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#Post#: 12--------------------------------------------------
Custom Factions
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: March 18, 2013, 2:39 pm
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Custom Faction applications are now locked until further notice
due to the high amount of accepted ones.
If you should have any idea for a good custom faction, post that
here. Reply to this topic, do not make a new thread!
Format:
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Steam name:
Steam ID:
Name of custom faction:
What perks/abilities does the custom faction give you?
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community?
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once?
Have you donated?
How long have you been serious roleplaying (years/ hours)?
Provide us with an RP example (FearRP, CombatRP, PainRP; 40
lines+)
Certain explanation of your custom faction: (As long as
possible)
Backstory of your character/s; reason for custom faction:
Do you want/ need a board for your custom faction on the
forums so people can apply for it?
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#Post#: 25--------------------------------------------------
Re: Custom Factions
DIR By: Grike
Date: March 18, 2013, 4:05 pm
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If you should have any idea for a good custom faction, post that
here. Reply to this topic, do not make a new thread!
Format:
Name of custom faction: 278th Armored Cavalry Regiment
What perks/abilities does the custom faction give you? This
faction gives the ability to remember the pre-war military
tactics. It varies on mostly pre-war guns, and they are VERY
patriotic. They think that true Republic should be established.
So in total, they want to revive the United States Government.
How long have you been with the server/community? Wayside just
started, so I've been here since the beginning I can say. I
joined FronTech yesterday though.
Have you been banned from the FronTech FORP server once? Nearly
because of Sixx.
Have you donated? Not yet.
How long have you been roleplaying? For 1.5 or 2 years on Garrys
Mod.
Certain explanation of your custom faction: (As long as
possible)
As I said, 278th is a very patriotic faction that tries to
follow the pre-war tactics and equipment, trying to revive the
United States Government again. The faction believes that true
Republic should be established in the Wastelands, and unite all
factions under one banner. It consists of children and
grandchildren of United States Army members mostly. Others could
be normal persons that applied and wanted to join this cause. It
was created after 20-25 years after the Vaults opened. Since
then, they have been living in various buildings, hiding from
public eye mostly because of its numbers. Some people say that
sometimes men that are wearing pre-military clothes come and
save them from danger.
Now with increasing numbers, it is time for 278th to rise.
Backstory of your character/s; reason for custom faction:
"5 men stood on top of a corpse mountain, holding an American
flag. One was carrying a wounded member. They were all smiling.
The war was over and it was won. They had a insignia on their
shoulder. It was the 278th. The British had lost this war. The
American's were at the brink of independence."
A man in pre-war army clothes smiled as he finished reading the
paper. He quickly put the paper inside his pocket and went out
of his office, saluting the new recruits.
"Men. You are the future of these lands. You will serve for a
greater cause from now on. You will be hailed as heroes and they
will call you as the saviors of these wastelands. You will unite
everyone under one banner and bring true republic to this once
great country. You are 278th!"
The recruits cheered and clapped as the speech finished. He
smiled again, inspecting the recruits. His CPT rank shined as he
walked to one side to another. He stopped, and looked at the
recruits again. He imagined what would happen to them after the
training.
It was time to start the training, actually.
It was time to raise the future heroes.
Do you want/ need a board for your custom faction on the forums
so people can apply for it? Yes, I would be grateful.
#Post#: 27--------------------------------------------------
Re: Custom Factions
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: March 18, 2013, 4:16 pm
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Accepted.
#Post#: 53--------------------------------------------------
Re: Custom Factions
DIR By: SantaDog
Date: March 21, 2013, 2:17 pm
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Name of custom faction: The Black Knight Raiders
What perks/abilities does the custom faction give you? More or
less the 'power' of raiding towns, camps, and robbing people.
That's it really.
How long have you been with the server/community? Well, I was in
Frontech for a while ago, I'm not sure how long it was then,
maybe a month or so? But including just before Frontech was shut
down and this community arising, a few weeks.
Have you been banned from the FronTech FORP server once? Nope.
Have you donated? No.
How long have you been roleplaying? Around 3-4 years.
Certain explanation of your custom faction: (As long as
possible) The faction started 30 years before Caesars Legion was
founded. A man named John Caveler was sick living under NCR
rule, having to scavenge for caps. He started a group with his
son, Jack, called the Dark Raiders. Jack was only two years old
at the time, and eventually grew up. They were robbing people at
gunpoint, making Chems to sell on the market, raiding towns and
selling people for ransom etc. The raider gang eventually
changed their name to the Black Knight Raiders, because they
became known for short swords and armour customised to look like
a Medieval knight. Unfortunately at the age of 57 John died in a
fire fight, and Jack took over at the age of 19. Now that their
empire was massive, the legion took the dam and kicked the NCR
out of the Mojave. This was a victory for the raiders at first,
until the Legion attacked them too. Only Jack and a few others
is known to have left the camp alive, the rest enslaved or
killed in a fire fight.
Backstory of your character/s; reason for custom faction: Jack
was a small boy when his father left the NCR town, and when he
was 9 he started to learn how to use a 9mm pistols, rifles etc.
He eventually learned how to fight, bare hands and with melee
weapons ranging from a rock to a katana. At age 28 the Black
Knight Raiders fell apart, when the Legion found out where they
were and attacked. Only jack and a handful of people survived.
Now he fights for justice. He hates the NCR for killing his
father, and the Legion for destroying the group. Now they are
trying to reform, not yet noticed by either sides.
Do you want/ need a board for your custom faction on the forums
so people can apply for it? Yes, if possible. It would be
convenient if they would apply rather than approaching me ICly
#Post#: 252--------------------------------------------------
Re: Custom Factions
DIR By: Fizzle
Date: April 12, 2013, 7:34 pm
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Name of custom faction: The Fourth Reich
What perks/abilities does the custom faction give you? This
faction mainly, is to serve the purpose of cleansing the land
from any None-Aryan races, basically fallowing the Third Reich's
dream. So, ultimately, they want to conquer and restore the Nazi
title. There for, they are very dedicated to their Fuhrer, and
will stop at nothing to protect him. Also, they are intelligent,
and trained to fire-arms and mapping, as well as stealth.
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community? A little over a month.
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once?
Never.
Have you donated? No, but I plan to.
How long have you been serious roleplaying (years/ hours)? Over
two years.
Provide us with an RP example (FearRP, CombatRP, PainRP; 40
lines+)
[me=Fizzle]walks across a large line of men, inspecting them,
each with new clean Nazi SS uniforms and bright red swastika
armbands, all at attention, I walk to the front of them ,
looking to each and every one of their eye's.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]raises his right hand, visible to the view of his
armband, shouting "Heil Adler!"[/me]
**All the men in uniform shoot their arms in the air, shouting
"Heil Adler!" after him
[me=Fizzle]lowers his arm, looking over all the Sturmann troops,
then begins to speak "We have begun, a new generation!"[/me]
[me=Fizzle]pauses, taking a slight breath, starring at the
stormtrooper’s as they stare at him, then says "We have a
common enemy, the filthy Jude."[/me]
[me=Fizzle]pauses again, looking over his audience then saying
"They are all traitors to the German people! They denied our way
of life! They are the reason why we didn't conquer the globe the
first time we've attempted."[/me]
[me=Fizzle]walks up to a Sturmann he could see his fear as he
faces the new Führer the young stormtrooper trembles in silence,
it seems as he is sweating, holding back his fear.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]places his hand on the Storm Troopers shoulder saying
"Son, do not be afraid to look at me, we are all brother's in
this holy war." he could see the young storm troopers head lift
up, eyeing him in a blank expression, then he finally says with
hesitation "Jahwol mein Führer "[/me]
[me=Fizzle]pats his on the shoulder, going back up the line,
looking at each storm trooper, then around the room full of
storm troopers, then noticing a man, in a field officer's
uniform, he does not look Aryan.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]steadily pulls out his Revolver, looking to the man's
direction, then shouting in German "Herr Obersturmbannführer,
can you come here?"[/me]
**The man doesn’t seem to notice, in that case, the Führer
shouts in German "Einbrecher die Obersturmbannführer ist ein
Spion[i]" (Intruder, the field officer is a spy)
**All the stormtrooper's break attention, looking back at the
field officer, who lifts his head up in surprise, then reach's
for his Nine-Mili-Meter.
[me=Fizzle]aims at the spy, squeezing the trigger, then, echoing
throughout the room, a loud [i]bang could be heard.[/me]
**The bullet from the revolver hits the spy right in the
stomach.
**The spy tumbles down on the ground; blood seems to be pouring
out of his insides, forming a pool of pitch red blood.
**The spy wiggles, and squirms, struggling to keep himself
alive, clenching his stomach as he coughs out blood.
[me=Fizzle]steps closer to the spy, looking down on him with a
blank expression, then raising his revolver towards his skull
without pity.[/me]
**The spy looking towards the Fuhrer, shaking his head, saying
"N-No.." trembling and sweating, breathing rapidly, his
condition was critical.
[me=Fizzle]squeezes the trigger, and a bullet exits from the
chamber, flying towards the spy's forehead.[/me]
** The spy's upper head exploded, as a result leaving him still
and lifeless on the floor.
[me=Fizzle]turns back to his breed of loyal storm troopers, who
are at attention, but sick, and disgusted by the corpse.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]looks at them then says in a firm and serious voice
"Strummann! What is rule ONE in the rules of the Reich!"[/me]
**All the storm troopers in the room shout "Show no mercy! Or no
mercy will be shown on you!" they all chant.
[me=Fizzle]nods his head, saying "Good" in a calm voice.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]looks back over the corpse, saying "Get this corpse
out of my sight!"[/me]
[me=Fizzle]looks back up at the storm troopers as he sees the
guard’s take out the body[/me]
[me=Fizzle]shouts to all the Storm Troopers, "Dismissed!"[/me]
**All the stormtrooper’s in the room shoot up their right
arm, and shout "Heil Adler!"
[me=Fizzle]one by one, he watches the group of
stormtrooper’s go out the door.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]exhales deeply, looking down, watching one of the
maids clean the blood.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]looks back over his desk, putting his revolver in
holster, switching the safety on.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]drops his weight on his chair, looking over his
desk.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]begins to brush off dust, then looks up, noticing his
Reichfuhrer.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]leans back in his chair inspecting the Reichfruhrer's
uniform, many ribbons and medals, with a bright swastika
armband.[/me]
[me=Fizzle]says in a stern voice "Herr Reichfuhrer, what do you
bring me?"[/me]
**The Reichfuhrer hands the Fuhrer a smooth document folder.
Certain explanation of your custom faction: (As long as
possible)
The Fourth Reich is a new nation made up of mostly Aryan
German's, They where formed Forty Year's after the vault door
opened. focused on cleansing the land of none-Aryan races, and
promote their nation to other people, trying to get as strong in
numbers as possible. Basically, their main goal is to fallow in
the Third Reich, and to increase Nazism. When the group was
born, they where mostly dressed as average wastelanders, until
they gain in numbers and put on uniforms arming themselves, and
cause terror to strike in the wasteland.
The man elected to lead the Fourth Reich as their Fuhrer was
Heinrich Adler, who proved his leadership in defending a German
party from a group of Russian bandits. He then spoke out to the
party, to begin a new nation under his rule, named the Fourth
Reich. His purpose was to conquer the wasteland, and cleanse it
from Jewish, Russian, anyone who was not Aryan German. He gave
this speech, that encouraged the German's of the wasteland to
join "Attention! Brother and sisters! we have been at our knees
for the none-Aryan for too long! We must form our own nation!
and step up to the none-Aryan's! We we're forgotten children of
our fatherland, left in this american's filthy soil! And for too
long have be been abused and at our mercy to the Jude! The
American's are fools! the Russians as well! thus goes for ALL
the none-Aryan Races, they are all fools to thing we wont fight
back! We must resort to the new dawn of the Fourth Reich! and
restore what was forgotten, this is our time, we must fallow in
the dusted print's of the Third Reich , and CONQUER ALL!" and
so, as Nazism spread throughout the wasteland like the Black
Plague, in an attempt to gather more for the new Nazi army.
Backstory of your character/s; reason for custom faction:
Heinrich Adler was a young boy, when he discovered the Third
Reich by reading a very old book, based off of world war two,
and the German's efforts, he was but a little boy, growing up a
shopkeeper, Heinrich always kept in mind about the Nazi's
attempt to defend their people, and their attempt to wipe out
the Jewish, he fallowed their example, growing up each year, he
hit the age of thirty four, fully understanding about Nazim, He
began to resort to Nazim, secretly telling other Aryan Germans,
inviting people to the group, soon gaining in numbers.
Do you want/ need a board for your custom faction on the forums
so people can apply for it? Yes, thank you, I'd appreciated
that.
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Re: Custom Factions
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: April 13, 2013, 4:43 am
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Pending.
The explanation should be longer, explaining how, who and why
exactly formed the faction and maybe what happened there before
2286 and what they do to follow their goals.
For your roleplay example you should use /me instead of /it when
another person does a /me (for example '**The Reichsführer says
in a serious voice' instead of '/it the Reichsführer'), also add
capital letters in the beginning of a /it. Besides alot of other
grammar errors you should correct it's fine.
In the perks/ abilities section you might want to describe their
equipment or similar.
Trial.
I still am not entirely sure about this but it might add some
new and interesting roleplay.
If you manage to set up everything well and the community likes
it, it will remain.
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Re: Custom Factions
DIR By: Altairp
Date: April 14, 2013, 7:17 am
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Name of custom faction:
Red Dawn
What perks/abilities does the custom faction give you?
Basic knowledge for the ignorant (Reading, writing, how to talk
English, some History, Geography and so on..), basic military
tactics for the recruits, advanced tactics for the experienced
troops.
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community?
Since WA’s birth.
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once?
Nope.
Have you donated?
Yep.
How long have you been serious roleplaying (years/ hours)?
Some months (Can’t remember how much)
Provide us with an RP example (FearRP, CombatRP, PainRP; 40
lines+)
***Slums, Luis Sera is tied on a chair, a girl is in the room
with him.
Luis Sera says “Where…where I am?”
Lucille Lamar says “Nowhere, now shut up, I want to have fun
with you.”
**Lucille Lamar turns, going near the fridge, she opens it and
she starts to search something…
***Luis is badly tied, he can free himself if he pulls with
enough force.
**Luis Sera tries to free himself from the rope while the girl
is distracted.
***Luis manages to free himself, there’s a knife on the nearby
table as long as other torture tools.
**Luis Sera takes a knife from the table, then he quickly jumps
over the kitchen’s counter trying to backstab the girl.
***Luis Sera stumble, failing to hit Lucille.
**Lucille Lamar turns, he looks at Luis, then he quickly tries
to punch him with his right fist.
***Luis Sera gets hit in the face.
**Luis Sera splits some blood, then he quickly tries to grab the
knife on the ground.
**Lucille Lamar attempts to kick Luis in the face.
**Luis gets kicked in the face, splitting more blood and
stumbling back.
**Lucille Lamar attempts to grab the knife from the ground.
**Luis Sera is still trying to get up.
**Lucille Lamar grabs the knife, before attempting to stab Luis
with it.
**Luis gets hit in the right shoulder, he screams in pain then
he attempts to hit Lucille in the face with his left fist.
**Lucille Lamar gets hit in the face, dropping the knife on the
ground.
Luis Sera says “Stupid bitch! Why are you doing this?”
**Lucille Lamar evily grin, before trying to take the knife
from the ground.
**Luis Sera quickly attempts to push her backwards using his
strength to make her stumble on the ground.
**Lucille Lamar stumble on the floor, hitting the fridge with
her head and screaming for the pain.
**Luis grabs the knife from the ground, before rushing at
Lucille trying to hit her.
**Lucille quickly attempts to kick his stomach with her feet.
**Luis gets hit and moves backwards, placing a hand on his
stomach trying to calm the pain.
**Lucille stands up, she grabs a bottle from the kitchen counter
and she hit the counter’s edge with it breaking a small part of
glass, then she points the broken bottle at Luis.
**Luis Sera looks at the broken bottle, while heavily breathing
he says “Alright, no need to get killed girl! Let’s put our
weapons down, and pretend that nothing happened, okay?”
**Lucille Lamar smiles, then she jumps towards Luis trying to
hit him.
**Luis Sera points his knife at Lucille, trying to stab her.
**Lucille Lamar gets stabbed by the knife, she stops dropping
the bottle and looking at Luis.
***The bottle falls on the ground, hitting the floor and
breaking in pieces.
**Luis Sera pulls out his knife from Lucille’s chest, letting
her falling on the ground.
**Lucille opens her mouth, trying to talk, she says nothing but
some tears begin to fall from her eyes crossing her cheeks.
**Luis Sera looks at her, putting a hand on his right shoulder
trying to stop the blood, an expression of pain appears in his
face.
**Lucille Lamar puts both hand on the wound, silently crying in
fear.
**Luis Sera slowly kneels near the woman, he raises his knife
and he quickly starts to backstab her killing her.
Certain explanation of your custom faction:
Thomas Roberson, this is the name of the slave that 30 years ago
rebelled against the Houston raiders in Canada, inspired by his
secret readings about the communism and the Marx doctrine he
fight against his captors along with some other slaves, after
two days of fight he won and he conquered the city, before
freeing every slaves and creating his own army.
The Red Line, this is the name, a organization with the task to
free every slave and to create a new, better, communist society
for everyone.
The Red Line tries to avoid fights with innocent or good people,
they try to make small alliances with the main forces in the
places where they settle, on the other hand, they are extremely
violent and cruel against their main enemies, and they show no
mercy with traitors or people who gets in their way.
The Red Line forces in Washington are one of the new squads sent
by Roberson with the task to explore the United States, to
expand the Red Line’s influence and to gain more soldiers for
his army.
Backstory of your character/s; reason for custom faction:
General Secretary Francis Dixon was 40 years old when the
rebellion started, he was one of the first to rebel during the
uprising (after Thomas of course) and he fought alongside his
leader saving his life twice.
Thanks to this he became one of the Red Line leaders, with his
own squad he helped the main army to free other Slaver
controlled towns quickly gaining fame into the Red Line ranks.
20 years later Dixon is sent to the region of Washington into
the United States to explore the area, to gain influence along
the Americans wastelanders and to free more slaves from their
captivity.
Do you want/ need a board for your custom faction on the forums
so people can apply for it?
Yes, even if I want accept apps ingame for who already knows to
roleplay, I still need a board for newbs who wants to enter.
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Re: Custom Factions
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: April 15, 2013, 1:57 pm
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Trial.
We will see wether this adds good roleplay and adds up with the
Fourth Reich or not.
Unless you go too crazy on skills and random wasters, everything
should be fine.
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Re: Custom Factions
DIR By: Grike
Date: April 16, 2013, 3:28 pm
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Name of custom faction: "The Oculus"
What perks/abilities does the custom faction give you? Just
being a secret organisation.
How long have you been with the Wayside Alabaster
server/community? Since it started.
Have you been banned from the Wayside Alabaster server once? No.
Have you donated? Yes.
How long have you been serious roleplaying (years/ hours)? 2
years, I guess.
Provide us with an RP example (FearRP, CombatRP, PainRP; 40
lines+)
[me=Grike]walks up to the man, his hood covering his eyes. He
turns to the men behind him for a brief second and then looks
back at the man.[/me]
/it The man is stuck in a corner, crying, yelling for help and
mercy.
[me=Grike]continues to walk to the man, a smile on his face as
he walks up.[/me]
/it The man suddenly crashes on the floor, even yelling higher.
[me=Grike]stops right infront of the man, tilting his head down
to see him.[/me]
/it The man wraps his hands around the hooded mans boots,
kissing it. 'Mercy!' he yells.
[me=Grike]'s smile is gone. He reaches for his hood and pushes
it off, revealing his face.[/me]
/it The man stops shouting and stares at the man in the eyes,
'No no no!'
[me=Grike]smirks at him, reaching for his belt. He takes a
bottle and pulls his hand up, opening it.[/me]
/it The three men behind him come up, they are all hooded and
are wearing robes like the man. They pull the man down on the
ground.
[me=Grike]quickly opens the cap of the bottle, smirking.[/me]
/it The man continues to scream and yell, 'Please no!'. The
three men hold his mouth open.
[me=Grike]quickly makes the man drink the bottle. He then throws
the bottle away.[/me]
/it The three men drop the man, he falls down to the floor,
coughing.
/it The three men retreat to their places behind the man.
[me=Grike]smirks again as he watches the man cough, he kicks the
man softly with his boot.[/me]
/it The man falls on his back, he then starts to make coughing
sounds.
[me=Grike]stares at the man with the smirk on his face.[/me]
/it The man soon starts to bleed from his nose, then his ears,
and then eyes.
[me=Grike]stands there, doing nothing. He keeps staring at the
man that is coughing.[/me]
/it The man is soon unable to scream and starts to gargle in his
own blood, he reaches for the boot of the man, pulling the leg.
[me=Grike]doesnt get pulled because of the man being weak. He
still stands there, watching him with the smirk.[/me]
/it The man soon lets go of the leg and starts to talk one more
time, but is unable to complete it. He ceases movement.
[me=Grike]quickly pulls his hood up, the smirk gone. He turns on
his heels to the men, nodding.[/me]
/it The three men quickly grab the body and pull it away.
[me=Grike]tilts his head around to see if there are any
movement.[/me]
/it There seems to be nothing.
[me=Grike]waits for the three men to arrive.[/me]
/it The three men arrive after a few minutes.
[me=Grike]nods again and starts to walk away from the
scene.[/me]
/it The three men start to follow the hooded man.
[me=Grike]quickly places his two hands together and tilts his
head down, still walking.[/me]
/it The three men seem to do the same thing.
[me=Grike]continues to walk, hearing the men scream.[/me]
/it The three men continue to follow the hooded man, keeping the
position.
[me=Grike]smirks again as he sees the tomb open, he walks
inside.[/me]
/it The three men walk inside with him and it closes.
/it The four men suddenly disappear.
Certain explanation of your custom faction: (As long as
possible)
Before the Great War, in midst of secret organisations, there
was a less-known organisation known as "The Oculus". It was
completely a ghost, having members in everywhere, all around the
world. It continued to puppet the humans, the group being led by
a council named "Servus Oculus". The council made important
choices, that decided the fate of nations. When The Great War
came in and nuclear bombs were launched, The Oculus members were
first to get in the bunkers, alredy knowing what was going to
happen. As they had children, they passed the knowledge of The
Oculus, the children believeing the ways of the faction and
praying.
After the Vaults opened, the members of The Oculus rushed out
and were suddenly everywhere around the wasteland. Still hiding
from public eye, they continued to trick people and puppet the
organisation leaders, establishing a control line. This would
not continue forever as inexperienced members of Servus Oculus
couldnt lead well, and soon, the line was demolished. The Oculus
soon losing control everywhere. The members soon disbanded, not
hearing from eachother or seeing eachother again. As the
organisation disbanded, some believed there was still hope. The
members that believed this soon came together and rebuilt the
organisation.
Now, after the organisation has been rebuilt, it is striving to
achieve what it had again. The Oculus continues to exist with
the lead of experienced Servus Oculus members. The Oculus has
risen from the ashes. The members that had hope had rebuilt it.
Now it was time for the organisation to reach its old power.
Making it their goal, the members suddenly created a bond,
taking an oath not to betray The Oculus ever. The children
taught from childhood, its members are very loyal to the cause.
The organisation will continue to live, and will have more
members for the cause. No matter at what cost, The Oculus shall
live!
Backstory of your character/s; reason for custom faction:
Being a member that had hope for The Oculus, Achilles Gallus,
being a member of the Servus Oculus, has thought that the
organisation was the savior of the humanity. The most loyal
person to the cause, he soon had rose in the ranks of the
organisation, being a well respected member. He strives to get
the organisation get back its to old power. He has been trying
to contact famous people in the wastes to take control of and
take them into their cause, finding strong bonds within the
wasteland. Also a respected member in the Servus Oculus, his
decisions are final for most members, and no one argues with him
on his decisions. Or doesnt have the nerves to.
Do you want/ need a board for your custom faction on the forums
so people can apply for it? No.
#Post#: 272--------------------------------------------------
Re: Custom Factions
DIR By: Victoreno
Date: April 17, 2013, 10:00 am
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Denied.
Your roleplay example only has 38 lines and you repeat
'man'/'men' like 42 times, thus making it look even worse and it
does not really make too much sense. You should know that you
usually use a /me to describe an action you are doing, rarely an
/it. In the example, you were the only one to /me.
You never get to know what exactly their goal is since they
would lead things in a certain direction with all the power,
otherwise it would be pointless.
Also, how and what exactly do they do to gain power, stay hidden
and follow their goals.
How would they dress, act, what items do they use, any special
experiences or knowledge? You hardly get to know anything about
The Oculus.
Your backstory hardly is a backstory, just says he was loyal and
he contacted some people. Well, now I really can get a clear
picture of his personality...
However, not blocking you to do your thing. We already got alot
of factions and I kind of don't see the point in a whitelistable
faction for a very hidden group that acts like wastelanders
anyway. Of course you still can roleplay passively and try to
build up your faction anyway.
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