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Linus [Future Dark Prince of Bloodclan]
By: Tear1to1shed Date: October 29, 2012, 12:09 pm
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Name;;
Linus
Age;;
still unborn at the moment
Gender;;
Tom
Orientation;;
Undecided
Alliance;;
He is a halfclanner but raised in Bloodclan.
Appearance {at least four sentences};;
Linus is a thin, sleek jet black tom with thorn like claws and
sharp green eyes.
He always seems to have a serious expression on his face, and
almost never looks happy.
His tail is covered in dark scratches and bites from the dogs
he's worked with.
He has some scars visable on his pelt, but they are hard to make
out from a distance.
Personality {at least four sentences};;
Linus is a very cold and distant cat who doesint get along with
many cats.
He likes to keep mostly to himself and is a very quiet person,
mostly meditating and training outside of camp.
While though very dark and sadistic, Linus is also very
thoughtful and smart, which makes him even scarier.
Linus has a hard time expressing his emotions, which makes it
hard to develop any relationships.
He uses odd and big words to do so when he does and it often
leads to awkward conversations.
History {at least six sentences};;
Linus is one of the kits in the Lock x Choco litter that was
conceived after a mishap with catnip.
He was taken in the night secretly by Lockstock to Bloodclan to
live there an become a heir to his bloodline.
Linus was treated like royalty at a young age and was forced
into the line of becoming a Dark Prince.
On top of this, Linus also has an interest with dogs much like
his father and strives to train them.
As he grew up, he realized he did not want this as his life and
holds a grudge against his father.
Driven more angry at his father for his affair and never telling
him his father, he strives to plot his death.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};;
Comments;;
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Re: Linus [Future Dark Prince of Bloodclan]
By: pepper ♔ Date: October 29, 2012, 2:17 pm
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[font=trebuchet ms]Hey, Tappy!
Your bio's looking great, but there are a few choppy sentences
in there. Can you find them and fix them?
Thanks!
<333 ----- Pepper [/font]
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Re: Linus [Future Dark Prince of Bloodclan]
By: Tear1to1shed Date: October 29, 2012, 2:22 pm
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[sub]bump[/sub]
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Re: Linus [Future Dark Prince of Bloodclan]
By: pepper ♔ Date: October 29, 2012, 2:27 pm
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[font=trebuchet ms]much better, but, there are still come choppy
sentences in appearance. can you fix them, please?
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Re: Linus [Future Dark Prince of Bloodclan]
By: Tear1to1shed Date: October 29, 2012, 2:31 pm
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[sub]bump owo[/sub]
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Re: Linus [Future Dark Prince of Bloodclan]
By: pepper ♔ Date: October 29, 2012, 2:37 pm
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[font=trebuchet ms]Lovely, thank you! :D
Accepted!
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