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#Post#: 932--------------------------------------------------
a little voice in the wind- indigopaw of windclan
By: paris Date: September 28, 2012, 5:05 pm
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Character Name:
Indigopaw
Character Age:
9 moons
Gender:
tom
Alliance:
windclan
Rank:
Apprentice
Appearance (6 or more sentences):
Indigopaw is a handsome torbie tom with many different colors.
He's red, black, brown, white- oh so many! His eyes
are...strange- many cats look at him funny. His eyes are
different colors- oh my! One dark blue, while the other is a
lighter yellow- not the best mixture of colors. His ears are
cupped, making them look extremely weird, with fur prickling off
them. His tail is long and fluffy, often hard to keep from
moving or twitching. Indigopaw's legs are seriously long- which
makes him possible one of the tallest apprentices in the clan.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own
section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are
additional requirements):
Indigopaw is a short-tempered tom, but you'd have a temper if
you had little voices talking. He also has ADHD, making it hard
to focus on his training. He was a weakness in hunting because
you need to have so much focus to hunt- but strength in fighting
because you do what your instincts tell you. Or what his voice
tells him. Indigopaw is pretty serious, not much of a joker-
meaning he doesn't get along with others very well. It's ashamed
too; he could have so many friends. He acts like he's a warrior,
and doesn't like to play. He spends his time hunting and serving
the clan. Although, he can be very friendly if your patient with
him.
---Likes (at least 3): Fighting, running, friendly cats, catnip
--- Dislikes (at least 3): His little voice, hunting, twolegs
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Running, fighting, aim,
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Jumping, hunting, pacing himself,
History (8 or more sentences):
Indigopaw was born in a science lab- trapped as a testing
object. To the scientists he was nothing more than a test
object- to them it didn't matter if he breathed or not. One day,
he met a 3 mooned female kit- around the same age as he was.
They got along simply well, but had never actually felt the
presence of each other together. Bars separated them from each
other- but their friendship was too hard to break. They made
little plans on how to escape- and one day the time came. The
scientists came and opened the cages- and the two little kits
took a run for it. The two kits ran for the door on their
stubby, little, legs- making it outside. But when Indigo turned
around, the female wasn’t there. He looked at the door to see a
scientist jab a death-shot into her, and then he ran. A few
moons of living as a loner weren't as hard as loosing the
she-cat. He'd never even learned her name- they had none.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
It's not at all my first. <3
Comments (optional):
is it ok for him to have ADHD and a little voice in his head? I
have a feeling I could lead to some good plots.
#Post#: 938--------------------------------------------------
Re: a little voice in the wind- indigopaw of windclan
By: wonderland Date: September 28, 2012, 5:40 pm
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First time doing this, higher staff can correct me-
-How did he get his name? You mentioned that he had none at the
lab.
-How did he find the clan? You left off the history with him
being a loner.
-Out of the four clans, why was it that he choose Windclan
instead of remaining a loner or joining a different clan?
-How did he survive as a loner until he found the clan? You
stated he escaped from a lab meaning he would have no clue how
to hunt, fight or find shelter because he wouldn't be able to
learn that in a lab.
-How did he learn how to survive in the wild as a loner? Did
someone teach him? If so, is there a name to this specific cat
or any reason behind it?
-If he's from a lab, that'd mean he'd most likely escaped into a
city, how did he find the forest? Why did he venture beyond the
city?
I also believe that a little voice in his head would classify as
Schizophrenia unless it's his thoughts and if it's his thoughts,
I am fairly sure he'll have control over it.
#Post#: 949--------------------------------------------------
Re: a little voice in the wind- indigopaw of windclan
By: paris Date: September 28, 2012, 7:42 pm
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[center][font=times new roman]why would you need to know
that...?
- the clan named him
- he was closest to the clan after his travels
- he thought it'd be interesting and he was only a kit. he
picked the clan cuz he was closest.
- he just ran and found crow food.
- um no.
- the lab is in the forest because it is unknown about. it is
secret and tests horrible things on animals to make sure it's
safe for people to use.
um...ok?[/font][/center]
#Post#: 954--------------------------------------------------
Re: a little voice in the wind- indigopaw of windclan
By: wonderland Date: September 28, 2012, 8:22 pm
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Well, I wanted to know because I questioned some realism within
the history..
Approved.
#Post#: 955--------------------------------------------------
Re: a little voice in the wind- indigopaw of windclan
By: paris Date: September 28, 2012, 8:25 pm
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[center][font=times new roman]alright.
thankies 8][/font][/center]
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