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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 1, 2011, 3:09 am
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My Cousin brought the game because he though it was COD and
Oblivion or something mixed together and he hated it. So I
brought it from him for 15 and an box full of Vodka Cruisers.
He's 15...
I've never played New Vegas, I only assumed because of a review
I watched on You tube.
Also Thanks for your comments bro, oh and this ain't finished,.
not by a long shot!
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: December 2, 2011, 1:15 pm
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Haha, I tickled it to death! You do an awesome job at putting
your boring chit chat parts and action scenes perfectly it makes
the story flow really good and everything great to read. This
story reminds me of how crazy fighting super mutants were, and
he found Jess, but now I'm curios to see whats gonna happen next
since the story aint over yet!
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: iC3xM4n
Date: December 2, 2011, 8:22 pm
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Aussie, while I haven't been able to read the entire story yet,
I must say what I have read is pretty amazing. Love it and keep
it up!
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 3, 2011, 9:17 am
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Cheers bro, I appreciate every comment.
Chapter 10: Old Friends
7th July 2298
Me and Jess went to into the infirmary together, one doctor
sowed up my deep wounds, while another doctor had to do some
serious work to Jess wound. My work was done while the doctor
was still examining her wound on her leg. I came over and sat
next to her to give her support because even though she was
surgeon, she couldn't handle having any work done to herself,
because she hated pain.
"So what exactly happened?" The doctor asked.
"A laser came through a thin wall made of wood and tin plate and
hit my leg" Jess said.
The doctor examined it for another minute and then looked at
her. "I'm going to need to extract all the shrapnel from inside
the wound and then clean the ash out and then stitch it up" He
explained. He grabbed his tweezers and looked inside the hole.
"Aaron you can go if you want" She said trying to be brave. I
shrugged and got up, not actually planning on leaving. Then the
doctor pulled a splinter out of the wound. She grabbed my shirt
and pulled my back down.
"Don't leave" She begged. I grinned and grabbed her hand, she
grabbed mine and squeezed it straight away, I looked into her
eyes and smiled, she tried to smile back. "This is going to
hurt" The doctor said. Then pulled something out, Jess screamed
and her body tightened up. I looked and my smile faded as a tear
ran down her cheek, followed by another few.
This continued for about ten minutes before the doctor finally
stitched it up and gave her some drugs and we left. I basically
carried her, my gun and ammo, her gun and ammo and both her
supply pack. I carried her to her home down at the Center next
to a shop called Hunter and Gatherer. Following her directions
of course.
I used my shoulder to push the door open and we were greeted by
4 people, I assumed all live in this house as it is quite large.
"Jess we herd about the shootout, is it true someone snapped a
Mutants neck? and are you alright, we herd you were wounded" A
blonde haired woman questioned.
"Yeah, this guy carrying me is the one who broke the Mutants
neck and he's carrying me because I was shot in the leg by a
laser" Jess explained.
"Friend you are already a legend" An old man said.
"Thank you sir, but what do you mean?" I asked as I put Jess
down a ruin couch in the middle of the room.
"Your story about looking all over the wasteland, cheating death
and breaking that mutants neck just to find a friend that
might've been dead already" The old man explained. "It's all on
the radio" He added.
I looked at him and nodded. "Wow" I said. "Look I don't mean to
be rude, but I'm tired have you's got a spare bed?" I asked.
"Yeah there's a small bed in my room, you can have" Jess
offered.
"Alright" I said.
Everybody went back to doing what they were doing and I carried
Jess in to her room and put her on her bed and went back out to
get our things when I was stopped by a familiar face. Adam. "You
get any thoughts of joining her in that big bed, I'll gut you"
Adam threatened.
"Well my initial reaction would be to punched you in the nose,
but I'll listen to your reason why?" I said cockily.
"I've been working on Jess since she arrived and joined the
Militia, another few days and I'll get in those pants, don't
ruin this for me" He threatened once again.
"Listen! I've been friends with Jess since we were five, we've
been through almost every part of our lives together. I will do
what I wish and I'm certainly not distancing myself from my best
friend so some wasteland scumbag can fuck her" I said and the
grabbed her stuff and mine and went back into her room and shut
the door.
"Adam needs to keep his voice down, seriously" Jess said as I
put her pack on the table next to her wall and put mine which
Eagle had given me while we were waiting in line for the
infirmary, on a table sitting against the small bed in the
corner of the room, I started emptying things out.
"You know about his plans" I asked grinning.
"Of Course, leading him on is just fun" She said.
"Like 20 young men in the Vault" I said remembering just how
many boys our age tried to ask Jess out.
"Always asking me out and then you Kieth and Lauclan would scare
the shit out of them" She said.
"Yeah, hey where did you go when we got separated by that
explosion" I asked.
"Well... I ran for my life, I though you and Kieth were dead, so
I ran and ran and ran for hours before I found by a slaver, he
captured me and taught me to be a slave and brought me to this
place, I was brought by a merchant and set free before we could
get to a place the slaver called People Market. I gave the
merchant my Pip boy as payment and then I sent out into the
wasteland with nothing but a 32 caliber pistol and 10 bullets. I
didn't even know how to load it or use it, then after a day I
was surrounded by those Tennaw guys and before they killed me I
was saved by a squad of men from the Militia and they took me
in. I've been here ever since" She explained. I looked at her
amazed. "What about you?" She asked.
I looked and bit my bottom lip.
"Keith caught a lot of shrapnel, I carried him away before we
were killed, he bleed to death in my lap, then I spent a day no
stop looking for you and when I couldn't find you, I went to
sleep on that car that exploded and I was found by these
Mercenary guys, they took me in, I was there gunsmith for a
while and they taught me to hunt and how to survive. I let them
raid the Vault and then they said they herd rumors of people
with our last names here. So I set out on my way here. I was
almost killed in the hills when I was caught in a battle between
Mutants and Tribal's. I cleared out a house full of ghouls, I
stopped a robbery, helped defend Soft Sand Caverns from Tribal's
and fought along side the Militia earlier today" I explained.
We both went silent, appreciating what we had both gone through
and then a knock at the door. "Come in" Jess said, while she
started to remove her armor. Eagle come through the door. "I'd
hoped you'd be here" he said.
"Why?" I asked.
"Well I was just promoted to Warlord and they want me to form a
squad of my own" He chucked me a flannel shirt, "Welcome to
Eagle forward Assault squad, Jess will you join us" Eagle asked.
"Yes" She accepted greatfully. "Alright" he said and then left.
I looked at the shirt and the laid it on the table and put a
N.U.R torso armor on top of it and cut the sleeves off and tied
them together to make a bandana.
"Aaron?" Jess asked... "Do I still look good" She asked. This
was a weird question for Jess, then I remember, it had to be the
drugs.
I turned and looked at her, sitting there in a pants cut off
about halfway between the top of them and her knee, her slightly
tanned skin, her cute little face, that beautiful hair, still
good after being exposed to the wasteland. "Better than you did
when you were in the vault" I said honestly. She nodded and
before I realized she was asleep.
I laid out my new gear: Flannel Bandana, Aviator Sunglasses,
N.U.R under armor, under Sleeveless flannel, camo cargo pants
that I had brough recently and my boots. I had the belt with two
holsters. I put the M1911 pistol in one holster, my hunting
knife in the other, my boot knife back in it's holder, two
grenades on my belt along with my canteen of water and a compass
and slung my pack on with all my supplies position neatly
inside, so nothing would get broken. Then slung my M4 over my
shoulder with it's shoulder strap and held it in both hands.
I stood in the open space in the middle of the room and dropped
to my stomach, rolled over twice, jumped up, ducked, commando
rolled, crouched walked pretended to take cover against the
wall, drew my weapons and grenades. Everything fitted well,
nothing broke or annoyed me during the exercise. I took it all
off and laid down on the bed and fell asleep.
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Long talking and discriptive chapter, I promise I will have a
few action packed Chapters coming up.
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: December 4, 2011, 1:42 pm
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That chapter reminded me of the end of the game where it
explains how yur dude became a legend and explained all of the
stuff he has gone through, except the games ends after that and
it made me said it was over, But your story continues lol! And
I'm happy!
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 5, 2011, 1:54 am
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Thanks Wetbizket bro.
Chapter 11: The Drive In Outpost
8th July 2298
"Aaron wake up" Someone shook me.
"I'd rather not" I said back.
"Aaron get up it's important" I rolled onto my back and looked
up at Jess just in her underwear.
"Whats up" I asked.
"Eagle just stopped by, Ultor have set up an outpost on the
southern banks, they could attack us at any moment" Jess said.
I jumped from the bed and stood up in nothing but my underwear;
"So whats happening then" I asked.
"Eagle is assembling the squad outside the Whiskey Hole. Jovi is
getting his squad together, Beam is getting his, Captain Dixon
and his sniper team are ready and waiting for orders and
Lieutenant Dale is assembling his Platoon" Jess explained while
she got dressed.
I looked at her and then at her old sniper rifle, "Jess take
this" I said and passed her my M14, "What for" She asked back
after she caught it. "Better condition than your Sniper Rifle" I
reasoned. She shrugged and slung it over her shoulder and then
started putting on her pants. I put everything on and checked
the ammo on my rifle and then slung my pack and on and stuff my
belt and pockets with clips for my M4.
We walked out of the shack Adam was already half way there, we
walked over there and Eagle looked around then did a quick name
call from memory. Women first:
Jess - Support Sniper
Bluejay - Rifle woman
Babe - Rifle woman
Charge - Rifle woman
Tiger - Demolitions
Men:
Barnes - Main Gunner
Dominic - Main Gunner
Aaron - Main Gunner
Adam - Rifleman
Plod - Rifleman
Leon - Support Sniper
Cooper - Mini-gun Operator
Rolls - Missile-man
He checked and everybody was there.
"Alright plan of attack. We move in along said Lt Dale Platoon
through the overgrown field, Jovi's squad comes in the same way
from the other side, Dixon's team takes a vantage point on the
cliffs above and provides support once we're close to the old
road and Beams squad comes across the old bridge and flanks from
the side again, when we reach the old road"
"Why are they setting up there, why not attack us directly if
there going to set up within a long range sniper shot of us"
Leon asked curiously.
"We think they found some information on that old R&D facility
they're searching for and it might be around there somewhere"
Eagle explained.
"Alright once we got to the road, I want the using these to
cover the approach of the riflemen and specialists, I want the
support snipers up high and once the Riflemen get a position
against the wall of the drive in, I want the Main Gunners to
abandon the guns and lead the assault inside. Snipers, I need
you two to relocate to the old Gasoline Service Station on the
west side and provide short range sniper fire" Eagle gave us our
orders.
"Alright, looks like we're moving out" Eagle said, looking at
the squads marching out of Hangmans Wharf. Me, Dominic and this
Barnes guy grabbed the large weapons called '1919 Brownings and
wrapped ourselves in the ammunition chains and followed the rest
of the group. These things were heavy and I knew I was going to
drop it as soon as I didn't need it anymore. (to be continued)
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: December 5, 2011, 3:24 pm
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please continue, because I know its gonna be a good battle!
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 5, 2011, 10:06 pm
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Sorry guys this was meant to be a full chapter but I got caught
up in something and couldn't finish it.
Chapter 11: The Drive in Outpost (2)
8th July 2298
We walked with Dales Platoon in a big pack across the desert,
the other 3 squads head run to their positions because they were
further away, as the sky became light we walked up the hill and
into the field, we split up and made our way south. Through the
old overgrown field; we didn't want the N.U.R to know we were
attacking until were killing them, so we went slow avoiding
traveling in groups bigger than 3 so we didn't make ourselves
obvious. "I kicked a trip wire" Someone shouted.
Then a explosion in the middle of the field followed by screams,
Then a massive fire storm engulfed an entire section of the
field, many screams could be heard. "Run" Some one shouted and
then bombs started impacting in the field, A boom landed right
next me, Dominic and Barnes sending us all flying. Then the
familiar sounds of mini guns spooling could be heard, followed
by the sound of bullets flying into different things, like the
ground, people and anything else they could.
"Take cover" Was the main order.
We came across another group of soldiers fleeing, a bomb hit one
directly, blowing him to pieces , the others were could be the
resulting explosion.
"Move forward" I shouted and I did avoiding explosions and gun
fire and Dominic, Barnes and myself eventually reached the fence
before the road, we set up the guns, while hiding from bullets
and started returning the fire, I had a piece of shrapnel in my
leg and my nose was bleeding, Dominic was fine and Barnes was
really dirty and had blood running from his under his hair.
I fired on the wall and the N.U.R soldiers on top of it, but I
couldn't hit any because I was taking cover from mini gun fire
every five seconds, more soldiers reached our position and
started firing off: pot shots and blind fire. "Tiger" Dominic
shouted, "Yeah" She responded and then ran from cover and got
behind Dominic's cover.
"We need to blow that Mini Gun out of there" Dominic said.
"I got some dynamite but I can't get it in there" She said.
"Prepare it and I'll throw it" I herd Barnes suggest.
"Ok, but you'll probably die" Tiger reminded him.
"We'll all die if we don't do something" He said before another
explosion near us. Barnes took the dynamite and ran from cover,
we all started firing at them giving him cover he chucked the
dynamite through the window the Mini Gun was in. He ran back
into cover and watched it explode, blowing that section of the
building out.
He laid on the ground while the rest of us started firing, we
covered the riflemen as they were now able to get to the wall.
The Plan was still going to work we just needed to work harder
and do more combat since most of army that was brought in had
been lost. We heard the sniper fire coming. Me and Dominic lead
the assault in, I shot one N.U.R soldier in the head as we got
through the gate. I saw Beams squad moving in from the side and
then a Mini Nuke hit them, engulfing the entire area in smoke
and fire.
I shot that soldier in the head, Jovi's squad was coming in
along side what is left our Dales platoon and Eagle's squad.
"Fill the tents full of holes" Dale shouted, I looked at him, he
was an old man, looked very battle hardened and actually had a
cigar in his mouth.
He fired his rifle into the air, "Kill em all" he shouted and
then sprayed bullets into open of the tents, everybody started
shooting N.U.R soldiers and buildings and tents, the N.U.R
couldn't get a flank on us because of consistent sniper fire.
The sound wold almost send you def, the gun fire, screams and
explosions. I lead a small contingent into the old building that
the Mini Gunner was in.
I killed 4 on my own and about 17 more were killed by the rest
as we scouted the small building. We came out the side of the
builing and gunned down 5 soldiers fleeing. We scattered and
started walking instead of jogging as the gun fire had settled
down and the soldiers were surrendering to us, I met up with
Eagle and the entire squad we didn't lose any troops.
Eagle, Bluejay and myself went inside a tent the squad just took
prisoners in and looked around, I found a clipboard with some
maps and things on it. "Eagle" I called Eagle over, he walked
over to me and had a look. He took it from me silently and then
spoke.
"Good find Aaron" He said. "Bluejay did you find anything" He
asked.
"Yeah, some orders on paper, an interrogation recording and some
details about Power Armor" She said and chucked a small stack of
paper and cardboard to Eagle. "Good" He said and then we walked
outside to a squad awaiting orders. "Scavenge what you will and
meet near the 1919 Brownings when your down, we gotta head back.
I looked up at the sky as it was fully bright now, Prisoners
were being tied up and stripped of almost everything, even their
armor, for the first time I seen just how desperate things were
in this wasteland.
Stories in the Vault about huge factories and farms and mines
and mills, manufacturing everything the world needed, always obs
for people, when something was broken it was thrown away and it
would possibly be turned into something else and a new one would
be brought to replace it. Now nothing is worthless, everything
is repaired until it can't be and then is used for something
else. Nothing is just replaced.
The Militia troops stuff their pockets, stuff bags they found,
carried stuff on trheir shoulders, tucked their shirts in and
filled them up, I saw one man, he had two bags on, his pockets
were full of stuff, he had a fat man on his shoulder and 4
rifles like mine all on straps over his shoulders. "Aaron, don't
worry, most of the stuff scavenged goes to the Militia armory
and is repaired and given out evenly. He just get more caps
because he found it all" Eagle explained. "Alright then" I said
and then grabbed a soldier and dragged him from the hole he died
in and took his ammo and his armor to patch mine up.
I walked out of the old drive in and Jess ran up and hugged me,
"Aaron!" She shouted as we hugged. "How'd that rifle go?" I
asked while we still hugged. "Good, but I'm just glade you're
safe, I though you died in that field" She explained joyfully.
"No... I'm fine, it's alright" I said.
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Somewhat of a crappy fight aye.
Next one will be better.
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: December 7, 2011, 3:52 pm
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That militia is bad to the bone, they aint afraid to die!
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Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: December 8, 2011, 4:21 am
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No they ain't WB bruz
Chapter 12: Single Handily
9th July 2298
Eagle's squad and Hinton's squad were going on patrol tonight
and groups of 5 we were split into. I had Dominic with me as
well as Barnes and two other guys, Jobo and Karl, We were
carrying 1 M1919 Browning between us, I had most of the ammo
wrapped around my body as my m4 was the lightest weapon anyone
in the group was carrying.
"We're did the Militia get hold of these weapons?" I asked
directing everyone's attention to the M1919.
"Last month Beam squad went into the old bombed out Museum
chasing a group of Super Mutants that captured some civilians
and found all of this old weaponry and an ammo press with all
the sizes and dimensions for most oif the weapons we found" Karl
explained as we walked along the river side just outside of
town.
"Super Mutant" Jobo pointed out as one came out the river and
ran at us with a hunting rifle, I took my M4 and shot it once in
the face and then held the trigger in a little and more bullets
hit it's face, then I opened up and most of the bullets
penetrated it's head, killing it. "When there one there's always
more" Karl said.
"Dominic, Barnes get back to Hangmans Wharf and put everyone on
alert. We'll stay out here and fend off anymore, Karl took the
m1919 as Dominic and Barnes ran back to town. Then a group of
Mutants came from The Field and opened fire on us, we returned
in a long range shootout, these Mutants were using cover to aid
their approach.
I blew ones head off, I saw others drop as more and more seemed
to be coming, we used our ammo wisely, saving the Browning for
something worth the uncommon ammo. We managed to kill all of
them with in 5 minutes but at a large cost of ammo. "Behemoth!"
Jobo screamed as Behemoth come barreling towards us, taking
every bullet we hit it with like it was air hitting him. We
retreated back, but It caught us and grabbed Jobo and crushed
him with it's bare hand and then it swung it closed fist at us.
I was able to dodge it, but Karl caught the brute force of it
and went flying through the dirt and sand, I ran over and tried
to drag him by the gun because it had a strap over his shoulder
and looked the least painful place for him, when I grabbed him.
The Behemoth swung down at us, I tried to get us out of the way,
but I failed and Karl was crushed. I ended up with the M1919. I
looked at him, he tried to crush me, I jumped out of the way and
started loading the massive chain wrapped around my body into
the weapon.
I ran around the Behemoth as it was trying to aim me up for a
successful hit, I jumped over the crest of a hill and finally
got it loaded and then turned around as the Behemoth charged at
me. I pulled the trigger and the greatest sound ever came from
the barrel of the gun, the deep rumble caused by the constant
bullets leaving it.
The Bullets struck the Behemoth, I ran around, firing at it
randomly, avoiding getting it's hitting range. I also avoiding
heading towards the town. The Bullets didn't stop hitting it,
because it was a massive target I couldn't miss it. It
eventually started to slow down, I had used a lot of ammo, but I
kept firing and running in between bursts, I jumped onto a large
rock and fired wildly at it, my whole body vibrated violently as
I fired, my hands were cramping and I was getting a sore head.
As the thing was about to try and crush me, it suddenly dropped
backwards, I kept the bullets flying into it until it hit the
ground and stayed there. I let go of the the gun and dropped it
and collapsed on the smooth rock, the Behemoth was only feet
from me, I was shaking and very sore. I sat up "Holy shit" I
said and grabbed my head. I couldn't believe it, I had taken one
of these monstrosities down by myself. All I could think of was
I'm going to die and I never asked Jess on a date, even though I
wanted to since we were 12. Like a proper date not what happened
at the G.O.A.T exams celebration.
I could hear gun fire from the town but as a group of figures
appeared from the darkness the gun fire stopped. "Aaron, mate...
You kill this big bastard" Barnes said staring at it the massive
body. "You're a fucking hero man" Dominic said. "The Mutants did
attack the town but only in small force and we got a Fat man
ready just in case anymore attack.
10th July 2298
I sat in Jess's room while she was cleaning her M14, I couldn't
help myself anymore."Jess do you wanna go on a date?" I asked
regretting it the moment the words left my mouth. She looked
over at me and grinned. " Only took 7 years" She said. I smiled
and started breathing again.
We walked over to the Whiskey Hole that night because she wanted
to go there, we sat down at the bar and ordered a meal and beer
each, I went over to the guy playing his guitar in the corner to
request a song from him. I had about 100 caps in my hand to give
him for it. I p[ayed him and told him the song, he knew it and
started playing it.
I strolled back to where Jess was and Barnes was sitting there
getting real close to Jess. I grinned and listened.
"So Jess can I buy you a drink" He asked
I butted in "You gotta buy me one too" I said.
Barnes looked up at me. "Ah, shit sorry Jess, sorry Aaron, I
hope accept my apology" He apologised.
"It's nothing to worry about" I said and I sat down in my seat
next to Jess while the guitar guy had restarted the song
"Hey I need to say something" Barnes shouted, I stopped talking
to Jess and looked over at him, this guy was completely crazy, I
didn't know what he was going to do.
He pulled out his Revolver and fired at the roof. Everybody
payed attention now.
"Barnes you stupid shit this is a 4 story building" Someone
shouted at him and he laughed.
"I'd look to make a toast" he yelled holding up a shot glass,
filled to the brim with whiskey. Everybody held their assorted
drinks up as well.
"To the legend of the wasteland, he survived a tribal and mutant
war. Done good deeds all over the wasteland on his way here.
Broke a Muties neck and just yesterday he killed a Behemoth by
himself, here's to Aaron and his lovely missus Jess" Barnes
yelled.
'
"here here" Everyone yelled and sculled their drinks.
"You should be honored" Jess said.
"I know that was a good thing" I said.
"No because no-one makes toasts around here, because they have
to cover everyone's next drink.
The entire night me and Jess couldn't talk because people kept
coming and talking to me and congratulating me.
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That was written better in my head but I'm working tomorrow so I
can't really spend much more time on this.
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