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Riverclan MCA-Emberpaw
By: Magickitteh Date: November 11, 2012, 4:27 pm
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Name;;
Emberpaw-Embersky
Age;;
Eight Moons
Gender;;
She-cat
Orientation;;
Straight
Alliance;;
Riverclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Emberpaw is a reddish-furred she-cat. Her build is graceful,
long, thin legs with a small, frail body. Her ears are straight
and pointed. She has a scar above her eye. Emberpaw has deep
blue-aqua eyes. Her paws are slightly big, and she is a maine
coon.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
Emberpaw is sharp tongued. She likes to get what she wants, and
is a little bossy at times. But, if you really know her, she is
calm, cool, and collected when you need it the most. Emberpaw is
the life of the party, and hates bloodshed.
History {at least six sentences};; Emberkit grew up normally.
That was, until she was three moons. Her brother played along
the river, and drowned. Her mother got killed by a raid from
Shadowclan right before Emberkit's eyes. Emberkit was
technically an orphan. Her father wanted nothing to do with her.
And when she turned seven moons, her father was murdered. Cats
blamed the helpless apprentice because she was jealous of her
father's new mate and kits. But, Emberpaw never did that crime.
Wanting to get away from it all, she became a medicine cat
apprentice.
Comments;;
May she be the Riverclan Med. Cat Apprentice?
#Post#: 4206--------------------------------------------------
Re: Riverclan MCA-Emberpaw
By: Shannon Date: November 11, 2012, 4:30 pm
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[spoiler][quote author=Magickitteh
link=topic=302.msg4203#msg4203 date=1352672876]
Name;;
Emberpaw-Embersky
Age;;
Eight Moons
Gender;;
She-cat
Orientation;;
Straight
Alliance;;
Riverclan
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Emberpaw is a reddish-furred she-cat. Her build is graceful,
long, thin legs with a small, frail body. Her ears are straight
and pointed. She has a scar above her eye. Emberpaw has deep
blue-aqua eyes. Her paws are slightly big, and she is a maine
coon.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
Emberpaw is sharp tongued. She likes to get what she wants, and
is a little bossy at times. But, if you really know her, she is
calm, cool, and collected when you need it the most. Emberpaw is
the life of the party, and hates bloodshed.
History {at least six sentences};; Emberkit grew up normally.
That was, until she was three moons. Her brother played along
the river, and drowned. Her mother got killed by a raid from
Shadowclan right before Emberkit's eyes. Emberkit was
technically an orphan. Her father wanted nothing to do with her.
And when she turned seven moons, her father was murdered. Cats
blamed the helpless apprentice because she was jealous of her
father's new mate and kits. But, Emberpaw never did that crime.
Wanting to get away from it all, she became a medicine cat
apprentice.
Comments;;
May she be the Riverclan Med. Cat Apprentice?
[/quote][/spoiler]
This bio is looking good, but I noticed that there were some
choppy sentences, and you start a lot of sentences with
Emberpaw/kit and her. Once edited bump it.
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