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Re: A REAL APOCALYPSE: EXTINCTION!
By: Yossi Date: March 26, 2014, 3:26 pm
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CHAPTER 4:
*YOSSI opens his eyes slowly. It is morning.*
Yossi: Ugh... Liz?
*YOSSI looks around. LIZ isn't in the back room. YOSSI looks
under the door leading into the main shop. The sunlight is
shining underneath the door. YOSSI gets onto his feet and opens
the door leading to the main shop. LIZ is looking out of the
window.*
Yossi: Liz?
Liz: Oh, morning.
Yossi: Are you okay?
Liz: Yeah, I'm just having a bad morning. I still feel guilty
about Noah.
Yossi: It's not your fault.
*YOSSI rubs the back of his head and approaches LIZ. LIZ turns
around and looks at YOSSI.*
Liz: Do you think we'll find the others now?
Yossi: I don't know. The main thing is that they're still alive
though.
Liz: Yeah, that gives us a little chance.
Yossi: Exactly. I'm going to go and find some supplies. Maybe
there's some food in the boxes in the stock room.
Liz: I doubt there will be anything in there. It's worth a try
though.
*YOSSI goes into the stock room. He steps over NOAH's corpse and
searches the boxes.*
Yossi: Empty! Empty... and Empty again!
Liz: Find anything?
Yossi: No...
*YOSSI opens the last box and finds a can of food.*
Yossi: Oh wait.
Liz: What is it?
Yossi: I've found some food.
Liz: Really?
*LIZ rushes into the stock room and approaches YOSSI. YOSSI
opens the can and see's that the food is safe to eat. It is
peaches.*
Yossi: I didn't expect to find anything back here.
*YOSSI eats some of the peaches. LIZ takes some peaches too.*
Yossi: I don't really like peaches.
Liz: Haha.
Yossi: We should probably head off soon.
Liz: Yeah. Where should we start looking first?
Yossi: I dunno... we could always go back to Doo Peas and work
from there?
Liz: Sounds good.
*The sound of a car can be heard from outside. It parks up
outside of the gas station.*
Yossi: Who is that?
Liz: I don't know.
Yossi: Take a peek!
*LIZ peeks around the door and see's that it is one of the guys
who was with the old man who shot NOAH.*
Liz: I think it's that guy who shot Noah!
Yossi: Are you serious?
Liz: He has sunglasses on anyway.
Yossi: Dammit... what now?
Liz: I'll look again.
*LIZ looks around the door again. The guy gets out of his car
and slides his sunglasses up onto his head. He approaches the
door of the station.*
Liz: He's coming in here!
Yossi: We need to hide, he seems like bad news.
Liz: Okay... I'll get into this cupboard.
Yossi: Where am I supposed to hide?
Liz: Um... Hide outside. In the alley!
Yossi: Good thinking. Quick get in the cupboard!
*YOSSI exits into the alley closing the door behind him. LIZ
gets into the cupboard. The guy with the sunglasses enters.*
Filan: Hmm... scene of the crime!
*FILAN goes over to the counter and looks into the stock room.*
Filan: Ah! There you are!
*FILAN jumps over the counter and heads into the stock room. LIZ
can see through the crack in the door and see's FILAN's face.
FILAN goes over to the body and kicks it.*
Filan: Guess you didn't make it. That'll teach you to run away
from us.
*FILAN's walkie-talkie goes off. FILAN picks it up and answers
it.*
Filan: Filan here!
Henry: Where the fuck are you?
Filan: I'm down at the gas station.
Henry: Did he come back then?
Filan: No.
Henry: And what about the kid?
Filan: He's dead.
Henry: Shit.
Filan: What's the matter?
Henry: He wasn't part of our colony, we could have recruited
them.
*LIZ looks shocked but continues to watch FILAN.*
Filan: What? TSM told me they were apart of our colony.
Henry: He what? I told him directly who we were after.
Filan: Well why did you shoot at them if you knew that they
weren't part of our colony?
Henry: They were stealing our stuff. Either way, it was TSM who
should have been looking after them.
Filan: Have you found him yet?
Henry: No, he's fucked off. I'm at that house that he was at
before but he's not there. But...
Filan: But what?
Henry: I did find a nice young girl there, pretty cute, big
tits.
Filan: Nice, is she a blonde?
Henry: Oh yeah.
Liz: GIA!
*FILAN turns around and opens up the cupboard door. LIZ with
speed rushes out and grabs the gun that is in FILAN's pocket.
She points the gun at FILAN.*
Filan: Woah lady! Don't do this.
Liz: You were on about my friend! She better not be harmed.
Filan: She won't be harmed. We offer peace.
Liz: Liar! Your group shot my friend here.
Filan: It's not what you think. They stole our supplies.
Liz: Are you sure about that? You sure your friend didn't just
let them take it.
Filan: No, don't be stupid.
Liz: Well where is he now, eh? He's run off.
Filan: Look, I don't mean no harm. I didn't want to shoot him.
Liz: But you did shoot at him, so did your friend Henry- the old
guy.
Filan: Look, just give me the gun and we can talk about this.
Liz: No. And tell me what this colony thing is... who are you
looking for?
Filan: We're looking for 2 men and 1 woman who've escaped our
colony. Well, we say it's a colony but it's a group of 8 of us.
Liz: Oh yeah, who are these men? And who is this woman?
Filan: Why do you want to know?
Liz: Just tell me.
Filan: No.
Liz: Fine. What happened to my other friend? The one who was
with him?
Filan: He ran out the back... I tried to keep up with him but he
was fast.
Liz: And have you seen another couple of guys?
Filan: A black guy and a hillbilly with a hat?
Liz: He's not a hillbilly you fucker.
Filan: I might have seen them.
Liz: Where?
Filan: Near the lighthouse near our group's location?
Liz: Thanks for the information.
*LIZ lowers the gun.*
Liz: Now, get back in that car and fuck off!
Filan: Whatever you say! I need to pick my walkie-talkie up
though first.
Liz: Fine. Go on.
*FILAN picks the walkie-talkie off of the floor. LIZ looks at
the door where YOSSI is hiding behind. FILAN makes a move for
the gun though but is shot by LIZ. FILAN falls to the ground in
pain.*
Filan: Fuck!
Liz: You tried to nick this gun! You were going to kill me.
Filan: Fuck you, you cunt!
Liz: Justice prevails. I'm glad TSM betrayed you as well, you
know how we feel.
Filan: Go to hell you bitch! Your blonde friend back at that
house will be dead soon... you mark my words. She'll be dead!
*LIZ pulls the trigger once more. FILAN gets a bullet to the
head. FILAN is dead. YOSSI rushes in after hearing the
gunshots.*
Liz: Oh...my...god.
Yossi: Liz! What have you done?
*YOSSI takes the gun off of Liz. LIZ bursts out in tears and
falls to the floor. YOSSI crouches down and comforts LIZ.*
Liz: I can't believe that I've killed him.
Yossi: What happened?
Liz: He told me that they have Gia at the house.
Yossi: Great.
Liz: Luther and Wetbizket are still alive too.
Yossi: They are, that's great.
Liz: We need to get... back to the house now.
Yossi: Gia's in trouble. We'll set off now.
*YOSSI comforts LIZ and helps her up onto her feet. LIZ takes
the gun from YOSSI. YOSSI and LIZ exit the gas station.*
*YOSSI and LIZ approach the house. They can see that GIA is in
the house. HENRY is also sat down on the sofa.*
Yossi: She's right there.
Liz: He's tied her up.
Yossi: What are we going to do?
Liz: Well... he's expecting Filan to come back, right?
Yossi: Yeah.
Liz: You could pretend to be Filan and go around the front and
enter the house. That'll distract him and I can go in through
the back and rescue Gia.
Yossi: Hmm, good plan.
Liz: You have got to put on a persuasive voice though.
Yossi: I don't even know what he sounded like.
Liz: Deep but... sort of... scratchy?
Yossi: I guess I could give it a go.
Liz: It's better than doing nothing, right?
Yossi: Right. I'll see you when we're out of there.
Liz: Good.
*YOSSI and LIZ get into position.*
*YOSSI approaches the front door and knocks on it.*
Henry: Filan? That you? Why are you knocking on the fucking door
just come in here.
Yossi: Um... *Puts on a Filan impression.* Just testing the
door. I need your help out here man.
Henry: What is it?
Yossi: I've found this guy that'll help us find TSM and the
others.
Henry: Hmm... okay then.
*HENRY approaches the front door. On the other side YOSSI hides
at the side, just out of view. HENRY opens the door.*
Henry: Where the fuck is he?
*YOSSI spins around the door and grabs HENRY, he punches him and
throws him into the garden.*
Yossi: Come on you arsehole!
Henry: Bad idea.
*YOSSI and HENRY get into a fight. YOSSI starts to win but is
knocked down by a pistol-whip. HENRY then ushers YOSSI to get on
his feet and go into the house.*
Henry: Ha, think you could fucking take me, eh?
Yossi: Fuck you!
Henry: Get inside now. GO ON!
*YOSSI is escorted into the living room and sat down on the
sofa.*
Henry: Where the fuck has she gone?
*HENRY rushes into the kitchen.*
Yossi: Fuck sake... this is not how I planned it.
*HENRY then re-enters with a still-tied up GIA and LIZ.*
Henry: So, you thought you could just come in here and take this
chick away from me, huh?
Yossi: Yeah.
Henry: Shut the fuck up! I want them to come here right now.
Tell them to come out and surrender to me!
Yossi: What are you on about?
Henry: You were the guys who killed Filan, I heard it over the
walkie-talkie, bad move.
Yossi: What are you going to do then?
Henry: I should kill you, but I know that you're working with
the people who escaped my group.
Yossi: We don't even know them.
Henry: Liars!
*HENRY paces up and down still holding the gun. YOSSI, GIA and
LIZ are sat on the sofa looking at the man with the gun. GIA
tries to speak but her mouth is sealed up.*
Gia: Mmm...
Liz: What was that?
Gia: MMM!!!!!!!!!
Henry: Shut the fuck up! Tell them to get out here now and
surrender to me.
*The ground shakes.*
Henry: What the fuck was that?
Liz: Oh no...
Yossi: What?
Liz: It's... It's... Colossus!
*The giant 18 foot zombie walks down the street looking for
targets. He is walking at usual human pace. This zombie is fully
aware of everything, much like a human in fact.*
Henry: What in the...
Liz: We need to get out of here. Now.
Yossi: You need to untie her.
Henry: No! Don't tell me what to do.
Liz: Just do it.
Henry: Shut the fuck up!
*HENRY rushes over and unties GIA. COLOSSUS however notice the
action happening in the house and charges at the house.*
Henry: Shit!
Gia: Run!
*YOSSI, GIA, LIZ and HENRY run out of the back door as COLOSSUS
breaks into the house.*
*15 MINUTES LATER.*
Yossi: He's still on our arses.
Henry: Just keep running!
Gia: We need to get to somewhere safe.
Liz: Let's get to the fire station near the chemist? That's
safe, right?
*COLOSSUS is gaining on them.*
Gia: Fuck!
Henry: I am not dying today.
*The group heads down a short alley leading onto West Brook
Avenue. COLOSSUS is right on their tails though. They pull onto
West Brook Avenue. COLOSSUS is right behind them.*
Gia: We're dead!
Liz: Don't lose hope.
*A figure of a person is seen at the end of the street. The
group head across the road and hide in the supermarket. The
figure has a machine gun and shoots at the oncoming COLOSSUS.
COLOSSUS stops chasing the group and follows the figure. The
figure looks an awful lot like someone Yossi previously knew.
The figure leads COLOSSUS away from the group.*
Gia: He's leaving!
Liz: Yes.
Henry: Thank fuck for that. He nearly had me.
Yossi: That guy looked awfully familiar who led him away.
*LIZ then gets out her gun and points it to HENRY'S head.*
Henry: What the...
Liz: Now we're out of danger, it's time to take you hostage.
Henry: You can't do this.
Liz: Just watch me!
Gia: Liz... you're not normally like this. I like this new side
to you.
Liz: Yeah well, you have to do this sort of stuff if needs be.
Henry: Just because you've got a gun doesn't give you automatic
power.
Liz: You're right, however, I've got 2 more allies here, you're
alone.
Henry: Ugh... fine... we need to get to that fire station now
though.
Liz: Fine, let's go.
*LIZ escorts HENRY at gun point as YOSSI and GIA follow. They
leave and walk over to the fire station.*
*They enter the fire station. LIZ escorts HENRY to one of the
offices. GIA and YOSSI barricade the entrance up.*
Yossi: So, where have you been since?
Gia: I'm surprised your worried about me.
Yossi: Why would you say that?
Gia: I was a real bitch to you before leaving. That's why.
Yossi: I don't hold rivalries, unless there's a special reason.
Your fine with me though.
Gia: Good, I wanted to apologize, I guess I was so angry though
that it took over my feelings.
Yossi: Anyway, back to the question, what happened?
Gia: Well...
*GIA and YOSSI sit down on a couple of chairs.*
Gia: Me and Darius came back to the chemist to find it empty.
Then we decided to check the area. We found some supplies at an
old truck so we took them. Then after that, the old bastard and
his crone came after us. Me and Darius split up. I got away from
them but they went after Darius. I heard that TSM was working
with them, I saw him follow the lot of them down to that gas
station but I had to run fast. I guess Henry caught up with me
and took me hostage for stealing his supplies. He thought that
we were working with some people who left his group too.
Yossi: I heard about that. You won't know about Noah then.
Gia: What?
Yossi: Henry shot him dead.
Gia: No... that bastard!
Yossi: I know, it's horrifying.
Gia: Well, he isn't going to be alive much longer. Not unless
his buddies come for him and I have a feeling that they won't.
Yossi: We need to find Darius, Luther and Wetbizket still.
Gia: There's no point going to look for them in town. The place
is too big.
Yossi: I'm sure we'll make a plan.
Gia: Yeah...
*Gunshots can be heard from the office area.*
Gia: What in the...
Yossi: Liz!
*GIA and YOSSI rush over to the office and open the door.*
Yossi: Oh god...
*GIA and YOSSI stare in awe at the fallen survivor and look at
the survivor holding the gun.*
*END OF CHAPTER 4.*
Hope you enjoyed that!!!!!!
#Post#: 9671--------------------------------------------------
Re: A REAL APOCALYPSE: EXTINCTION!
By: Yossi Date: April 5, 2014, 3:32 am
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Hmm I have an idea to write a Sci-Fi Space Fantasy story.
Would anybody be interested in reading it though?
Plus do you think I should make it interactive so that you guys
can shape the story with me? If you get me, like at the end of
the chapter you decide what the character should do?
Feedback?
#Post#: 9673--------------------------------------------------
Re: A REAL APOCALYPSE: EXTINCTION!
By: Wetbizket Date: April 5, 2014, 3:23 pm
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:o You outdo yourself on every chapter mate! It seems like the
situation get worse and worse for the gang, that cant catch a
break lol! :D
Lol, you know what Yossi, I was actually thinking of doing
something like that, its been a while since anyone has done
anything like a create a character for the story or choose your
adventure story, I'm totally down for that!
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