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Tales from the crypt.
By: cali soul Date: July 11, 2013, 2:02 am
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1989 Green Hill California, Migoo Manor. Bost Street.
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The radio was playing.
Bentley Williams: Charles, Nice to see you.
Charles Migoo: Rather odd seeing you here.
Bentley: Well i see you still have the charming attitude. What's
that?
Charles: This? Why this is an envelope. It contains something
rare, A golden letter.
Bentley: What makes it so golden?
Charles: Can't say. It's a secret.
Bentley: A bit old for secrets aren't we? Besides i wouldn't
tell anyone.
Charles: Oh, Alright. It's not like you're going to see tomorrow
anyways.
Bentley: What do you mean?
Charles: This is the deed to your Manor Mr.Williams. It is
rightfully mine now. You are on my property.
Bentley: How? Why? The Migoo family has owned this property
since the 1800's! Your father was taken care of by my uncle
Perry Migoo.
Charles: I'm a Migoo Mr. Williams. My father was your uncle.
See i had to hide who i was so i could get it from you.
Bentley: Charles you could have just told me i'd give you the
manor.
Charles: Too late. I'... what was that?
Bentley: What?
Charles: This is your idea of a trick? Well sir ,you will not
get me. -pulls out his revolver-
Bentley: Now Charlie calm down. Who is that? The door made a
creek noise.
Charles: Shut up! It's your people. -cocks gun-
Bentley: No, It's not. -pulls out his gun- Charles that's not my
people.
Charles: Fuck you die!
Three gun shots went off ,and Two bodies dropped.
The radio played loudly.
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Three days later.
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-Phone rings-
Daniel Mac: Hello.
Chief Baker: Get your ass up Mac. We need you on this case,
These idiots don' know a thing.
Daniel: Is it that bad?
Chief Baker: Three days and not one damn clue.
Daniel: Alright. Damn rookies. Give me 25 i'll be there.
-hands up the phone-
Woo shot to the heart ,and you're to blame -makes guitar sounds-
i love this song said Daniel as he sang.
Daniel got dressed ,grabbed a cup of coffee and was on his way.
At the scene of the crime.
Yolanda Garcia: Finally a real detective. Hello Mr.Mac nice to
meet you.
Daniel: Hello, Beautiful. Nice to meet such a lovely young lady
like yourself as well.
Yolanda: You're sweet doll ,but i'm married. We got a job here.
Daniel: Oh, So she's one of those chicks.
Oscar Ralph: Yeah, She's my wife. So back off buddy or i'll put
you in the dirt.
-Daniel punched Oscar in the face-
Daniel: Well i guess she's one of those ladies that like
small,big mouth,nerds.
The rest of the guys laughed.
Daniel: Alright people clear the area let a real detective
through. I got to make a few calls.
Yolanda: Call later. Look at this, A bullet soaked in clorox.
Daniel: Prison style. That's really odd. Any witnesses?
Yolanda: One maid saw then ran to call the cops before the
gunshots went off.
Daniel: Damn. Hmm, That's very odd.
Yolanda: What?
Daniel: So three shots went off? Both victims and guns, but
neither one's gun fired.
Yolanda: What?! Really?
Daniel: Yeah ,both hold the maximum amount of bullets each gun
holds. Charles gun has one in the chamber,and Bentley's isn't
even cocked.
Yolanda: Wow. We should call the Chief.
Daniel: Okay, I'll have my team here in 20 mins.
Daniel called up his crew ,and had them come check the scene out
with him.
Just as Daniel was about to leave the room he noticed someone.
Daniel: Yolanda get out of here get your team outside now. My
people will be here in a few they are closer then i thought.
Yolanda: Why so shaken up?
Daniel: Just get out of the house. I know who shot them. Go ,
You're in danger here.
-she left and waited with her husband until Danny's friends
arrived.
Yolanda: Are you Dan's crew?
Joey Ave: Yes,we are. Where is Dan?
Yolanda : Idk in there he said he knew what happend ,and who it
was . Said we are in danger and took off.
Zack: Shit, That means one thing.
Tasha: Well there goes our night.
Bill: Okay i'll go in and find him. Tommy ,Chuck come with me.
Joey: We'll stay and guard these two ,and their crew.
Mean while in the manor...
Daniel chased a figure through the house.
Danel: i got you now... Argh shit.
He checked everywhere ... You piece of shit.
Daniel sw it again and ran after it. It lead him through hsall
way to hal way..stair case to staircase.
Finally he waled into the end of the house, a dark hallway.
Daniel: a room..light!
He ran to it .... YOU! I KNEW IT! OH SHIT!
-five gunshots went off-
Yolanda: what was that?!
#Post#: 9178--------------------------------------------------
Re: Tales from the crypt.
By: Wetbizket Date: July 12, 2013, 6:04 pm
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:o Mind blown!!!
Not MR. Migoo!
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Damn Cali, WHO DUN IT!!! You cant leave me hanging like lol!
This is awesome, I cant wait for more, also the music was
awesome, I'm gonna have the supremes stuck in my head all day
because they used to play that song on the radio at work all the
time lol! :P
#Post#: 9180--------------------------------------------------
Re: Tales from the crypt.
By: cali soul Date: July 13, 2013, 5:58 pm
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haha.. thanks bro. Yeah that song was stuck i my head a while.
i was gonna make the story take place in the 1950's ,but alt
of the songs i'm going to use are from later on lol. mr magoo
lol.
Yolanda: We have to find him he's in trouble maybe.
Zack: He can handle himself, Don't trip.
Tasha: Yeah, He can make a piece of metal shake,rattle ,and
roll.
Yolanda: I just hope Bill finds him.
In the Manor.
Bill: Man Dan made a huge mess in here.
Tommy:Let's play some music.
-Cuts the radio on-
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Bill: Oh, This is my jam.
Chuck: Yeah, i used to get alot of action off this joint.
All three of them sang to the radio.
Afffftter noon deliiigghhttt!
Tommy: Good stuff.
Oh shit! Guys look at this! Chuck yelled!
Bill: Shit shit shit shit.
Tommy ,and chuck carried the dead body out to the garage.
Tasha: O.. My god.
Everyone cried.
Back at the head Quarters.
Chief: Don't you worry motha fuckas! I got my best guy on the
case ,and his team.
News paper people: Pssh you can't whipe your own ass.
Chief: Fuck you say? i... -phone rings-
Hold on.
Chief: Hello?
Zack: He's gone.
Chief: What, who?
Zack: Danny he's dead.
Chief: What! -hangs up the phone-
The chief went wild and beat up the whole station including the
news people.
He broke down,and cried.
How?! How could a man who scared bullets to death die? -The
chief fell down and cried-
Back at the crime scene.
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Yolanda: H.. H.... He was so young. Tears fell from her eyes.
Tasha: He was my brother.
Yolanda: I'm sorry. He seemed like a good person. Wise.
Tasha: He was. When we were kids he saved my life. Some gang
members were going to shoot me for wearing a blue bandanna in
their turf. Danny took them on with a stick. Told me to run. He
came home beaten up bad but he got alot of respect from it. No
one messed with us after that.
Yolanda: Brave man. Is that that rapper tupac? Playing on the
radio.
Tasha: Yes, Danny loved tupac. So i played it. It was his fav
song. See he had a wife ,and this reminded him of that.
Yolanda: What happened? May i ask?
Tasha: Well, He met this young Asian girl in high school. They
hung out every day throughout the years. They fell in love
,after college Dan proposed. They both studied to be Doctors.
Two years later they had a kid, a little girl. Danny was out
taking care of a friend while His wife Tory was at the park with
the baby.
Two groups of people showed up started arguing, Tory grabbed
the baby and left. Those two people started shooting, the
bullets bounced. Her and the baby took one through the chest
both died instantly.
Dan was never the same. He wanted to be a cop since then.
Devoted his life to finding out who was the criminal. Did his
research found the murderers and beat them down called the cops.
Was a crazy time. Over ten years back.
Yolanda: Oh my god.
Tasha: Yeah h...
Hey you two come see this now!
They ran to Billy.
Yolanda: What Bill?
Bill: Chuck found a taoe in the room Dan was murdered in. A
camera was on. His death is on tape.
Bill popped the tape in.
Daniel: So you wnt to explain to me hat's going on?
Unknown person: Wel, I figured you'd be here.
Daniel: was it you? Did you kill them?
Unknown: Yes.
Dan: I knew it. Why? Why lie and hide all these years?
Unknown: Well, I just wanted more. I'm sorry.
Dan: Well, let's go.
Unknown: No, -shoots Daniel- -shoots the
camera screen-
Chuck: Th... That was ...... to be conituned
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