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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: December 8, 2011, 1:07 pm
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Your doing an excellent job on this bad boy! But I forgot, whats
a behemoth, I don't remember them from the game?
I had to laugh at the part where Barnes shot the ceiling, I
could picture that part in my head.
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 12, 2011, 6:07 am
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Cheers WB and a behemoth is the massive Super Mutant about 30ft
tall or something.
Chapter 13: The Race
11th July 2298
The day was beginning as a small army all armed to teeth marched
across the wasteland heading North West, everything took a
dramatic turn last night after me and Jess finally got to bed,
we were dragged out and told to arm up.
The plans had revealed that N.U.R was planning on attacking many
settlements around the wasteland looking for information about
something called the Commie Slaughterer and the secret facility
buried underneath the ground, apparently. So every squad except
for the guard squads and the squads that had seen a lot of
action recently were sent out. Eagle's squad was not and so we
got to sleep for 2 more hours before they realized, the N.U.R
knew about the commie slaughterer and were heading there, so
Eagle, Jovi, and Hinton squads, 1st and 4th scavenger squads,
Dale's platoon and Ring-Wild Assault Team were sent out.
The Commie Slaughterer was one of 4 ships built right before the
great war. This one sunk 4 Chinese Ships of the Coast of Alaska
with only 6 crew members killed and minor damage. It had
restocked hours before the bombs dropped, 3 Months supply of
Food, medicine, armor, weapons and ammo for 150 man crew. It
also carries large amount of Nuclear and Atomic weaponry and
some of the most advanced technology outisde of the Vaults. It
didn't make it to the deep ocean before the sea floor rose up
and it was stranded there.
Word is, it is protected by the original crew, now ghouls, they
sealed the ship and took all their personal things including
weapons and built a shacks around it and the rivers and creeks
running around the ship and they shoot anything that comes near
it, they are rumored to be awaiting their next set of orders.
Everything inside is untouched and N.U.R want it because all the
weaponry and technology on board and we want it because N.U.R
want it.
"Approaching the U" Dale yelled as lead our army. We came across
a town built into a cove on an island. It was a lifeless scene,
residents and their insides were everywhere, some were hanging
from buildings, children were tied up and had their throats
slit, woman were beaten, some were completely naked and
sodomized horrifically.
"What happened here" I asked in horror, this scene was awful,
guts were strewn and heads were in piles.
"This was the N.U.R, barbaric bastards, this would've been the
rogue squad though. The normal squads would've just killed them,
but the rogue squads would do this easily" Dale said.
"Common, we need to beat N.U.R there and make them pay for this"
Dale said.
We moved out and started moving quickly. "Now from the plans,
N.U.R took the long way and are coming from the south, we just
should come from the North if we take the shortcut, which we
are. "If the orders are correct we should arrive only hours
before hand. I want everybody manning snipers and getting dug
in. I want mines set up and if we have to fall back, all
weaponry is take and traps are set" Dale ordered as we walked
along.
I had my usual gear along with this fucking M1919 and lots of
ammo to go with it, Eagle squad was all walking together, the
only one not talking and planing was Adam, he just kept staring
at Jess and me. I couldn't believe the nerve of the arsehole.
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Few things, probably 3 parts to this one chapter, because i'm on
call for work and can't do anything for too long or stay up to
late.
I had to make the scene at U as gruesome as possible because
they all need a reminded or what they're fight against.
Just remembered I had a storyline for Adam and suppose I should
use it.
#Post#: 1921--------------------------------------------------
Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: jameson18
Date: December 12, 2011, 1:32 pm
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That was a really good story. Good work dude
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 15, 2011, 3:56 am
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Cheers Hoohoo.
Chapter 13(2): The Race
11th July 2298
We all walked down a hill in a pack, the sound of us walking and
our gear rattling and what not, animals could hear us coming
fled. I kicked a rock along and it flew off the edge and broke
at the bottom and it echoed throughout the empty land. "Alright
troops, you got five minutes before we move out again"
Lieutenant Dale shouted as we reached the bottom of the hill.
"Aaron come here" Eagle said. I walked over to him, Dale and
Barnes, standing a small circle, I joined in and asked. "What?"
curiously.
"Look, you seen that massacre back at the town" Dale said, I
nodded.
"Well Barnes, he toasted you the other night, because we asked
him to, these men and women, they need a hero, they need someone
to be like, someone to idolize, you are that person, the things
you have done, the things you have killed, you are the legend,
the hero we need" Dale explained. Eagle and Barnes nodded.
I was stunned by this. I had nothing to say. "Alright, back on
your feet" Dale ordered we got back into the pack as everybody
got to their feet and we started walking again, it was day time
now and we were almost there, only another hour or two to go
now. I chambered a round and then put another bullet in the
magazine; so I can have an extra shot before I need to reload.
We walked along a ridge over looking the large ship, "snipers
take place here" Dale ordered as we kept walking. I hugged Jess,
"pick you targets" I said. She and all the other Snipers spread
out along the ridge, some climbed down and some followed us as
we kept walking, maybe looking for closer positions.
We walked down a narrow track off the ridge a few more snipers
set up on their, and few more took place at the bottom and we
had no more snipers. We started walking towards the ship, it was
huge and had shacks around it. We all armed ourselves and we
really careful. A boom went off in the middle of us, a few
soldiers went flying and then rapid gun fire started riddling
the pack, "Take cover" Yelled Jovi and then a bullet flew
through his skull.
Gun fire echoed through the endless valley, everybody ran to
cover trying to save ourselves, some soldiers stayed in the line
of sight and tried to fire back, most died, some ran into cover.
We we're pinned down, many of us were wounded and we had no idea
where we were getting fired on from.
I ran from cover and got into a trench and took a dead woman's
telescope and looked. "They're mostly in the trenches and drive
riverbed around the ship, a few are on the deck, with a missile
launcher. I yelled and then bullet hit the sand next to me. Then
sniper fire rained down on the ship. "Move forward" Dale
shouted, I got to me knees picked up my M1919 and ran along to
the next trench and jumped in, many others did the same and then
we looked up and started firing on the ship because we were
close enough.
"Force them back!" Someone shouted, we fired on them, we lost
some soldiers but they lost heaps due to they're poor cover and
they weren't dug in. Grenades exploded, that huge missile
launcher kept hitting spots around us, our snipers from far
away took out who they could. "Dominic ran over to me and gave
me his ammo, because his gun had taken a bullet to the barrel.
Barnes ran over to us and took cover as bullets barely missed
him.
"We're being hammered by that missile launcher, Dale wants us to
clear the deck, when we force the N.U.R back past the ship,
we've almost got that done, so I think we'll move up, I get set
up in that shack over there and cover you two as you approach.
Dominic you cover Aaron as he climbs onto the deck and clear it,
you're the best shot and the quickest Aaron, if you're going to
ask". Barnes gave us every detail we needed.
"Alright, let's do it" I said, the N.U.R had retreated and we're
moving through the river on the other side of the Commie
Slaughterer and taking positions on the opposite bank. We ran
from cover, I had the 1919 as did Barnes and Dominic had his
rifle. Bullets hit all around us, we made it to the empty
riverbed and on the bank was the shack where Barnes said he was
taking cover. He got into it and took advantage at the fact, the
roof and top half of the wall had been knocked off and started
firing at anybody he seen as Dominic and I ran through the
riverbed and up the other side.
We took cover behind a wall of rubble, N.U.R had set up as
cover, we waited for a bit when a bullet hit Dominic in the back
through the wall, he fell into the dirt, "Go on Aaron" He
ordered I looked up and then watched as the missile just fired
hit Barnes position. It exploded into a hell of Shrapnel and
fire. I jumped from cover, 1919 in hand and ran for the ship,
firing madly. Screaming. I couldn't believe it, I just lost two
friends with in seconds.
Everything slowed down for me, bullets whizzed past me, I didn't
care an explosion hit right next to me, I ran straight past it,
bullets left my gun at a rapid rate, hitting everything from the
side of the ship to the ground in front of me, to a soldier on
the deck. I got to the sand bank next to the ship, I dropped the
gun and ammo and climbed up and fired my M4, their were 7 on the
deck, I spray took two down that were operating the missile
launcher.
I fired the last of the clip into a third soldier that was about
to fire his weapon, I took cover behind an object on the deck
and I reloaded and leaned out of the cover and fired at a few
more, taking down town more, I rolled a grenade towards a table
on the deck, it exploded, sending a legless N.U.R soldier flying
over the rail. I took my pistol and fired an entire clip into
the last N.U.R soldier as he ran at me.
I ran to the missile launcher and turned it around and fired at
the N.U.R soldiers, blowing a few to pieces, I looked as the
Militia moved up and started forcing the troops back, the N.U.R
were soon out numbered and retreating. We gunned them down as
they ran. Getting revenge for that town we passed on the way
here and everybody else they have hurt.
Soldier after soldier died until they surrendered and we mowed
them down. I knew that this battle only want for an hour tops,
but it felt like days, because of the intense fighting and the
amount of men that died. I stopped firing and went and looked
back at the field of dead Militia troops, I saw something that
brightened my mood a little. Dominic was laying out in the open
with a medic patching him up. I looked at the shack where Barnes
spent his final moments and I remember that everybody here was
giving their life for the cause, to rid this place of evil, like
the N.U.R.
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I wanted to write an epic battle scene, but I'm saving
everything for the next few chapters, you'll see, which will be
really good.
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: December 15, 2011, 1:39 pm
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Aaron "is" a real hero!!! If this chapter wasent considered epic
then I cant wait to see what you have in store for the next
chapters!
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 16, 2011, 2:51 am
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Thanks Wetbizket, Honestly I was going to have Barnes got
noticed in this story and then start a new story with him as the
main character, but I didn't like that idea so I killed him.
Anyway time for another Chapter.
Chapter 14: The things you find inside
11th July 2298
All the snipers had come down to the ship and helped with
securing the spot, we were gathering our soldiers and taken
personal items to take records of their death with, we had the
N.U.R prisoners digging graves for the ghouls they murdered that
were the original crew of the ship, and graves for our soldiers.
Patrols were setting up positions around the area, me I was
gathering up Barnes and all his missing body parts and putting
them in the grave that I had dug.
We had medics helping the wounded and everybody that wasn't
patrolling or guarding was carrying stuff out of the ship and
putting it at a certain location for our guys to count up and
examine. So far they had cleaned out the medical supply and all
the food, they were slowly gathering all the weapons and ammo,
and they had pulled out and sat away from everything else was...
4 Vats of this stuff called FEV, over a 100 Mini Nukes and a
large Atom Bomb called the Commie Disintegrator 2.
I filled in Barnes' grave and took a chain he had around his
neck as identification and marked his grave with pieces of steel
and wood and spelled Barnes with it, which many others were
doing, some were using bits of clothes and rocks, ammo casings,
damaged parts of guns.
I walked over to Eagle as looked at a large piece of paper, I
looked at it as well, "Blue prints" I asked only because I had
seen thing like them before. "Yeah, for a thing called a Sand
Runner, it's like those old automobiles you see in the city,
anyway these are the blue prints and all the parts are over
there and so is all the equipment to put it together. "I was an
engineer back in the Vault, maybe I could have a go?" I
mentioned.
"Alright, have fun" He said and gave me the blue prints, I
walked over to the pile and started sorting and I spent the rest
of the day assembling this automobile from scratch. Stuff was
hauled out all day and other projects were made for me to master
in the following days. It was night by the time I finished the
first one. I went to sleep across the seats.
I was waken in the morning by Dominic, fully dressed and fully
armed. "Come' on we gotta get back to the fort" He said, I
looked and a third of the survivors were getting ready to head
back. "Why?" I asked. "Because N.U.R attacked last night, and
our boys are holding them off right now, but they need help"
Dominic explained.
I grabbed my stuff and swung it on my and joined the squad Dale
and Eagle were leading pack. As the squad moved out, Adam
grabbed me and held me back. "Listen you little bastard, I told
you not to interfere with me and Jess and what did you do" He
snarled at me. I pushed him off me. "I did what I should've done
years ago and took my woman away from dickheads like yourself" I
snapped back, brushed my shoulder where he grabbed me and kept
walking.
Then I felt strong smack against my head, I turned and Adam hit
me in the face this time, I tried to hit him, but he grabbed my
throat and punched me twice more, I grappled him to the ground
and headbutted him and punched him in the stomach. He rolled me
over and pinned me down while he punched me. I punched him the
face and he fell off me, I rolled back onto him, and gave a
couple right hooks, before he threw me off and we grappled again
and rolled around in the dirt, trying to hit each other. I got
the advantage and gave another right hook, busting his nose.
Then I brought my arm back to hit him again and I tugged
backwards off him and picked up Eagle, I looked at him Adam who
was sitting on the ground with a blood nose and cut on his
cheek, I tasted blood in my mouth and I felt it running from my
lip. "Fight over Jess once we've killed all these N.U.R fuckers"
Dale shouted his orders at us and then stormed back to the front
of the pack. Eagle held me back with the remainder of our squad
while Adam fucked off up the front.
#Post#: 2177--------------------------------------------------
Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: December 16, 2011, 1:53 pm
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This story is still going strong, theres always interesting
events and stuff going on, your doing an awesome job, but I
looks like Arron has a little rivalry going on!
#Post#: 2214--------------------------------------------------
Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 17, 2011, 9:37 am
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Thanks again Wetbizket.
Chapter 15: Rest before the battle
12th July 2298
We walked into Hangmans Wharf, Militia troops were arming up and
resting, the towns people were moving the bodies of the N.U.R
into a pig pile and taking all their stuff, while the Militia
casualties were being laid in a next, respectable formation.
A man in worn and damaged power armor came down to us that just
returned and stood on a raised piece of concrete, we're gathered
around him to listen to what he has to say. "How's that?" I
asked Jess quietly. "General Hooper" Jess said and then paid
attention to him as he spoke.
"I understand you are all tired and worn out, so I'm giving you
all 10 hours to rest and re arm before you follow our fresher
soldiers into the city to force the N.U.R troops back. We
suffered heavy losses the past couple of days, the N.U.R
attacked almost every town the Coastal Wasteland. I would also
like to thank all you efforts in taking the Commie Slaughterer
before the N.U.R could. That was a last resort for a resupply
for N.U.R, they will be using whatever weapons they can get now.
Thank you" He finished his speech and jumped down and walked
straight over to me, Eagle and Dale joined him.
"I understand you took the deck and pretty much won the fight
for us" General Hooper said.
"No, I just helped, everybody here won that fight for us" I
explained honestly.
"Still a heroic feet, charging into enemy fire and taking that
missile launcher before anybody else was killed" General Hooper
said.
"I guess so, A good friend of mine gave his life so I could make
it there and I almost lost another friend, shitty aim saved his
life" I explained.
"Look I know you're a modest fella, so I'm gonna cut to the
chase, I'm promoting you to Captain, we no longer have squads
we're all going in under my command, tell everybody that" He
said and then walked away.
"Congratulations" Eagle said and shook my hand. "Now go and rest
and get ready, we're going in and we're not stopping until
they're all dead" Eagle said and then walked off, I looked
around and spotted Jess talking to some people, I started
walking over to her through the crowd, but I was stopped in my
tracks.
"You Aaron" This man asked me, I looked him directly in the eye
because we were the same height. "Yes" I nodded.
"How did my brother die" He asked. "Who's your brother" I asked.
"Barnes" He said. "He died covering me as I attacked the Commie
Slaughterer" I explained briefly.
"Did he suffer?" He asked me.
"No it was quick, he saved my life and inspired me to get there
before anybody else was killed by the Missile Launcher" I
explained.
"Alright, thanks, I'm Daryl by the way" He said and then walked
off, I noticed he had a limp when he walked. "How'd you get that
limp" I asked as he walked away. "Story to be shared with
Whiskey" He yelled back. "I'll buy it when we get back" I
yelled. He simply gave a thumbs up.
I nodded and walked over to Jess and hugged her and we walked to
her house and went to bed, even though we shared the bed, we
went straight to sleep, which disappointed me greatly.
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: December 17, 2011, 12:21 pm
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ah Barneys brother, another chapter and another reason for me to
love this story even more lol!
Oh hey, have you checked out my story yet, I dont think anyone
has read my newest chapter yet, and I was wondering if anyone
seen the new post thing pop up, I dont know if it got messed up
when edited the chapter lol!?!?!
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 18, 2011, 7:43 am
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Cheers Wetbizket bro
Chapter 16: Revenge at the strangest time
12th July 2298
Gun fire echoed through the old city, dust from buildings filled
the air, old cars were being riddled with bullets, explosions
were random and common. "Move up" Dale ordered. Me and few
others ran from cover and up the street, while a hail of gunfire
came from behind us, covering us as we took the corner of the
street. We chucked a grenade each into the shop where the N.U.R
were firing from and it exploded, we fired inside to make sure
we didn't miss anyone and then continued up the street as the
N.U.R retreated.
Some stayed to try and hold us off, we killed them, very
brutally as well. "Cover us" 3 men shouted carrying a large
missile launcher along the street, I ran over as did others and
covered them as they set it up and fired rapidly all over the
street, blowing entire sides of buildings. One old Hotel even
collapsed into the street.
We continued our push, we had snipers, running, jumping and zip
lining along roof tops, we had troops from all over charging in
the N.U.R base, at the farthest eastern point in the city. We
had killed hundreds of N.U.R and we planned to kill thousands
more. Those Atom bombs were being moved into Saints Row by the
vehicles I and others had built from the supplies on the ship.
I no longer cared how many human beings I killed, these people
were not worth my thought, I shot in the back of the knee as he
ran and he was killed by a sniper shot to the chest. "Kill them
all!" Someone shouted from the roof tops, then a large sky
scraper as they were called collapsed on itself killing maybe a
hundred N.U.R and filled the streets and alleyways with dust.
Those of us on the front line fired blindy into the dust.
The dust was cleared by a sound in the sky that was all to
familiar to me, "Verti bird" I shouted looking up at the Enclave
Verti Bird in the sky, those must be looking at whats happening.
"Time for some revenge" I yelled and grabbed that Missile
Launcher and fired it at the Verti Bird, it clipped it and the
Verti Bird came thundering down and smashed into the ground. We
moved forward and drove the N.U.R back along way.
I marched over to the Verti Bird and dragged the survivors out
and tore their helmets off and started stabbing them with my
hunting knife. While the Militia moved up, I was left behind and
Jess came down to meet me, we looked at the Enclave bleeding on
the ground. Then I saw him, the man that led the charge into the
Vault. I started to strangle him, Jess recognized his face also
and started cutting him across his face. He screamed. "Why?" In
agony.
"Vault 66, sound Familiar fuck ball" I yelled, tightening my
grip, so he could no longer speak. He eventually died from no
air. Jess handed my knife back and we both ran to the main force
to join the fight again. I joined the fight and ran back to the
front line. "You satisfied now" Eagle yelled over the gun fire.
"Sure am" I yelled back, only thinking about the fight now.
I saw a soldier with a missile launcher come up, I fired ta him,
a bullet went up the tube and hit the missile, it exploded,
sending his right arm, the right side of his chest and his
flying, while a burned and bloody pile of guts and organs on
legs fell to the ground where a soldier once stood.
We moved up another few blocks, killing more and forcing them
further back, now you couldn't hear anything over the gun fire
or the explosions, we forced them back onto a suspension bridge
over the irradiated river running through the center of the
ruins. They seemed to stop moving and all our efforts to force
them across were stopped. We needed to get across this bridge,
it is the only one left and with out we would have to go right
around to attack the N.U.R base and that would give them time to
retreat.
I shot another one, this time in the face and he fell of the
bridge and plummeted into the water bellow, "Old the line men,
they're not taking the bridge, I tried to shot that guy, that
said that but a bullet struck Babe, I rushed to her as she was
only wounded, but she died before I could even figure out where
the bullet hit her. I grabbed my gun and went back to shooting
people.
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