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the road to peace is narrow [narrowpaw of thunderclan]
By: Refreshing Date: September 29, 2012, 8:02 pm
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[center][I made this little guy on Warrior Cats RPG and I just
have to bring him over here. -cuddles Narrow-]
Name: [s]Narrowkit[/s] – Narrowpaw – [s]Narrowroad[/s]
Age: Eleven moons
Gender: Tom
Alliance: ThunderClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: Those who only see Narrowpaw’s scraggly, matted blue
pelt wouldn’t think he was a cat. They would believe he was a
creature of unknown horrors, a mysterious tale to tell naughty
kits. He has round, cool hazel eyes with sea green flecks.
Thick, dark stripes ripple across his back in a sort of sloppy
pattern. His paws and underbelly are as white as the clouds
spinning above his head. Narrowpaw’s nose is a striking pink,
and he has a scar just to the left of it. Where his tail should
be there is just a white stump.
To summarize; Narrowpaw is a scraggly blue classic tabby with
white bicolor, wide hazel eyes, and a bobtail.
Personality: Narrowpaw is a rather curious mind, and he's
excitable. He always hops around, sticking his nose where it
shouldn’t be. He has yet to learn his place in the Clan, and he
tends to ignore little details. While most apprentices his age
would be focusing on the home stretch of their training,
Narrowpaw is regressing to the stages of a kit. He looks at
battles as a journey, and isn’t planning on fathering a litter
anytime soon. Narrowpaw is also easily distracted, and it takes
a long time for him to become focused again. Aside from his
eagerness, Narrowpaw isn't the brightest star in Silverpelt.
---Likes: He loves battling, hunting, chasing butterflies,
playing all day, and exploring.
--- Dislikes: He dislikes being told to sit still, being told to
go away, and acting serious.
---Strengths: He is a skilled tree climber.
---Weaknesses: He always misses minor details, so there could be
holes in whatever plans he makes. Like most ThunderClan
apprentices, Narrowpaw can’t swim. He also is not a skilled
hunter.
History of Character Development: Narrowpaw was adopted from
finn. His description was expanded and personality created.
Roleplay History: Narrowkit was born into the warmth that was
the ThunderClan nursery. He had a daring, ambitious mother and a
quiet father. Naturally, he would take after his mother and
become the little adventurer he is today. Narrowkit adopted her
courage after seeing her successfully take down a badger with a
patrol.
Narrowpaw was one of the many apprentices who were excited for
their first day of training. Determined to impress his mentor,
Narrowpaw started training daily to climb trees. Eventually he
became able to ascend a tree nearly as quickly as a squirrel
could. He was also eager to start battle training, but he
doesn’t enjoy hunting too much. He chases about three mice on
average before catching anything. Now, after five moons of
training, Narrowpaw still cannot hunt.
Roleplay Sample: [quote author=refreshing][font=times new
roman]Bumblebees hummed lazily above the dew-spotted grass. A
small white tom lay in the shadow of the nursery, belly
grumbling like a bear. Where was his sister with games to play,
food to eat, stories to tell? It was sunhigh and Palae was still
not here.
Pantomnesiakit finally stood, thick alabaster fur billowing out
around him. He fetched a mossball out of the corner behind the
nursery, and he stalked through the grass. Licking his dry lips
and setting the mossball before him, Pantomnesiakit thought
hard. What could he do that no one had done to a ball before?
Normal was just begging to be messed with
today.[/font][/q][/center]
Comments: Narrowpaw was so fun to make c:
#Post#: 988--------------------------------------------------
Re: the road to peace is narrow [narrowpaw of thunderclan]
By: paris Date: September 29, 2012, 9:49 pm
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try making the sentences of personality a bit more lengthy
Edit: Also some things need capitalization.
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Re: the road to peace is narrow [narrowpaw of thunderclan]
By: Refreshing Date: October 7, 2012, 1:01 pm
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Sorry for the delay. Are the sentences any better? c:
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Re: the road to peace is narrow [narrowpaw of thunderclan]
By: paris Date: October 7, 2012, 3:19 pm
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[quote author=Refreshing link=topic=138.msg985#msg985
date=1348966968]
History of Character Development: Narrowpaw was adopted from
finn. His description was expanded and personality created.
Roleplay History: Narrowkit was born into the warmth that was
the ThunderClan nursery. He had a daring, ambitious mother and a
quiet father. Naturally, he would take after his mother and
become the little adventurer he is today. Narrowkit adopted her
courage after seeing her successfully take down a badger with a
patrol.
Narrowpaw was one of the many apprentices who were excited for
their first day of training. Determined to impress his mentor,
Narrowpaw started training daily to climb trees. Eventually he
became able to ascend a tree nearly as quickly as a squirrel
could. He was also eager to start battle training, but he
doesn’t enjoy hunting too much. He chases about three mice
on average before catching anything. Now, after five moons of
training, Narrowpaw still cannot hunt.
[/quote]
[center]
[font=times new roman]this is a bit short, but fix that up and
it should be fine[/font].[/center]
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