
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could easily be mistaken for a Ragdoll. She has a
muscular build, yet she somehow maintains her feminine build.
Her fur is think and soft, keeping her warm even on the coldest
leaf-bare night. This cat has beautiful chocolate points, and
her while tail is a chocolate brown, and while her legs are
chocolate, and her paws are white. The fur that isn't a
chocolate brown is a warm, soft cream color. Her eyes are a
vibrant sapphire blue, gazing into the deepest part of your
inner self. Hidden in her paws are long, sharp claws, helpful as
a wildcat. Her tail is long and fluffy.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the bravest there is. Songwind is very lucky as she is a very
smart feline. This feline is energetic, and willing to learn
from anybody that is willing to teach her. This defying she-cat
will go to Earth's end just to prove that she isn't a pampered
princess. She will go from fiercely defending a friend to
playing with the kits so their mother can rest. Overall,
Songwind is sweet, kind, energetic, and loving on her good side.
However, her bad side will show a fierce cat hidden under that
luxurious fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind is an ordinary cat at a glance, but her history is
twisted. You see, Songwind was abandoned by her mother, who left
her in WindClan. Because her mother was the only queen at that
time, Songkit had to fend for herself. When about a moon passed,
she was not in good shape, as she was skinny and sick. This is
when the Medicine Cat decided to step in. The Medicine Cat gave
her herbs and juices to help her become healthy again. Soon
after she was well again, she became an apprentice, patient and
willing to learn. After her training and patience, she became a
warrior. However, Songwind wanted to be a Medicine Cat, because
of all the things she had learned as a kit. So she decided to
ask the leader if she could change her status and become the
Medicine Cat apprentice.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low on catmint again, as well as
yarrow. she thought. She padded out of her den, planning on
collecting more catmint and yarrow to stock up for the
leaf-bare. As she padded out of the den, a warrior met her
outside. “Hello, Snowfur.” She greeted. “Hello, Songwind. I
don’t mean to bother you, but what does a juniper berry look
like?” she worried warrior asked. “Now why would you need to
know that?” Songwind asked, curious. “No reason, it’s just
there’s a bush I’ve never seen before, and I think it might have
juniper berries on it, and you said you couldn’t find any.” The
warrior rambled. “Could you show me this bush? I have to collect
other herbs anyways.” Songwind said, following the warrior into
the trees.
bump
I think I may be getting confused on what you mean as
grammatical errors. I have more than one bio on WCRPG that has
been accepted.... but BUMPPP[/center][/font]
#Post#: 5680--------------------------------------------------
Re: Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: pepper â™” Date: November 24, 2012, 9:40 pm
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[quote author=Oreo link=topic=376.msg5677#msg5677
date=1353810332]
[font=georgia][center]Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;
It doesn’t matter the Clan, just an MCA.
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could easily be mistaken for a Ragdoll. She has a
muscular build, yet she somehow maintains her feminine build.
Her fur is think and soft, keeping her warm even on the coldest
leaf-bare night. This cat has beautiful chocolate points, and
her while tail is a chocolate brown, and while her legs are
chocolate, and her paws are white. The fur that isn't a
chocolate brown is a warm, soft cream color. Her eyes are a
vibrant sapphire blue, gazing into the deepest part of your
inner self. Hidden in her paws are long, sharp claws, helpful as
a wildcat. Her tail is long and fluffy.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the bravest there is. Songwind is very lucky as she is a very
smart feline. This feline is energetic, and willing to learn
from anybody that is willing to teach her. This defying she-cat
will go to Earth's end just to prove that she isn't a pampered
princess. She will go from fiercely defending a friend to
playing with the kits so their mother can rest. Overall,
Songwind is sweet, kind, energetic, and loving on her good side.
However, her bad side will show a fierce cat hidden under that
luxurious fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind is an ordinary cat at a glance, but her history is
twisted. You see, Songwind was abandoned by her mother, who left
her in WindClan. Because her mother was the only queen at that
time, Songkit had to fend for herself. When about a moon passed,
she was not in good shape, as she was skinny and sick. This is
when the Medicine Cat decided to step in. The Medicine Cat gave
her herbs and juices to help her become healthy again. Soon
after she was well again, she became an apprentice, patient and
willing to learn. After her training and patience, she became a
warrior. However, Songwind wanted to be a Medicine Cat, because
of all the things she had learned as a kit. So she decided to
ask the leader if she could change her status and become the
Medicine Cat apprentice.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low on catmint again, as well as
yarrow. she thought. She padded out of her den, planning on
collecting more catmint and yarrow to stock up for the
leaf-bare. As she padded out of the den, a warrior met her
outside. “Hello, Snowfur.” She greeted. “Hello, Songwind. I
don’t mean to bother you, but what does a juniper berry look
like?” she worried warrior asked. “Now why would you need to
know that?” Songwind asked, curious. “No reason, it’s just
there’s a bush I’ve never seen before, and I think it might have
juniper berries on it, and you said you couldn’t find any.” The
warrior rambled. “Could you show me this bush? I have to collect
other herbs anyways.” Songwind said, following the warrior into
the trees.
bump
I think I may be getting confused on what you mean as
grammatical errors. I have more than one bio on WCRPG that has
been accepted.... but BUMPPP[/center][/font]
[/quote]
[font=trebuchet ms]Better, but there's still some problems.
- A few sentences are choppy
- You have some grammatical errors in there [ While most think
she would be a pampered princess, she is one of the bravest
there is. ] there's one.
You could be a SkyClan mca or a BloodClan mca if/when you're
accepted.
Bump when you're done. :3 [/font]
#Post#: 5682--------------------------------------------------
Re: Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: Oreo Date: November 24, 2012, 9:53 pm
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Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;
It doesn’t matter the Clan, just an MCA.
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could easily be mistaken for a Ragdoll. She has a
muscular build, yet she somehow maintains her feminine build.
Her fur is think and soft, keeping her warm even on the coldest
leaf-bare night. This cat has beautiful chocolate points, and
while her tail is a chocolate brown, and her legs are a warm
chocolate, her paws are white. The fur that isn't a chocolate
brown is a soft cream color. Her eyes are a vibrant sapphire
blue, gazing into the deepest part of your inner self. Hidden in
her paws are long, sharp claws, helpful as a wildcat. Her tail
is long and fluffy.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the most caring cats you will ever meet. Songwind is very lucky
as she was blessed with being a very smart feline. This feline
is energetic, and willing to learn from anybody that is willing
to teach her. This defying she-cat will go to Earth's end just
to prove that she isn't a pampered princess. She will go from
fiercely defending a friend to playing with the kits so their
mother can rest. Overall, Songwind is sweet, kind, energetic,
and loving on her good side. However, her bad side will show a
fierce cat hidden under that luxurious fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind is an ordinary cat at a glance, but her history is
twisted. You see, Songwind was abandoned by her mother, who left
her in WindClan. Because her mother was the only queen at that
time, Songkit had to fend for herself. When about a moon passed,
she was not in good shape, as she was skinny and sick. This is
when the Medicine Cat decided to step in, and help her get
better. The Medicine Cat gave her herbs and juices to help her
become healthy again. Soon after she was well again, she became
an apprentice, patient and willing to learn. After her training
and patience, she became a warrior. However, Songwind wanted to
be a Medicine Cat, because of all the things she had learned as
a kit. So she decided to ask the leader if she could change her
status and become the Medicine Cat apprentice.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low on catmint again, as well as
yarrow, she thought. She padded out of her den, planning on
collecting more catmint and yarrow to stock up for the
leaf-bare. As she padded out of the den, a warrior met her
outside. “Hello, Snowfur.” She greeted. “Hello, Songwind. I
don’t mean to bother you, but what does a juniper berry look
like?” she worried warrior asked. “Now why would you need to
know that?” Songwind asked, curious. “No reason, it’s just
there’s a bush I’ve never seen before, and I think it might have
juniper berries on it, and you said you couldn’t find any.” The
warrior rambled. “Could you show me this bush? I have to collect
other herbs anyways.” Songwind said, following the warrior into
the trees.
Comments;;
Thank you for being so patient!
I think I caught them all! BUMP
#Post#: 5687--------------------------------------------------
Re: Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: pepper â™” Date: November 25, 2012, 7:09 am
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[quote author=Oreo link=topic=376.msg5682#msg5682
date=1353815621]
Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;
It doesn’t matter the Clan, just an MCA.
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could easily be mistaken for a Ragdoll. She has a
muscular build, yet she somehow maintains her feminine build.
Her fur is think and soft, keeping her warm even on the coldest
leaf-bare night. This cat has beautiful chocolate points, and
while her tail is a chocolate brown, and her legs are a warm
chocolate, her paws are white. The fur that isn't a chocolate
brown is a soft cream color. Her eyes are a vibrant sapphire
blue, gazing into the deepest part of your inner self. Hidden in
her paws are long, sharp claws, helpful as a wildcat. Her tail
is long and fluffy.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the most caring cats you will ever meet. Songwind is very lucky
as she was blessed with being a very smart feline. This feline
is energetic, and willing to learn from anybody that is willing
to teach her. This defying she-cat will go to Earth's end just
to prove that she isn't a pampered princess. She will go from
fiercely defending a friend to playing with the kits so their
mother can rest. Overall, Songwind is sweet, kind, energetic,
and loving on her good side. However, her bad side will show a
fierce cat hidden under that luxurious fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind is an ordinary cat at a glance, but her history is
twisted. You see, Songwind was abandoned by her mother, who left
her in WindClan. Because her mother was the only queen at that
time, Songkit had to fend for herself. When about a moon passed,
she was not in good shape, as she was skinny and sick. This is
when the Medicine Cat decided to step in, and help her get
better. The Medicine Cat gave her herbs and juices to help her
become healthy again. Soon after she was well again, she became
an apprentice, patient and willing to learn. After her training
and patience, she became a warrior. However, Songwind wanted to
be a Medicine Cat, because of all the things she had learned as
a kit. So she decided to ask the leader if she could change her
status and become the Medicine Cat apprentice.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low on catmint again, as well as
yarrow, she thought. She padded out of her den, planning on
collecting more catmint and yarrow to stock up for the
leaf-bare. As she padded out of the den, a warrior met her
outside. “Hello, Snowfur.” She greeted. “Hello, Songwind. I
don’t mean to bother you, but what does a juniper berry look
like?” she worried warrior asked. “Now why would you need to
know that?” Songwind asked, curious. “No reason, it’s just
there’s a bush I’ve never seen before, and I think it might have
juniper berries on it, and you said you couldn’t find any.” The
warrior rambled. “Could you show me this bush? I have to collect
other herbs anyways.” Songwind said, following the warrior into
the trees.
Comments;;
Thank you for being so patient!
I think I caught them all! BUMP
[/quote]
[font=trebuchet ms]Much much better! :3
But.....
- You still have like, 2 choppy sentences
- I notice in personality you kind of repeat the word 'feline'
- You didn't specify if you wanted to be BloodClan or SkyClan
- Her history doesn't make sense for the Clans available.
Almost there! Bump when you're done! :3 [/font]
#Post#: 5701--------------------------------------------------
Re: Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: Oreo Date: November 25, 2012, 11:59 am
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Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;Skyclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could easily be mistaken for a Ragdoll by her
appearance. She has a muscular build, yet she somehow maintains
her feminine build. Her fur is think and soft, keeping her warm
even on the coldest leaf-bare night. This cat has beautiful
chocolate points, and while her tail is a chocolate brown, and
her legs are a warm chocolate, her paws are white. The fur that
isn't a chocolate brown is a soft, sweet cream color. Her eyes
are a vibrant sapphire blue, gazing into the deepest part of
your inner self. Hidden in her paws are long, sharp claws,
helpful as a wildcat. Her tail is long and fluffy, matching the
rest of her fur.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the most caring cats you will ever meet. Songwind is very lucky
as she was blessed with being a very smart cat. This feline is
energetic, and willing to learn from anybody that is willing to
teach her. This defying she-cat will go to Earth's end just to
prove that she isn't a pampered princess. She will go from
fiercely defending a friend to playing with the kits so their
mother can rest. Overall, Songwind is sweet, kind, energetic,
and loving on her good side. However, her bad side will show a
fierce cat hidden under that luxurious fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind doesn’t have much of an exciting history. It starts out
with her being a kit, just as everyone’s history would start.
She was left alone as a kit, but another queen took her in. She
eventually became an apprentice, however, she was a Medicine Cat
apprentice. After much training, she became the Medicine Cat,
and a smart one too! Today, she is still thriving as a Medicine
Cat, and is happy doing it.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low on catmint again, as well as
yarrow, she thought. She padded out of her den, planning on
collecting more catmint and yarrow to stock up for the
leaf-bare. As she padded out of the den, a warrior met her
outside. “Hello, Snowfur.” She greeted. “Hello, Songwind. I
don’t mean to bother you, but what does a juniper berry look
like?” she worried warrior asked. “Now why would you need to
know that?” Songwind asked, curious. “No reason, it’s just
there’s a bush I’ve never seen before, and I think it might have
juniper berries on it, and you said you couldn’t find any.” The
warrior rambled. “Could you show me this bush? I have to collect
other herbs anyways.” Songwind said, following the warrior into
the trees.
Comments;;
Thank you for being so patient!
I think I caught them all! BUMP
I really, really appreciate you being so patient!
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Re: Songwind of (No clan yet!!)
By: pepper â™” Date: November 26, 2012, 5:39 am
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date=1353866382]
Name;;
Songwind
Age;;
She is 17 moons.
Gender;;
A she-cat!
Orientation;;
She is straight.
Alliance;;Skyclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Songwind could easily be mistaken for a Ragdoll by her
appearance. She has a muscular build, yet she somehow maintains
her feminine build. Her fur is think and soft, keeping her warm
even on the coldest leaf-bare night. This cat has beautiful
chocolate points, and while her tail is a chocolate brown, and
her legs are a warm chocolate, her paws are white. The fur that
isn't a chocolate brown is a soft, sweet cream color. Her eyes
are a vibrant sapphire blue, gazing into the deepest part of
your inner self. Hidden in her paws are long, sharp claws,
helpful as a wildcat. Her tail is long and fluffy, matching the
rest of her fur.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
While most think she would be a pampered princess, she is one of
the most caring cats you will ever meet. Songwind is very lucky
as she was blessed with being a very smart cat. This feline is
energetic, and willing to learn from anybody that is willing to
teach her. This defying she-cat will go to Earth's end just to
prove that she isn't a pampered princess. She will go from
fiercely defending a friend to playing with the kits so their
mother can rest. Overall, Songwind is sweet, kind, energetic,
and loving on her good side. However, her bad side will show a
fierce cat hidden under that luxurious fur.
History {at least six sentences};;
Songwind doesn’t have much of an exciting history. It starts out
with her being a kit, just as everyone’s history would start.
She was left alone as a kit, but another queen took her in. She
eventually became an apprentice, however, she was a Medicine Cat
apprentice. After much training, she became the Medicine Cat,
and a smart one too! Today, she is still thriving as a Medicine
Cat, and is happy doing it.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Songwind sighed. We seem to be low on catmint again, as well as
yarrow, she thought. She padded out of her den, planning on
collecting more catmint and yarrow to stock up for the
leaf-bare. As she padded out of the den, a warrior met her
outside. “Hello, Snowfur.” She greeted. “Hello, Songwind. I
don’t mean to bother you, but what does a juniper berry look
like?” she worried warrior asked. “Now why would you need to
know that?” Songwind asked, curious. “No reason, it’s just
there’s a bush I’ve never seen before, and I think it might have
juniper berries on it, and you said you couldn’t find any.” The
warrior rambled. “Could you show me this bush? I have to collect
other herbs anyways.” Songwind said, following the warrior into
the trees.
Comments;;
Thank you for being so patient!
I think I caught them all! BUMP
I really, really appreciate you being so patient!
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[font=trebuchet ms]Alrighty, you have some little mistakes but
you're good to go. :3 [ think = thick ] Nice job! <3
Moving~[/font]
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