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       Detective Shadow D. Fire book 1. "Death of Lies" Chapt
       er 2
       By: tbremise Date: October 13, 2012, 1:23 pm
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       Ch. 2
       Time for training!
       That night I couldn’t sleep. “What is wrong with me? Why am I
       joining the FBI?” I felt like my brain was going to explode. I
       got out of my bed and decided to look around the chambers that
       the headquarters gave me. It was sort of dull. It had a dresser,
       a cot, a chest with a lock on it, and the door. I left the room
       and walked around looking for a cup of water. I heard someone
       around the corner. I tried to listen to them, but they had
       gotten closer, so ran back to my room.
       
       
       It was still dark when I was awoken for my training. “Dark
       Fire! Wake up!” yelled Steifer. I got up, exhausted, and
       followed him through the corridors. He led me to a dark room
       with ladders, ramps, and bunkers in it. “This is the simulation
       room. It is where you will do your training,” The boss said
       through a speaker. “This time you will be training with a laser
       tag gun.”
       I was given the toy gun and then Steifer left the room. Lights
       flashed, there was a loud noise, and then I was surrounded by
       people and animals. I was in a marketplace in Africa. I heard a
       scream and saw someone steal something from a woman.
       
       5
       
       I started to chase him, but he tricked me and escaped down an
       alley. “Boy! This sure seems real.” I said aloud. I went back to
       the scene of the crime. I looked all around for clues, hints,
       anything that could help me find the criminal.
       I found a letter. It read, “Dear Shadow, You won’t beat me.
       You can find me at the alley behind the market.”  I decided to
       take his bet and went to the alley that is behind the market and
       sure enough he was there. I took aim with the laser gun and
       almost got a shot at him when he yelled, “Get him boys!”
       
       Ten more goons came out of nowhere. They had knives and the
       leader of the gang had a chain. I grabbed my gun and took aim. I
       shot at one of the goons, there was a flicker of light, and then
       he disappeared. Two others tried to jump me, but I was too fast
       and turned and shot those guys too.
       At the end of my shooting craze, it was just me and the leader.
       I shot him, but he wouldn’t die. He whipped his chain at me and
       hit me in the head. The blow nearly knocked me out. It felt like
       blood was rushing out of my head were he had hit me. “It didn’t
       take you long to recover, Shadow!” He said as he swung again. I
       ducked for his second attack. I hit him with the gun and it
       knocked him out cold.
       6
       The room was consumed in darkness. “Simulation over,” A robot
       voice said. There was a flash of light and then I was back in
       the simulation room. I heard applause, looked around and noticed
       all of the agents were clapping for me on how well I did on my
       first “mission”.  “Well done!” The boss said. “The simulation
       has just given you a name. It is Shadow!” Steifer said. “Wow! My
       name is now Shadow D. Fire!”
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