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#Post#: 142--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: March 29, 2013, 8:56 am
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Denied.
Your spirit is good but you will need some more experience about
roleplay at all and the Brotherhood of Steel. Their IC goals are
pretty poorly described. Also, Knight<Paladin. Your backstory is
well written but there are some lore flaws. After a week you
will hopefully have collected enough information and experience
to be able to get accepted if you want to apply again.
#Post#: 175--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: xUltramanx
Date: April 1, 2013, 12:30 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: xUltramanx
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:47587484
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand?
Yes, I do
How long have you been Serious Roleplaying?
Two Years
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community?
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once?
No
Have you donated?
No
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 50 lines
+)
** An NCR patrol is pinned down by a band of Super Mutants.
** Both groups exchange fire but no one is hit
**The squad leader yells to a young private to attempt to flank
**The private hesitates before running from his cover to a rock
which has a good angel to flank his opponets
**As he runs out of cover he is hit and the leg and falls to the
ground
**He lays there face down in the dirt in intense pain
**Another member of the squad around the age of thirty rushes
out and tries to drag the private to cover
**He gets to the private and begins to drag him by his collar
with one arm while firing his rifle with the other.
**The man gestures for the medic to come over.
**A field medic rushes over to the two men while the squad
leader lays down suppressive fire.
**The field medic examines to leg wound and reaches into his
medical bag
**He rushes through the bag and quickly grabs a stimpack
**The medic tears open the private's pants legging and searches
for a vein near the wound
**As he finds one he carefully injects the stimpack into the
mans leg relieving the pain.
**The medic then takes out a wooden peg from his bag and places
it into the privates mouth
**The other man gets up and assists the squad leader in pinning
down the mutants.
**The medic then takes out some medic pliers and attempts to
take the bullet out of his leg
**The private, in pain, bites down on the wooden peg as he takes
it down
**The medic then takes out a rag and some cleaning alcohol and
dabs the rub with it.
**He carefully applies the rag onto the privates wound
**The medic then takes out a roll of bandages and wraps his leg
with them
**The medic lets the private rests as he picks up his rifle and
assists his squad mates in fending off the mutants
**The leader fires a burst of shots into a mutants head.
**The others figured it wasn't worth it and retreated as the NCR
fired at them.
**The medic grabs the private's hand and pulls him up to their
feet
**The medic and squad leader let the private lean on them as
they walk back to camp
**A mile of walking later the private collapses from the pain
and passes out from shock
**The medic picks up the private and throws him on over his
shoulder.
**They continue to walk back to their camp.
**As they arrive to lay the private down in his bed allow him to
rest.
**They radio HQ and make a report about the super mutants in the
area.
**The HQ order them to search and destroy the mutants.
**They send a squad of Rangers to assist them.
**The Rangers arrive and they all get prepared to hunt the
mutants.
**They set out and begin to search the area.
**After hours of searching they come across a make-shift camp
**They enter the camp and find it empty except for an older man
who has his feet and hands tied
**The team approaches the man and ask them where the mutants
went
**The man explained that they set out looking for more victims
**One of the rangers unties the man.
**The older man runs off into the wastes.
**The team waits for the mutants to return
**In an hours time the mutants return but have larger numbers
than they had expected
**The rangers fire at the group simultaneously.
**The soldiers attempts to sneak around the group.
**They managed to get behind the mutants and open fire
**The mutants numbers are thinned from ten to five and the
mutants run for cover
**The two groups exchange fire and hit no one
**The rangers begin to slowly approach the mutants while firing
**The rangers kill the mutants with extreme accuracy and
precision.
Have you been a BoS before?
No, I have not.
What are the IC goals of the BoS and what do they do?
The Brotherhood of Steel aim for protecting technology and
information from those who would do bad with it or are not
worthy of using it.
Backstory of your character: (300 words +)
Julian Slovic was born the Mary and Lucas Slovic. His mother was
a scribe and his farther was a knight who worked in the repair
bay of their bunker in Washington. When he was three he spent
most of his time in the nursery bay playing with his childhood
friend, Joesph. They usually did things that most kids do like
hide-and-seek in the generator room until the a scribe or knight
came along to yell at them. When he was five his mother began to
teach him basic skills such how to read and write along with
basic mathematics. He hated math although his was good at it but
he liked to write and by age ten he decided that he wanted to be
a scribe. This changed when he was thirteen and saw the Head
Paladin at the firing range using a laser rifle. Julian became
obsessed with energy weapons and everytime he could he would
join his dad at the repair bay to how they work and the
different parts of the weapons. At age sixteen he was allowed by
the Head Paladin to have access to the shooting range where he
tested a variety of energy weapons such as laser pistols and
rifles. His favorite however was the gauss rifle. It gave quite
the kick and was powerful enough to split the targets clean in
half. At age seventeen he began to practice more often to
prepare himself to become an initiate. He put at least seven
hours a day at the range, he was determined to fight. With all
the training him and his friend Joesph eventually grew apart and
he didn’t really speak to him again. Now that he is
eighteen he is ready to become an initiate and wanting to earn
the title of Knight one day but that decision is with the Head
Paladin and the Elder of his bunker.
#Post#: 182--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: Renegade
Date: April 2, 2013, 5:52 pm
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Denied
Sorry, but the BoS are filled, if anyone wishes to join, it
would only be to participate as a Scribe.
Your backstory was good however the RP examples must be polished
a bit as I know you can do better.
#Post#: 184--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: xUltramanx
Date: April 2, 2013, 8:50 pm
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I would like to challenge this judging...please add me on steam
so we can discuss this.
#Post#: 361--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: Crawdy
Date: April 21, 2013, 1:47 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name:[WA] Crawdy
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:30222153
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand?Yes
How long have you been Serious Roleplaying?80 hours+
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community?Nearly a week now.
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server
once?Never
Have you donated?Yes, 25€
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 50 lines
+)
**McNuts walks in the dark part of the buildings with his
flashlight open**
***The door behide him suddenly shut and locked**
**McNuts suddenly turns back and attemps to open the door
struggling in fear**
**McNuts turns back again and makes his decision to walks
through this creepy place**
**McNuts walking foward slowly when he walks passes a trap**
***The traps cable snapped and launched 4 arrows toward McNuts
and 1 of them hit into McNuts left hip***
**McNuts falled on the ground screaming in pain**
**Feral Ghoul heard McNuts screaming noises and follow the
direction of the noises**
**Feral Ghoul see McNuts lying on the ground 50meters away and
starts to walk toward him**
**McNuts notice the ghoul that is slowly coming for him and he
suddenly pulls out his .44 magnum then shoots toward the ghoul**
***Most of the round missed but one flew through the ghoul
fragile skull and the head exploded into pieces***
**McNuts tapping on himself to find his stimpack**
**McNuts found in his left pouche and then unzipped and takes
out a stimpack then inject into his left hip**
**McNuts throws the empty stimpack away and reachs for his
whip**
**McNuts place the whip inside his mouth and bite it very hard**
**McNuts starts to pulls out the arrow that struck his left
hip**
***The blood bleed out like a fountain then stopped when the
arrow is out***
**McNuts starts to rip his shirt off and then use it as the
bandage to stop the bleed**
***The bleeding is stop***
**McNuts stands up slowly and continue to walks through the dark
hall**
**McNuts spotted a dot of light infront of him and he starts to
walks quickly toward it**
***The dot is getting bigger as McNuts approaching it***
**McNuts suddenly went out of the window of the building and
falls on the ground**
**McNuts is trying to stands up but failed due he got no force
left to continue**
**McNuts spotted a group of caravan approaching his way and then
he yells out**
McNuts Yells: Help! I'm over here!
***The groups of caravan is moving closer toward McNuts***
**McNuts suddenly got surprised as the group of caravan is a
bunch of raider**
***The raiders starts to rush at McNuts and kicking at him***
Raider1: We will sell you to the legion!!
**Raider 1 laughs hard**
Raider2: Yes yes....But first let play with him.
**Raider1 and 2 starts to cutting off McNuts clothes**
**McNuts passed out**
**McNuts wakes up and looks around**
***McNuts is being dragging by his leg by the raider***
McNuts: Let me go you scumbag!
Raider1: No..no..Be a good boy and let me drags you
**Raider1 laughs like a jackass**
McNuts: Release me you son of a bitch physcopath.
**'Yolo' looks back and shout to both raiders**
Yolo: You two shut the fuck up before i toss you two to the
deathclaw
Raider1:Fine...
**Raider 2 nods and kicks into McNuts stomach**
**McNuts makes a violent moves to try to free himself from
dragging**
***All the raiders suddenly surrounded McNuts and then looking
at him***
McNuts:You won't sell me alive bitches
**McNuts pulls a pin from the grenade that attached on his
belt**
McNuts:See you in hell!
***The explosion of the grenade killed everyone that is around
him***
Have you been a BoS before?Never
What are the IC goals of the BoS and what do they do?
Salvage the lost technology and develope it to preserve, they
place the technology above human being due it impossible to
replace it in the post-apocalype nuclear watseland.
Backstory of your character: (300 words +)
John McCane was born and raised in a bunker of the Brotherhood,
his mother, sadly died giving birth to John. Most of his time
was spent learning of the technology and sciences of the world,
the others thought he would be a scribe at heart but he could
never sit down and research for long periods of time. Reading
books was fine to him but they grew dull, the practical elements
of his early work in the Brotherhood was what he loved doing.
John's parents were both knights whom unfortunately were unable
to look after John as well as a balanced family which slowly
drifted them apart. Making John a little more callous. His
disregard for others misery was his weakness amongst the
Brotherhood. He consistently failed to show empathy but proper
practice and 'discipline' ensured he was, at least, seen as a
balanced human being.
The death of his father in a scouting mission was felt by John.
But it's toll didn't last long, and his mother, the woman who
suffered to bring him into this world only to suddenly leave,
passing him on the door of life. He felt alone in the
brotherhood, the connections he had outside of his relatives
were sparse. But he remained able, physically and mentally, he
had a strange feeling that it was all building up to this point.
Almost like his story only just begun.
When John turns 19 years old, he starts training on his
marksmanship and learns about combat because he want to become
knight like his parent do. Months passes and John is making
progress on his training. One day he starts to sign up on become
Initiate and hoping that his training that he does will pay him
at the end to become a Knight and protect the Brotherhood from
any threat that oppose the Brotherhood.
#Post#: 364--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: April 22, 2013, 10:28 am
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Pending.
Your backstory only contains 233 words, please fix it up to 300.
Besides several grammar flaws your roleplay example lacks
realism once in a while, you should at least proof-read it and
look up spellings or grammatical phrases if you are not sure.
#Post#: 367--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: Crawdy
Date: April 22, 2013, 5:01 pm
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Fixed up my character backstory to 300 words+
#Post#: 373--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: April 23, 2013, 11:57 am
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Trial.
I am not entirely convinced yet but it seems legitimate after
all. Complaints or major flaws will result in an unwhitelist
though.
#Post#: 400--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: Mondays
Date: April 24, 2013, 3:16 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: iDontLikeMondays {CBRO} [CS]
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:48842922
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand? Indeed
How long have you been Serious Roleplaying? About one and a half
years
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community? A few months, 3-4.
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once? No
Have you donated? No
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 50 lines
+)
(My character's name is James McTerry, as a knight here)
Knight James McTerry patrols the wasteland outpost.
Knight James McTerry salutes the Paladin
Paladin Jesse Wilson says "At ease, Knight."
Knight James Mcterry lowers, "How are the scribes research on
that new power armor update?"
Paladin Jesse Wilson says "Oh, quite well actually, they changed
the suit so it now analyzes heartbeat, breath, and the
atmosphere."
Knight James McTerry says "Neat. I can't wait to wear the new
updated suit."
Paladin Jesse Wilson says "Super Mutants, upcoming."
Knight James McTerry points his minigun in the direction.
Paladin Jesse Wilson points his laser rifle in the direction.
SM says "Ahhh! Charge!"
SM hits his nailboard against the knight's head.
Knight James McTerry's helmet is dented, as he spins the
barrels, shooting the legs of the mutant.
SM yells "Gaah!"
Knight James McTerry leans back and the barrels move out of aim.
Paladin Jesse Wilson shoots the laser rifle at the super
mutant's chest.
SM disintegrates.
Paladin Jesse Wilson shoots at the upcoming wave.
Knight James McTerry radios in "Need immediate support at
outpost Buffalo now."
Knight James McTerry stumbles forward and continues firing
aimlessly.
Paladin Jesse Wilson says "Super mutants retreating. I see two
centaurs."
Knight James McTerry nods, reloads his minigun slowly and
continues firing.
Centaur charges with its tongues whipping agressively.
Knight James McTerry spins the barrels, shooting at the
centaur's neck.
Centaur falls backwards, its head rolling off.
Knight James McTerry says "Jeesh... It's over... Those yellow
frankensteins will be back. I should head to the armory and get
my helmet fixed."
Paladin Jesse Wilson nods "Hey, you, knight, replace James here
for me."
Paladin Jesse Wilson says "Steel be with you."
Knight James McTerry takes off his helmet and walks back to the
bunker.
Have you been a BoS before? No
What are the IC goals of the BoS and what do they do? The
Brotherhood of Steel is a faction in the Fallouts, and its goal
is to collect, protect, and make advances on technology. They
want to make sure humanity's progress before the war wasn't
wasted, and they work to collect information and advancements of
any region they enter. The BoS is divided to two parts:
The Scribes who collect information and research, and are
divided to three orders: Order of the sword, order of the
shield, and order of the quill. They research weaponry, defense,
and information.
The Knights wear the power armor, and patrol the wasteland for
super mutants, legion, raiders and remnant Enclave.
Both are equally powerful and important.
Backstory of your character: (300 words +) James McTerry was
born in Rusty Springs. He was raised with by a strong and loving
family, his parents Jerome and Sasha. One day, when James was
running around playing tag, his parents were out on a scavenging
trip. After several hours, they never returned. James wandered
outside looking for his parents, but was shortly captured by the
Legion. Brought to a life of slavery, he finally met his
parents.
Growing up in slavery, James atleast had his parents who were
kept in the same camp. When James turned 20, his parents were
already growing weak and old. James was trying to take up more
work for his parents, but the Legion discovered what he was
doing, and took action. They took and crucified his parents.
James, being completely destroyed, attacked one of the Legion
guards, and ran as fast as he can. James had already built up
superior endurance over the years of slavery, and outran the
Legion's bullets.
James moved around from the Rocky mountains West to Washington.
He stopped by town to town, having some spare food and water.
Eventually he found himself in the nuclear desert that is near
his home. He was glad to be back, but was so tired and thirsty
he could not make his way home.
James, stranded in the wasteland, and thirsty, stopped to rest
near a radiated lake. Desperate, James cupped his chained hands,
poured water on his bare chest, and drank some. Two knights
patrolling noticed James, and felt so bad for him, they took him
in the bunker to rest. James was amazed how much weaponry these
men had, and the technology of the lost ages in the bunker.
James asked the Elder at the time if he could stay. The Elder,
having pity on James, agreed to take him and train him.
#Post#: 413--------------------------------------------------
Re: Brotherhood of Steel
DIR By: Noob Saibot
Date: April 25, 2013, 2:37 pm
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--- Quote from: Mondays link ---
>
> [Out Of Character Section]
>
> Steam name: iDontLikeMondays {CBRO} [CS]
>
> Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:48842922
>
> Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand? Indeed
>
> How long have you been Serious Roleplaying? About one and a
half years
>
> How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community? A few months, 3-4.
>
> Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once?
No
>
> Have you donated? No
>
> Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRp, PainRp, CombatRp; 50
lines +)
> (My character's name is James McTerry, as a knight here)
>
> Knight James McTerry patrols the wasteland outpost.
> Knight James McTerry salutes the Paladin
> Paladin Jesse Wilson says "At ease, Knight."
> Knight James Mcterry lowers, "How are the scribes research on
that new power armor update?"
> Paladin Jesse Wilson says "Oh, quite well actually, they
changed the suit so it now analyzes heartbeat, breath, and the
atmosphere."
> Knight James McTerry says "Neat. I can't wait to wear the new
updated suit."
> Paladin Jesse Wilson says "Super Mutants, upcoming."
> Knight James McTerry points his minigun in the direction.
> Paladin Jesse Wilson points his laser rifle in the direction.
> SM says "Ahhh! Charge!"
> SM hits his nailboard against the knight's head.
> Knight James McTerry's helmet is dented, as he spins the
barrels, shooting the legs of the mutant.
> SM yells "Gaah!"
> Knight James McTerry leans back and the barrels move out of
aim.
> Paladin Jesse Wilson shoots the laser rifle at the super
mutant's chest.
> SM disintegrates.
> Paladin Jesse Wilson shoots at the upcoming wave.
> Knight James McTerry radios in "Need immediate support at
outpost Buffalo now."
> Knight James McTerry stumbles forward and continues firing
aimlessly.
> Paladin Jesse Wilson says "Super mutants retreating. I see two
centaurs."
> Knight James McTerry nods, reloads his minigun slowly and
continues firing.
> Centaur charges with its tongues whipping agressively.
> Knight James McTerry spins the barrels, shooting at the
centaur's neck.
> Centaur falls backwards, its head rolling off.
> Knight James McTerry says "Jeesh... It's over... Those yellow
frankensteins will be back. I should head to the armory and get
my helmet fixed."
> Paladin Jesse Wilson nods "Hey, you, knight, replace James
here for me."
> Paladin Jesse Wilson says "Steel be with you."
> Knight James McTerry takes off his helmet and walks back to
the bunker.
>
> Have you been a BoS before? No
>
> What are the IC goals of the BoS and what do they do? The
Brotherhood of Steel is a faction in the Fallouts, and its goal
is to collect, protect, and make advances on technology. They
want to make sure humanity's progress before the war wasn't
wasted, and they work to collect information and advancements of
any region they enter. The BoS is divided to two parts:
> The Scribes who collect information and research, and are
divided to three orders: Order of the sword, order of the
shield, and order of the quill. They research weaponry, defense,
and information.
> The Knights wear the power armor, and patrol the wasteland for
super mutants, legion, raiders and remnant Enclave.
> Both are equally powerful and important.
>
> Backstory of your character: (300 words +) James McTerry was
born in Rusty Springs. He was raised with by a strong and loving
family, his parents Jerome and Sasha. One day, when James was
running around playing tag, his parents were out on a scavenging
trip. After several hours, they never returned. James wandered
outside looking for his parents, but was shortly captured by the
Legion. Brought to a life of slavery, he finally met his
parents.
>
> Growing up in slavery, James atleast had his parents who were
kept in the same camp. When James turned 20, his parents were
already growing weak and old. James was trying to take up more
work for his parents, but the Legion discovered what he was
doing, and took action. They took and crucified his parents.
James, being completely destroyed, attacked one of the Legion
guards, and ran as fast as he can. James had already built up
superior endurance over the years of slavery, and outran the
Legion's bullets.
>
> James moved around from the Rocky mountains West to
Washington. He stopped by town to town, having some spare food
and water. Eventually he found himself in the nuclear desert
that is near his home. He was glad to be back, but was so tired
and thirsty he could not make his way home.
>
> James, stranded in the wasteland, and thirsty, stopped to rest
near a radiated lake. Desperate, James cupped his chained hands,
poured water on his bare chest, and drank some. Two knights
patrolling noticed James, and felt so bad for him, they took him
in the bunker to rest. James was amazed how much weaponry these
men had, and the technology of the lost ages in the bunker.
James asked the Elder at the time if he could stay. The Elder,
having pity on James, agreed to take him and train him.
>
--- End Quote ---
Trial.
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