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#Post#: 14--------------------------------------------------
Crimson Caravan
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: March 18, 2013, 2:45 pm
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CC applications will be posted here. Reply to this topic; do not
make a new thread!
Format:
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name:
Steam ID:
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand?
How long have you been Serious Roleplaying? (Years and appox.
amount of hours)
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community?
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once?
Have you donated?
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRP, PainRP, CombatRP; 30
lines +)
Have you been a trader before?
What does the Crimson Caravan do?
Backstory of your character: (150 words +)
[In Character Section]
This is a contract you are signing for the Crimson Caravan,
don't use things like 'lol', 'omg' and 'ffs'!
Full name:
Age:
Height:
Any physically or mental imperfects:
Do you have a certain reputation in the Crimson Caravan?
Have you had any previous afflection with the Crimson Caravan?
Do you have skills that might be useful for the Crimson
Caravan?
I understand and agree, that my contract is neutralized and my
salary gone when I quit earlier:
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#Post#: 106--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crimson Caravan (Jiin Song's Application)
DIR By: Mondays
Date: March 26, 2013, 4:39 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: iDontLikeMondays {CBRO} [CS]
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:48842922
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand? Yes
How long have you been Serious Roleplaying? (Years and appox.
amount of hours) Maybe.... 4-5 months? Active half of the time
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community? Not long, maybe 2 weeks.
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once? No
Have you donated? No
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRP, PainRP, CombatRP; 30 lines
+)
Jiin Song whistles as he scavenges the wasteland.
Jiin Song sees someone.
Jiin Song says "Hello, sir!"
Alex Richards walks up with a partner.
Alex Richards says "Hi."
Jiin Song walks away.
Alex Richards raises his gun and points it at his back.
Jiin Song raises his hands and turns around.
Alex Richards says "Good. Now, asian boy, drop your caps now. Or
I will shoot you up."
Alex Richards raises his rifle head level.
Jiin Song says "Hey... No need to get violent."
Jiin Song is about to drop the caps, but pauses, he notices a
friend.
Jerry Joseph says "He said drop the coins, chink!"
Jiin Song yells "Hey!"
Rick Lincoln points his revolver at Alex's head.
Rick Lincoln readies for sudden movements.
Rick Lincoln says "Leave him alone, Alex..."
Alex Richards peers over.
Jerry Joseph tackles Rick.
Rick Lincoln turns and shoots Jerry in the leg, not to mortally
wound him.
Jerry Joseph holds his leg wound, yelling and groaning.
Rick Lincoln turns to Alex.
Alex Richards points his gun to Rick.
Jiin Song unslings his MP5 and points it at the man's back.
Rick Lincoln shoots Alex Richards in the chest.
**The bullet goes through his chest and barely touches Jiin.
Jiin Song says "H-holy!"
Alex Richards falls, unconscious.
Jiin Song smiles and says "Thanks Rick."
Rick Lincoln says "Ah, no matter Jiin."
Have you been a trader before? No, but I guess I know enoough of
the ropes, I observe many dealers carefully.
What does the Crimson Caravan do? Yes, they supply the NCR and
various wastelanders with guns, general goods, food and so on.
Just like the black market dealers in HL2RP, but more ragged and
organized.
Backstory of your character: (150 words +) (Tried writing this
like a book, sorry if too detailed) Jiin Song was born in Rusty
Springs, under Kim Song and Sun Song. He grew up a regular
post-apocalyptic kids life, underprivileged but unaware of the
before world. Jiin Song, growing up, found it fascinating the
world behind the wasteland. Legends of fertile lands, clear
lakes, cities and towns amazed him. All he could see as relics
were the scraps left behind. This age, is when Jiin started
exploring the wastelands. He wandered the nearby wastelands of
Rusty Springs, often visiting his parents to show them his new
unique items.
Jiin's parents raised him with a sturdy and loving hand, but
Jiin admired his dad, Kim, the most. His dad was a kind and
gentle man, tough when needed, and kept his calm. His admirable
self-control laid down the moral path Jiin would later take in
his adulthood. His mother, Sun, was kind and supportive, some
people that Jiin would rather admire.
Jiin received his homeschooling education, and continued his
life under the NCR, exploring the wastelands and finding items
for caps. One day, when he was returning home, he found bandits
leaving his home with a sack full of his items. The house was
beat up, every window broken, every door burst down. He tried to
chase after the bandits, but it was too late. He returned home,
but his parents weren't there. He searched the town over and
over again, trying to find his parents, but with to no prevail.
Jiin came to the conclusion they were kidnapped by the bandits.
Jiin searched and searched parts of the wasteland he had never
seen, but found no sign of his parents. Jiin eventually gave up,
returned home, and continued his life, on a mission to see his
parents once more.
One day, when Jiin is encountered by bandits, they tell him to
drop all of his caps. The bandits gave him racial slurs, and
threatened him with death. Jiin slowly put down his caps, when
suddenly his friend Rick came in with lots of company. The
bandits left and kept a close eye on Jiin. Since Rick is in the
Crimson Caravan, he hopes that if he works for his company he
will meet nicer people and benefit from his travels.
[In Character Section]
Full name: Jiin Song
Age: 32
Height: 6'0
Any physically or mental imperfects: Not good with a gun, mildly
weak.
Do you have a certain reputation in the Crimson Caravan? Jiin
has a positive reputation, one of his good friends, Rick, is on
the Caravan.
Have you had any previous afflection with the Crimson Caravan?
Yes. Rick Lincoln saved my life from bandits, and gave me a gun
to defend myself.
Do you have skills that might be useful for the Crimson Caravan?
My character travels quite often, he spends lots of time alone,
and treats people with respect and dignity.
I understand and agree, that my contract is neutralized and my
salary gone when I quit earlier: Yes.
#Post#: 112--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crimson Caravan
DIR By: Noob Saibot
Date: March 27, 2013, 1:58 pm
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[glow=GREEN,2,300]ACCEPTED[/glow]. Good app. Get your
whitelist from an SA.
#Post#: 168--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crimson Caravan
DIR By: .:ITALY:.
Date: March 31, 2013, 9:46 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: Classical Techno
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:59589591
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand?
Yes, I do
How long have you been Serious Roleplaying? (Years and appox.
amount of hours)
Four Months
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community?
One Day
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once?
No, I haven't
Have you donated?
No
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRP, PainRP, CombatRP; 30 lines
+)
*A trader is walking with a his Caravan.
*He is thirsty and stops for a drink at a river
*He leads his Brahmin to the water and lets it dirnk
*He fills his canteen with water and then begins to drink from
the river
*He gets up and begins to lead the Brahmin away from the river
*A gang of raiders behind a broken down bus watch as he walks
closer to them
*As the Caravan passes the bus the raiders come out of cover and
attack aim their weapons at the trader
*The trader puts his hands up
*The raiders approach the man and order him to drop his weapon
*With no other options the Trader does so
*The raiders then take the weapon and use it to kill the brahmin
*A raider keeps his gun aimed at the man while the others loot
the dead brahmin for valuables
*After the brahmin is empty of supplies the raiders gather
around the man
*One of them pushes him to the ground and begin to punch and
kick the man
*This attack causes the man great pain and he can not fight back
*They finish beating the man and walk off leaving him in the
waste
*The raiders walk down the road for an hour or so where they see
a camp
*Thinking it's a scavenger camp they begin to scout it out.
*To find that it's another raider camp
*With the element of surprise on their side they open fire
*A few of the other raiders are hit and killed but others rush
to their weapons and begin to shoot back
*One of the raiders rushes to cover and loads his gun quickly
*The opposing gang of raiders see him in cover and direct their
fire towards him pinning him down
*He waits until they are out of ammo and have to reload then
pops from cover and fires a few rounds
*He hits a raider in the hand, forcing him to drop his weapon as
he holds his hand in pain
*Another raider loads his gun fast enough and fires killing his
opponent.
*The first group of raiders have won and killed all opposing
gang
Have you been a trader before?
No
What does the Crimson Caravan do?
Backstory of your character: (150 words +)
Kaitlyn Sovetii was born in New Reno, California. She grew up in
a rough life, surrounded by chem dealers, hookers, and gangs.
She tried to avoid that life and got a job at a small casino on
the outskirts of town named "Lucky dice"; she hated that name.
She mostly dealt cards but sometimes worked the registers. She
hated everything about that job, if some drunk asshole wasn't
flirting with her it was some sore loser complaining that "She
dealt the cards weird". In around the age of 18 she collected
enough NCR dollars to get transport north. She arrived in
Washington state at a small town called "Rusty Springs" where
she plans on becoming a successful trader.
[In Character Section]
This is a contract you are signing for the Crimson Caravan,
don't use things like 'lol', 'omg' and 'ffs'!
Full name: Kaitlyn Sovetii
Age: 19
Height: 5'6''
Any physically or mental imperfects: No
Do you have a certain reputation in the Crimson Caravan? No
Have you had any previous afflection with the Crimson Caravan?
No
Do you have skills that might be useful for the Crimson Caravan?
Has experience with money
I understand and agree, that my contract is neutralized and my
salary gone when I quit earlier: Yes
#Post#: 170--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crimson Caravan
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: March 31, 2013, 10:16 pm
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Denied.
The scenarios of your roleplay example are legitimate but there
are multiple grammar flaws and it is not really detailed. With
such /me's you could hardly roleplay on a server which shows a
lack of experience. There also are only 27 lines while the
format requires 30 or more.
The backstory also could need more personality for your
character, it explains how she grew up and you get a blurry idea
of what she did before she moved to Washington but it is still
too short and does not really get detailled on Kaitlyn herself.
Also, only 118 words while 200 or more are required.
You are allowed to re-apply in a week but you should rather wait
a little longer and use the time to earn more experience and get
into the roleplay bussines, with some more playtime, everyone
can become a pro :)
#Post#: 343--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crimson Caravan
DIR By: Diehardpatriot
Date: April 20, 2013, 6:50 am
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: Diehardpatriot
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:5180103
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand?: Absolutely.
How long have you been Serious Roleplaying? (Years and appox.
amount of hours): About four years, but I've logged 1400 hours
on Gmod roleplay.
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community?: A few days but I already love it.
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once?:
Nope.
Have you donated?: If I can scrape some funds together I will.
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRP, PainRP, CombatRP; 30 lines
+)
**Max begins rummaging around inside the dumpster, occasionally
pulling out the odd plastic bottle
**An audible click sounds behind him as a cold metal cylinder
presses against Max's head.
**Max puts his hand up letting a slight quiver creep into his
voice saying with his eyes up "Please, I haven't eaten in days
if I give you any more I'll starve..."
**The man behind him frowns saying with a steely indifference
"That's your problem I'm afraid, now give me what you got and
I'll give you whats left of my lunch..."
**Max pulls a small handful of caps out of his pocket slowly
putting them on the ground
**The man hits Max in the back of the head with the butt of his
revolver sending Max to the ground as he clutches his head in
pain
**The man digs into his pack and takes out the flesh stripped
bones of an iguana, tossing them into the dirt next to max as he
walks off away from the gas station.
**Max gets up rather dizzy, as he fumbles around he feels a
burning rage crawl up his spine.
**Max looks around clenching his fists as he fumbles toward the
man, he soon breaks into a sprint running head long at the man
who mugged him, attempting to tackle him to the ground.
**The man is caught off guard and is tackled to the ground
feebly attempting to push Max off
**Max quickly raises his fists attempting to repeatedly punch
the man in the face
**The man manages to use his arms to block for a short time, but
tires quickly lowering his arms to try and push Max off
**Max is pushed off unable to get up this time as the world is
spinning too much for him
**The man gets up slowly, unholstering his revolver saying with
rage "You need to learn a lesson about attacking people who are
stronger than you..." the man then fires the revolver once into
Max's thigh
**Max screams in pain a few tears running down his face as the
splintered flesh begins to bleed. Gritting his teeth in pain as
a few more tears stream down his face, he crawls towards the gas
station as the man laughs behind him.
**Max manages to use the gas pumps to slowly heave himself
upward, as he hops inside
**Max uses his shoulder to push open the door as he falls to the
floor, grunting as he crawls over to the counter.
**He reaches over the counter taking a knife, a fork, and a half
empty bottle of whiskey.
**Max reaches downward, using the knife and the fork to pry the
bullet out. A red haze fills his field of vision as he screams
in pain from the operation.
**Max hyperventilates, as he grits his teeth cringing from the
intense pain. After a moment he grabs the bottle of whiskey, and
takes a handkerchief from inside his jumpsuit, he pours the
alchohal onto the cloth, and after taking a deep breathe wraps
the bandage in the heavily bleeding wound.
**Max quickly applies pressure with his remaining strength
repeating to himself "No no no no... This isn't happening..."
**He cringes slightly letting out another scream of pain as the
blood begins to stop flowing out of his body.
**Max lets his hands fall to his side as he relaxes ever so
slightly, extremely exhausted from the ordeal
**He runs his hand through his hair briefly before attempting to
get to his feet.
**He shakily manages to take a few meager steps before when he
suddenly trips as he falls over, the bandage loosens and blood
starts to pour out of the wound again.
**Max panics starting to scream from the sudden force on the
fresh wound, and he begins screaming "Help!"
**Max flails about in an attempt to crawl to the door cringing
and screaming from the pain.
**Max screams one last time and after a few moments of intense
pain, he lets his eyebrows raise as he passes out from a mixture
of shock and blood loss.
Have you been a trader before?: Yes, a few times actually.
What does the Crimson Caravan do?: They form part of the basis
of the NCR's economy, trading and monopolizing anything and
everything that is valuable to them. Currently their goal is to
expand out of California, and acquire new assets and more
profit.
Backstory of your character: (150 words +)
Max was raised in a small town down in northern Oregon in a town
called Peakville, a town on the highway between Oregon,
Washington, and California Max was raised by his mother, as his
father died when he was young. Max possessed and uncanny gift of
being handy with technology and soon refined that into a career,
fixing broken machines around town as a mechanic. Eventually
when he had mastered his trade, he set off as the town no longer
needed him with an increased influx of Californian settlers
bringing in more trade and such. He decided to try and follow
the settlers north to see if he could he could make it farther
north. However, with little or no work he quickly began to run
out of funds, and became stranded near rusty springs. Forced to
scavenge for a living, what little money he had was robbed from
him from various thugs. With few remaining options left he tried
to get work from the people of rusty springs, and was directed
towards NCR. Seeing NCR as the least effective way to make
money, his biased opinions caused him days of hunger and thirst,
eventually he tried contacting the Crimson Caravan in the hopes
that maybe they could use someone with an eye for technology.
The letter contains the content as follows:
[In Character Section]
This is a contract you are signing for the Crimson Caravan,
don't use things like 'lol', 'omg' and 'ffs'!
Full name: Max Johanson
Age: 24
Height: 6’0 feet tall.
Any physically or mental imperfects: No medical imperfections,
though I can be somewhat stubborn.
Do you have a certain reputation in the Crimson Caravan?: When
the Crimson Caravan came through my old town we often did a lot
of trading, In my opinion their alright.
Have you had any previous afflection with the Crimson Caravan?:
Other than the odd drunken brawl, no.
Do you have skills that might be useful for the Crimson
Caravan?: I am an extremely experienced, Mechanic, Technician,
and Engineer, and possess basic medical knowledge.
I understand and agree, that my contract is neutralized and my
salary gone when I quit earlier: I understand completely.
#Post#: 350--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crimson Caravan
DIR By: Diehardpatriot
Date: April 20, 2013, 10:24 am
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Can someone please delete my app? :P
#Post#: 351--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crimson Caravan
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: April 20, 2013, 10:43 am
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Why delete it? You would've been accepted.
Besides, you can do it yourself.
And you also can apply for both, CC and NCR.
#Post#: 352--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crimson Caravan
DIR By: Diehardpatriot
Date: April 20, 2013, 10:59 am
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Nvm then, I'll apply for both! ;D
Thanks for telling me.
#Post#: 1583--------------------------------------------------
Re: Crimson Caravan
DIR By: Renikara
Date: May 30, 2013, 10:35 pm
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[Out Of Character Section]
Steam name: Renikara
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:17803288
Your whitelist can be taken away immediately for abusing/
FailRping. Do you understand? Yes.
How long have you been Serious Roleplaying? About 2 years with
a half a year break.
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community? Less than a week.
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once?
No I have not.
Have you donated? No I have not. But I plan to later.
Give us an Roleplay example. (FearRP, PainRP, CombatRP; 30 lines
+)
1 Hanna looks about from her perch atop a broken down pre-war
truck, she had been up there most of the day keeping a lookout
for any caravans coming in.
2 The day was a very dark day, One that would most likely bring
rain later on.
3 Hanna groaned softly and hopped down from her perch as she
figured it was best to get into some cover before the rain came.
4 Hanna walked for a few moments before she spotted what looked
like a good house to duck into.
5 As Hanna walks to the building a single shot is fired from the
window of the house.
6 Hanna quickly ducks behind a old car for cover, she had no
clue where that shot even came from, which worried her.
7 A male screams from the house. "Don't come any closer you
****! This place is mine!"
8 Hanna looked over the hood of the car to see what window the
shot came from, if she could find where the shooter was she had
a chance to take him out quickly.
9 As Hanna looks over the hood another shot comes from the
window placing a good sized hole in the hood of the car.
10 Hanna jumped back into cover and groaned softly and thought
of a way to get out of this without any extra holes in her.
11 Hanna lightly yelled over to the man in the house. "Okay
okay! Fine, I will go away if you stop shooting!" She hopped the
man wasn't just a nut shooting at someone for the sake of
shooting at someone.
12 The Man laughs a bit and yells back. "You expect me to
believe that?!" He smiled as he kept aim on the car ready to
fire at Hanna once more.
13 Hanna rolled back into her place behind the car to think.
"Alright he's obviously nuts..."
14 As Hanna sits in her cover trying to think of something to
say another shot is heard from the house, which lets a bullet
bury itself next to Hanna's left leg.
15 "Not to terrible of a shot but...nuts." Hanna looks up over
the hood once more to try and get the shooters location once
more, She wanted to get the man's location down before she
started to return fire.
16 The man inside the house seemed to be reloading as no shots
came from the window, Yet Hanna was able to see the man's shadow
moving about inside the house.
17 Hanna raised her assault rifle and aimed at the only open
window waiting for the man to pop his head back out to try and
take a shot, She wanted to end this fast.
18 The man turns around the corner to try and take a shot at the
car again, yet as he turns the corner he ends up having a 6
round burst finds its way into the window.
19 The man jumps back and blinks a bit as he thinks of his next
move, He decides to pop out again and try to shoot.
20 The man was terrified that Hanna had actually fired back at
him!
21 Hanna fires a few more rounds at the man seeing one round
finds its home in the man's shoulder. She hopped that the shot
would cause him to drop his rifle and or actually kill him.
22 The man stumbles back and drops his rifle. "****!" The man
held the new wound to try and stop some of the bleeding.
23 Hanna blinks slightly as she watches the guy stumble back
into the wall, She was surprised he wasn't on the floor yet, she
fired one more shot into the man's chest causing him to fall
back on the wall and limply slide down.
24 Hanna stands up and sighs as she looks about before walking
to the house, She hoped she would get something good from this
firefight.
25 The surrounding area grew quiet as Hanna walked to the house
and went in through the open window.
26 The house was a small 4 room building with ammo, food, and
spare metal parts littered over tables and the floor.
27 "The man must have been held up here for awhile..." Hanna
mumbled to herself as she tries to pick out anything good from
the mess.
28 The wasteland stays quiet around the house as Hanna scavenges
for anything she could possibly sell.
29 "Wonder if he had any good equipment..."
30 Hanna continued to rummage through the house before she found
a cache of weapons in a old fridge, She thought that the local
merchants might pay some good caps for some of the weapons and
decided to report it to the Crimson caravan.
31 She placed a small note for herself on her pad before walking
out of the house to report back to the local crimson caravan
base.
32 Hanna overall was rather happy a boring day got interesting
for a short time.
Have you been a trader before? On other servers yes.
What does the Crimson Caravan do? Buy / sell and transport
goods around the wasteland.
Backstory of your character: (150 words +)
Hanna Julia Richards was born in Utah onboard a crimson
caravan, caravan. She was raised on the caravan's by her father
until he was killed on a run outside of NCR territory. Hanna's
father's friend had saved her in the raid that had killed her
father. Ever since the man known as Kirk had raised with the
help of another caravan runner by the name of Andrew. The two
raised Hanna to be a caravan runner and a great shot with a
assault rifles just like her father. After a few years of her
going with Kirk and Andrew she learned all she could. One she
reached the age of 18 she applied to be a official member of the
Crimson caravan, her application was received and she was
considered due to her father being a caravan runner and her
experience with in her runs with Kirk and Andrew. She was
accepted as a member of the Crimson Caravan and was assigned to
the Fairview branch to help start a new store. This is where she
starts now.
[In Character Section]
This is a contract you are signing for the Crimson Caravan,
don't use things like 'lol', 'omg' and 'ffs'!
Full name: Hanna Julia Richards.
Age: 20
Height: 5 foot 6
Any physically or mental imperfects: No medical imperfections
but I can a bit hard headed.
Do you have a certain reputation in the Crimson Caravan? Not
as of yet.
Have you had any previous afflection with the Crimson Caravan?
I have traded with one of the members in fairview.
Do you have skills that might be useful for the Crimson Caravan?
I am not afraid to go to different locations to set up shop or
to deliver what needs to be delivered. I'm also not to bad with
a rifle.
I understand and agree, that my contract is neutralized and my
salary gone when I quit earlier: Yes
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