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       #Post#: 932--------------------------------------------------
       Coastal Wasteland (Fallout) [Finished]
   DIR By: Aussie Boy
       Date: November 19, 2011, 6:24 am
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       Authors note: This story is a direct Fanfiction of the Fallout
       series and will take place in an area that is part of the Saints
       Row franchise.
       I do not own any of this, they belong to Volition and Bethesda.
       Ayngel was this what we are suppose to do to keep us out of
       trouble?
       Chapter 1: The Valley in which life passes
       1st July 2298
       I stepped up onto a rock and looked out over the land I was
       about to cross, hills, cliffs and valleys before a distinct
       change in the colour of the ground, the border of the Coastal
       Wasteland as it is called, on that border I could see a small
       group of buildings, I would go there and camp for the night
       before continuing my adventure tomorrow.
       The sun was directly over me, it was around midday, I had taught
       myself to tell time by the location of the sun, a skill which
       was essential for travelers like myself. I Jumped off the rock
       and continued following the windy gravel path around the hill, I
       come across a dead traveler left at a campsite, his body was a
       few days old, he was left with all his valuable possessions and
       a message carved in the dirt wall above him.
       "In memory of Bullet, died of radiation sickness, loved always
       by his friends, thank you for your help in this life". That one
       message carved in the compact dirt wall reminded me of my
       friends I left behind in the Vault.
       The Year was 2285 I was 5 years old, as were my friends,
       Lauclan, Kieth and Jessica. We met in class and were friends
       throughout our entire childhood. Keith was also part of the cool
       kids so he didn't always hang out with us and Lauclan was also
       part of the technical group. They were the smart ones. So
       sometimes it was me and Jess on our own, since we had no other
       friends. This lasted all the way to goat and beyond, we all knew
       we would be friends forever.
       I walked down the goat track and into a valley, on a hill to one
       side was an entire military of Tribal warriors. They all noticed
       me and didn't seem to care I was crossing their turf. I kept my
       M14 ready though. Then I noticed they entire Tribe was rallying
       and charging into the valley. I panicked then I felt the ground
       rumbling, I liked behind me, a Super mutant Behemoth was
       charging straight through the valley. I started running.
       I didn't want to be involved in this and I knew I would die If I
       was caught by either side or in the hail of bullets and
       explosives that were about to be unleashed. I turned around and
       had enough time to think about how much that giant hand was
       going to hurt, just before it hit me. I fly through the air like
       a rag doll.
       I remember the day of the G.O.A.T, because my mother and father
       were a doctor and a surgeon everybody expected me to be in the
       medical career path. That didn't happen, I became a repair
       engineer. I mainly focused on the water system and the
       surronding areas. Jess became a surgeon herself, Lauclan was
       named a Chef and Kieth was selected to be a guard once he
       finished 4 years of his security maintenance occupation. After
       the G.O.A.T we were going to celebrate our results when a few
       guys started hitting on Jess, they persisted when she told them
       to beat it. So I stepped in, me Lauclan and Kieth took on 8 guys
       and won in a brawl, defending Jess. That night we had a small
       party and I lost of my virginity as did Jess. We never spoke of
       that because it make stuff awkward between our small group.
       I hit the ground hard, tearing my shirt and taking skin of my
       back and right shoulder and got up and tried to run again, I
       turned just in time to see a Tribal nutcase fire a mini nuke at
       the Behemoth blowing it to the ground 3 or 4 pieces. The force
       of the impact sent my flying into the dirt some more. A rock cut
       my head open and pierced my cheek. I got up and ran into the
       remnants of an old house located near the edge of the valley,
       before hills and old dead trees. I dived into it as a few Tribal
       guys used it for cover. I got right up against the other side of
       their cover.
       "Fuck!" I yelled at the top of my lungs, then a missile hit near
       by, blowing dirt, bricks and pieces of wood covering my,
       cutting, scratching and bruising me even more. I covered me head
       as super mutant Master sprayed down the tribal guys with a mini
       gun. Another missile hit near by and covered me in rubble and
       dirt. Which protected me from being turned into another piece of
       lead filled meat by that Super Mutant.
       The day we all learned the truth about Vault Tec, the original
       purpose of our Vault. Vault 66. Was to see how long it would
       last with a single person with any mechanical abilities would
       last. But when the occupants turned up, only 600 of the 1000
       people turned up so, they let a passing convey in, filling it up
       to 950 and 250 of those people had beyond basic mechanical
       knowledge and soon learned to operate the equipment, no-one had
       ever realised that the people they let in we're the only ones
       who knew how to fix anything.
       I got up and ran for it, my bag caught, I left and made sure I
       didn't lose the leather pouch on my belt, that had a 3rd of my
       caps and all personal stuff inside. I took my M14 and shot a
       Tribal in the face as he chased me. I was a precision shot, the
       bullet hit him directly below the right eye. I became an expert
       hunter before I ventured out on this trip.
       It was the day that would forever stick in my wind, the day that
       big door slid open and men dressed in pointy power armor charged
       in. I now know it was the Enclave and they were searching Vaults
       in search of a G.E.C.K and supplies. They started killing
       everybody, my family was slaughtered right in front of me. I ran
       for it, meeting up with Jess, Lauclan and later on Kieth who all
       had similar situations. We ran for the door, we got out, Lauclan
       was shot in the back and killed as we jumped out the door.
       Lasers hit a car left outside the Vault on the road, it
       exploded. I tackled jess and shielded her.
       Lauclan was mortally wounded, then a big flying thing landed, I
       know now it was a machine called a Verti-bird. Landed and caused
       a dust storm along side the smoke that was clouding the area. I
       carried lauclan out into the wasteland but we were seperated
       from Jess. Lauclan died in my arms a few hours later and I spent
       the next 27 hours looking for Jess, before i returned to the
       Vault with no luck. Along with all my friends everybody in the
       Vault was dead and a good majority of the Vault Equipment.
       I was found sleeping on a burned out car by a group of
       Mercenaries who came to investigate what happened.
       I took down another Tribal before the last one shot me in the
       leg, "Ah Fu-u-ck, Fu-u-ck" I shouted as blood sprayed out of my
       leg like a sprinkler. I put 8 bullets from my 10mm pistol into
       the last Tribal, I put my side arm back in my pocket and tried
       to get up and run. I just collapsed again. The pain was
       excruciating, nothing but fear was driving my through this. I
       was covered in dirt, blood, torn clothes and cuts. I crawled
       along trying to get to safety. But I knew I was done for.
       I lived in the Mercenaries compound for a week, before I started
       cleaning and maintaining their weapons for them, after a week of
       that, I was given and rifle and taught to hunt for 16 hours a
       day for 8 days straight. I explained to the mercenaries all
       about the Vault and all the equipment that might be in there
       they could use, we spent an entire day get stuff from the Vault
       and bringing it back to the compound.
       I was taught all about the Carolina Wasteland which is where I
       was located and I was taught all about the East Coast, Super
       Mutants, Tribes, Raiders, Enclave, Brotherhood of Steel,
       Slavers, the Capital Wasteland, the Lone Wonderer and all the
       shit that went down their back in 77. I was taught everything
       they could teach me. Then one day the head of the Mercenaries
       came to me and said.
       "Aaron Rocco... I have a very good source saying their is
       Rocco's and Normans in the Coastal Wasteland".
       That was music to my ears, mine and Jess's families had been
       spotted in the Coastal Wasteland. They spent the rest of the
       month I was there teaching me all about the Coastal Wasteland
       and preparing me for it. Then on the 29th of June I started
       walking to the Coastal Wasteland in search of a true home
       I rolled onto my back and looked as a Super Mutant Overlord was
       coming at me with a mini gun, I quickly fired at him, the bullet
       went straight through his eye, he dropped dead straight away. I
       was amazed, usually, I would've used all my ammo, just slowing
       him down. But I didn't let the shock stop me.
       I got to my feet and stumbled through the trees leaving the
       battle behind me, I ran up a hill and dropped at the feet of 4
       men in power armor. I looked up at men, they were the
       brotherhood of Steel, two had Fat Man on their soldiers and many
       mini nukes between them.
       "What the fuck we're you doing in there?" The BoS member asked.
       "Fucking idiots attack each other as I was crossing the valley"
       I said while blood dribbled out of my mouth.
       I slowly stood up and looked directly at one of their helmets,
       it was scratched up and dinted, probably because of the amount
       of fights he's been in. "Get moving local we need to clear this
       mess up" He basically told me to fuck off. I kept walking along
       the trailer, It was a lot easier not having all those supplies
       on me. But all the wounds and gashes made up for it.
       As the sun was going down I stumbled into the town I had spotted
       earlier that day... "Holy Hell what happened to you?" Someone
       asked as I limped down to the main stretch of the town, where
       all the shops and houses were. "Fucking Tribe, Fucking Mutant,
       Fucking Fight, Fucking Valley" I said and kept walking straight
       into a medical office right next to a saloon.
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       I hope everybody enjoys reading this as much as I enjoyed
       writing this and if someone could give me some proper copyrights
       details and that so I don't get us in trouble, that'd be really
       good of yous. Cheers.
       #Post#: 944--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
   DIR By: Wetbizket
       Date: November 19, 2011, 2:49 pm
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       Wow Aussie! That was forkin awesome!  Switching back and forth
       from flashbacks really bound you to the character, i thought we
       was gonna end up into mush when the mutant came for him! Is
       there gonna be more to the story.
       #Post#: 963--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
   DIR By: Aussie Boy
       Date: November 20, 2011, 6:24 am
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       Thanks Wetbizket. I was hoping those Flashbacks would have a
       good effect. Yes there will be more to this story and I hope
       more people will comment soon. Remember if there is anything
       wrong anyone sees with this story, please tell me, so I may
       avoid it.
       Entering the Coastal Wasteland
       1st July 2298
       I took another swig of whiskey and looked back at my revealed
       leg, while the doctor had a surgical instrument jammed in the
       bullet hole in my leg, that he cut even more so he could
       retrieve the bullet. I took another swig... "Fuck" I yelled as
       he stabbed me inside the bullet wound.
       "Almost got it" The doctor said and continued digging, he pulled
       it out with a popping sound and then blood started spraying out
       again. "He slammed a rag on it and held it down. It took some
       rope and tied the rag there. He looked at me, while he was
       taking off the gloves and putting them in the bucket of water
       near-by.
       "You know most people wouldn't have survived that, they get shot
       and the bullet doesn't go straight through, they usually don't
       make it" The doctor said to me. I nodded and brushed my hair
       back, he grabbed the sowing kit and cleaned the blood of my face
       and started sowing up my wounds, like someone would a shirt.
       "Now Aaron, I'm the only one here that's been to the Coastal
       Wasteland and that was 20 years ago... But what I can tell you
       is: The settlements are all on islands or old ships, or in the
       Stilwater Ruins, now the ground just seems to have replaced the
       water. Because the islands go straight to the dirt. It is
       believed this was caused by an earthquake when the bombs landed,
       but no-one knows for sure.
       The North and West of Stilwater is all land with rivers, rolling
       hills, old corals, sunken ships, deep canyons and trenches and
       another weird thing is, the ground that was under the ocean,
       seems to have risen to what was sea level. Most of the islands
       are settlements now and so are the old sunken ships and areas of
       noticeable vegitation or structures. The Super Mutants in the
       area turned up in 2222 when 3 Masters lead a small army of 1
       Behemoth, 4 Overlords, 7 Brutes and about 15 normal super
       mutants to the area"
       I remembered the details given to me before I left, I hadn't
       even made it to the Coastal Wasteland and I'd almost died, 30
       minutes passed before the doctor finally finished and I fell
       asleep on the old couch in his practice. I came to early the
       next morning. I walked outside into the town and looked around,
       a man was milking the Brahmin while another was delivering
       bottles to all the homes.
       I sat down on the porch and watched the town go through it's
       normal routine, the night guards we're going to their quarters
       while the new guards were taking over. A trader wondered into
       town and sat down outside the general store and started going
       through his stuff. The thought that crossed my mind, was how I
       could kill him, take his stuff and run; but I wasn't that kind
       of person, I was raised to be kind and friendly until the same
       wasn't shown back to me.
       I slid forward off the porch onto my feet and walked into the
       saloon next door, it was almost empty except for a couple
       mercenaries, the bar keep, 2 local prostitutes and about 4 local
       men. The 4 were throwing knifes at the wall with a small target
       on the wall.
       "What's going on?" I asked as I walked in.
       "Well, if it isn't our very own war dog" One of the Mercenaries
       said.
       "The names Aaron" I said to him.
       "Very well Aaron, see these fine gentlemen throwing knives? Well
       they owe the bar keep money and well we just happen to have a
       shit load of caps and need some entertainment, so 40 caps to
       whoever can hit that target with the knife" That same Mercenary
       explained.
       I picked up a knife and threw it, I hit the target first go, the
       Mercenary smiled and happily gave me the 40 Caps in a small
       bag... "60 more if you can do it again" The other one said. I
       some how got a second time. I was very lucky to get both times.
       He gave me 60 Caps and I put 10 Caps down on the table. "My
       contribution to who ever gets the next bulls eye" I said and
       then walked back outside the saloon. The doctor met me there.
       "Look kid, your wounds seem okay, I examined them just before
       you woke up, i recommend you stay in town for another night and
       then leave, just so we can keep an eye on your wounds, and you
       owe me 55 caps" He explained to me. I handed him 55 Caps and
       nodded and then walked over to a table and sat down.
       I counted all my keeps I had in my pouch and the remaining caps
       after that morning, I had 255 caps. I needed new clothes, more
       supplies and more ammo. I waited for the General store to open
       so I could spend the caps.
       I remember the first person I ever killed, I was hunting a
       Rad-Hog, I had been tracking him for hours when I came across a
       raider, he was carrying an assault rifle and what looked like a
       mini nuke and a stick of dynamite with a timer attached. He
       spotted me and chased me with his rifle. I jumped behind a rock
       and fired at him with my bolt action hunting rifle. He took
       cover behind an old tree.
       I rested the rifle against the rock to make it seem like I was
       still there.
       I was very scared and I didn't know what to do, if it was a Yao
       Guia I would've killed it easily, I was trained to hunt none
       stop, so I knew how to kill. I managed to get the jump on the
       raider and sliced open his throat with my 16 inch Machete. I
       remember the blood spraying all over the tree and the ground. I
       had seen it come from animals, but never humans. I took my rifle
       and the contraption along with all the raiders other supplies
       and walked back to the compound. I never did catch that pig.
       I went inside the general store and brought everything I needed,
       I had to barter like crazy but I got all the stuff I needed, her
       prices were unreasonably high, I mean she had no shortage of
       costumers.
       Something I was taught during my time with the Mercenaries was
       to buy the basics and modify them yourself.
       I had done exactly that. I took of the old rags I had on and put
       on a red wife beater top and slipped a black leather armor top
       over it, I put the pair of black and red cargo pants on and then
       put my boots back on. I put on a belt with two holsters on it. I
       put on a cowboy hat and a pair of Aviator sunglasses because
       they were the cheapest I could buy.
       I slung my 14 over my shoulder with attached a little bag to my
       shoulder armor to carry ammo cartridges. I holstered my 10mm
       pistol and put some ammo in a small pouch next to it on my belt.
       I stuck a big hunting knife in the other holster and tied a
       sawed off shotgun to my belt and stuff put some ammo again in a
       small pouch next to it. I took a satchel I brought and put all
       my spare ammo and food inside it and put it on my back. I stuck
       my boot knife back where it goes and put my filled up water
       bottle in a pocket in my pants. I stood up and walked over to
       the saloon and sat at a table and ended up sleeping there.
       I stayed another night, because I still couldn't walk properly,
       so I took a job, harvesting a Yao Guai those two Mercenaries had
       captured and killed. They weren't very common in this area, I
       was told, so I used every bit of it I could. I took all the bits
       that were used as a drug and all the bits that could be used for
       meat. I maintained the skin and fur as it would be good clothing
       and the bones were really useful at times as well. They gave me
       a room for the night and 50 caps for that and on the 4th of July
       I left the small town.
       In The Vault the 4th was always celebrated heavily, it was
       because of some independence or something, they were quite clear
       on their details and I never learned that part of history. I
       remember we had to celebrate it anyway.
       Out here; nobody gave a mole rat shit about the date, no one
       even knew what was so special about the day when I asked them,
       let alone gave a crap. I planned to have a drink where ever I
       would camp for the night and remember all the good times I had
       on this date in the Vault.
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       OK sorry about this Chapter, it wasn't as good as the first, but
       it will get better and I will improve my writing a bit for it.
       The next few chapters won't be written like, he won't skip days
       a time and give brief summeries of what he did for a day, in the
       middle and especially not at the end of the chapter....
       #Post#: 974--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
   DIR By: Wetbizket
       Date: November 20, 2011, 2:32 pm
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       your doing a good job on making this story seem like it was set
       in the post apocalypse, I cant wait to see what happens next!!!
       #Post#: 977--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
   DIR By: Ayngel
       Date: November 20, 2011, 7:07 pm
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       This is Awesome Aussie!!!
       Great story, I'm very much on the edge of my seat looking
       forward to the next chapter :-)
       and everything looks fine in regads to informing the readers of
       where your story stems from, so I don't think you will need
       anymore copyright information, You have been very clear ... good
       Job  :)
       #Post#: 1063--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
   DIR By: Aussie Boy
       Date: November 22, 2011, 5:51 am
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       Thanks guys. Cheers Ayngel. Also the flashbacks aren't going to
       be in the story as much now.
       Chapter 3: The Harsh and the Violent
       4th July 2298
       I walked across the Wasteland, just scanning my surroundings,
       and nothing else. I found what I assumed was an old reef. I
       looked at it for a few moments and then climbed up on it and
       looked out and around the Coastal Wasteland. I could see the
       Stilwater Ruins in the far distance. I remember it being
       mentioned it would be a 12 hours walk across the wasteland, from
       the hills to the waters edge.
       I jumped down and started walking again and eventually I came
       across a small group of settlers sitting around a camp site...
       "Hold it there Mercenary!" One said as he approached me with his
       rifle. I put both my hands where he could see them and slowly
       walked towards me and he looked me over.
       "State your business" He ordered, I stood silently for a few
       seconds. "State your business!" He yelled. By now all the
       settlers had come up; a few more had guns; and they were pointed
       directly at me... "I'm looking for somewhere safe to have a
       break, I've been walking since Northern Port" I said and they
       weren't ready to believe that.
       "Why didn't you stop at Executioner?" The obvious leader of the
       pack asked... "Where's that?" I asked... "About 3 Hours north"
       He said.
       I remembered back for a moment and then spoke. "Submarine on an
       Island?" I asked... "Yeah" He said... "I'd been walking about 2
       hours, I didn't need a break then and besides I could only see
       it in the distance when I was on the top of a ridge" I
       explained.
       They seemed to believe that, look we don't want no-one we can't
       trust, so listen up A big town called Intersect mountain is
       about 3 hours due south... But if you want some caps we gotta a
       job for you" The Settler leader explained... "How many caps and
       whats the job?" I said.
       "Well east of here about 20 minutes is a cabin built about 50
       years ago by some ghouls, but they have all gone feral since and
       so they wouldn't be a threat to anyone, looked themselves
       inside, we want that Cabin to open up a traders post and rest
       stop... We want you to kill all the ghouls in the cabin and
       we'll pay you 50 caps" He said explained in detail.
       "300 Caps, ghouls are dangerous" I ordered.
       "100 Caps" The Settler said
       "200 and I get a canteen of water" I reasoned.
       "Fine, go and kill the damn things and come back, we'll have
       your damn caps ready and your 'canteen of water' " He mimicked
       me.
       "I want my ammo replaced" I demanded.
       "Hell no" He snarled.
       "You just insulted me you piece of shit, I want 10 bullets for
       my M14 when I get back along with my payment" I demanded.
       "Fine" He shouted and said nothing else.
       I hitched up my bag and rifle and started walking east...
       "Fucking bastards" I said to myself. I knew I was greedy and I
       knew I was being unreasonable, but I needed caps and water and I
       was wasting ammo, so I felt I needed to be compensated fully.
       Ghouls were no joking matter. They were zombies, at least the
       feral ones.
       I walked over the top of a hill and saw a cabin built at the
       base of cliff side, with a windmill and a pile of wood around,
       it looked like they were building more but went feral before
       they could. I walked over to the cabin and looked inside the
       glass window. It was truly amazing they put glass windows into
       the this. I threw myself backwards as a ghoul slammed itself
       against the glass and growled.
       I went back over to the window and looked in, they're were about
       4 or 5 roaming around. I grabbed my rifle and stuck it through a
       hole in the wall and shot one. It's head split into two and it
       hit the ground dead. I sighed and took another shot, hitting the
       next one in the head as well, destroying it. Now all the ghouls
       were coming to where the noise was coming from. I hit another
       dead in the head. I fired another shot killing two at once.
       I killed 3 more, emptying the room; I went over to the door and
       moved the wooden plank from in front of it and went inside, I
       checked the netire house and went back outside to where 3
       raiders were waiting for me. Bullets hit the front of the house.
       I dashed into cover and kept my head down, as bullets hit the
       fence along the porch of the cabin. I reloaded my weapon because
       I knew I hadn't. I popped up and shot in the chest and ducked
       back down.
       More bullets trashed the front of the cabin... "Fuck off, before
       i gotta kill you other two" I shouted, I was just improvising
       with this entire situation, I'd never been in this situation nor
       be trained for it before... The two raiders laughed and then the
       third one yelled at me. I didn't kill him. This pissed me off.
       I popped up again and pulled the trigger repeatedly and rapidly,
       wounding the all ready wounded raider and killing the other two,
       I came out from cover with my rifle butt stock against my
       shoulder and the barrel pointed at the three bodies. The last
       one looked at me with a look of forgiveness... "Please, I'm
       sorry, I'm sorry, I'll stop being a raider, have mercy please"
       He begged.
       "How many people have you ever shown mercy, how many people have
       tortured, slaughtered and mutilated?" I said... He looked at me
       with a blank look on his face. I pulled the trigger and used the
       last bullet in my magazine to blow his brains out all over the
       dirt. I looked at the other two, bullets holes revealing their
       insides.
       I took a few armor plates from their gear, their ammo, food and
       weapon parts one had some caps on him, I took them and started
       walking back to the settler camp. Upon arrival I was greeted by
       nothing but two settlers with their hunting rifles pointed
       directly at me.
       "On your knees now" The one i was talking to early demanded... I
       sighed; "Why not just give me what I want and let me go" I
       asked... "Nope we were never going to give you anything, it's
       easier to just to kill and take your stuff. I quickly drew my
       knife and slammed it into the chest of the other settler and
       elbowed the other one and put my knife straight on his throat.
       I held the knife to his throat as i picked him up and walked him
       to a tent where I got the things I was promised upon completion
       of the job and then stabbed him in the leg and walked away. He
       laid in camp screaming for me to come back. He eventually
       started taking pot shots at me. I was far enough away his
       bullets wouldn't even make it this far.
       I walked for another few hours and eventually reached a place
       called Intersect mountain, it was an Island with what looked
       like an old port, I walked into town where I was greeted by a
       man in a duster coat and a head wrap... "What can I do you for
       Stranger?" He asked.
       "I just want some where with a cold drink and good food" I said
       briefly. "Intersect pub, down near the soft sand. Can't miss it,
       also the general store is near the old slipway over there and a
       doctor to look at this stiches is just behind me here" He
       explained in a friendly tone.
       "Thank you friend, I'm Aaron by the way" I said matching his
       tone... "It's no problem and everybody calls me Captain, so
       maybe you should too" He said grinning. "Alright Captain I'll go
       and explore the town" I said and walked away. It was a large
       town, It must have a population of at least 100. I walked into
       the saloon and sat down.
       A pretty young lady came over to me and asked me what I would
       like, before I could make an order and man put a gun to the bar
       keepers head and another put an assault rifle to the waitresses
       back. A third one started giving orders.
       "Nobody move, and nobody will die" He shouted. One man stumbled
       a little bit and he was shot in the face, his right side of his
       face was blwon off and he hit the table and landed on the
       ground. A woman screamed and dropped to her knees to check her
       husbands pulse. "Right your next" He shouted and they dragged
       her to the open space and put a gun to the back of her head. I
       stood up and slung my M14 around into my hands and fired as the
       robber fired at me.
       #Post#: 1117--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
   DIR By: Aussie Boy
       Date: November 23, 2011, 9:14 pm
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       Okay Really guys, if you didn't like the chapter, or the entire
       story. Just comment and tell me what I am doing wrong and tell
       me how I may fix it. I've never done a story like this and I
       want to do it right.
       Wasteland Justice
       4th July 2298
       My Bullet took his hand off completely, with the gun still
       grasped tightly by the fingers, he dropped to his knees
       screaming, I shot at another one, I missed, but the bar keeper
       took the split second my shot gave him to blow the robbers eyes
       out the front of his head with a sawed off shotgun...
       "Surrender!" Another customer yelled holding a revolver to his
       head.
       He didn't murdered the costumer, I fired 3 more shots as the
       last robber ran for cover, I took cover as he started firing all
       randomly. The bar keeper ducked behind the bar and the rest of
       the costumers knocked tables over and hid behind them, or near
       by walls. I popped up and pulled the trigger 13 more times,
       bullets penetrated his cover he screamed.
       The bar keeper moved up and rushed the spot, while I fired the
       last of my clip to keep him down in cover, the bar keeper swung
       his pistol down and hit the robber. I didn't see where because
       he was behind cover. Next minute the local the sheriff burst in
       the door with an Assault Rifle in his hand. I reloaded as I
       grabbed the one handed robber by the neck. The bar keeper
       dragged the other robber out into the open while the Sheriff
       examined the scene.
       The Sheriff and a few costumers dragged the two robbers out of
       the bar, I stayed inside and looked at the barkeeper dragged the
       body to the door and grabbed a bucket of water and rag and
       started cleaning the blood of his floor. I walked out afterwards
       and saw the sheriff standing over the two robbers, that were
       tied up on the ground.
       "What are you going to do with them?" I asked as looked at the
       robbers.
       "Hang them at sunset" The sheriff explained.
       "Okay... Look I'm Aaron and you might be able to help me" I said
       directly.
       "Sheriff Green and what do you need?" The sheriff introduced
       himself and asked.
       "I'm looking for a girl, Jess Norman, herd of her?" I asked
       again directly cutting straight to the chase.
       "Don't know Jess, but I do know of Normans living in one the
       towns around the Ruins, maybe Overwatch, Isolated Fortress,
       Soft-sand Caverns, Canyon or Ancient Hill" The Sheriff listed a
       few places I should look.
       "Thank you Sheriff, I appreciate it" I thanked him and I walked
       away, heading to a small shop up from the bar, we're I brought
       some ammunition and some spare parts for my rifle. I walked down
       near the old docks and brought a sheet and a couple folding
       sticks, to make a tent. I put a few sharp sticks and with the
       rest of my money I brought some rations, and a Brahmin Steak.
       I strolled down to a small campsite, obviously used a lot and
       got the fire going in the spot and set up my tent, I put my
       satchel down and rested my rifle against a rock at the campsite.
       I sat there and cleaned up my rifle and counted my caps until
       sun set, when I seen all the towns people carrying the two
       surviving robbers down to a structure at the end of one of the
       ports. I got up and followed. I quickly rushed back and grabbed
       my rifle and followed them down to the end of the port.
       I stood back and watched as the two criminals were read their
       crimes and then hanged from the structure at the end of the
       dock. I noticed the last one was laying under them, then to my
       surprise I noticed they had a message written on a sing tied to
       his body. I caught a glimpse of what it said. Crimes will be
       punished by Death.
       I knew these people did not fuck around, I quickly went back to
       the campsite and sat down and started cooking my meal.
       My family and some others from around the Vault were lined up
       and shot in a firing squad, I was held back, because they were
       going to kill me seperatly. I saw the man who ordered it, a
       pure, clean face except for a distinctive scar under his eye. He
       had a jaw line beard and no hair. His face was kind of pointy I
       remember it clear as day.
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       Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
   DIR By: Amaris
       Date: November 23, 2011, 10:57 pm
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       This story is awesome, the flashbacks really let you know who
       the character is and lets you see inside his world, I really
       like it a lot! :D Keep up the amazing work!
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       Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
   DIR By: Aussie Boy
       Date: November 24, 2011, 2:06 am
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       Thanks Amaris every comment helps, especially as I want to try
       and pump a chapter out each day. Because Fallout is so damn
       epic.
       Chapter 5: Reaching Overwatch
       5th July 2298
       The 1st Of June, it was hotter than normal in the vault, I was
       having breakfast with my friends in the diner, when it happen,
       we scattered to go find our families. I saw mine get executed
       but I being as strong as I am managed to get out of the tight
       grip and run for. I met up with Jess and Lauclan who had both
       witnessed almost exactly as I had, except they weren't held
       back, they had watched from a safe place. As we ran for it, we
       met Keith who's father had gone done firing his pistol rapidly
       at the Soldiers. I remember as we ran out the Vault door that
       had been blown wide open and the cave around it that we were
       always told about was gone too, it was straight out onto a small
       slope before onto the road, that's where the car exploded. We
       watched in Horror as Lauclan rolled down the hill like a rag
       doll. Blood pouring out of the hole in his back.
       I shot up and looked around, I had my hand on my rifle;
       breathing deeply I rubbed my eyes with my free hand and stood
       up, and held me rifle in both hands as I looked around my camp.
       Then I remembered it was only a dream. I sat down to the
       smouldering fire and poked it a couple times and moved it
       around, getting the coals to turn into small flames, they grew
       into a fire slowly as I put more sticks and stuff on it.
       I took a Nuka Cola and took 3 Mirelurk Cakes from my Satchel,
       they were really nice to eat considering the hideous monster
       they come from, I packed up my camp after I ate cakes and drank
       my Cola and walked up to the pub. I went in and there was a song
       playing I looked around for the man playing it. Turns out it was
       from a radio. "Tell em, that gods gonna cut em down" The singer
       went, I sat at the bar and listened to it.
       A different man came out from the bar keep yesterday afternoon.
       "What are ya after?" He asked politely.
       "Some information" I said
       "What do ya want to know?" He asked, picking up a glass and
       small piece of clothes and started wiping it out.
       "Whats the quickest way to a town called Soft sand Caverns?" I
       asked
       "Well it's about 6 hours walking time to a place called
       Overwatch SSE of here and then keep going SSE, you'll come
       across it" He said.
       "Thank you" I said and got up and left the pub as the song
       ended.
       I walked out of town and followed my compass, me not knowing the
       wasteland it might take me 7 or 8 hours but not an entire day to
       cover half that distance. Now I think about it, I think I have
       been lied to, it wouldn't be 12 hours across the wasteland, at
       least a day, 24 hours, I believe.
       I followed the tracks that were worn into the ground, coming
       across some wild life, nothing attacked me, some Mirelurks were
       swimming in a pond, a Yao Guai did spot me, but a well placed
       shot to the soft spot on it's head, killed it easily. Thats what
       most people don't do. They just start shooting, they don't aim
       for weak spots, I've been out of the Vault just over a month now
       and I'm smarter than that.
       I came across a small abandoned camp, I looked around it,
       nothing, they must have just packed up and left and I started
       walking out of the camp when I herd the sound of a mine about to
       explode, I had set one of before and I was saved by my Mercenary
       friends. I ran and jumped as it exploded, sending my flying
       through the air. I got up and quickly and ran as 3 tribal guys
       chased me with large machetes.
       I pulled out my pistol and fired killing one as he rushed me, it
       jammed as the second and third reached me, I grabbed it in my
       left hand and used my right to try and clear the jam, punched
       one of the Tribal guys in the face, knocking him into dirt, the
       other swung his Machete hit pistol, it damaged the gun, I used
       it again to block the second swing, completely wrecking the gun,
       the third shot cut my arm, really deep. Blood instantly covered
       me arm. I ducked a swing and grabbed the revolver out of the
       Tribal guys holster and shot him in the heart, repeatedly until
       he fell over.
       I looked up as the other Tribal guy ran at me Machete high above
       his head, I pointed my revolver at him and pulled the trigger,
       it clicked, the Tribal guy stepped on a mine, I could hear it
       beep, he panicked and tried to run, it exploded just as he took
       of foot of it, he flew through the air and landed near by, with
       his guts hanging out where his legs once were.
       I rushed over to him as he laid there silent excepting death, I
       stared at him and he stared back, he nodded, "Worthy Foe" He
       muttered and then stopped breathing and blinking. I sighed and
       looked at my arm, I tore a piece of the Tribal guys clothes and
       cleaned the blood off and tied it on the wound, to stop the
       bleeding. I took all the ammo and food I could and the two
       Machetes I could find.
       I looked at the bodies one more time, one had Teenaw carved into
       his arm, I shrugged they are Tribal after all and kept walking
       along the trail, and not long after I could see Overwatch, the
       massive Island, with a hill in the middle of it, it looked as
       though it had a military base on top of the hill. I walked to it
       quickly, much quicker than I was traveling with my leg and
       wounds they previous few days. I got to the bottom of the hill
       and walked up one of the many trails in it, reaching the
       buildings that were built on the the side of the hill in no
       time.
       I got to the top of the hill and looked, all the shacks were
       scattered everywhere, many saloons, brothels, and barracks also,
       with two gun stores, one appeared to be more for Mercenaries and
       stuff and the other was guarded by Brother of Steel Guys, so I
       think that may be an armory. Given that the Brotherhood is all
       over this town.
       I walked around the town more and saw the old Military Base,
       with Brotherhood of Steel guys everywhere, the sign outside was
       Delta Bravo, I nodded in the realisation that this must have
       been the major BoS outpost in the area. I learned that they had
       the Citadel in DC, some this is what gave me the thought. It
       must have been around 3 in the afternoon and not wanting to hang
       around a Brotherhood stronghold.
       I continued my journey down the other side of the hill and again
       across the wasteland, I could see what I believed was the
       Stilwater City Ruins I had been told was a haven for gun fights.
       Only the mad and brave ever ventured in there. The sun was going
       down as I reached the long Strip of Soft Sand, I walked up and
       saw an old gasoline station and old caves behind. It walked
       towards them when I noticed guard patrols scouting the area. I
       walked straight toward what looked like the entrance.
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       Re: Coastal Wasteland (Fallout)
   DIR By: Ayngel
       Date: November 24, 2011, 7:05 am
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       Awesome!!!!!  two of my favourite game rolled into one great
       work Aussie ;D ;D ;D ;D
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