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#Post#: 8956--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: May 29, 2013, 12:48 am
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Thanks Wetbizket, I'm having a lot of fun writing this story,
I'm glad it's being enjoyed. I'm finding it much easier to focus
on one character, and write most things from his point of view
but in Third Person. And the fight scenes, especially one on one
fight scenes are much easier to write in third person.
14th February 2013
James waited outside Mr Flanagan house in Mr Flanagan's Intruder
while Mr Flanagan was inside his house gathering up everything
he needed for the day. Mr Flanagan came out of his house in a
trench coat and hat and walked quickly through the rain and got
into the back seat of his car and made sure nothing important
got wet.
..."Go to the bank on Dukes Boulevard first" Mr Flanagan said.
..."Alright" James said and pulled away from the curb and began
driving to the bank.
..."James. I heard you were a bit shaken up after what went down
in that drug lab on Tuesday" Mr Flanagan said.
..."Yeah, a little bit, I've never seen anybody get killed
before, I've seen dead bodies before, but yeah, never seen them
die in front of me" James stated shrugging it off like nothing
when in fact it still bothered him.
..."Well it gets easier every time you see it happen" Mr
Flanagan said..."Best thing to do, is not think about it and
remember why that person deserved it, like if he had gotten hold
of Philips weapon, you might not be here right now, and to that
matter, he was a drug dealer, and you know what effect drug
dealers can have on peoples life" Mr Flanagan explained.
James just nodded and took in everything Mr Flanagan just told
him. James pulled the car over outside the bank after a few
minutes of silence. Mr Flanagan got out of the car and walked
into the bank leaving James waiting in the car listening to
whatever was on Liberty Rock Radio, nobody in Flanagan's crew
listened to anything else. Mr Flanagan came out of the bank and
got in the car.
..."Drive over to Savannah Avenue, I gotta drop something off"
Mr Flanagan said.
James drove the Intruder over to Savannah Avenue and parked
outside a house just of the intersection where Mr Flanagan got
out of the car and walked over to a house and knocked on the
door. James rolled his window down to see who Mr Flanagan was
talking to.
..."Hello Mrs McReary" Mr Flanagan said to a old lady who
answered the door.
..."Donny, it's good to see you" She said in a sweet voice.
..."I'm just dropping something off for Gerry" Mr Flanagan said
and held out an envelope.
..."I'll make sure he gets it" Mrs McReary said.
..."Thank you" Mr Flanagan said.
Mr Flanagan walked away from the front door as Mrs McReary shut
the door and walked back inside.
..."Alright, head to Downtown Broker, I have to buy a present
for someone" Mr Flanagan said.
..."Alright" James said and started driving towards Broker.
..."Who was that, back there?" James asked.
..."An old friend of mine's mother, I owe my old friend some
money and that was what I gave his mother" Mr Flanagan answered.
James knew not to ask any further, considering how new he was to
crew.
James parked the car near a large alleyway and Mr Flanagan got
out and walked down the alleyway. He entered a door and a few
minutes later came out with a long narrow gun case in one hand
and suitcase in the other hand. He put them in the trunk of the
Intruder and got back in the Intruder.
..."Alright, take me back to the garage" Mr Flanagan said. James
nodded and began driving to the garage in East Island City.
..."Mister Flanagan, have you ever spent time in prison?" James
asked just trying to break the silence.
..."Yeah I did 6 years from 1988 to 1994 for a murder I
allegedly committed in 1986, during a alleged war between the
Irish Mafia and the Lupisella Crime Family" Mr Flanagan
explained.
..."How did you get by?" James asked.
..."I had a good reputation on the streets and I had a lot of
friends, how did you get by?"
..."I learned to fight and kept my back to walls" James said.
..."Good plan for a short timer" Mr Flanagan said.
They were silent he rest of the trip back to the garage where Mr
Flanagan gave the long gun case to Perry and took the box to his
office and put it his safe and then took the Intruder home,
leaving James at the garage. James looked around and there was
nothing happening so he grabbed a broom and started sweeping all
the dirt and dust out of the garage.
James returned home that afternoon after the rain had stopped
and the clouds had broken up and bright orange of the setting
sun was breaking through. James stopped and seen his father
sitting on his chopper staring at the house. James walked to his
father and stood beside the bike.
..."When did this happen?" Tommy asked his son.
..."A few hours after you left, they shot the shit out of the
house and then chucked a couple Molotov Cocktails through the
windows" James explained.
..."Did you see who did it?" Tommy asked.
..."No, I assume they were after you" James said.
..."Most likely, we are at war with the Angels of Death again"
Tommy explained.
..."So where have you been?" James asked in relation to Tommy's
last statement.
..."Creating an Alibi, for a hit" Tommy said.
..."So what's the war over?" James asked.
..."The Angels killed our Chapter president" Tommy explained.
..."I see" James said.
..."What did you save from the house?" Tommy asked.
..."I saved the photo albums, like mom would have" James stated.
..."I see. Where are you staying?" Tommy asked.
..."I've set up a space in the garage, I've been looking for a
new place for a while now" James explained.
..."Okay. I know there are some vacant places down on the corner
of the Dukes Boulevard and Dukes drive, cheap and only a couple
of years old" Tommy said trying to help his son.
..."There is only a fuel depot down there" James said.
..."No, in 2010 RON, moved their depot to Bohan Industrial and
someone built a fewof industrial storage buildings, but he
converted them to apartment type places after he realized the
cost of putting heavy duty freight elevators in each one of
them" Tommy explained.
..."Alright, I'll go and check them out, thanks dad" James said.
..."No problem" Tommy stated..."How else knows about the house?"
Tommy asked.
..."Bridget seen it the other day, I guess she told, Tommy,
Joanne, and Mark" James said.
..."Okay, well I'm going back to the clubhouse, you know where
to find me, if you want anything" Tommy said.
..."Yep" James said.
..."Bye" Tommy said as he started his chopper and rode away.
James watched as he rode away from the house and then looked at
the remains of the house and thought about his mother.
..."Fuck it, I need a drink" James said and started walking up
to the beer garden.
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- $4150
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Oliver
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to Garage
#Post#: 8957--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
DIR By: cali soul
Date: May 29, 2013, 7:06 am
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Dope story brotha
#Post#: 8960--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: May 30, 2013, 10:42 am
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Thanks Cali
16th February 2013
James and his opponent: High Voltage, stood in the middle of the
ring with their fists raised, both had just been introduced and
now they were about to fight. High Voltage pretended to strike
with his left hand and caught James in the cheek with his right
hand and then High Voltage used to opportunity to tackle James
to ground and started laying into him.
James blocked as many punches as he could and eventually was
able to lock a tight grip on High Voltage's left arm and drag
him to the ground and off of James. James used his leverage to
get High Voltage in a headlock and started striking at random,
everywhere but his face and then when he wasn't expecting it,
punching him in the nose.
High Voltage lashed out and forced James onto his back and
rolled out of the headlock and dropped a big right hook on
James, leaving a deep cut on James's cheek. James threw a return
shot of his own and caught High Voltage on the chin.
James got to his feet slowly, dazed from High Voltage's last
shot. High Voltage pounced on James, wrapped his arms around
James's waist and threw him through the air and drove him to the
mat. James was getting angry because of how full on High Voltage
was. James began swinging his elbows back as High Voltage tried
to pick him up and do another one. James elbowed High Voltage in
the stomach and got released. James turned around and started
throwing punches, hitting High Voltage in the right eye with his
right fist and left eye with his left fist. High Voltage pushed
James away and he fell over and created some distance between
them.
High Voltage charged James, but James grabbed him by the arm and
forced him to do a front flip and slammed him on the ground and
held onto his arm and tried to work it into a hold that was
cause High Voltage to give up, but High Voltage fought out of it
he and James grappled with High Voltage for an advantage but
ended up just punching each other and eventually broke away from
the mat grappling and created a bit of distance between them.
They didn't waste any time and got hold of each other again.
James doing a front flip over High Voltage and slamming him on
the mat. High Voltage drag James over him using the momentum and
punched James in the side of the side of the head and tried to
put James in a choke hold. But James fought out of it and tried
to get High Voltage in one, they grappled into a position where
High Voltage tried to go for a Triangle choke hold. But James
punches High Voltage in the ribs and High Voltage let go and
then James dived on him.
But High Voltage put his knees up and James landed on High
Voltage's knees. James fighting through the pain rolled away and
stood up while trying to ignore the pain. High Voltage jumped to
his feet and both men raised their fists and squared off in the
middle of the ring once again, High Voltage gained the upper
hand in the punch off and James grabbed him in a bear hug. High
Voltage head butted James three times before James let go off
and High Voltage and then drove him to the mat with a tackle.
James got his feet and took a second to breath while High
Voltage laid flat on his back after the tackle. High Voltage got
up and tackled James around the legs and dropped him to the mat
and started striking at his face, targeting a cut in his
forehead caused by the head butts.
James started returning the shots and eventually got free from
under High Voltage and got to his knees and threw himself at
High Voltage shoulder first, and both hit the mat once again,
they both got to their feet again and started throwing punches
and blocking them, until High Voltage kicked James in the
stomach, James fell to the ground and High Voltage used the
bottom of his foot to kick James in the head, again targeting
the cut on his forehead.
James got up and rushed High Voltage and locked him into a bear
hug again, but this time he slung High Voltage over his shoulder
and slammed him on the mat and High Voltage punches James in the
side of the head and wrestled free of the bear hug on the
ground.
High Voltage got up and took the valuable seconds of rest as
James got up slowly, doing the same thing. They got ready to
punch it out again and then High Voltage punches James in the
throat. James fell to the mat and coughed Horrendously and spat
on the mat, the clump of saliva was filled with blood.
James got up and started laying punches all over High Voltage
and High Voltage started throwing them back, they eventually
started grappling while still throwing punches, they were having
an organized fight anymore, they were just beating the hell out
of each other. They got near the edge of the ring and High
Voltage slammed James's head against the steel pipe that
bordered the ring.
James didn't waste time and elbowed High Voltage in the stomach
and grabbed hold of High Voltage and slammed High Voltage
against the chain link and then threw him to the ground. High
Voltage shook his head and groggily got to his feet and raised
his fists and called James a wimp. James walked gingerly to the
middle of the ring and raised his fists.
James's face was covered in blood from the cut on his forehead,
the deep cut on his heavily swollen cheek, his chest, stomach
and back were starting to bruise as was the front of his throat,
his bottom lip was split and elbow was cut open and his jeans
were ripped up the right leg.
High Voltage was bleeding from cuts around both eyes and his
nose was obviously broken with a steady stream of blood running
out of it, he was getting serious bruising around his rib cage
and his stomach. His pants were also ripped, below his right
knee was completely missing.
They stood face to face, staring eye to eye and High Voltage
spat in James's face. James flew into a rage and punched High
Voltage in the left cheek with his right hand and his right
cheek with his left hand, causing High Voltage to stumble
backwards a little bit and with no time between any punch; he
gave an uppercut with his right hand, right on the chin of High
Voltage. High Voltage fell flat backwards and crashed flat on
his back on the mat and stayed there.
..."He's out" The Ref called.
..."Your Winner, by Knockout! ... The Celtic Cowboy!" Jackson
shouted.
The audience cheered in Appreciation of the brutal fight they
just witnessed, Ryan and Oliver helped James out of the ring and
carried him to some crates in the corner of the warehouse where
they sat him down with his gear. Ryan took a phot o of James
before they cleaned him up, so James could remember it.
Oliver went off and collected the money he made from bets and
watched as some of High Voltage's guys carried him out of the
ring. Oliver returned to James and Ryan and hid the money as he
noticed Martin was heading towards them as well.
..."James. I want to thank you for that, that was one of the
best fights I've ever seen and I've already been informed that
videos of that are going out over the internet already, it's
good advertising. So here's a grand for you to keep and you
won't be scheduled to fight anyone next weekend unless you want
too" Martin said and then handed James a thousand dollars.
..."Thanks, Martin. I'll... I'll let. You know. I-If I can
fight..." James said groggily.
Ryan took the money off James and put it in his bag and then
gave James his shoes to put on, as well as his shirt and then
they helped him outside and into Oliver's Cavalcade and they
drove him to hospital to get him checked out, especially his
throat as there was still blood in his Saliva.
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- $5105
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Oliver
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to Garage
#Post#: 9011--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: June 4, 2013, 11:15 am
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19th February 2013
James walked out the small bathroom at the garage and went and
took his seat at the round plastic table, he sat in the plastic
chair, he was relieved as there was no more blood in his urine
or Saliva and his bruises were starting to hurt less. Also
sitting at the table was Oliver who was toying with an old
radio, Simon, who was talking to his brother Jeffrey who was
leaning on a large tool box next to the table and Max who was
reading a magazine.
Then Ryan and Jesse walked in the door of the garage and walked
over to the table and placed 4 Cluckin Bell bags on it and then
Ryan grabbed the last vacant chair and Jesse grabbed a short
stool on wheels and dragged it over to the table.
..."Oliver: Spicy Chicken Wrap and an eCola. Simon: Fried
Chicken Burger with the lot and a Sprunk. Jeffrey: A Stuffed
Pollo Todo Frito and eCola. Max, gets a Fried Chicken Burger
with salad and Fries and a Sprunk. James gets 15 Cluckin Nuggets
with Ketchup and an eCola. Jesse gets 10 Cluckin Nuggets with a
two wings and a eCola and I get a Spicy Chicken Wrap and an
eCola" Ryan listed as he unpacked the bag and handed everybody
their food.
..."Where is everybody?" Perry asked as he walked through the
garage door.
..."We're all here, Mister Flanagan is in his office and Mister
Walsh is doing the books in the garage office" Oliver explained
with a mouth full.
..."Nobody else is here?" Perry asked.
..."Nobody" Oliver said. Perry said and walked into the closed
parts store as the rain outside started again.
..."We're suppose to be having a fucking meeting and half the
crew is late" Perry yelled as he walked through the door that
connected the two business's.
..."Oh Yeah, James, I got something for you" Ryan said and then
pulled a piece of paper sized yellow envelope from one of the
bags and opened it. James took it from him and pulled out the
contents and laughed as it was a large picture of him just after
he knocked out High Voltage, the previous weekend. He had blood
mixed with sweat covering his face and look of determination on
his face that made it a really good photo.
..."Thanks Ryan" James said as he put the photo back in the
envelope and sat it beside his meal.
A few minutes later as the group was talking an Infernus Jeffrey
seen the previous Monday, Byron, Allan and Arnie walked through
the back door soaking wet and carrying a duffel bag each.
..."Whats going on here?" Byron asked.
..."We could ask you the same question, what the hell have you
got in the bags?" Ryan said.
..."Ammo" Bryon said as he and the other two carried the bags
into the parts shop to hid the bags of ammunition.
Not long after James and the others finished their lunch Philip,
Randy and Jack walked into the garage and joined everybody at
the table and they began talking with them. Perry, Byron, Arnie
and Allan came out of the parts store and took seats near the
table also and Benjamin Walsh realized what everybody was doing
and rolled out of the office on his chair and sat by the table
as well.
Mister Flanagan walked out of the parts store, carrying a padded
folding chair and as he walked across the garage his phone rang
and he checked to see who it was and then answered it and put it
on speaker, so everybody could hear as he sat down.
..."Antonio Bianchi, and what do I owe the pleasure?" Mister
Flanagan said.
..."Donald Flanagan, it's been a long time, I see you still have
my number" Antonio stated.
..."Of Course, I never delete numbers" Mr Flanagan stated.
..."Of course you do, but enough the pleasantries, I understand
you had a run with a good friend of mine recently" Antonio said.
..."Who would your good friend be" Mr Flanagan asked.
..."A man known as Jeremy Assad" Antonio said.
..."Yeah, I believe I did, you see he wasn't showing me the
proper respect" Mr Flanagan said.
..."No, you were refusing his payments" Antonio said.
..."That is complete bullshit, he didn't offer anything, I did
what was necessary" Mr Flanagan said.
..."Ha ha ha ha. You were always funny, Donald. You were always
greedy too. Your actions just proved it" Antonio said.
..."I was never greedy and never will be, now get to the point"
Mr Flanagan stated.
..."You pay for the all damages you caused Assad and his gang
and nothing bad will happen" Antonio threatened.
..."You mean his gang of drug cookers and bodyguards... He isn't
getting a god damn dime and if I catch him on my turf again, he
will have more problems than some damaged goods" Mr Flanagan
threatened.
..."Last chance you fucking dickhead, give Assad his money and
drugs back, plus what you owe him or else" Antonio yelled into
the phone.
..."Antonio, you can go to hell, you ignorant piece of shit, we
settled our differences back in 09, but if you want to charge
back into war for that Bastard, then go right a fucken head, you
want to shit on our truce go ahead. Just remember, who called
who, begging for the truce last time" Mr Flanagan yelled into
the phone and then hung up.
..."Right down to business then" Mr Flanagan said with a sudden
change and tone and temperament.
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- $5069
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Oliver
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to Garage
#Post#: 9046--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: June 13, 2013, 10:00 am
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21st February 2013
..."You alright James?" Perry asked while examining James's
bruises.
..."Yeah, I'm a little sore, I'll be right though" James said as
he slipped on the bulletproof vest and began to tighten it on
himself.
..."Alright, we all know what we are doing and where we are
standing?" Perry asked the same group sitting in the back of a
fake carpet cleaning van.
Everyone said "yes" as they loaded their weapons and put their
vests on.
..."Alright, just remember Byron and Jesse are above us with a
sniper rifle just in case" Perry reminded the group and then
turned his attentions to James.
..."Are you sure you're okay with that gun?" Perry asked
referring to AK47 sitting next to James as he buttoned up his
jacket over his vest.
..."Yeah, my dad taught me how to shoot when I was a kid, I just
haven't used one in a while" James said with a confident look.
..."Alright, be on high alert" Perry said and then got out of
the van. James checked his Assault Rifle and then got out as
well, following Randy who got out just after Perry.
Perry, Randy, James and Max waited as Simon got out last and
locked the van up and then the group walked together down the
short, dark alleyway and each took the position they were told
to take that afternoon while they were scouting the area in the
day time. James stood on a wall between flat ground and ramp,
directly overlooking where the deal would take place.
He was very nervous but knew he had to hide that fact, because
even though he was wearing a ski mask (Just like everyone else
from Flanagan's Crew) The Russian gangsters making the deal
could detect fear in anybody. He remained calm and waited. With
in a few minutes five Russians were walking down an alleyway
with one of them holding a duffel bag, the other five had
Stakeout 37 Shotguns.
They waited in the exact spot where the deal was meant to happen
and then looked around, they nodded to everybody protecting the
deal; including James. Then a large group of Russian Gangsters
walked in from the other end of the alleyway. All of them had
Micro Uzis and a pistols, except for one, who had an M4A1. The
Large group was from the Minkov Street Gang and the small group
was from the Petrovic Crime Family.
The Petrovic Family despite being very powerful and heavily
respected consisted of less then 20 members, with Kenny
preferring the use of trusted hired guns such as Donald Flanagan
and his crew. Which contrasted with the Minkov Street Gang who
were rapidly gaining members and becoming a force to be reckoned
with, they were large but not very powerful, but their allies
overseas with whom they supplied American made drugs in exchange
for weaponry and foreign drugs were very powerful in their
respective areas.
The deal went down silently as a representative from either side
stepped forward and exchanged the duffel bag for a small
briefcase, both representatives stepped back and checked their
received items and then nodded once they were sure they hadn't
been ripped off. As both sides began move away a sigh of relief
fell over Flanagan's men. James especially.
Then shots rang out as one of Petrovics men hit the ground and
dropped the suitcase, James immediately looked for where the
bullets had come from, he didn't see anything and then he
remembered his main goal. "protect the money" James looked at
the briefcase and then fired the AK at a sixth man running for
the briefcase. He missed completely but it was enough to scare
the attacker away. He ran for cover as James fired off small
bursts at him to keep him running.
Bullets whizzed past him and the sudden shock of a bullet
hitting him in the stomach caused him to lose his balance and
fall, he jumped before he fell and landed on his feet behind a
dumpster. He looked around and seen two shooters down the
alleyway that the Minkov gang just escaped through. James tucked
his head back in and breathed deeply, not wanting to lean out
and fire back. He looked up the alleyway at the Petrovic
Gangsters carrying their wounded man and the money away.
He breathed deeply and leaned out from behind the dumpster and
fired the last of clip and then jerked himself back into cover
to reload the rifle which he was struggling to do because he was
shaking heavily. James looked up the alleyway again and saw
Perry and Max shooting passed him and down the alleyway.
James raised his gun as the man who went for the briefcase
earlier came out of cover to chase the Petrovic guys but then
blood spray from his head and he dropped to ground as a loud
shot rang out, almost drowning out the rest of gun fire.
..."Jimmy, get to the van" Perry yelled.
James breathed deeply again knowing he was going to have run
around the dumpster and up the ramp where he would have no
protection. He held the rifle as steady as he could and gulped.
He rose to his feet and run out from behind the dumpster and
opened fire at the attackers, spraying the entire clip down the
alleyway as he made his way around the dumpster and up the ramp
backwards. The clip ran out and he darted around the corner of a
building and tried to reload again, but he could barely hold the
rifle steady.
James looked as Simon back the van down the alleyway and finally
got his gun reloaded and went back to the edge of the corner and
watched as Randy ran to him, he nodded and ran to van and opened
the back doors right up and waited. Perry and Max both made
their way to where James was and then Perry pushed James away
from the corner and continued shooting, hitting one of the
attacks as they moved up, trying to chase the gang.
Byron and Jesse rushed down a fire escape and jumped off instead
of trying to lower it, they got in the van and then Max did and
then James got in, Randy jumped in and the van started moving as
Perry moved away from the corner and got in as well. He and
Randy slammed the doors closed and with in seconds, bullets
started hitting the back of the van as Simon sped out out of the
alleyway and up the usually busy city street. Everybody had fled
or taken cover and Simon made it look like he was fleeing with
everybody else due to the large amounts of gunfire.
They arrived at the garage and parked the van inside. Everybody
got out and stood back as Ryan, Allan and Philip instantly began
cleaning the van out and removing anything that had a bullet
hole. As they were doing this Jack came out a small room and
began removing the stickers that made up the sides of the van.
..."James you're hit" Jesse said.
..."Yeah a bullet hit me in the gut earlier, the vest stopped
it" James said.
..."No. You're bleeding from you're shoulder" Jesse stated.
James looked at his left shoulder and then his right shoulder
and noticed the ripped in his jacket, he removed his jacket and
the vest and revealed a bullet graze on top of his shoulder.
..."I'll give Arnie a call and tell him to come down... Is
everybody else okay?" Perry asked to which everybody started
checking themselves for wounds.
..."How's that for a rush?" Randy asked James as he wiped the
blood from his shoulder.
..."Not bad, better than what the drugs use to give me" James
said with a chuckle.
..."You just keep of them and you'll be alright" Randy said and
then patted James on the back, but he made sure he didn't hit
any of now yellow bruises.
As the group that was on the protection job stood back and
watched as they van was cleaned and re-detailed to escape being
identified; Mr Flanagan entered the garage and smiled at his
crew as he held up a plastic shopping bag and walked over to the
group and handed each of them an envelope with their names
written on them.
..."Pay for your job tonight, everybody's regular pay will come
tomorrow as usual" Mr Flanagan stated and then headed back to
the door allowing Arnie to come in with his kit to fix James's
shoulder. Mr Flanagan left without much fuss as Arnie got to
work on James's shoulder and Max's leg, which he hurt while
running during the shootout. James opened the envelope and
counted the $450 dollars and nodded.
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James brought Groceries, got his
clothes washed and paid his bar
tab during the day, which totaled
at $427. He spent $75 during the
week.
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- $4138
- Old Mobile Phone: ~
~Martin
~Oliver
~Ryan
~Mr Flanagan
~Flanagan Auto Parts and Restoration (Business)
- Keys to Garage
#Post#: 9049--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
DIR By: OGluke
Date: June 14, 2013, 12:11 pm
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just beat the hell outta me with a stick for not giving your
story the admiration it truly deserves.
I haven't been as faithful to your writings lately but am I
hearing that the Petrovic family is involved? What would the
Russians want with bikers?
I've yet to read that far into the story so forgive me if I come
off as stupid.
#Post#: 9052--------------------------------------------------
Re: Challenges
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: June 14, 2013, 4:48 pm
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THIS STORY JUST JUMPED UP A WHOLE OTHER LEVEL!!!
I was so stoked after reading this I accidently bumped into the
enter button lol! Anyways this is turning out to be a heck of a
story you got going on here! Alota description and I like the
3rd person writing.
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Re: Challenges
DIR By: OGluke
Date: June 17, 2013, 11:06 am
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You and AB are honing your capabilities as writers, it's like
you've hatched your cacoons and transformed into two magnificent
butterflies.
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Re: Challenges
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: June 17, 2013, 8:12 pm
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I still suprise myself and with you guys every chapter or story
I read, Still can believe we have been writing for so long and
were still coming up with ideas all the time, I wonder if we put
all of our stories together how many there would be total! ;D
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Re: Challenges
DIR By: OGluke
Date: June 17, 2013, 11:26 pm
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over a hundred and still kicking arse
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