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{{Angelpaw}}{{Of}}{{SkyClan}}{{Medicine Cat Apprentice}}
By: ElectricPikachu Date: November 14, 2012, 2:34 pm
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[center]Name;; Angelpaw
Age;; 7 Moons
Gender;; She-Cat
Orientation;; Straight
Alliance;; Skyclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};; Angelpaw is a beautiful
tortoiseshell she-cat with a sleek medium length pelt and pure
with paws. Her fur coat is colored with orange, black, brown,
tan and white, and she has a pale red nose with black dots. She
has bright yellow green eyes and long white shimmering whiskers.
Her dark colored pelt covers three scars on her flank and a scar
on her right back leg from her kit-hood.
Personality {at least four sentences};; Angelpaw is very shy and
sensitive but she easily scared because of her scaring past that
she will never forget. She is very sweet, nice and very
kindhearted for a bad past, but she is loyal and a great
listener. Angelpaw has a great sense of humor, but she would
never tease or make fun of someone, because she fears she will
lose her friends. Her fear of her past makes it so she doesn't
ever want to be alone or in a battle, thats why it is good she
is a Medicine Cat Apprentice.
History {at least six sentences};; Angelpaw was born a kittypet
her name was Patches, she was abused in many ways by her father
and neighboring cats. Her mother was the only cat who tried to
take care of her, but Patches' mother died of a terrible fever
nobody could heal. No one was there to protect her, so she got
many scars and scaring moments that she could never erase from
her mind. She tried running away many times, every time Patches
got r*ped or some other abuse. While a rouge kittypet was
hurting her just out in the forest, a SkyClan daylight warrior
noticed and save Patches. The SkyClan warrior took her to camp
in the Medicine Den, after she regained health Patches was
accepted into the clan. When the leader was naming her
apprentice, Patches heard a cry she jumped of and ran in the
nursery. She saw the kit had a fever and gave her some herbs
witch healed the kit, so they decided to make her Medicine Cat
Apprentice, Angelpaw. It has been one moon she was named the
second Medicine Cat Apprentice until where she is now.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Angelpaw walked back into camp with a warrior and some herbs,
she walked into the medicine cat den and dropped the herbs in
there piles. It has been a moon since she was named Medicine Cat
Apprentice and she already know half the herbs, "Make sure to
take Thyme before Moon-high" her mentor said to her. Her eyes
looked at her mentor and drifted back to the herbs, Angelpaw had
many anxieties because of her past so she had to take Thyme.
"Ok" She meowed back then stood up to walked out of the den,
Angelpaw padded out of the den and walked to the freshkill pile
to grab a mouse. She grabbed a mouse and walked back into the
den, her head turned around to see a tom cat walking towards
her. Angelpaw blinked to see the tom was gone, she grabbed the
Thyme and ate it with her mouse. She drifted into thought as
Angelpaw did that all the cats went in there dens to sleep
"Angelpaw! What are you doing up?" Her mentor meowed "Oh sorry"
Angelpaw walked onto her nest and slowly drifted to sleep.
Comments;; I worked really really hard on that bio up there!!
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#Post#: 4830--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Angelpaw}}{{Of}}{{SkyClan}}{{Medicine Cat Apprentice}}
By: ElectricPikachu Date: November 15, 2012, 2:28 pm
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BUMP!!
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Re: {{Angelpaw}}{{Of}}{{SkyClan}}{{Medicine Cat Apprentice}}
By: pepper ♔ Date: November 17, 2012, 9:37 pm
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[quote author=Angell link=topic=330.msg4699#msg4699
date=1352925281]
[center]Name;; Angelpaw
Age;; 7 Moons
Gender;; She-Cat
Orientation;; Straight
Alliance;; Skyclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};; Angelpaw is a beautiful
tortoiseshell she-cat with a sleek medium length pelt and pure
with paws. Her fur coat is colored with orange, black, brown,
tan and white, and she has a pale red nose with black dots. She
has bright yellow green eyes and long white shimmering whiskers.
Her dark colored pelt covers three scars on her flank and a scar
on her right back leg from her kit-hood.
Personality {at least four sentences};; Angelpaw is very shy and
sensitive but she easily scared because of her scaring past. She
is very sweet, nice and very kindhearted for a bad past, but she
is loyal and a great listener. Angelpaw has a great sense of
humor, but she would never tease or make fun of someone. Her
fear of her past makes it so she doesn't ever want to be alone
or in a battle, thats why it is good she is a Medicine Cat
Apprentice.
History {at least six sentences};; Angelpaw was born a kittypet
her name was Patches, she was abused in many ways by her father
and neighboring cats. Her mother was the only cat who tried to
take care of her, Patches' mother died of a terrible fever. No
one was there to protect her, so she got many scars and scaring
moments. She tried running away many times, every time Patches
got r*ped or some other abuse. While a rouge kittypet was
hurting her just out in the forest, a SkyClan daylight warrior
noticed and save Patches. The SkyClan warrior took her to camp
in the Medicine Den, after she regained health Patches was
accepted into the clan. When the leader was naming her
apprentice, Patches heard a cry she jumped of and ran in the
nursery. She saw the kit had a fever and gave her some herbs,
they decided to make her Medicine Cat Apprentice, Angelpaw. It
has been one moon she was named the second Medicine Cat
Apprentice.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Angelpaw walked back into camp with a warrior and some herbs,
she walked into the medcicne cat den and dropped the herbs in
there piles. It has been a moon since she was named Medicine Cat
Apprentice and she already know half the herbs, "Make sure to
take Thyme before Moon-high" her mentor said to her. Her eyes
looked at her mentor and drifted back to the herbs, Angelpaw had
many anxieties because of her past so she had to take Thyme.
"Ok" She meowed back then stood up to walked out of the den,
Angelpaw padded out of the den and walked to the freshkill pile
to grab a mouse. She grabbed a mouse and walked back into the
den, her head turned around to see a tom cat walking towards
her. Angelpaw blinked to see the tom was gone, she grabbed the
Thyme and ate it with her mouse. She drifted into thought as
Angelpaw did that all the cats went in there dens to sleep
"Angelpaw! What are you doing up?" Her mentor meowed "Oh sorry"
Angelpaw walked onto her nest and slowly drifted to sleep.
Comments;; I worked really really hard on that bio up there!!
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[/quote]
[font=trebuchet ms]nice job!
but there are a few choppy sentences. D:
fix please?[/font]
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Re: {{Angelpaw}}{{Of}}{{SkyClan}}{{Medicine Cat Apprentice}}
By: ElectricPikachu Date: November 18, 2012, 8:21 am
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BUMP!
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Re: {{Angelpaw}}{{Of}}{{SkyClan}}{{Medicine Cat Apprentice}}
By: Shannon Date: November 18, 2012, 4:03 pm
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[spoiler][quote author=Angell link=topic=330.msg4699#msg4699
date=1352925281]
[center]Name;; Angelpaw
Age;; 7 Moons
Gender;; She-Cat
Orientation;; Straight
Alliance;; Skyclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};; Angelpaw is a beautiful
tortoiseshell she-cat with a sleek medium length pelt and pure
with paws. Her fur coat is colored with orange, black, brown,
tan and white, and she has a pale red nose with black dots. She
has bright yellow green eyes and long white shimmering whiskers.
Her dark colored pelt covers three scars on her flank and a scar
on her right back leg from her kit-hood.
Personality {at least four sentences};; Angelpaw is very shy and
sensitive but she easily scared because of her scaring past that
she will never forget. She is very sweet, nice and very
kindhearted for a bad past, but she is loyal and a great
listener. Angelpaw has a great sense of humor, but she would
never tease or make fun of someone, because she fears she will
lose her friends. Her fear of her past makes it so she doesn't
ever want to be alone or in a battle, thats why it is good she
is a Medicine Cat Apprentice.
History {at least six sentences};; Angelpaw was born a kittypet
her name was Patches, she was abused in many ways by her father
and neighboring cats. Her mother was the only cat who tried to
take care of her, but Patches' mother died of a terrible fever
nobody could heal. No one was there to protect her, so she got
many scars and scaring moments that she could never erase from
her mind. She tried running away many times, every time Patches
got r*ped or some other abuse. While a rouge kittypet was
hurting her just out in the forest, a SkyClan daylight warrior
noticed and save Patches. The SkyClan warrior took her to camp
in the Medicine Den, after she regained health Patches was
accepted into the clan. When the leader was naming her
apprentice, Patches heard a cry she jumped of and ran in the
nursery. She saw the kit had a fever and gave her some herbs
witch healed the kit, so they decided to make her Medicine Cat
Apprentice, Angelpaw. It has been one moon she was named the
second Medicine Cat Apprentice until where she is now.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Angelpaw walked back into camp with a warrior and some herbs,
she walked into the medcicne cat den and dropped the herbs in
there piles. It has been a moon since she was named Medicine Cat
Apprentice and she already know half the herbs, "Make sure to
take Thyme before Moon-high" her mentor said to her. Her eyes
looked at her mentor and drifted back to the herbs, Angelpaw had
many anxieties because of her past so she had to take Thyme.
"Ok" She meowed back then stood up to walked out of the den,
Angelpaw padded out of the den and walked to the freshkill pile
to grab a mouse. She grabbed a mouse and walked back into the
den, her head turned around to see a tom cat walking towards
her. Angelpaw blinked to see the tom was gone, she grabbed the
Thyme and ate it with her mouse. She drifted into thought as
Angelpaw did that all the cats went in there dens to sleep
"Angelpaw! What are you doing up?" Her mentor meowed "Oh sorry"
Angelpaw walked onto her nest and slowly drifted to sleep.
Comments;; I worked really really hard on that bio up there!!
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[/quote][/spoiler]
This is looking really good, but there are a few spelling and
grammar mistakes. Once edited, bump it.
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Re: {{Angelpaw}}{{Of}}{{SkyClan}}{{Medicine Cat Apprentice}}
By: ElectricPikachu Date: November 18, 2012, 4:12 pm
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bump
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Re: {{Angelpaw}}{{Of}}{{SkyClan}}{{Medicine Cat Apprentice}}
By: ElectricPikachu Date: November 29, 2012, 7:50 pm
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BUMP!!
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