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Re: [Not so] Complete Walthrough [V 1.5d] [Chapter 1 complete]
By: chimto Date: May 16, 2011, 11:10 pm
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Yes.
I fixed the spelling/grammar mistakes and added more information
about items.
And for the spoilers, just use a <PLOT SCENE> tag instead of
revealing the story.
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Re: [Not so] Complete Walthrough [V 1.5d] [Chapter 1 complete]
By: Banpower1 Date: May 17, 2011, 4:32 am
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EDIT: ok i'm going to use the part you corrected to add names
and things like that, but i like my style of being a bit
personal instead of just, go here, go there style, so i'm going
to use the edits, but not as they are, hope you understand :S
(before edit:)but i have to admit, i'm at a lost again, what do
you mean by the "And for the spoilers, just use a <PLOT SCENE>
tag instead of revealing the story"? is it like the:
[code][spoiler]example[/spoiler][/code]?
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Re: [Not so] Complete Walthrough [V 1.5d] [Chapter 1 complete]
By: chimto Date: May 17, 2011, 5:21 am
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No. It's not like that.
I meant that instead of writing:
[quote]Now that everything is cleaned out on the map, for now,
run back home to your wife to activate the further parts of the
main quest.
Your child has been taken by a monster! No need to hurry though,
no timed events here.[/quote]
You should simply use:
[quote]<PLOT SCENE>[/quote]
To avoid spoilers.
[quote]When passing the Ogre mountain you will be assulted by an
assassin,[/quote]
The correct word is 'ambush'. Not 'assult'.
Oh, and I have provided you with a strategy against the epic
boss in the post-proofreading version.
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Re: [Not so] Complete Walthrough [V 1.5d] [Chapter 1 complete]
By: Banpower1 Date: May 17, 2011, 6:54 am
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ahh i get the point... but cant we just assume that players that
are reading a walkthrough already gave up on trying to find out
the plot themselves? i can add a warning in the beginning saying
that the walkthrough will contain spoilers, but i'd like to keep
them in there, since they give a sort of anchors, to where you
are in the storyline... this is at least the way i'm making it,
but i do see that an official guide would be without spoilers
and without personal things in it, but its not an official
guide, its the guide by me :P (hope you do not read this as
"Fuck you i'm not going to listen", because i really love the
input and corrections you've given so far, especially the names
and things like that, cause i suck at naming :S )
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Re: [Not so] Complete Walthrough [V 1.5d] [Chapter 1 complete]
By: chimto Date: May 17, 2011, 9:14 am
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[quote]ahh i get the point... but cant we just assume that
players that are reading a walkthrough already gave up on trying
to find out the plot themselves? i can add a warning in the
beginning saying that the walkthrough will contain spoilers, but
i'd like to keep them in there, since they give a sort of
anchors, to where you are in the storyline...[/quote]
I never like it when the story is suddenly spoiled when I'm
looking at a walkthrough searching for a specific boss strategy.
(If you want to keep them, at least put them in spoiler tags)
[quote]without personal things in it[/quote]
If there were too much personal things, it will just become a
'Let's Play!' thing.
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