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#Post#: 10051--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: November 4, 2015, 5:18 pm
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Thanks bro. 8) yeah i figured there was some type of gangs
before carnales vice kings and all.
Radio: Tell me why?
Gat: No.
*changes channel*
Gat: This town is going to down hill lately.
Aisha: Johnny! stop getting mad at the town.
Gat: Come on eash you know it is. We used to be a clean city.
Aisha: Well my music career will pick up. i'll change that.
Gat: Eash being a pop star don't exactly make you president.
Aisha ran off m,ad.
Gat: She just don't understand. Saints row ain't getting burned
because the Gangs want to ruin it.
Dex: John you're only a music producer. An ex Navy Seal.
Gat: Dex i fought wars. I can handle some gang bangers.
Dex: Johnny. I'm a manager , you make beats, and eash is the
vocals. Add your buddy Lin we got The best underground group
in still water. One night stand.
Gat: Dex. yo.. Interupted by Vice Kings.
Tony: Yo you two down for the gang war ..slap pon these
bandanmas and ride with us.
Gat: I'm yellow enough as it is.
Dex: Ain't for me man.
Tony: W/e. Boy light them up.
Vice kings shot at the 3rd street residents.
Gat shot them all off ,and Dex shot Tony.
Dex: I see your Point.
Gat: All i'm saying is there's too much gang violence not enough
action being taken.
Dex: Julius littles is the guy to talk to.
Gat: That Vice king?
Dex: Word is he's getting tired of Ben
*back at the vice kings Hang out*
Julius: Ben we got to attack tonight. they are most vulnerable.
Ben: Tomorrow night. They are expecting us tonight.
Julius: They have only a few guys..we go in shoot em down. we
run the los carnales turf.
Ben: It''s the carnales not the los carnales.
Julius: What's the differences?
Ben king: Los means the ..the the brothers is what you basically
are calling them.
Julius: rio grande river.
Ben: Jules tonight you take zero and Red we hit them tonight.
Julius took the guys to the carnales hang out.
Zero: Julius word is you backing out on us. Heard Kang and
tonay becoming real close.
Jules: Am i here? Okay then.
Red: Idk Ben said tony is his right hand.
Julius: when?
Zero: At the meeting last night. oh he didn't invite you.
Jules: This is news.
THE CAR PARKED.
julius told the guys to hitr the carnales then get out.
They shot up the whole carnales crew. Victor escaped with
angelo and hector.
Jules called Ben.
Ben: Hello
Julius: carnales are over. the big three ran off. Vk's are
done.
Ben: Jules what you saying?
Julius: We stopped the hood from being terrorized. That's it.
Ben: Jules we run this. you dont want the city?
Jules: No. i'm out ben.
Ben: Jules.. tony aint my right hand.
Julius: so you told them to say that?
Ben: No. they told me you wanted out.
jules: well i'm moving to the row.
*hangs up*
3 years later.
Julius: Troy you need to work on your skills.
Troy: I just want to eat. i'm hungry.
Gat: Julius tell troy tro stop.
Dex: Johnny what happened to you you turned in to a killing
machine.
Gat: Gangs ruining my hood.
Lin: I can feel it.
Ben king went out on 4th avenue earlier.
Julius: Zero died. He made an attack on Red and Tony. Tony
killed them both.
Lin: Tanya just got promoted ,and warren.
Julius: We wait until tonight6 to hit Tony.
Gat: i got my boys to attack them earlier.
#Post#: 10052--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: November 6, 2015, 2:44 pm
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*keys flicker*
Man i'm tired of this shift. always making me drive here at 5
in the morning.
Radio:Tell me why?
Leo: Shut up *changes channel*
Val: You're late.
Leo: Sue me. ha ha. Yeah i'm a pimp.
Val grabbed Leo ,and slammed him in the trash.
V: You're fired. You have a one room apartment ,and barely get
by. you're a crappy pimp.
Pj: Yous a fool man.
Val punched him.
Dex: Give me some purple shirts. 80 of them.
Val: Okay. 140 dollars.
Dex payed then left
#Post#: 10053--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: November 8, 2015, 7:58 am
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So jules coined it's not the los carnales before dex ever did
and los carnales remnants joined the stilwater brotherhood.
Johnny gat being a soldier in his teen years would explain his
reason for his perseverence for being shot, stabbed and shot
multiple times and alien abduction and not dying.
By this point we're nearing the end as troy has or had
infiltrated jules gang and now jules wants to establish a name
on the streets seeing hoe him and ben have parted ways.
#Post#: 10059--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: December 9, 2015, 1:19 am
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Chapter 2: Champions,and contenders.
News paper: maero the heavy weight contender takes on super
heavy weight champ Big WHOPPER.
Ricky steam: Maero you are going to be ready?
Maero: Sure. He ain't ready for Big bad maero the swinger.
Ricky: you know he's the champ for a reason right?
Maero: until now. look ricky stamboli hits the hardest so far of
people i fought. He went down with five hits.
Ricky; Ricky S ain't but a tunafish compared to whopper. i been
hit by ricky S. he hits like a barbie.
Maero: i fought chumps but finally ki fight a strong opponent.
Ricky: Hit me. we'll see.
Maero punched ricky in the jaw.
Ricky: woah kid. you got some heat. he hits harder but you pack
more sting he hita harder a little. i got hit 90 percent power
by him ko'd me.
your 100 aint too far off. you might have a chance.
Mareo: ha hahaha.
Ricky: what's so funny?
Maero: that was 14 % power.
Ricky's jaw dropped.
Maero" this guy don t ghit as hard as they think.
fight time.
this night we got maero the swinger the slugger the ko kid
verses the whopper the krab claw the swinging bafoon.
Mr. golden fist himself. Big bad Jeff garcia big whopper.
both fighters walked out to the ring.
referee okay gentlemen i wa..*punched out by big whopper.
Maero:? couldn't help but ko the ref? afraid you wont ko me?
Whopper punched maero hard and harder and his hardest two times.
Maero: a fly just hit me?
maero ko'd whopper with a flick.
new champ NEW CHAAMPPP.
To be continued.
#Post#: 10060--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: Wetbizket Date: December 9, 2015, 5:42 pm
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Damn son, your getting deep into this story! I like it!
Big Whoppers down for the count!!!! 8)
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Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: October 4, 2016, 2:17 am
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Radio: Big thugs big gangsters rollin.
*maero punches radio*
Johnny Dune: Mareo the kid wins the belt.
Maero: What do you wan Dune?
JD: Big gangsters roling...
Maero: Shush Johnny... you want a fight?
Jd: Fight strong arm teddy..then we'll talk.
Maeo: Marvelous strong arm teddy?
Jimmy: Yeah he's the number one contender he ko'd Ricky stamboli
last night.
mAERO: Teddy is middle weight.
Ricky: Maero i want a shot i'm 78-9 50 ko's i hit hard im from
the street ..shoot im half irish half jamaican im the man to
fight.
Maero: ricky mook? you're a good fighter nut idk. irish
jamaican? ok..
Ricky sollo: no i want a shot.
Johnny Goon: I'm maero's manager i decide who he fights.
Maero grabbed Johnny... No one but Jesus tells me what to do.
newspaper: Maero religious?
Johnny: maero is a Christian. (obviously before he joined a
gang)
Maero walked out. Teddy thestrong man!
TEDDY: SO maero isa gonna lose weight to fight me?
Big jim bolo: Yeah ,but we will win. Ko that chump in 3 secs.
Teddy: Idk ..Maero can hit. I fought him in the street i barely
won like 5 years ago.
Jim: I fought maero in the club last thursday he hits hard but i
can ko him.
Teddy: i will see.
The Big night.
Maero: 190 POUNDS!
Candy: Little skinny there maero.
Jessica: yeah real skinny.
Matt: bro you're like a stick with muscles.
Maero: Mat you should talk. you're like a toothpick without
muscles.
They all chuckled.
Fight night!
Maero made his way to the ring.
Maero Teddy ..really? bolo is your coach?
Teddy: he is a good fighter.
Maero: once i win tonight ,and gain my weight back he is next.
Teddy: You know i just beat the champ pasty row. im the middle
weight champ.
Bell rings.
Maero swings hard and knocks teddy down.
teddy gets up and ko's maero.
Teddy the strong arm. he does it.
Teddy walked off with candy.
Matt: my gf he took my gf i will fight him!
Maero:i gotta train harder and come back.
Ri
#Post#: 10439--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: October 9, 2016, 7:32 am
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Jimmy's on 8th avenue. 4 pm.
*News paper gets tossed*
Maero: Groan.
Victor: Fear not my friend you will win next time.
Maero: Hey Vic. Bartender make Victor a slam dunk.
Victor: Actually i don't have time..so make it a quick beer.
Maero: Late for prom? ha.
Victor: No,The idiots from sunny vale gardens love making a mess
of my busineess..so duty calls. you know?
Maero Yeah.. 8takes a drink*
Victor grabbed his beer ,and chugged it down.
Victor: Thanks for the drink amigo ,but i gotta go.
Maero: Cheers.
Player walked up to the seat next to Maero.
Player: Yo can i get a few beers? thanks.
Maero: So you see the big fight?
Player: You getting your lights turned off? Yeah.
Maero: you know i'd..Ah forget it. *takes a drink*
Player took a drink ,and walked away.
Player: Hey uhh i forgot your name ,but thanks for the drinks.
charged it to your card hope you don't mind ..ha ha. *walks out
the door.
Maero: That son of a..ugh.
on tv.
Kill bane is in town to fight teddy the strong arm champ.
Teddy is gonna come up 35 pounds to heavy weight to fight kill
bane.
number one contender spot for the champ fight against angel.
maero: That kill bane guy is 57 and 0 in Mexico. 2 and 0 in
America.. i could train with him maybe.
Maero ran off to see kill bane.
At stil waters Taco de lucha shop.
Kill bane:Maria ,and mario..give me cinco tacos de carne.
Mario: si amigo. 7.58 is the price.
*kill bane pays*
Maero: Kill bane we need to talk.
Kill bane: a bit old for an autograph aren't you? ha ha.
Maero: this aint a joke. i want to train with you.
Kill bane: oh? well let me finish my tacos.
Maero: i'm m..
Kill bane: i know who you are maero. i know why you're here.
you're afraid of your losses. well why? why are you mopping
around? you win some and lose some kid. you think me or angel or
any of the top notch wrestler/boxers just became good? It's God
given talent boy.
you gotta train though... just like with your spiritual
walk..you gotta read the bible and pray and listen and do what
the good lord wants you to do.
well if youi wanna be a good fighter you gotta train maero.
train hard..i got my butt kicked up and down the neighborhood
growing up. in college i lost 15 matches before winning 34.
everyone takes a loss maero but it's up to you to get back
up..same as christianity you slip and sin which we all do
daily..you get back up and go to Christ and repent.
well when you lose a few matches ..you either get up and try
again or you stay down and hang up your boots.
Ball is in your court maero..what you gonna do?
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Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: October 25, 2016, 4:28 pm
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you learn from the best in the game, you get your shit together
and you listen to what the old fuckers have to say and then you
use what you learn and go out there and cause your own kind of
chaos on the world.
glad you didn't leave us. The forum hasn't gone down its just
all this shitty advertisement from easybread makes it where you
don't wanna write anymore.. it almost feels hopeless for trying
to do something you enjoy doing.
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Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: January 5, 2017, 5:33 pm
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Maero: You're right.
Maero runs off to the gym.
Kill bane: he's going to hurt teddy before i can beat him in the
ring..sigh.
The Gym on 8th street.
Push ..Push it Teddy.. another five reps.
Teddy: Maero......Why are you here.
Maero: Training with Bolo.
Bolo: you want tro train with me?
Maero: Did i stutter?
Bolo: Lose the attitude maero.. okay you can train.
Maero grinned.
Maero did 500 push ups 500 sit ups and benched 800lbs for 50
reps.
Bolo: Yeah! you're stronger now maero..youre a big guy again
too. ha ha
Teddy: Yeah you gonna win some more matches.
Maero: Teddy..bolo how? can you guys just forgive me so easy?
Bolo: Christ said love your enemies.
Teddy: The greatest commandment is to love the Lord your God
with all your strength ..mind ..body ..spirit. with everything
you got..the second is like it..love your neighbor as you love
yourself.
see hating another person God created is not loving God..it's
showing hate.
it's sin to talk down on a brother... that's murder.
Maero: That's how you manage to be so strong.
Bolo: Yes Christ is my rock. i stand on his word.
#Post#: 10456--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: January 7, 2017, 2:23 am
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when i started writing this it had cussing..i must say that isnt
right..to cuss and follow God isnt gonna fly..i repented ,but i
changed the words a bit..my other stories have cussing too. i am
walking with Christ now and all i want to do is praise JESUS
only through him could i stop..i slip we all do ,but please
brothers turn from your sin and repent turn to God it is truly
worth it.
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