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#Post#: 3180--------------------------------------------------
Floating texts for chapter 7
By: Aeroblyctos Date: May 25, 2011, 12:58 pm
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Hello.
I'm once again searching for help. This time I need some
floating texts for chapter 7. Also check out my grammar, I don't
want any spelling errors.
The texts can be like anything but not TOOOOOOOOOOO random and
not TOOOOOOOOOOOO long.
Entrance
- A guard's job is boring. I've been thinking about becoming a
merchant.
- Terdoom Castle is gigantic in it's size.
- I think I've heard something about dragons... I've got a bad
feeling about this.
- This is the entrance to the glorious Terdoom Castle!
- We've received new orders not to let anymore citizens in.
- An order was given to delay the rest of the guests.
- I've heard a command that the magical domes will be activated
again.
- Are the dragons... Still alive!?
- It's been a tough day, first the guest inspection and now
this.
Main roads/districts and parks
- I'm proud to walk on these glorious streets!
- This city is remarkable!
- Thousands and thousands of people live in this city today, and
more is coming every day!
- The city is expanding so fast, it has already grown far from
the original walls.
- This city has many parks that makes the atmosphere more
relaxing.
- There are many Summoning Circles around Oelivert. The Magic
Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.
- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshipers?
- I think the dragons were always overrated.
- I remember that face... Fradz... You made my girl pregnant and
left
- Libraries can hold ancient history. But I heard almost all of
them were burned in the war.
- I've always wondered... Why did the war start in the first
place? Did we fight for nothing?
- I heard the dragons are back... But the king told us they're
all dead.
- I want to be a wanderer. Everyday I help people and defeat
monsters.
- I never get to go adventuring because me mum won't let me!
- Terdoom Castle is just too big. I always get myself lost in
here!
- My dream is to work in the castle serving the king someday.
- Terdoom Castle is the safest place in the world!
- I was wondering why our world's name is Oelivert.
- I think the infrastructure in here is too boring. Everything
is just so plain.
- This city is just too huge!
- I wonder how many people live in here. Everyday more and more
people move here.
- The road is wide, maybe a little too wide.
Magic Research
- I heard the trolls around the Icy Mountains are having some
huge problems.
- There are many mysterious powers in this world yet to be
found.
- We humans have some interesting powers that we don't know much
about.
- I wonder what's the source of magic?
- The dragons clearly are the most powerful when it comes to
magic.
- Many answers would have been answered a long time ago if we
would have cooperation with the dragons.
Magic Guild
- Orcs are so keen on magic just like us. That's why we share
many projects together.
- Our biggest project is to create the enormous Teleportation
System.
- Summoning Circles were used in the war against the dragons.
- It is said that the most powerful fighters come from Northern
tribes... Just like Xanothin.
- Magic Guild is the biggest guild in the whole world!
- This guild has no boundaries, we're everywhere!
Army Quarters
- Welcome to the Army Quarters!
- This is one of many Army Quarters in the city. Welcome!
- We still have a strong military after the war.
- If you are strong and dedicated enough, you can be promoted
from the army to a dragon slayer!
- Did you know that most of the dragon slayers comes from the
army?
- The world is filled with magic... I don't trust magic.
- Phodom, may the hammer be with you always!
- Phodom, it's been a long time. I still remember your excellent
leadership!
- Life and death is unpredictable. Destiny is the only thing I
believe in.
- Stay on your business.
- My dream is to become a dragon slayer. I've been training hard
to become one.
Market Areas
- There are so many interesting items that I pissed in my pants.
- I wish I had more money.
- Did you know that the trolls are the second largest race after
humans by population?
- Your items are indeed powerful, but I've seen even more
powerful items.
- Some dragons have been seen... I must prepare myself for a
second conflict!
- I really hate this city... Too big for my taste!
- There are many games to be played here.
- Gladiator Arena? Wow, that's a scary place.
- I've heard that you can see the creator when you drink enough
sludge.
- I'm a merchant and I've been doing a lot business with
Kar'Gath.
- The business here is great.
- I'm searching for some nice swords and axes.
#Post#: 3184--------------------------------------------------
Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
By: chimto Date: May 25, 2011, 10:58 pm
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Grammar mistakes:
[quote]- There are many Summoning Circles around the Oelivert.
Magic Guild uses them for something.[/quote]
Should be: '- There are many Summoning Circles around the
Oelivert. The Magic Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.'
[quote]- Did you know that the trolls are dragon
worshipers?[/quote]
Should be: '- Did you know that the trolls are dragon
worshippers?'
[quote]- The world is filled with thousands of starts. But you
can always clearly see 2 and the sun.[/quote]
You mean 'stars'?
[quote]- Orcs are so keen to magic just like us. That's why we
share many projects together.[/quote]
Should be: '- Orcs are so keen on magic just like us. That's why
we share many projects together.'
[quote]- Welcome to Army Quarters![/quote]
Should be: '- Welcome to the Army Quarters!'
#Post#: 3190--------------------------------------------------
Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
By: Aeroblyctos Date: May 26, 2011, 9:54 am
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Thanks!
Fixed.
#Post#: 3222--------------------------------------------------
Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
By: pl4ton Date: May 28, 2011, 9:08 pm
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dont be so shy!
Some guys on the street should say:
- I wonder who was our creator?
-(pretty girl) If I only could meet Aero *sigh*
- Dragons are overrated anyway, what about Zergs?
-Anyone seen my drIgonPAD?
- (some priest) I cant really answer your questions how our
world was created... infact I dont know nothing (kills himself
cause of deep depression afterwards)
-some random girl to Fradz: Fradz im pregnant!
-some random old women to Galeoth: Galeoth, search my library -
there are some secrets you never could dream off! ;)
-random guy: you cant be Dragon Slayers, your equipment sucks
-other guy: check tcocamgaign.com for help!
-random guy: Phodom may your Hammer be with you!
;D ::) :P
#Post#: 3227--------------------------------------------------
Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
By: Aeroblyctos Date: May 29, 2011, 3:20 am
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Thanks, I added some. They're not exactly like yours but the
idea behind them is yours.
More, more, more!
#Post#: 3230--------------------------------------------------
Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
By: chimto Date: May 29, 2011, 6:50 am
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Some random guy: 'I'm trying to think up a good adventurer name,
for when I become an adventurer, which I will one of these days!
Uh, anyway, I'm thinking of maybe calling myself 'Amiable
Dingo'? Has a nice ring to it, don't you think?'
#Post#: 3231--------------------------------------------------
Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
By: Aeroblyctos Date: May 29, 2011, 7:03 am
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That's too long. Cut it to half and then it's okay I guess.
#Post#: 3233--------------------------------------------------
Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
By: Tears Date: May 29, 2011, 7:16 am
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This is what I want for my life: "I want to be a wanderer.
Everyday I help people and defeat monsters."
and then "Life and death is unpredictable. Destiny is the only
thing I believe in".
"
#Post#: 3237--------------------------------------------------
Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
By: Aeroblyctos Date: May 29, 2011, 8:40 am
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Good ones. Thanks.
#Post#: 3258--------------------------------------------------
Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
By: chimto Date: May 30, 2011, 12:36 am
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Greeeetings here, Phodom!
This is the Army Quarters!
You're welcome here!
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