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#Post#: 597--------------------------------------------------
TECHNICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: Sibo2808 Date: October 17, 2014, 3:14 pm
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Please no mean comments. This is made for enjoyment. Thanks! :)
Part 1: Arriving
"Look at that beautiful island!"
24 tourists were taking a boat ride on the sea near New Zealand.
The island is called Motu, and has a long story. Legend tells
that epic heroes once protected the island. They also passed
Mako island.
"We're stopping by Motu!"
Massive temples rules the island. The biggest of them all was
Panoni, The Temple of Destiny. They walked in a big bunch. Six
of them decided to go alone: Simon, ?, ?, ?, Clara & Emma. They
walked went to the city of No-Motu. They saw many chambers for
the heroes. They suddenly entered a hall with the name of
Katoka. Six big pillars, each with a hole storing a mask, held
the roof.
"What is this?" They each went to a mask. Simon went to a mask
with the name "Kitea - The Mask of Water" ...
Part 2: The Wai Tangata
Each of them chose a mask. As soon as they touched the masks, an
elemental storm dragged the masks from the pillars and in to the
storm. The masks recreated themselves into weapons. At once the
storm ended, and the weapons fell on the ground. They ran to the
weapons.
TRIDENT OF WAVES & INVISIBILITY
SWORDS OF FLAMES
BLADE OF ICE
BOOMERANGS OF JUNGLE & AIR
CLAWS OF STONE
HAMMER OF EARTH
The weapons glowed in elemental powers. When they touched them,
they were forever changed. They got elemental suits and powers.
They became the legendary Wai. Wai Tangata. Masters of the
Elements.
"What happened?" Clara asked, "I have this green suit!"
"I don't know either, but I fear that we have to fight."
They walked out of the temple realizing they're stuck on the
island. From being ordinary tourists to Ko Tangata. They also
got new names:
WAI NOWEI (Simon), WAI OF WATER
WAI GULA, WAI OF JUNGLE
WAI NURAKA, WAI OF ICE
[...]
Part 3: Koropa Crawlers
Suddenly the temple began shaking. They ran out. They could hear
squeaking, loud squeaking. Thousands of spider-like crawlers had
made their way up from the underworld. Many of them jumped
pretty high. They were green and orange. In the same moment all
of them were gone.
"What was that?" Nuraka stared at the temple.
They walked into the temple again. On a wall they could see
drawings telling a story. The story of Wai Tangata, the only
hope for Motu.
To be continued ...
Characters
* Simon (Wai Nowei), Wai of Water
*
I had to change this because of several comments.
#Post#: 598--------------------------------------------------
Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: NinjagoNerd36 Date: October 17, 2014, 5:20 pm
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Very nice! Keep writing! :D
#Post#: 601--------------------------------------------------
Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: Sibo2808 Date: October 17, 2014, 5:49 pm
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[quote author=NinjagoNerd36 link=topic=68.msg598#msg598
date=1413584417]
Very nice! Keep writing! :D
[/quote]
Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create
one? :D
I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
#Post#: 604--------------------------------------------------
Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: LK901 Date: October 18, 2014, 3:26 am
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[quote author=Sibo2808 link=topic=68.msg601#msg601
date=1413586185]
[quote author=NinjagoNerd36 link=topic=68.msg598#msg598
date=1413584417]
Very nice! Keep writing! :D
[/quote]
Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create
one? :D
I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
[/quote]
I'm not a BIONICLE fan, really. But I will work on creating a
character.
#Post#: 605--------------------------------------------------
Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: Sibo2808 Date: October 18, 2014, 8:40 am
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[quote author=LK901 link=topic=68.msg604#msg604 date=1413620764]
[quote author=Sibo2808 link=topic=68.msg601#msg601
date=1413586185]
[quote author=NinjagoNerd36 link=topic=68.msg598#msg598
date=1413584417]
Very nice! Keep writing! :D
[/quote]
Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create
one? :D
I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
[/quote]
I'm not a BIONICLE fan, really. But I will work on creating a
character.
[/quote]
Nice! I'm done with the prototype for Toa Nowei (My character
:-P)! I'll also make some drawings. Nowei is the only Toa I'll
be able to make with real LEGO, so LDD would be an option. If
they have the parts. :-P
#Post#: 606--------------------------------------------------
Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: LK901 Date: October 18, 2014, 12:32 pm
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[quote author=Sibo2808 link=topic=68.msg605#msg605
date=1413639605]
[quote author=LK901 link=topic=68.msg604#msg604 date=1413620764]
[quote author=Sibo2808 link=topic=68.msg601#msg601
date=1413586185]
[quote author=NinjagoNerd36 link=topic=68.msg598#msg598
date=1413584417]
Very nice! Keep writing! :D
[/quote]
Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create
one? :D
I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
[/quote]
I'm not a BIONICLE fan, really. But I will work on creating a
character.
[/quote]
Nice! I'm done with the prototype for Toa Nowei (My character
:-P)! I'll also make some drawings. Nowei is the only Toa I'll
be able to make with real LEGO, so LDD would be an option. If
they have the parts. :-P
[/quote]
I thought I heard that LDD did have the parts. Not sure,
though.
#Post#: 607--------------------------------------------------
Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: Sibo2808 Date: October 18, 2014, 12:41 pm
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[quote author=LK901 link=topic=68.msg606#msg606 date=1413653576]
[quote author=Sibo2808 link=topic=68.msg605#msg605
date=1413639605]
[quote author=LK901 link=topic=68.msg604#msg604 date=1413620764]
[quote author=Sibo2808 link=topic=68.msg601#msg601
date=1413586185]
[quote author=NinjagoNerd36 link=topic=68.msg598#msg598
date=1413584417]
Very nice! Keep writing! :D
[/quote]
Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create
one? :D
I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
[/quote]
I'm not a BIONICLE fan, really. But I will work on creating a
character.
[/quote]
Nice! I'm done with the prototype for Toa Nowei (My character
:-P)! I'll also make some drawings. Nowei is the only Toa I'll
be able to make with real LEGO, so LDD would be an option. If
they have the parts. :-P
[/quote]
I thought I heard that LDD did have the parts. Not sure,
though.
[/quote]
Cool. I'm almost done with Nowei now. :)
I'm going to be a little busy tomorrow (15:30- 17:00 here), not
the best day. It's some stuff my school's doing. :-\ :'(
#Post#: 610--------------------------------------------------
Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: NinjagoNerd36 Date: October 18, 2014, 8:06 pm
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[quote author=Sibo2808 link=topic=68.msg601#msg601
date=1413586185]
[quote author=NinjagoNerd36 link=topic=68.msg598#msg598
date=1413584417]
Very nice! Keep writing! :D
[/quote]
Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create
one? :D
I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
[/quote]
Hmm, I'll make one as soon as I have time.
#Post#: 611--------------------------------------------------
Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: Sibo2808 Date: October 19, 2014, 6:45 am
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[quote author=NinjagoNerd36 link=topic=68.msg610#msg610
date=1413680804]
[quote author=Sibo2808 link=topic=68.msg601#msg601
date=1413586185]
[quote author=NinjagoNerd36 link=topic=68.msg598#msg598
date=1413584417]
Very nice! Keep writing! :D
[/quote]
Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create
one? :D
I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
[/quote]
Hmm, I'll make one as soon as I have time.
[/quote]
Great! ;D
#Post#: 645--------------------------------------------------
Re: TECHNICLE: The Age of Tangata
By: SiboBricks Date: November 29, 2014, 1:11 pm
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As you might know and see, I was Sibo2808. :P
Just tying to get things to move the groove here :-P
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