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#Post#: 9983--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: August 25, 2015, 11:56 am
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this wouldn't happen to do with them colombians from saints row
would it? Hector and Victor are they the los carnales or two
different people?
I see ultor still a clothing store, and with this being a
prequel are we also getting the rise of the LC? Even through
christ they gotta be compelled to do something evil like work
for ultor(satan).
I like that you're getting in touch with your heritage bro, be
proud of who you are, what you are is an awesome writer still in
his prime you got so much more to write you're a tiger bro like
a tiger.
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Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: August 25, 2015, 3:20 pm
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This chapter was about the Los carnales.
they aren't doing evil through Christ ..some of them just turned
their life around and left the gang.
Thanks bro. you are a great writer too luke.
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Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: August 25, 2015, 3:50 pm
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It's not the los carnales lol gotcha bro
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Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: August 25, 2015, 9:12 pm
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oh man i can't believe i fell for that ha ha los means the lol
.. love that part in SR1.
#Post#: 9993--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: August 26, 2015, 6:58 am
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[quote author=cali soul link=topic=429.msg9991#msg9991
date=1440555159]
oh man i can't believe i fell for that ha ha los means the lol
.. love that part in SR1.
The fuck you say?
You gotta finish puttin' the murder on ultor, they're a bad ole
pussycat.
#Post#: 9997--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: Wetbizket Date: August 26, 2015, 5:10 pm
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Haha, to complete randomness had me rollin! Your story kinda
reminds of some of the stuff Luke would write, you guys should
team up and do a joint story, it would be Epic.
#Post#: 10000--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: August 26, 2015, 6:16 pm
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[quote author=Wetbizket link=topic=429.msg9997#msg9997
date=1440627013]
Haha, to complete randomness had me rollin! Your story kinda
reminds of some of the stuff Luke would write, you guys should
team up and do a joint story, it would be Epic.
[/quote]
He's keeping saints row alive. I wouldn't say no to a story
tagteam no i wouldn't but cali got himself something special for
now.
Be a boliever and finish it!
#Post#: 10042--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: October 29, 2015, 7:30 pm
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At the dinner table. 7:15 pm.
Angelo: Luz is coming over.
Victor: Oh that senorita from down the street?
Angelo: Yeah. Me and her are going dancing.
Hector: she's my buddy's sister carnal.
Victor: Ah that one guy... Ramiro?
Hector: Si.
Angelo: He's out of a job so i recruited as our vehicle guy.
Hector: Good.
Door bell rings.
Angelo: That's my date luz ,and our new vehicle man.
Hector opened the door for Luz ,and Ramiro.
Hector hugged them ,.. Mi amigos.
Victor: Hola. Angelo take the senora out. Hector bring our new
mechanic in the back.
Angelo took off with luz to the club.
Victor: Angelo is a good guy. Ramiro..i have a problem.
Ramiro: What's up?
Victor: Hector take ramiro to the Golden 5 store. Give hgim a
gun. You know what to get.
Ramiro: I'm a mechanic but okay.
Victor lead them to the door.
Ramiro: So what we doin g hector?
Hector: Getting some car parts for Victors race car.
Ramiro: Oh. i got extra parts if he needs them. in my garage
down the road.
Hector: No Golden five is far though.
Ramiro: Golden five huh? never heard of it.
Hector: it don't exist.
Ramiro: what?
Hector: You cant trust people had to see if we could trust you.
Ramiro: Orale.
Hector: The real job is for us to watch Angelo and Luz. after
we go to a small stop in Sunnyvale gardens. Pick up pay roll.
Ramiro and Hector got out to see the Carnales enforcer.
Hector: Victor wants his pay.
Pepe: They won't pay these chicos won't pay up ese.
Ramiro: aren't you an enforcer?
Pepe: these guys are strong.they smoked bobby and chuco already.
Hector walked up to one of the men.
Anthony: What do you want taco eater?
Hector punxhed and knocked out anthony.
Benjamin: We ain't paying you no more Hector. This is our hood.
Julius: Yeah. we aint taking this no moree.
Benjamnin: Vice Kings come on shoot these punks.
Hector tosses Ramiro a gun.
Vice kings shot at the carnales boys.
Hector shotr most the vice kings with ease.
Pepe shot a few until being killed by anthony after waking up.
Ramiro shot anthony twqo times in the shoulder.
Benjamin shot Ramiro dead.
Julius: Yeah that's right Ben.
Hector: Nooo!
In a rage hector broke the necks of the rest of the vice kings
and kicked julius in the chest. He punched Benjamin ..and Ben
fought back.
Anthony picked julius up took him to the apartment. more vice
kings arrived and Hector soon was ran off.
Benjamin king was hurt bad but still staying in there.
BK: That man is strong. Victor is stronger though.
Reggie: Vic the head hancho?
Bk: Yeah. Victor then Hector then Angelo. Strength wise Angelo
isn't as styrong as those two. he's dangerous though..crazy guy.
Stronger then most in this town. Angelo is stronger than Anthony
but barely. Julius is strong but i'm strongest. i'm same
strength as Victor.
Reg: Dang man. Thus sparks the war.
Hector returned and told victor the news.
Hector: Victor talk. Say something.
Victor loioking out the window ...I have to pinch a loaf.
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Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: October 30, 2015, 6:01 pm
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Hector: Be serious.
Victor: If i know Ben he's going to gather the young guys from
Sunnyvale gardens.
Hector: Start an army huh? we should start a bigger gang. We
gather up all the gangs in the barrio.
Victor: Go get Angelo ,and tell the senora her brother died.
I'll call Pablo we have to unite the gangs.
Hector: Cool.
Hector took off to the corner pocket club Angelo took Luz to.
*Phone rings*
Ben King: What is it?
Zero: heard the Vice Kings are looking to expand.
Ben King: YeahZ we gathering up the hood boys. you down dog?
Zero: We go back Ben. Back to the Sunnyvale Garden Bunch days.
So yeah the Avenues are with you.
Ben: My ninja.
*Ben hung up the phone ,and had Julius set up a meeting with the
gangs*
Sandman:So what's up Ben? What's important?
Ben: I called you all here because we're having a problem with
the carnales in our hood. Taxin our boys.
Road Dog: Yeah what's next invading our houses? Sexing our
women? Naw never!
Ben: Exactly. So why are we fighting us and not them? they sell
in our hood and we do nothing? well it stops here..Zero and the
Avenue crips are with us. Are you all?
Zero:Yeah we vice kings. dropping the blue flags and wearing
yellow.
Red Duce: Alright baby gangsata bloods is down.
Gator: Jungle street is with y'all too.
Ace: But who's running it Ben? You? Why you?
Zero: Cause Ben ,and Jules put it together.
Ben: Oh *grabs ace* you want to challenge me? *slama ace down*
Ace: No Ben.
Spider: Okay. Home town bangers is down.
Roccet: I'm cool.
Pokey: I'm good if roccet good.
Zero: Roccet you ain't with us cuzz?
Roccet: I don't have beef with carnales i have beef with these
bloods you got here.
Pokey: Yeah them bloods can get it.
Red : Well you crips die alone. B's is with the Vice Kings.
*Ben king punched roccet ,and pokey*
Get them out of here red.
Red and his boys took out Roccet ,and pokey.
Ben King: It's time to take back our hood. Idc what flags they
fly Carnales,crips ,bloods, west side rollers. Red
,Blue,orange,purple. Idc take them out.
My Lt's are Julius ,Anthony aka big Tony, Zero,and Red.
Go secure the hood.
The carnales warehouse. 4:15 am.
Victor: Trejo i called you ,and Pablo here to unite.
Pablo: I can't see that happening aftyer you guys hit my
brother.
Trejo: Pablo that was the rollerz i told you.
Pablo: Okay. Why Victror?
Victor: My boys in the Gardens projects were hiot.. Vice kings
are rising up. Ben is a strong man his crew ain't weak.
Pablo: So you want me and my boys to back you because the
project hoodlums told you off?
Trejo: Hmm think about it pablo ..if they attacked Victors boys
who says they won't attack us?
Victor: You know i'm starting to wonder why Trwejo isn't in
charge of your crew.
Trejo: Pablo is too much of a muscle head.
Pablo: We don't have any more to discuss. Lets go trejo.
Victor: Hector break em.
Hector took out pablo.
Trejo now in charge decided to workl with Victor.
Victor: Trejo you got brains i'll make you my head Lt.
Trejo: Gracias.
Angelo: Trejo did you know we used to be cool with the Vice
kings.
Trejo: No.
Hector: The vice kings were the Sunnyvale gardens bunch. We
hung out with them. i used to knock out bums working the club
with big tony.
One day they challenged me, i got `12 drive bys done to me i
survived.
#Post#: 10046--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: November 3, 2015, 10:05 pm
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damn i'm digging this saints row prologue
Julius being a vice king before creating the saints makes sense,
it's weird seeing bloods and crips though but i guess they
visited stilwater and shit got heated with them. You miss it bad
i can tell but its in you bro.
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