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{{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: ElectricPikachu
Date: October 31, 2012, 8:38 pm
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[center]Name;; Skycloud
Age;; 20 Moons
Gender;; She-Cat
Orientation;; Straight
Alliance;; SkyClan
Appearance {at least four sentences};; A young dark silver tabby
she-cat with long feather-like fur that reaches her thighs. She
has snowy white fur with tints of gray that cover her chest and
underbelly. Skycloud has a scar across her left eye that
represents an event from her past, also her right legs are
disabled, so she can't battle. She has two unusual eyes, the
left an ocean aqua, and the right a sparkling ice blue.
Personality {at least four sentences};; She is sweet, gentle and
kindhearted, she has the heart of a queen and a personality of a
warrior. Skycloud is sometimes strict, but she is not mean or
would start a fight. She is also very smart and loyal, she would
never want to leave her clan. She is funny and has a great sense
of humor, this she-cat is always ready to have a good time. Her
past has caused a lack of bravery, although with such a bad
weakness, the young she-cat is very helpful and strong for
having some disabilities.
History {at least six sentences};; Ever since she was born
Skycloud has had some disabilities, so not too long after she
was born, her parents left her in the forest and ran off with
the other kits. There was no hope for Skycloud to survive, until
a SkyClan warrior was walking on a border patrol. He grabbed the
little kit and took her to the Medicine Cat Den in his clan.
After she regained health she was still disabled, so she could
never be a warrior. Then the day came for her to become an
apprentice, but when she found out she could not be a warrior
she was very upset. So Skypaw was stuck doing most of the Elder
chores, and also gathering herbs for the Medicine Cat. Since
Skypaw had been gathering herbs for the Medicine Cat very often,
she became his/her apprentice. Then her mentor fell ill of
greencough, not long after he/she died. After the clan mourned
she went to the moonstone, when she came back she went to her
den, the Medicine Cat Den.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Skycloud just sent out Flashpaw to get her some Cobwebs,
Feverfew, Ginger, and Thyme. She put all the herbs in there
rightful piles, she looked at the Feverfew pile and grabbed the
rest of it. Skycloud walked over to a apprentice that had a
fever. "Here, eat this and your fever will get better young one"
Skycloud meowed, nudging the herb closer to the apprentice. She
looked to see the apprentice's face which had brightened with a
smile as she ate the herb. Skycloud smiled to her and looked out
the entrance to see something run into the bushes with a rustle.
"Ill be right back Blackpaw," she said to the apprentice and
walked out of the den. She stood next to it and heard some kits
giggling and whispering. Skycloud stepped, snapping some
branches to get the kits out of there. Soon two kits came
rushing out and ran into her. "Icekit, Batkit what are you doing
out of the nursery?" she meowed in a strict but soft voice.
"Well we-" the kits started to talk, but she interrupted them
"No excuses." Skycloud grabbed them and took them to the
nursery. "Be good little kits and stay with mommy," she meowed,
walking back to her den.
Comments;; I did my very best!! [/center]
#Post#: 2663--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: ElectricPikachu
Date: November 1, 2012, 9:47 am
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[center]BUMP!![/center]
#Post#: 2704--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: Shannon
Date: November 1, 2012, 5:54 pm
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[spoiler]
--- Quote from: ElectricPikachu link ---
>
> [center]Name;; Skycloud
> Age;; 20 Moons
> Gender;; She-Cat
> Orientation;; Straight
> Alliance;; SkyClan
> Appearance {at least four sentences};; A young dark silver
tabby she-cat with long feather-like fur that reaches her
thighs. She has snowy white fur with tints of gray that cover
her chest and underbelly. Skycloud has a scar across her left
eye that represents an event from her past, also her right legs
that are disabled so she can't battle. She has two unusual eyes,
the left an ocean aqua, and the right a sparkling ice blue.
> Personality {at least four sentences};; She is sweet, gentle
and kindhearted, she has the heart of a queen and a personality
of a warrior. Skycloud is sometimes strict, but she is not mean
or would start a fight. She is also very smart and loyal, she
would never want to leave her clan. She is funny and has a great
sense of humor, this she-cat is always ready to have a good
time. Her past has caused a lack of bravery, although with such
a bad weakness the young she-cat is very helpful and strong for
having some disabilities.
> History {at least six sentences};; Ever since she was born
Skycloud has had some disabilities, so not to long after she was
born her parents left her in the forest and ran off with the
other kits. There was no hope for Skycloud to survive, until a
SkyClan warrior was walking on a border patrol. He grabbed
little kit and took her to the Medicine Cat Den in his clan.
After she regained health she was still disable, so she could
never be a warrior. Then the day came for her to become an
apprentice, but when she found out she could not be a warrior
she was very upset. So Skypaw was stuck doing most the Elder
chores, and also gathering herbs for the Medicine Cat. Since
Skypaw gathering herbs for the Medicine Cat, she became his/her
apprentice. Then her mentor fell ill of greencough, not long
after he/she died. After the clan morned she went to the
moonstone, when she came back she went to her den, the Medicine
Cat Den.
> Role-play sample {required for your first advanced
biography};; Skycloud just sent out Flashpaw to get her some
Cobwebs, Feverfew, Ginger and Thyme. She put all the herbs in
there rightful piles, she looked at the Feverfew pile and
grabbed the rest of it. Skycloud walked over to a apprentice
that had a fever "Here, eat this and your fever will get better
young one" Skycloud meowed nudging the herb closer to the
apprentice. She looked to see the apprentice's face brightened
with a smile as she ate the herb, Skycloud smiled to her then
and looked out the entrance to see something run into the bushes
with a rustle. "Ill be right back Blackpaw" she said to the
apprentice and walked out of the den, she stood next to it and
her some giggling and some kits whispering. Skycloud snapped
some branches to get the kits out of there, soon two kits came
rushing out and ran into her. "Icekit, Batkit what are you doing
out of the nursery?" she meowed in a strict but soft voice "Well
we-" the kits started to talk and she meowed to them "No
excuses" Skycloud grabbed them and took them to the nursery. "Be
good little kits and stay with mommy" she meowed and walked back
to her den.
> Comments;; I did my very best!! [/center]
>
--- End Quote ---
[/spoiler]
HI! I noticed in your bio that there were some grammar mistakes,
and a few choppy sentences.
#Post#: 2717--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: ElectricPikachu
Date: November 1, 2012, 6:17 pm
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[center]BUMP!![/center]
#Post#: 3667--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: pepper ♔
Date: November 8, 2012, 8:08 am
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--- Quote from: ElectricPikachu link ---
>
> [center]Name;; Skycloud
> Age;; 20 Moons
> Gender;; She-Cat
> Orientation;; Straight
> Alliance;; SkyClan
> Appearance {at least four sentences};; A young dark silver
tabby she-cat with long feather-like fur that reaches her
thighs. She has snowy white fur with tints of gray that cover
her chest and underbelly. Skycloud has a scar across her left
eye that represents an event from her past, also her right legs
are disabled, so she can't battle. She has two unusual eyes, the
left an ocean aqua, and the right a sparkling ice blue.
> Personality {at least four sentences};; She is sweet, gentle
and kindhearted, she has the heart of a queen and a personality
of a warrior. Skycloud is sometimes strict, but she is not mean
or would start a fight. She is also very smart and loyal, she
would never want to leave her clan. She is funny and has a great
sense of humor, this she-cat is always ready to have a good
time. Her past has caused a lack of bravery, although with such
a bad weakness, the young she-cat is very helpful and strong for
having some disabilities.
> History {at least six sentences};; Ever since she was born
Skycloud has had some disabilities, so not too long after she
was born, her parents left her in the forest and ran off with
the other kits. There was no hope for Skycloud to survive, until
a SkyClan warrior was walking on a border patrol. He grabbed the
little kit and took her to the Medicine Cat Den in his clan.
After she regained health she was still disabled, so she could
never be a warrior. Then the day came for her to become an
apprentice, but when she found out she could not be a warrior
she was very upset. So Skypaw was stuck doing most of the Elder
chores, and also gathering herbs for the Medicine Cat. Since
Skypaw had been gathering herbs for the Medicine Cat very often,
she became his/her apprentice. Then her mentor fell ill of
greencough, not long after he/she died. After the clan mourned
she went to the moonstone, when she came back she went to her
den, the Medicine Cat Den.
> Role-play sample {required for your first advanced
biography};; Skycloud just sent out Flashpaw to get her some
Cobwebs, Feverfew, Ginger, and Thyme. She put all the herbs in
there rightful piles, she looked at the Feverfew pile and
grabbed the rest of it. Skycloud walked over to a apprentice
that had a fever. "Here, eat this and your fever will get better
young one" Skycloud meowed, nudging the herb closer to the
apprentice. She looked to see the apprentice's face which had
brightened with a smile as she ate the herb. Skycloud smiled to
her and looked out the entrance to see something run into the
bushes with a rustle. "Ill be right back Blackpaw," she said to
the apprentice and walked out of the den. She stood next to it
and heard some kits giggling and whispering. Skycloud stepped,
snapping some branches to get the kits out of there. Soon two
kits came rushing out and ran into her. "Icekit, Batkit what are
you doing out of the nursery?" she meowed in a strict but soft
voice. "Well we-" the kits started to talk, but she interrupted
them "No excuses." Skycloud grabbed them and took them to the
nursery. "Be good little kits and stay with mommy," she meowed,
walking back to her den.
> Comments;; I did my very best!! [/center]
>
--- End Quote ---
looking good, but there's still a few choppy sentences. c:
#Post#: 4612--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: ElectricPikachu
Date: November 13, 2012, 5:51 pm
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How are some of them CHOPPY!! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
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#Post#: 4832--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: ElectricPikachu
Date: November 15, 2012, 2:29 pm
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--- Quote from: Angell link ---
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> How are some of them CHOPPY!! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
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:'(
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--- End Quote ---
Sorry i was having an emoutional break down LOL
#Post#: 5679--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: Savvy
Date: November 24, 2012, 8:41 pm
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Choppy as in, awkward. Like, your nervously writing. Try reading
them out loud.
#Post#: 5685--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: ElectricPikachu
Date: November 25, 2012, 7:07 am
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Ummmm wait i thought the other skyclan medicine cat was accpeted
#Post#: 5689--------------------------------------------------
Re: {{Skycloud}} {{Of}} {{SkyClan}} {{Medicine Cat}}
DIR By: pepper ♔
Date: November 25, 2012, 7:19 am
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Whom?
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