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Re: Challenges
By: Aussie Boy Date: June 18, 2013, 12:14 am
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Thanks for the comments guys, I feel this is the best story I've
ever written by myself. And I totally agree we've all improved
our writing so much over these past years. I never expected to
be here, when I first joined the Saints Row Forum. I mean on a
brand new site, still with some of the people that were around
when I first joined. Oh and I agree just us three would have
over a 100 stories, add in Cali, G4 and we'd have cover 150,
close to 200 maybe. I do miss some of the old guys though.
Yoyopop, Zerthon, Deadly Saint and others
Anyways read and enjoy.
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23rd February 2013
James, Oliver, Allan, Ryan and Jesse walked into the crowded
warehouse in East Hook and looked around because Martin said he
had a spot reserved for James and his guests due to James's
previous fights that made Martin a lot of money and has the
prospects of making him a lot more money.
..."Up there" The Door man said while pointing to the roof of an
office along the southern wall.
..."Thanks' James said with a nod and the group walked over to
it and climbed a set of portable stairs to the top of the office
where they found an old set of garden furniture and some folding
chairs.
Allan placed the cooler full of beer next to the small round
table and Jesse put a box of packets of chips and biscuits on
top of the table and they started grabbing chairs and setting
them up as people still funneled through the front door. At the
back of warehouse was a caravan which Martin now used as his
office and the paramedic was set up out front of it so Martin
could pay his fighters as they visited to Paramedic after their
fight (Something which Martin encouraged, as he didn't want his
fighters hurt, because he would lose money).
..."Yeah, yeah we're on top of an old office, you can't miss us,
we're all in Flannel Shirts and Hoodies" Allan said while
talking on his phone.
..."Because it's cold that's why" He said.
..."Alright see you in a bit" Allan said and hung up his phone.
..."Okay boys. My Girlfriend Samantha and Jesse's Girlfriend
Amanda are on their way, they're bring a few friends, Laura,
Tami, and Maggie, apparently all three are hot and easy" Allan
explained.
..."Sounds like my ex wife" Oliver said jokingly.
..."Speaking of her, how are things between you and Gail?" Ryan
asked Oliver.
..."I haven't talk to her since the divorce was finalized, best
four months of my life, and the judge still won't let me see my
daughter" Oliver explained.
..."How old is your daughter?" James asked not knowing any of
this.
..."2 Years, and 4 Months" Oliver said.
..."I see" James said with a nod.
..."Hey Allan" Samantha said as she lead her group of friends
onto the office roof. Allan and Samantha embraced and kissed.
..."Girls, the mug wearing glasses is Ryan, the guy with the
scar on his cheek is James and the guy wearing the Hood is
Oliver, Amanda's boyfried is Jesse and I'm Allan" Allan
introduced everybody.
..."Ladies and Gentlemen, boys and girls, children of all ages.
I am proud to bring you the first fight of the evening, it will
be contested between two fighters, with standard rules applying.
Introducing First... Weighing in at 199 Pounds and standing at 5
feet and 11 inches. He hails from Willis... Loooooorrrd Mike!
... and his competitor... Weighing in at 249 Pounds and standing
at 5 feet and 10 Inches. He hails from South Slopes...
Slaminator!" Jackson introduced the fighters.
James watched this fight carefully because he was suppose to
fight the least injured out of these two, next time he fights.
Tami grabbed a chair and dragged it over next to James and sat
down. She looked at James who didn't even realize she was there,
he was watching Lord Mike strike at Slaminators shoulder.
..."Hey, whats got you so intrigued in this fight?" Tami asked.
James turned and looked at her.
..."I have to fight the winner of this fight next week" James
explained.
..."So you're a fighter too?" Tami asked.
..."Yeah" James said without drawing his attention away from the
fight.
..."What's your name?" Tami asked.
..."James" James said.
..."No I meant your fighting name?" Tami asked.
..."The Celtic Cowboy" James answered.
Tami was determined to talk to James and decided to talk to him
about the fight until it was over.
..."So what are you looking for exactly?" She asked.
..."There strategies, see most of us, including Slaminator,
strike and kick at the head and torso, trying to knock our
opponent out and knock the wind out of them. But Lord Mike is
working over Slaminators shoulder" James explained.
..."Well if his name is Slaminator then maybe weakening his arm
will stop his slams and make him an easier target" Tami guessed.
James looked at her and nodded... "I didn't think of that, I was
thinking he might be picking a spot for a submission" James
explained and kept both theories in his head while he watched
the two battle it out in an entertaining fight, that was more
like a chess game than a slug fest like James was used to
having.
Tami and James sat quietly together and watched as Lord Mike
finally won the 11 Fight with a kick to knee, a left and a right
to either side of his rip cage and then a kick that resembled a
roundhouse kick to the side of Slaminators face, which knocked
him out cold.
..."Alright now we can talk" James said as Jackson announced
Lord Mike as the winner by Knockout.
The Night carried on and before the Main Event of the night, the
official attendance was 689 people, James and Tami were still
sitting in their folding chairs next to each other, but now a
few empty potato chip packets were underneath their seats as
well as a lot of empty beer bottles.
Allan and Samantha had left in a taxi at that point and Jesse
was being nagged by Amanda that she also wanted to leave.
The Main event lasted 22 minutes and ended when Maniac made Big
Bad submit and increased his winning streak. As soon as Maniac
was declared the winner, Jesse and Amanda left and took Jesse's
Huntley sport which left James, Oliver, Ryan, Tami, Maggie and
Laura to take Laura's Burrito van home. The Van was Laura's ex
boyfriends, it had a waterbed and stereo in the back as wall as
fur on in the interior walls and the outside was painted and
modified to look like the A-Teams van.
The drunk group clambered in the van and the sober Laura got in
the driver seat and the started the van and quickly drove away
as the crowd started to exit the warehouse in droves as all the
fighting was finished.
..."Where am I taking all of you?"
..."Maggie's coming to my apartment with me" Oliver said while
holding Maggie in a hug on the waterbed.
..."Where is that?" Laura asked
..."Just drop us at the Steinway beer Garden" Oliver shouted.
Laura drove the van up to Steinway and parked outside the
Steinway Beer Garden and James opened the door to let Maggie and
Oliver out as he was the closest to the door.
..."I'm going to Brownstones, just north of the Arts College"
Ryan stated.
..."No, you're staying with me tonight" Laura demanded.
..."Ah, yeah, okay" Ryan said, a bit surprised by Laura.
..."So I guess me and you are going to your place?" James asked
Tami as he was about to close the van door. She suddenly changed
her mind about wanting to sleep with James after pursuing him
all night and pushed him out the van. He hit the edge of the
footpath and fell min the gutter, Tami closed to the door and
ordered Laura to drive away.
James got up out of the gutter and dusted himself off and
watched as the van drove away and wondered what he did wrong and
why Tami did that. He looked for Oliver and Maggie, but they
were already walking away. He shrugged and walked int the beer
garden and sat at one of the tables outside and went to sleep
right there.
24th February 2013
..."Hey. James. Wake up" Mickey the Irish Accented Bar Tender
said as he shook James.
..."Huh? Wha?" James mumbled as he woke up and looked around the
beer garden the bright Sunday sun had it almost glowing.
..."You've been asleep here for 12 Hours" Mickey said.
..."Jesus what time is it?" James asked with a yawn and a snort.
..."Past Noon boyo, come on, get up and go and get some lunch"
Mickey said ad helped James to his feet.
James stumbled a little as he walked and then walked over to the
tap around the side of the bar and began drinking the water from
it using his hands as a cup. He turned the tap off and got to
his feet, his fringe and face dripping wet. He breathed deeply
and let the water from his face drip onto his chest and then
shook his head from side to side. James walked out of the beer
garden and immediately ran into Oliver who had come looking for
James after Mickey rang him and told him where James was.
..."How you feeling?" Oliver asked.
..."I keep forgetting I'm not a teenager, I can't just sleep it
off and be fine the next day" James said with a grin.
..."Yeah, it's a bitch getting old huh?" Oliver said to the 23
year old James jokingly.
..."Sure is" James said.
..."I'm going to the Creek Street Diner in BOABO, you coming?"
Oliver asked.
..."Yeah" James said as he yawned again.
..."Alright, Jesse is going to rescue Ryan and they're going to
meet us there, I don't think Jesse will be to happy either"
Oliver said as they walked.
..."Why Not?" James asked.
..."He split up with his woman last night" Oliver stated.
..."Ah. That sucks" James said.
..."That's life" Oliver said.
They walked down from Steinway, into East Island City and down
further, across the old train tracks and into the small diner,
that Oliver was apparently a regular to, as the staff knew him
by name. James and Oliver sat down at a vacant booth and both
ordered a large serving of Bacon and Eggs to help with the hang
overs.
..."So, how was that Maggie chick, you took home?" James asked
as they waited for their lunch.
..."Man... Best fuck I've ever had" Oliver stated happily...
"How about Tami, how'd you go?" Oliver asked.
..."She pushed me out of the van and then they took off" James
stated
..."Man, fucking women" Oliver stated while chuckling.
..."You're telling me, she hung out with me all night and then
does that" James said while playing with his knife and fork.
..."Well anyway, yeah. Maggie, she just, a head cheerleaders
body and about as loud as one-" Oliver was cut off by James
staring straight past him wide eyed.
..."Gun" James said simply. Oliver pulled his pistol out of his
belt and turned around as three men with pistol standing by the
door fired at James and Oliver. A bullet went straight into
Oliver's left shoulder and then a second one went into the left
side of his head and exited just below hi right ear and the a
third went in the left side of his neck and exited the right
side, he fell onto the table and dropped his gun and James slid
to the floor.
..."Check the other one" One of the shooters ordered.
James knew he had to act quickly otherwise he was going to die
as well, with even considering the dangers, he cut the wound
just below he hairline that was only half healed. He gouged at
it with the knife and then punched himself and the head several
times and then stopped breathing and blinking and stared
directly at another customer cowering underneath the table.
The blood poured from James head all other of his face and
luckily for him it looked enough like a bullet wound that the
man who shot Oliver looked at James and stared into his eyes and
decided that he was dead and they fled the diner. James the
whole time was memorizing his face. The three shooters got in a
Black Chavos as Ryan and Jesse turned up, Ryan recognized all
three men.
He had shook hands with all three of them when Mr Flanagan and
Antonio Bianchi arranged a truce several years ago, the three
attacks noticed Ryan and started shooting at him as they got in
the car. Ryan took his pistol out of his pants and shot back as
the the three men escaped. Both Jesse and Ryan rushed inside and
found James getting ready to pick up Oliver's blood soaked body.
Jesse rushed over ad helped James as they carried Oliver out of
the diner, Ryan looked around the diner and then reached into
his pocket and grabbed a wad of cash he carried around for
situations like this.
..."Clean up the blood, and everybody remember a man at about
6ft 2 wearing a giant panda suit tried to rob the diner, he got
frustrated over nothing after yelling a heap of gibberish and
started shooting at nothing and then ran" Ryan ordered and then
gave the wad of cash to the owner of the diner, who he knew
personally and told him to dish out the cash evenly. He ran
outside and got in the car and Jesse sped out of the parking lot
and up the road.
..."Ah you hit James?" Ryan asked from the passenger seat.
..."No, I did this to myself to save myself from getting shot as
well, they thought they hit me when the killed Oliver and left
me alone" James yelled over the sound of the speeding car. He
was shaking from the adrenaline and covered in his Oliver's and
his own blood.
..."I'm calling Mister Flanagan, this is the first shots of a
war" Ryan said as he dialed Mr Flanagan's number.
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Condition: Wounded
- $4089
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Oliver
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to Garage
#Post#: 9073--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
By: OGluke Date: June 18, 2013, 3:34 pm
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i wont argue with you bruda this is fine a work of craftmanship
your displaying
now, feed me more!
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Re: Challenges
By: Wetbizket Date: June 18, 2013, 5:46 pm
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Mmmm, a Slaminator, sounds like a fully loaded cheeseburger lol,
and Hell yeah an A-team Van with a water bed! And those suns a
bitches, there gonna pay for what they did to Olly!
#Post#: 9096--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
By: Aussie Boy Date: June 25, 2013, 10:43 am
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24th February 2013
Jack stood by the opened garage door waiting as the Dukes roared
down the road and drifted into the garage and came to a
screeching halt, Jack looked around and the shut the garage door
as Ryan got out and put the seat forward so James could get out.
He stumbled as he got out and almost fell over.
..."James, over here" Arnie said with his kit sitting on the
plastic table and two chairs sitting next to it.
James walked over to Arnie and Arnie helped James take his shirt
off and used the T shirt he had underneath to clean the blood of
his face and then sat James down and started cleaning the wound
so he could stitch it up.
The Brennan brothers: Simon and Jeffrey dragged Oliver's body
from the Dukes and put it on a plastic sheet that they then used
to move his body away from the car and onto a cleared off work
bench. While they were doing this Jack was getting some supplies
from the parts store to use to clean the interior of the Dukes.
..."What the fuck happened back there!" Ryan yelled while
holding his hands on the back of his head.
..."Three motherfuckers walked in and one of them started
shooting and you seen the fucking results!" James yelled at
Ryan.
..."Why didn't you shoot back?" Ryan yelled at James
..."I don't own a fucking gun!" James yelled back.
..."Stay still" Arnie said to James as he started to stitch the
wound.
..."Why didn't you get one?" Ryan shouted.
..."How!?" James shouted back at Ryan.
..."Enough!" Perry yelled as he walked into the garage through
the back door... "The last thing we need is to fight amongst
ourselves!" He added.
Ryan while breathing heavily out of anger and frustration walked
over to Oliver's body and looked at the blood soaked corpse and
then ran his hand from his forehead up over the top of his head,
pushing his hair back.
..."Which one of them did the shooting?" Ryan asked in a calmer
tone.
..."He had a beard, um a scar between his eyes, kind of average
size, kind of a fucked up nose" James said while trying to
ignore the pain of Arnie stitching the wound.
..."Daniel, fucking, Bianchi" Ryan said.
..."You say it was Antonio's nephew that did the shooting?" Mr
Flanagan asked, he was standing near the front door and had been
there since the Brennan Brothers pulled Oliver out of the car.
..."Yeah, the oldest of the Bianchi sons, Aldo's son" Ryan said.
..."Alright. Perry, get Allan and Randy down to the diner, then
get Byron and Benjamin down here with everything they have on
Bianchi and Assad. Tell everybody to be here at 6 tonight, for a
meeting" Mr Flanagan ordered, Perry nodded and got his phone out
and walked into the office.
Mr Flanagan walked over to Oliver's body and looked down at the
lifeless corpse and sighed, he put his hand over Oliver's eyes
and closed them as Jeffrey came out the spare parts room with an
old sheet they were going to cut up for rags and draped it over
Oliver to cover his body. Mr Flanagan said a quick prayer and
then done the sign of the cross and walked into the parts store.
..."Where's he going?" James asked.
..."He's got some calls to make, some calls only made in this
situation" Arnie explained as bandaged over the stitches to keep
it clean.
..."If you're going to fight, get some electrical tape and wrap
it around the bandages, at least it stop it bleeding so much if
you get the stitches busted" Arnie said and then began packing
up his gear.
..."Thanks Arnie" James said and then got up out of the chair
and looked at his shirts, both covered in blood, so he decided
not to put them back on.
James was going to go home and have a shower and then he
remembered: the garage didn't have a shower, he'd been using one
in the back of Steinway Beer Garden bar every couple of days and
between those times he regularly changed his clothes and used a
lot of deodorant.
..."Hey, is there a shower anywhere in here?" James asked.
..."Yeah, there's an emergency shower in the toilet" Jack said
from inside Ryan's car.
..."You want us to go and get you some fresh clothes?" Simon
asked.
..."Yeah, you know where my stuff is Ryan?" James asked.
..."Yeah I know, I'll go and get it" Ryan said.
..."Thanks" James said not wanting to tell anybody he'd been
living in a garage for almost a month.
James went in and used the emergency shower and washed himself
from head to toe, twice over to make sure he was clean and when
he came out, Ryan had left a fresh set of clothes on the counter
top next to the sink. James put on his underwear, jeans, socks,
t shirt and jacket and then washed his steel toed boots in the
sink just to be sure before he put them back on. He walked back
into the garage and a few more members of the crew had turned
up.
James walked over to Oliver and looked down at the sheet
covering his body and started feeling guilty, he wasn't sure why
he felt guilty, but he did. Mr Flanagan came up behind James and
stood beside him and put his hand on James's shoulder.
..."We'll get the fucker who did it, don't worry... Revenge
helps" Mr Flanagan said and then walked away.
James walked out the back door of the garage and leaned against
the concrete wall along the ledge and looked at the tops of the
buildings in Downtown Broker and wondered just what the hell he
had gotten himself into. Then his attention was drawn to a car
coming through the gate, he watched as Randy and Allan got out
of the Gold Feltzer and walked across the scrap yard and up the
stairs; they stopped when they got to the top and noticed James.
..."Glad they didn't get both of you" Randy said and Allan gave
a slight nod in agreement.
..."..." James went to say something but didn't and just nodded
as a thank you.
To Randy and Allan, James's facial expression said everything
and they continued inside, and James just stood there and
watched the sky go from bright and sunny to overcast as the
afternoon rolled by and the rain that had been predicted by the
weather forecaster looked more and more likely.
..."James, everyone is here, we are having the meeting early"
Jesse said as he leaned out the door.
James nodded and walked back into the garage and seen everyone
sitting around near the office with a two large pieces of paper
stuck to the office window and a guy who looked like a doctor
was examining Oliver. James just looked at him for a moment and
then walked over to the crew and took a seat among them.
The doctor walked over to Mr Flanagan who was leaning against
the office door frame.
..."I can patch him up and my associate will put his cause of
death as a heart attack, this will bypass the autopsy and I can
have him cremated and ready for his funeral on Friday" The
Doctor explained.
..."Thank you" Mr Flanagan said and then gave the doctor a large
wad of cash and the doctor went on his way.
Mr Flanagan then came and stood up in front of the crew and
breathed deeply, he looked sad and angry at the same time.
..."Word on the street is, Antonio and Assad are working
together to expand Assad's drug operation, Assad supplies the
drug cookers and the all the independent dealers that he
supplies and Antonio supplies muscle as well as keeping all his
old operations" Mr Flanagan explained.
..."Now thanks to some greased palms and some very good work, we
have a rough idea of each gang and there members.
..."Antonio Bianchi and his brother Andino are in charge of the
Bianchi Crime Family, within their crew, they have their sons,
Albert and Tony from Antonio and Maxwell from Andino, they also
have theri deceased brothers three children within the gang,
Daniel, Henry and Sampson, as well as 5 or 6 other Italian
immigrants and or descendents of Italian Immigrants" Mr Flanagan
explained, but he couldn't go any further as that was all he
knew.
..."Jabbar "Jeremy" Assad runs the Assad Drug Gang, with some
Arabs and blacks and whites working for him, he has three
bodyguards, he had four but we all know what happened to Trent
Harlow. He's also got five drug cookers and almost 11
independent dealers he supplies, maybe more" Mr Flanagan
explained.
..."Now, we're at war with both of these gangs as of today,
we're not backing down, so we're going to send Antonio a
message, Perry, Ryan, James and Simon, you can handle that
tonight... But now onto Oliver, his funeral will be in Steinway
on Friday and then we will have a post funeral wake at the
Steinway Beer Garden, it will be at 12 noon, everybody better be
there in a suit, don't wear ties, Oliver never wore ties, he
didn't like them" Mr Flanagan said with a slight smile.
..."Alright, everybody arm yourselves and be careful, I'll see
you all on Friday unless we get a job between now and then" Mr
Flanagan stated
Everybody started leaving, choosing not to see Oliver if they
hadn't already seen his body, as they wanted to remember him how
he was, not how he is. James, Perry, Ryan and Simon stayed with
Mr Flanagan in the garage after everybody had left. They moved
the chairs around and sat around in a circle.
As Jeffrey left the doctor came back in with two guys carrying a
a body bag, they walked over to Oliver and put him in the bag
and carried him out of the garage, they loaded him into the back
of their van and drove away. James just felt empty after seeing
that and didn't know what to think.
..."Alright you said earlier that the shooter was Daniel
Bianchi?" Mr Flanagan asked Ryan.
..."Yeah, the description fits him, and if he's anything like
his old man, then murder wouldn't be out of the question for
him" Ryan explained.
..."Well let's find him and make sure he pays for what he did"
Mr Flanagan said.
..."Alright" Perry said and got out of his chair and began
dialing a number on his phone. James got up and started walking
away from the seats.
..."Hey, you want in on this?" Perry asked.
James looked back and stared at Perry and then turned back
around and continued walking over to the tool wall and just
stood there with his hands on his head.
..."Hey! Yes or no?" Perry asked.
..."Just let me think" James said after 30 seconds.
They sat around for 30 Minutes before Perry finally got a lead
on where Daniel Bianchi was hanging out, Mr Flanagan gave them
his blessing and went home for the night. Perry, Ryan and Simon
began grabbing ski masks, vests, guns and ammo. They loaded all
the gear into the back of the Chavos, 4 pistols and ammunition
and an MP-10 with ammunition.
..."James! We're leaving, you coming" Ryan asked as they drove
the Chavos out of the garage.
James noticed a large wrench hanging on the tool wall and
thought about the bullets coming through Oliver, he grabbed it
and jogged over to get in the car.
..."I'm coming" James said while showing them the wrench.
..."Right, he was eating at some pizza place in Schottler about
15 minutes ago, that's where we are heading now" Perry said and
then pulled drove away from the garage and headed down to
Broker.
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Condition: Unstable
- $4089
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to Garage
#Post#: 9102--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
By: Aussie Boy Date: June 25, 2013, 11:02 pm
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24th February 2013
Perry pulled the car up outside the pizza place next to the
Schottler Station and turned it off, they looked around the area
trying to spot Daniel Bianchi.
..."Go and check the pizza joint" Perry said to Simon.
Simon nodded and got out the car and casually strolled across
the road and into the Pizza shop where he looked around for
Daniel, he knew what Daniel looked like, but Simon has long hair
and a thick beard, and when they personally shook hands when Mr
Flanagan and Antonio ended the war Simon was bald.
..."There he is!" Ryan said pointing to Daniel Bianchi getting
in his car, further down the street.
..."Call Simon" Perry ordered. Ryan called Simon and told him he
wasn't in there.
Simon ran out of the Pizza Shop and got back in Perry's Chavos
and they drove after Daniel who drove out onto the expressway
and headed south towards Firefly Island.
They followed Daniel as he drove down through Firefly Island and
then parked near the train station and got out of the car and
walked over to a guy leaning on his parked car, the guy gave him
some money and then Daniel got back in his car and drove up
Downtown Broker and parked his car. He got out and locked the
car this time and walked up an alleyway.
..."Now's our chance, let's go" Perry said.
Perry parked the Chavos and everybody got out and went to the
trunk, they put on their masks, vests and took a pistol each
with a couple magazines and James took his Wrench and they
walked up to the corner of the alleyway and Perry leaned around
the corner and looked at what they were doing.
..."Right, James, you and me we go this way and Bianchi, Ryan
and Simon, you go around the corner and knock the dealer out
once they leave the deal" Perry said.
Ryan and Simon walked around the corner and went up the alleyway
and hid in the shadows and waited for the dealer. James and
Perry stood near the entrance to the alleyway and waited as
Daniel and the dealer haggled over money. Eventually they agreed
on the money and they separated. The Dealer walked around the
corner and Simon smacked across the back of the head with the
pistol and knocked him out. Ryan caught him as he fell and
dragged him into the shadows and walked around the corner.
While they did this Perry and James walked up the alleyway and
confronted Daniel with their Glock 22's pointed straight at him.
..."Whoa, whoa, what's this?" Daniel said looking worried.
Daniel turned around to run and seen two more masked gunman
walking towards him with Glock 22's pointed at him.
..."Alright, alright, you's want the money?" Daniel asked trying
to get out of this situation.
James walked up to him and when Daniel turned around, James hit
him in the knee with the wrench and as Daniel yelled in agony
and leaned over to grab his knee, James backhanded Daniel with
the wrench knocking 6 of Daniel teeth out and sending him to the
hard concrete below him. James brought the wrench down of
Daniels shoulder and caused it to pop out of it's socket. Daniel
slowly sat up holding his dislocated and fractured shoulder.
..."Fuck!" Daniel screamed..."What the hell do you want?" He
yelled with blood and teeth running out of his mouth as he did.
James grinned and then took off his mask and looked directly in
Daniels eyes. Daniels eyes went wide and his jaw dropped and
another tooth fell out with some more blood.
..."What's the matter, you look like you've seen a ghost" James
said.
..."You're dead, I-I-I shot you" Daniel said while hyper
ventilating.
..."Look, I'm sorry, I'm sorry!" Daniel shouted.
James brought the wrench down on Daniels head, Daniels neck
crumpled under his head and then he fell on the ground again
with blood running from under his hair. James brought the wrench
down his rib cage and the ribs could be heard shattering under
the force. Daniel was unconscious so he didn't scream he didn't
even move apart from roll flat on his back from the force of the
hit.
James breathed deeply and brought the wrench down again onto
Daniels forehead, it crunched the skin split and blood spurted
out and then it just started running out. James stepped back and
then put his ski mask back on before he did anything else. He
looked around at Ryan, Simon and Perry, they were nodding.
Perry walked over to James and put his hand on his shoulder and
they stood together looking down at Daniels corpse as it leaked
blood everywhere. Ryan and Simon came over as well and checked
Daniel.
..."Yeah, he's dead" Ryan said as he felt Daniels pulse.
..."I'll go and get the plastic" Simon said and then walked out
of the alleyway and got a large sheet of plastic and brought it
back to the body, James watched in shock as they rolled the man
he just killed up in the plastic and carried him to the trunk of
the Chavos and put him in. They all loaded in the car and drove
away as the dealer woke up and walked out of the shadows and
looked at the pool of blood and had no idea what just happened.
..."Antonio operates out of a near Outlook Park, we'll leave the
body on his door step" Perry said as he drove towards Antonio's
bar.
Perry pulled the Chavos up outside Antonio's bar around 10pm and
Ryan and Simon got out the car popped the trunk and dumped
Daniel at the front door, Simon rushed back stuff the plastic
sheet and shut the trunk while Ryan got back in the car and then
Simon got back in the car as well.
..."Wait don't go yet!" Simon said and then leaned across the
backseat and aimed the MP10 at the bar and then pulled the
trigger and sprayed all thirty bullets into the front wall of
the bar, shattering the windows and cracking and busting holes
in the bricks. Simon reloaded and fired the second of 4 clips
into the bar.
..."Alright now go!" Simon said. Perry didn't wait and sped off.
One of the Bianchi Crime Family members by the name Vito Alunni
rushed outside and tripped over Daniels body and crashed to the
ground, he rolled over and sat up and then looked in horror at
Daniels body.
Perry pulled up outside the garage and Ryan got out and opened
the garage door and Perry drove in and Ryan closed the door
behind him.
..."You guys can go I'll stay here and clean out the car" Perry
said.
..."Alright, I'll talk to ya's later" James said and left the
mask and vest sitting on a tool stand and walked out the door
and headed for the Beer Garden.
25th February 2013
He walked in and sat at the bar and looked at the bar tender, it
wasn't Mickey, James didn't know this guy.
..."What can I get you?" He asked.
..."That scotch whiskey up there" James said pointing to a large
full bottle sitting on the shelf.
..."Alright" he said and poured James a little bit into a shot
glass, James grabbed the bottle of him and kept it with him and
started drinking and when he was kicked out of the bar he took
the bottle and a bottle of cheap rum he snatched while the bar
tender was looking. He drank more and more as he drunkenly
stumbled the street of Steinway.
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Condition: Drunk and Depressed
- $4089
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to Garage
#Post#: 9104--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
By: Yoyopop10 Date: June 26, 2013, 4:49 pm
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Awesome story, man! I only had time to read the first 2 chapters
so far - but I've really enjoyed them! Keep up the good work,
very interesting thus far!
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Re: Challenges
By: Aussie Boy Date: July 1, 2013, 8:54 am
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Thanks Yoyopop, I appreciate the comment and I hope you get the
time to read more. Some chapters aren't very good, especially
some recent ones. But you get that in every story.
25th February 2013
James walked through the stone archway into the Steinway
Cemetery and staggered along the path looking at each and other
grave he passed, looking for one in particular. James was not
bothered by the cold and the fact he was in a cemetery at 4:00
am, mostly due the amount of alcohol he had consumed.
The dimly lit lights in the cemetery revealed the grave James
was looking, he walked over to it and sat down beside it and
looked at the headstone. The same feeling of guilt rushed over
him as before, back in the garage when he was looking at Oliver,
this was the same guilt that lead to his addictions and
eventually imprisonment.
..."I'm sorry Mom, I should've been there. I-I-I. I just got
held up at work" James said before taking another swig of
whiskey.
..."I know it wasn't my fault. B-But I. Should've been there,
like I said I was going to be" James muttered.
..."You wouldn't have wanted this life for me mom, I know. But
what else can I do?" James asked the grave and then stared at
the small picture of his mom, on the head stone.
James sat there for another hour, staring at the East River and
the city lights reflecting off the polluted water in it. James's
argued with himself, trying to convince himself it wasn't his
fault, he had called his mother and told her, he wouldn't be
able to help her with the groceries, like he or one of his
siblings did every week because he bad back, while he was on his
lunch break. But couldn't shake the guilt associated with the
fact that if he'd been there, he believed his mother would still
be alive and well.
James eventually got up and struggled to keep his balance and
when he finally got his balance back, he drank until the pins
and needles in his leg passed and then he started walking again,
and he exited the cemetery and headed south.
James woke up in Easton LTA Subway station sitting on a bench
with his bottle of rum with just a mouth full gone out of the
top and the lid screwed back on; tight. He got up and
immediately felt the effects of the hangover. He checked the
time on his phone, it was close to 3:00 pm, he shrugged, opened
the bottle of rum and began drinking again and set out to find
more alcohol and this time he wanted something Irish, so he
began walking to Purgatory to go to Lucky Winkles Irish pub.
26th February 2013
James finally made it to Lucky Winkles at 6:00 am after he got
lost on the way there and ended up in Castle Gardens sitting on
a bench staring the Statue of Happiness until feeling well
enough to get up and keep walking without vomiting. He tried to
open the door but it was locked as the pub was closed so James
wondered across the street and went to sleep in the small yard
next to the pay and spray.
At 4:00pm that afternoon he was woken up by the owner of the pay
and spray and moved along and James just went back across the
street ordered a bottle of Irish whiskey and gallon of water and
whatever food that had; which was large bag of potato chips.
James sat at a booth by ate the potato chips and drank as much
water as he could and then started drinking again.
27th February 2013
James passed out underneath the table in the booth he was
sitting at and the pub was closed and locked while he was still
inside asleep and when the owner came and opened the pub that
afternoon he found James sitting at the bar with a fresh bottle
of Logger Beer and an 5 empty bottles sitting on the bar and a 6
pack in a bag with the half full bottle of whiskey.
..."You gonna pay for that?" The Owner asked.
James turned around and held out a Hundred dollar note and
smiled as the owner took it and as he walked around the bar to
add up what James had drank and give him change, James got up
and left the pub. He walked continuously around Lower Algonquin
for the rest of the night, only stopping to urinate or buy more
beer and the he'd keep walking.
28th February 2013
As the sun rose and it's rays shined through the gaps between
the buildings and lit up parts of the never sleeping city, James
stumbled into the chair and crashed down into a seating position
on a pew in the back corner and passed out there, barely able to
keep walking or drinking and feeling very dehydrated.
..."Wake up. Are you okay?" Someone asked in a polite voice.
James slowly opened his eyes and yawned and then blinked and
forced himself to open his eyes and then he seen the priest
standing there with a bottle of water a mug.
..."You look thirsty my son, drink" The priest said and held the
mug towards James.
It took James a moment to realize the priest had just offered
him a drink of water. James sat up and took the mug of water
from the priest and nodded and then sculled the mug and held the
mug out.
..."Thank you, father, can I have some more?" James asked.
..."Sure" The priest said and then filled the mug up again and
this time James sipped the water and savored every drop.
The priest sat down next to James and sat on the bottle of water
on the pew, in between himself and James.
..."You have been indulging in Satan's drink, haven't you" The
priest asked.
..."If that's priest for been on a bender, then: Yes, I have"
James said to which the priest smiled and even chuckled a little
bit.
..."Look father, can I level with you?" James asked seriously.
..."Yes" The priest said.
..."I've made some big mistakes in my life, huge mistakes,
mistakes that have put my life on a course I don't think I'll
ever get off" James said.
..."And that is the reason you have been drinking, for what I
assume has been days?" The priest asked.
..."Yeah, it's just. It's just. I don't know how to deal with
it" James asked.
..."Just remember, it's never too late" The priest suggested.
..."No. Believe me father, it is for me" James said.
..."Well, are you catholic?" The priest asked.
..."yeah..." James said with a nod.
..."Do you pray?" The priest asked.
..."I did, every night just before lights out, in prison" James
said. The priest looked at him... "Like I said, Mistakes" James
reiterated
..."Well you could pray again, pray for things to get better"
The priest suggested.
..."Yeah..."James said and they both went quiet. James looked
around the church and noticed a donation box with something
about a children's hospital written on it.
..."What's that?" James asked while pointing at the donation
box.
..."That is a donation box for The Saint Christopher Children
Hospital, they treat kids with cancer or other severe illnesses"
The priest explained.
James reached into his pocket and pulled out a large wad of cash
and separated some from the rest, counted it and added a few
notes to it and then handed it to the priest.
..."There's a thousand dollars, make sure the hospital gets it"
James said. The priest took the money with a surprised look on
his face.
..."I'll see to it personally" The priest exclaimed.
..."Wonderful, now do you have one of these places with the beds
and amenities you let members of the church use when they lose
their homes?" James asked, while trying to speak properly around
the priest.
..."Yes, we do, I'll show you where" The priest said and then
got up from the pew.
..."Alright... Say father. What time of what day is it?" James
asked as he groggily stood up and stretched while yawning.
..."It is 11:48 pm, Thursday the 28th of February" The priest
said after checking the time.
..."Alright, can someone wake me up at dawn tomorrow?" James
asked.
..."Yes of course" The priest said and with that James went and
had a shower and then went to sleep on one of the cots.
1st March 2013
He was woken up in the morning by a priest who thanked him for
the generous donation to the hospital and then he seen James off
as he hailed a cab and got a ride to Persues. James brought a
straight black suit and black dress shoes and then got a ride to
the 60 Diner in Middle Park Easy before getting another taxi to
take him to the cemetery in Steinway.
James got out of the taxi and walked down through the cemetery
and arrived to the funeral site 10 Minutes early, he stood there
in the shade under a tree waiting for the funeral to start. He
looked around a few members of the crew were scattered around,
only the Brennan brothers were standing together, everybody else
spread out.
More and more people started turning up to the funeral, every
member of the crew and their spouses and children if they had
them. Some of Olivers friends from school and friends outside of
the crew. Oliver's family and his ex wife and daughter turned up
with a minute to go. They took seats near the podium and then
the priest stood behind the podium and that signaled to
everybody to come from wherever they were.
The priest wasn't happy about not being the in the church, but
Oliver's father was catholic and his mother wasn't religious and
so they had to compromise as Oliver never said anything about
how he wanted his funeral to be. James looked at a plaque on the
concrete fence it was located near a row of graves that all
belonged to members of the McLoughlin family like Oliver and
that made James think what they were going to do with Olivers
ashes.
James stood there in the small crowd of the funeral and listened
to the priest talk and then some of Oliver's family members talk
and he didn't feel guilty anymore, he guilt and the empty
feeling he'd been drinking all week to get rid of was gone. He
felt at peace again even with what he had done and what he had
witnesses.
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Condition: Fine
- $2891
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to Garage
#Post#: 9125--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
By: Aussie Boy Date: July 2, 2013, 9:23 am
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2nd March 2013
James walked into the warehouse with dozens of other people with
the only difference between him and them is that he was in for
free and the audience had to pay $15 to get in, but nearly a
thousand people were expected for this night as the fights were
expected to be really good. With the first fight being between
two ring ins from the Algonquin cage fighting: Carnivore and
Psycho. The Second fight was the brawler Celtic Cowboy (James)
vs the Submission Machine Lord Mike. The Third fight was
Submission only fight between Big Bad and Warrior and the fourth
was between the unbeaten Maniac and a professional MMA fighter
that was recently barred from ever competing again: Machine.
James carried his bag into a small room along the side wall of
the warehouse and got undressed and put on his stretchy jeans
that he fought in than began warming up with a variety of
stretches he learned from his sporting days as a teen and got
himself psyched up to fight as he new he wasn't going to win
easily.
While James was getting ready Mr Flanagan, Perry, Ryan, Jeffrey
and Max walked into the warehouse and were greeted by Martin
Shyskee.
..."How you doing today Mister Flanagan?" Martin asked.
..."Very good Martin do you have a V.I.P section or something?"
Mr Flanagan asked.
..."Sure up there, see that big couch, oh and thanks again for
the loan" Martin said while pointing up to the same place James,
Oliver, Allan, Ryan and Jesse were the previous week.
Mr Flanagan and the members of his crew walked up the makeshift
stairs and sat on the raised section and looked down at the rest
of the warehouse as people began filling the warehouse, so even
brought RV's and such in through the back door so they could sit
at the back of the crowd and watch the fight.
Carnivore and Psycho beat each other to a bloody pulp in a short
contest which ended a knockout. Once the crew cleaned the blood
of the ring and allowed time for bets to be finished on the
first fight and new bets to be made on the second fight, they
got James and Mike to come out. Both men climbed over the cage
like fence around the canvas mat that covered the thin padding
and wooden planks and met in the middle with Jackson in between
them.
..."Ladies and Gentlemen, boys and girls, children of all ages.
I am proud to bring you the first fight of the evening, it will
be contested between two fighters, with standard rules applying.
Introducing First... Weighing in at 199 Pounds and standing at 5
feet and 11 inches. He hails from Willis... Loooooorrrd Mike!
... and his competitor... Weighing in at 231 Pounds and standing
at 6ft 3 inches tall, he hails from Steinway... The Celtic
Cowboy!" Jackson announced and then scurried out of the ring as
the ref took his place in between them.
..."We're not trying to kill each other!" The Ref said and then
backed away signifying the start of the fight.
Lord Mike opened with a round house kick that caught James on
the right said of the head and sent him to stumbling to the
ground where Lord Mike immediately stomped on James shoulder and
then he grabbed it and stomped on it again while pulling it
towards himself. James used his strength and Lord Mikes small
size to drag Lord Mike towards himself and used his left hand to
punch Lord Mike in the nose once he was close enough.
Lord Mike let go of James's arm and clutched his now bleeding
nose, he checked his hands to confirm it was bleeding he turned
around attack James, but James tackled him but instead of
smashing him on the mat he picked Lord Mike up and then drove
him down onto his upper back and then used his own body to weigh
him down and began striking rapidly.
Lord Mike began striking while blocking, he targeted James's
bandage and caught it perfectly opening up the wound and making
it sting enough to stop James from hitting momentarily so Lord
Mike could try to put James in a submission hold. But James knew
this and got off and away from Lord Mike before he could do
anything.
Both stood up and raised their fists and slowly walked towards
each other and then began jabbing at each other like boxers
until Lord jumped and kicked James in the right shoulder and
then punched at it and as James connected with Lord Mikes head
Lord Mike hit James on the chin with an uppercut and James
stumbled back, Lord Mike reacted quicker and punched James in
the chest twice and knocked the wind out him and then Kick James
in the knee.
Lord Mike jumped up, tucked his knees in, turned horizontally
and then launched his knees out and kicked James in the head and
sent him onto the mat flat on his back. Lord Mike wasted no time
and stomped on James's shoulder 4 times with James reacted to
the pain and not trying to stop to the stomps.
Lord Mike knelled down and drags James to a sitting position by
his hair and then struck him again in the mouth, James then
returned the favour by punching Lord Mike so hard he fell over,
with that hit, Lord Mike had a busted open eye brow and large
bruise coming up underneath it.
James got up and done a front flip on the ground Lord Mike which
hurt Lord Mikes ribs, James rolled through back to a standing
position and then nodded at the ref who began counting. Lord
Mike got up by 5 and suckered James in and attacked his right
shoulder again. He kneed James in the stomach and then began
kneeing James in the shoulder and slamming his clenched fist
onto it like his hand was a hammer.
James grabbed Lord Mike under the leg and over his shoulder and
like what he saw on TV, he picked Lord Mike up like he was going
to do a body slam and then James ran quickly while Lord Mike was
still trying to fight out of this. James pushed Lord Mikes lower
half up and then drove Lord Mike onto the mat back first with
himself on top of him.
James grabbed his right shoulder as he stood up to wait for Lord
Mike to get up, the ref checked on Lord Mike; he was knocked out
by the way he landed with James on top of him.
..."He's out, he's out" The ref called.
..."Your winner, the Celtic Cowboy!" Jackson announced.
More boos than cheers were heard as many had placed bets against
the inexperienced and seemingly injured Celtic Cowboy. James
didn't care and raised his left hand in victory as he his right
arm was to sore to raise. James got out of the ring and went
back to the small room and his bag, he walked over to paramedic
who after making sure Lord Mike was okay, which he was. He
stitched James's wound closed again and told him not to fight
again until it was healed properly. James didn't listen.
Martin met James as he walked away from the paramedic and gave
him a $1000 which was the new prize for winning as there was
easily a thousand people cramming into this massive warehouse to
see the fights.
James noticed the crew sitting on the raised section and decided
to go and see them. He walked up the makeshift stairs and Ryan
congratulated him on his third official win as the Celtic
Cowboy. He got to the top looked around, noticing a familiar
face.
..."Ah, hey... James" Tami said awkwardly.
..."Yeah..." James said and then turned his attention to Mr
Flanagan... "Like I was saying early, sorry about the past week"
James said.
..."No problem, we all have a different way of handling our
first time, plus with the loss of Oliver it's expected, just
don't do it again" Mr Flanagan explained.
..."Alright, thank you" James said..."I'm going to go and get
some rest" James said.
..."Okie Dokie, I'll see you Monday" Mr Flanagan said as he was
trying to get the attention of a bookie.
James began walking down the stairs and as he reached the bottom
Tami caught him. She tapped him on the shoulder and he turned
around and met face to face as she was standing on the bottom
step.
..."I'm sorry about last week, I don't know what I was thinking"
Tami explained.
..."Right..." James said and then started walking away.
..."Hey, I'm sorry if I caused you any difficulties" Tami said.
James turned around and walked back to Tami and they met face to
face again.
..."You pushing me out of that van didn't phase me in the
slightest, it wasn't the first time, it won't be the last and
what caused me pain this week was the loss of a good friend and
something I can't even tell you about" James said to Tami.
James turned around and started walking once again.
..."But, but I made a mistake last week" Tami said.
James laughed and without turning around he said... "You're not
getting a second chance and besides this cash is going towards
getting an apartment".
Tami groaned and started walking back up the stairs as James
walked out of the warehouse and along the footpath heading
towards BOABO and from there he'd cross through EIC and then
into Steinway and back to his garage to sleep and rest his sore
shoulder.
4th March 2013
James walked down Dukes Boulevard and came upon the building
that his dad had described to him, it started on the corner
where the old fuel terminal used to be and continues south going
into the hill, the ground has been made flat with a retaining
wall that is covered in graffiti. The Building was four double
garage size roller doors and next to each one was a smaller
regular door and above each roller door on the second floor of
the building where two long windows. James walked down and was
met by a man in a suit.
..."Mr Doyle?" The man in the suit asked.
..."That's the first time I've ever been called that and not
been in trouble" James joked and the man in the suit laughed.
..."Very good, I'm Anthony Stansbury but you can call me Tony"
Tony said politely.
..."Alright Tony, well let's have a look" James said.
..."Follow me" Tony said.
They walked to the northern most door and Tony unlocked
it..."You have a doorbell and speaker here to answer the door"
Tony said as they walked through the door into the large garage.
..."Enough room for 2 vehicles and with both of them parked in
here, you still have enough room to use the work bench and the
area around it" Tony explained.
They walked up the stairs and into a loft type of area with a
bathroom in the Northwest corner only separated from the outside
walls by the staircase and the hallway. A kitchen in the North
East Corner and an Elevated Section in the South West Corner
with an space between the bathroom and Elevated section and the
rest of the loft empty.
..."That elevated section over is where you sleep it has rails
for a curtain to be hung right around the bed, covering the 2
exposed sides"
..."What were these designed for, they an odd type of housing
unit" James said not knowing what to call it.
..."Industrial storage, but when the original owner found out
just how much a freight elevator in each one would cost, he
quickly changed the design and advertised them as housing" Tony
explained.
..."Well I like it, it's perfect for what I want" James said.
..."Good, good, you're all set to furnish it and pay rent every
week?" Tony asked.
..."Yeah, I'll have it set up in no time and the rent was $400 a
week right?" James asked.
..."yeah, that is paying your own damages and paying own
maintenance price" Tony explained.
..."Got those contracts?" James asked.
..."Indeed I do" Tony said and then opened his briefcase and got
out the contracts for the Unit and James signed everything and
then Tony gave him a key ring with 3 identical keys on it.
..."Thank you Mister Stansbury" James said and then reached into
his pocket and retrieved $800 out of a wad of cash and then
handed that to Tony.
..."Mr rent for the next two weeks, I'll pay rent every Friday"
James explained.
..."Very good" Tony said and they shook hands and Tony left
James to enjoy his new home, even though it was empty.
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James spent 41 Dollars on
Sunday buying groceries
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Condition: Good
- $3050
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Anthony Stansbury
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to: Garage/Unit
#Post#: 9185--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
By: Aussie Boy Date: July 16, 2013, 8:45 am
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5th March 2013
James and Philip dragged a king size mattress sitting on top of
an old sheet of the forks of a forklift and through a hole in
the wall where a window used to buy while the Window Repairman
and Anthony Stansbury both watched on. Ryan was driving the
forklift and Max was building the bed on the 40 inch high
elevated section in the Southwest Corner of the unit.
James and Philip dumped the mattress on the floor and then
watched as Ryan lowered the forks down and drove to the back of
the moving truck and the movers put a large leather couch on the
forks and Ryan lifted that up. They just squeezed it in with the
help of Anthony and the Window Repairmen, next up was a fridge
that they struggled to get in and then a a pool table top.
They continued on like this until everything they couldn't carry
up the stairs was in and then the movers left with their
forklift and truck and the window Repairmen started putting the
window back in which wasn't an easy job, while he did this,
James, Phlip, Ryan and Max sorted out James's stuff.
The King sized bed on the elevated section facing North, a Large
Flat Screen TV on the Outside the South side bathroom wall, a
couch had against the north side of the Elevated Section and a
coffee table in the middle of the left over space between the
wall and couch. The Fridge went against the Eastern Wall against
the end of the bench of the kitchen in the Northeast Corner.
A Table with a dozens stools that fit perfectly underneath it in
the center of the unit, a pool table in the Southeastern corner,
a bookshelf along the eastern wall that fit perfectly between
the 2 identical front windows, but was no higher than the bottom
of them. On top of that shelf he sat a small stereo with a large
speaker on either side of it. He put some dishes and cutlery in
the kitchen along with an oven and a microwave.
As the sun started to go down the window repairmen finished
putting the window back in, James paid him and he was on his
way, the unit was still kind of bare, but James would sort that
out once he got some more money, but all the stuff he couldn't
get up the stairs was in as well as a few other things. James
could actually live there now.
..."So how'd you pay for all this?" Philip asked as the four sat
at the table in the middle of the unit and drank beer.
..."I spent 2 and half of my own money and a borrow close to 7
off of Mr Flanagan" James explained.
..."Well bit of advice, pay him back quickly and don't buy
anything else expensive until you do" Philip warned.
..."Thanks for the advice" James said.
..."Speaking of that, Early Wednesday morning, around 3 or 4, Mr
Flanagan needs a job done, it's a high paying job, for the crew
as a whole" Ryan stated. James nodded and immediately decided to
see Mr Flanagan about the job.
..."How's Olivers family doing?" James asked.
..."As well as expected, his daughter is to young to understand
and his ex wife doesn't care, his parents and siblings are doing
okay, they are pretty broken up but" Max explained.
..."Man... To Oliver" James said and hoisted his beer up and all
4 clanked their bottles together and had a drink. All four men
went quiet and thought about Oliver and everything that he was
going to miss, but the thought of getting out didn't cross any
of their minds.
7th March 2013
James knocked on the door of the garage and Simon walked over
and opened it and James walked straight in, wearing a beanie,
jacket, jeans and thick socks underneath his boots.
..."You're late, I said be here at 3:00 am" Simon said as he
shut the door and went back to stuffing the magazines for his
Micro Uzi in his belt.
..."Yeah, by 5 minutes, it's a fucking long walk from my place
to here" James snapped.
..."Whatever it doesn't matter, you vest and MP10 is on the
plastic table" Simon said.
James walked over to the plastic table and took his jacket off
and put the bulletproof vest on and put the jacket back on and
zipped it up. He stuff Nine Magazines into his pockets and
between his belt and his jeans and put the tenth in the MP10 and
then checked the weapon.
..."Everyone in the van" Simon said as he walked to the drivers
door of the recently purchased van, Simon had bought off a chop
shop specifically for this job.
..."Jesse, get the door" Simon added.
Jesse opened the door as the other 5 got in the van, Simon drove
the van out of the garage and Jesse shut the door and then got
in the van and Simon headed off, heading to an old dock in East
Holland, but he would have to drive to West side of Northwood
and drive around the waterfront right around Northwood to get to
it.
..."Alright everybody, the plan is intercept the boat as it is
docking, James, Philip and Max, you are going to steel the boat,
while, Randy, Jesse and myself cover you and escape in the van,
any questions?" Simon asked.
..."The boat is going to that pier across the road from the
pools in Steinway?" Philip asked.
..."Yeah, Perry and few others will meet us there with the mule
and we unload the boat and then sink it right there" Simon
explained.
..."Alright sounds good" Max said.
Max checked his Micro Uzi, Philip checked his Remington 11-87
Shotgun, Randy checked his AK47 and Jesse checked his MP10 as
they drove across Northwood in the early hours of the Thursday
morning.
Simon drove the van slowly along the old dock dodging the holes
formed by the crumbling concrete, the old tires and trash that
littered the dock and the occasionally pile of unused dirt or
sand.
..."Are we using ski masks?" Jesse asked
..."Yeah I suppose we should" Max said. Max opened the glove box
and started handing out ski masks, all 6 put them on and got
ready as they neared the warehouse and the point where the
fishing boat would dock with the crates and boxes of guns and
ammunition. One of the 4 Pavano thugs noticed the van driving
slowly towards them and told the Capo overseeing the drop. The
Capo looked at the fishing boat with four more Pavano thugs on
board and then looked at the van.
..."Open fire" He said
Bullets rained through the windscreen of the van and tore up
everything inside, Simon and Max opened the doors and got out
and used them as cover as they started shooting back. Jesse
opened the side door and bailed out, Randy, James and Philip
followed him, they crouched beind the van while Max and Simon
shot back at the Pavano's protecting the gun shipment.
..."Jesse, Randy you get to that concrete barrier and distract
them, I'll take James and get on that boat before it leaves"
Philip said just loud enough for them to hear over the gun fire.
..."Max cover us" Randy said.
..."You got it" Max said and then sprayed the entire clip as
Randy and Jesse ran for the concrete barrier.
James and Philip to the edge of the fence at the edge and of the
dock and climbed around the edge and ran for cover, then as they
went to move again, trying to go around the small warehouse on
the waters edge and get to the boat that way, but they were
halted by a barrage of bullets coming their way, as they were
spotted.
James reacted by standing up and firing back at the Pavano thugs
and hit one in the leg, Philip used the distraction to run for
the cover of the warehouse, he just avoided bullets as he got
past the corner. He leaned out and fired as James followed
firing the MP10 wildly as he ran to Philip.
They shimmied around the the waters edge and jumped onto a barge
that was docked there and at the opposite end were Two Pavano
thugs that got off the boat. James unleashed a burst of bullets
that emptied the 30 round clip and Philip fired the shotgun as
quick as he could in repetitive shots as the two Pavano thugs
fired at James and Philip.
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James spent money on furniture
and groceries for his new place
as well as the services he needed
but he spent borrowed money also.
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Condition: ?
- MP10 ~ 30/240
- $238
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Anthony Stansbury
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to: Garage/Unit
- Debt = -$6950
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Re: Challenges
By: Wetbizket Date: July 16, 2013, 6:40 pm
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Just started TBOGY and played the first cage fighting mission,
I'm even more pumped for this story bro! Now I just gotta figure
out where I left off at lol!!
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