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#Post#: 9938--------------------------------------------------
It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: June 22, 2015, 6:59 pm
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This story is going to be about Ultor's rise ,and fall. behind
the scenes things you didn't see.
Chapter one: Risky business
Stilwater Labs. 2:34 p.m. Sunday.
Carl Jones: Hey Doc, Hows the project going?
Doc: Good,Very good! take a look.
Doc showed Carl a glass filled with liquid acid. Doc had been
working on a new way to make explosions. Until now he wasn't
successful, most of his projects blew up in his face(literally).
Doc was a Thirty Four year old lab rat named Henry Write. He
spent most of his years in college studying liquids, for some
reason they fascinated him.
Doc: Just wait this is going to change things Carl.
Carl: I hear you Doc.
Vantine Solido walked in the lab to check on his workers.
Valentine owned the lab,he wasn't much of a chemistry guy but he
was drunk one night ,and won the papers in a card game.
He was also the owner of the Ultor clothing company, The local 8
ball pool hall,and The crazy cards poker
room.
The cops been trying to bust this guy for years ,he was rumored
to be a big part of the Columbian's operation to smuggle drugs
from Mexico ,Columbia,puerto rico, Cuba ,and Chile.
Solido was born in Mexico, he grew up in the states though. He
was a college graduate in law enforcement, spent 5 years as a
cop until he was kicked off the squad on suspicion that he might
be running drugs.
Valentine was good with numbers,and he was a strong man. He had
a lot of women after him. Valentine was a regular playboy/romeo
you hear about in the movies.
The guy who runs the show ,and is the boss of the mafia,the drug
cartel,and all that. except he wasn't into any of that,he was
just a legitimate business man.
the 32 year old Mexican man had a family he took car of ,and
even had a side job as a janitor on weekends for the local
homeless shelter.
Valentine: Hey hows my favorite workers doing?
Carl: Hey Valentino.
Doc: Hello Mr. Solido.
Val: Doc ease up. Just call me Val.
Doc: Alright Val. What's up?
Val: Got a plan to bring Ultor clothing up in the ranks at
number one clothing Business. Pep this.
I got a sweet connection with Barns ,and Riley the clothing
store on 18th street down town Stilwater. They're packin some
new heat ,a whoile load of new clothing that people want ,and
are demanding.
We are in business baby ,and that's no bull my friends.
Carl: Man that's a sweet deal. They own that store branded
right? Yah i know Riley's Sister.
Doc; Can you trust them though?
Val: Yeah man they're cool cats.
Carl: Riley is cool.
Doc: Okay.
Carl: Cut me in on this Val. We go back like four flats on a
Cadillac.
Val: Sure man. You,me ,and Doc can go straight to the top. Izzy
runs the store while i'm out. My cousin Arturo ,and my brother
Hector are security.
Doc: Count me out. It screams bad news.Those Branded guys roll
with that Dane Vogel guy. He's a snake.
Carl: That punk ass lawyer? Forget him he's a chump.
Val: Yeah ,but Dane isn't involved in this Doc.
Doc; He's there lawyer! You numskull idiots don't see how snakey
he is?! The man sued his own mother for her getting first prize
in the gardening show.
Val: You're right ,but my lawyer ,and insurance is stronger. I
got Legal Lee.
Carl: Alright.
Doc: I'm not in.
Val: Alright. Carl let's roll to the store.
Carl: Alright let's dip.
They walked out to Val's expensive flashy Venom.
Owen the neighbor hood drunk was asking for change.
Val: Here's a couple hundred Owen. get cleaned up ,and get a job
amigo.
Carl: Get lost drunk ,you're just going to be a drunk again in a
day if you get cleaned.
Owen; asshafaassh agghghhwahh.
Owen walked off and thanked Val.
Val: Aye that guy will need help.
Carl: let's just roll.
They drove downtown to Ultor's store.
Just as they got out Arturo was fighting someone.
Cal lookd down the alley as he watched the two men argue.
A man dancing was looked back. He yelled ..Hey! what are you
looking at you creep!
Carl yelled back..You!
The man walked up to Carl ,and told him a few things.
Sal: Hey look here you little creep. A man has the right to
dance in an alley if he pleases. I'm an officer by the way.
Car: Oh yeah? Officer twinkle toes?
Sal: No. creep. I'm Sal malone. this is my buddy Tim Allen. We
catch Creeps like you.
Just then Valentine walked up to reason with Sal.
He grabbed Carl by the neck. Come on Carl.. Officer Sal go jump
rope.
Sal; Ah. So you're Valintine's boy huh? he's a druggy you creep.
Tim Allen: creeps.
Val: Sal i was charged without proof. I'm a business man. you
should know we were partners.
Sal; No sir you're a creep.
a man walked between them.
Rasta man: Hey guys can't we just get along.
Sal: Go run through the jasmin's you hippie creep.
Rasta mam: Oh be quiet Sal, Go make movies about pizza with Tim
Allen.
Tim: Hey at least we don't fall asleep during big school events
and end up on the news.
A mexican walked by them ,and then an aussie.
The aussie man: Hey guy's stop arguing.
Rasta man: Go write a book.
Sal: Yeah creep go write a story. we got real issues here.
The Mexican: hey we're supposed to be friends here.
Sal: hey! creep go worry about California!
Rasta man: Yeah man they got soul there go wonder and talk about
football you crazy guy.
Aussie: yeah uhh what they said ..you uhh Californian soul guy
you.
Valentine ended the madness and everyone made up.
Sal; Rasta ,Aussie we could use guys like you two to catch
creeps like Carl here.
Rasta: Yeah i can do that.
Aussie: i'll roll with u guys.
A car rolls up Valentine yells hey! it's Og Luke and his boys!
haha the ending was just some fun now the story will be serious
after this. just want to say i lov you guys and im glad i have
you all here. ;) just some shout outs to you all.
#Post#: 9939--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: June 23, 2015, 9:08 pm
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Mr. it's Fantastic! Hey he said it was okay to call you that
bro.
Cali, you're a really cool writer letting the cast have some
fun, and valentine solido, while a very dangerous person he is,
a someone you do not turn down an invite to party with is a
terrible dancer.
Too long aye papa mikey, put spaghetti with the meatballs and
stir around.
#Post#: 9941--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: Wetbizket Date: June 24, 2015, 2:26 pm
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It took my brain a minute to process but I figured it out. You
had me rolling when Sal Malone and Tim Allen came in and started
the Creep fest!
I remember the days when I would come home from work, sit down,
relax and spend my time reading stories on here. Good tymes!
Twinkle Toes
#Post#: 9956--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: July 28, 2015, 1:52 pm
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Is this still a thang cali?
#Post#: 9962--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: August 5, 2015, 2:17 am
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Yes. wrote a new chapter but had to leave no time to save it.
#Post#: 9963--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: August 5, 2015, 9:46 pm
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That sux bro :(
#Post#: 9964--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: August 6, 2015, 2:32 am
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busy tomorrow so maybe sunday or monday a new chapter
#Post#: 9965--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: Wetbizket Date: August 6, 2015, 5:33 pm
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Duuuuuude! I cant wait bro! 8)
#Post#: 9968--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: OGDaboss Date: August 22, 2015, 4:12 pm
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In morgan freeman's voice
And we be putting shit off like a muthafucker i know.
I'm fixing to spread havoc on these forums if somebody dont
write
#Post#: 9980--------------------------------------------------
Re: It's been a long time coming.
By: cali soul Date: August 25, 2015, 10:00 am
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uke going crazy gone crazy lol.
Angelo lights a cig.
Angelo: People are tripping ese.
Vincent: Always homeboy.
Angelo: Thinking about joining the gang homie.
Vincent: I'm quitting ese. Giving my life to Christ. Getting my
G.E.D.
Angelo: Cool ese. I wanted to do that too.
Vincent: You'd probably just steal your G.E.D
Angelo: What?!
Vincent walked off and danced as angelo cussed him out in
spanish.
Angelo: Hey! don't you dance off this ain't dance off revolution
ese..Hey i'm cussing at you!
Angelo got hit with a brick.
Victor: Shut up!
Hector: Victor don't be late tonight.
Victior: Aye ese watch iot i ain't taking jive from you. I
survived a gang of drive bys you sour cat turkey.
*Slap*
Hector: Oh you aren't? you over sized pile of corn stock. I got
you in this gang i'll take you out you ain't well known like
that to me you cold cat cap buster. *drags victor to the corn
field by his hair*
Victor: ahhh nooo ahhh noo not the corn. *gewts tossed in the
corn field*
Hector: I don't do back sass. I got capos and you're just my
soldier. (This was before Victor became a high ranking member of
carnales)
Capone: Hector is Angelo going to join?
Hector: Yes. Vinny gave his life to Christ. I can't get mad at
that. I respect that. Angelo is my new number two.
Joker: Ese they're cuatro(Four) caruchas(cars) deep.
Hector: Who?!
Capone: The Vice tontas(slang meaning stupid girls)
Hector: Those roaches are gonna get smoked.
Hector walked off with his two capos to the fight. He loaded up
his guns ,and took off.
To his surprise no one was there.
Hector: what? where are they?
Capone: You fool we are going to take over this gang you're
just a poor dead fool.
Joker: ha ha you're caca washed up little punk.
*Bang ...Bang*
Hector: huh? Victor?! Angelo?!
Angelo: necesitas ayuda? (need help?)
Victor: Pedazo de caca. (piece of crap)
Hector punched Victor.
My dumb new capo you are.
Angwlo my number two.
let's go to shop i need a new suit.
later on at Ultor clothing shop.
Valentine: This is half price.
Oldman: Don't tell me how to shop! punk.
Valentine: Sheesh ha ha.
random man: Hey dude..hook a guy up with a goods price ..gimme
these five things 25 dollars.
Oldmsn: punk don't tell him how to run his store..hoodlum punk!
Random man: Old dude shut up.
Ol;dman kicks the guy and tackles him.
You young punks you think you're slick! i'll lay you out you
little jerk.
Val: woah..woah. *grabs old man*
Young guy: I'm cornflow the thug son don't get ran up on old
dude. i'm a florence street crip.
Old man: Shut up corn flake..i'm a 38th street gun slinger that
don't take your young punk spit you slimy little douche bag.
V grabbed the young guy and took him out back..Arturo grabbed
the old man and took him out front.
Val: that olds guy is a vet he'll blow your whole cornflake
cereal click down little man. leave or i'll get my security to
escort you home.
Cornflow: buster little punk sons a guns ..i'll be back.
Meanwhile out front.
Arturo: Old guy that little young guy has a gang of killers on
his side.
Oldman rivers: i got a revolver.*pulls it out*
Arturo takes the gun. you need Jesus..go get some air mr.rivers.
Just then a car rolled up.
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