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Future Wars (Book Two) PROLOGUE
DIR By: MaxS
Date: July 4, 2013, 6:50 pm
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It’s not normally okay when you see new robots enter
Metallica—whenever you see them, you are supposed to yell and
scream or whatever… but nobody saw them so nobody yelled or
screamed… well, in Metallica. Their disgusting teeth usually
gross you out—the green, the crimson blood dripping out from
them—and such things just tend to make you vomit desperately all
over your best friend’s shoes. Their ships aren’t always the
best but sometimes jealousy flows through your body and you feel
it spur into your lungs… You say, “Ugh, how bad I want that
ship…” After a while, you walk away and forget about it. But—in
your mind—you keep thinking that maybe you are jealous of this
wonderful creation… maybe you are… maybe you are not… but your
muzzle or mouth or tongue or whatever just keeps thinking to
walk alone… Maybe you need a different life. Yeah, this human
needs a different life than what he has got.
Maybe this new creature doesn’t feel okay. Despicable reasons
tend to make your stomach clench up into some type of…
engulfment? Your human body is really awkward, sometimes, but
there is a time where this human body can get infected with dull
Metallican and new creature’s blood—it hurts and digs into your
skin as you scream, but, you don’t feel that scream, son. You
don’t even feel that it is there. Infections make scars that
sink into your heart and never come out of place; do you want to
beg and beg for that pain to go away? No, don’t have that
pain—take someone’s hand and maybe you can let pain fly away.
From this world’s perspective, this is disgusting—all of
humanity is… wrong.
The engines were working for sure—the fact that you couldn’t
actually see the engines since they were on the outside of the
ship was the sad part. Juggled between different and mixed
emotions, the air started to blow gently yet roughly onto the
paths like it hasn’t before. The paths on the ship, that is. On
Metallican ships, there were steps that you need to take: ramps,
Distant Ramps or Paths and… well, it’s practically like human
movement but developed with different names. Spluttering with
fear, the gas wasn’t really gas anymore but more like dissolved
chemistry that engulfed into war… ha, yep, war. This type of gas
is not the best to be around in… Earth is the best place to keep
gas since natural resources we mostly use are all we need.
These resources are found in the best of our hearts… and in
dirt, too. The ship’s resources contained… dirt? Yes, it sounded
really weird—there was no certain honesty and vengeance that
this was occurring… is this going to really be a new creature?
“They found us, aereato, aereato, aereato!”
I used to wonder why the world
Was so insecure and didn’t
Listen to the things I said
But they shatter me each time.
Most of the time I think that to myself.
I keep it to me.
[move]Thanks for reading![/move]
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Re: Future Wars (Book Two) PROLOGUE
DIR By: Jessica
Date: July 4, 2013, 6:54 pm
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I have no idea how you write so well, Max. I can't wait until
you post more Future Wars. I'm looking forward to it! Please
write more soon!
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Re: Future Wars (Book Two) PROLOGUE
DIR By: MaxS
Date: July 4, 2013, 7:13 pm
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Thanks. ^w^
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Re: Future Wars (Book Two) PROLOGUE
DIR By: Abbey Bominable
Date: July 5, 2013, 1:22 pm
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I don't know why I haven't read FW yet. It's pure epicness! I
love this! I'll have to read book one so I don't get lost.
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Re: Future Wars (Book Two) PROLOGUE
DIR By: Harry Dowling
Date: July 5, 2013, 8:22 pm
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FW is just brilliant Max. I loved this from the second I laid
eyes upon the first word.
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