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#Post#: 8768--------------------------------------------------
Re: Throwback
DIR By: OGluke
Date: April 23, 2013, 4:48 am
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[size=18pt][center]Boiling Point[/center]
- one day later -
Blake is in desperate need of help and seeks support from his
sister Kimberly Monique, who happens to be competing in an
illegal street racing event tonight.
Blake
I’m so fucking out of it. All this running has me exausted.
Kimberly
What are you doing here bro?
Blake
Sis, I’m In danger, me and Jeni are.
Kimberly
Whoa slow down and catch your breathe, okay tell me what’s
wrong?
Blake
*exhales* There are people trying to kill me. This big fucker
Sledge, really huge. He and the Gators have my Jeni.
Kimberly
You mean the Street Gators have her?
Blake
Yeah but how did you..
“Yo Kim, we racing for pink slips or knitting fuzzy sweaters?
Let’s go baby!
Kimberly
The red light’s calling for me bro. We’ll finish this
conversation at the finish line. Wish me luck.
Blake
It’s the Monique curse. We’ve always belonged to the streets.
*ten minutes into the race*
Kimberly is leading in first place and inches away from the
checkered flag
Kimberly
Your tuner is going to look real spiffy in my garage, Jeff!
Kimberly
What’s that noise beeping?
KABOOM!
Kimberly’s car ignites into flames
Dak
*hops out of car and brushes hair back* From first to last Kim,
from first to last.
Blake
Kimmy?! What have you assholes done?!
Dak
I hated having to to do it. She was a spectacular girl.
Blake
I have to call mom and tell her kimmy is dead, what a fucked up
situation this is! Fuck, it's worser than i could've imagined.
“Your sweet mother was given a shot of novocaine and was put
down.
Dak
Why are you here, uncle pete?
Uncle Pete
I came for the fireworks, was that too sudden? Hello again
Blake, you correctly remember me.
Blake
What is this some kind of conspiracy going on? You two dickholes
are working together, that it? I demand a fucking response from
you sick twats! My sister is dead! Have a little compassion!
Dak
This is my uncle Pete.
Uncle Pete
I’m uncle Pete. Sorry for the sake of Kimberly's demise but it’s
what needed to happen as she was getting to be a liability akin
to somebody else in the family.
Blake
My father.. It was you people that killed him, wasn’t it?
Uncle Pete
Finally, you've glued the jigsaw pieces of the puzzle together.
We're the Slovenian Mob i spoke of and yes we had your father
killed and your sister just now.
Blake
I’ll kill both of you sons a bitches!
Dak
I’m holding you responsible for the death of Kim. If you
wouldn't have blown me off, Kimberly would still be alive!
Blake
What the fuck are you talking about?! She was my sister!
Dak
Don’t you get it? Kim and i were dating, but then i was forced
into pushing the button because you didn't wanna play ball with
us you conceited prick! I'd shoot you myself if you weren't such
a goddamn valuable asset. This doesn't bode well with my
emotions and to see her burnt to a crisp, makes my skin crawl!
Uncle Pete
Kids and their tempers, but hey.. It is what it isn’t. I’ll
leave you to mourn Kimberly, the least i can do. Oh and don't
even think of leaving town, there are surveilance teams watching
your every moment like a hawk. We'll be in touch.
*Dak and his Uncle Pete hop in their limousine and drive off
leaving Blake to weep over the death of his sister Kimberly*
#Post#: 8769--------------------------------------------------
Re: Throwback
DIR By: OGluke
Date: April 23, 2013, 5:07 am
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The dream wasn't that long but Dak did blow kimberly to bits, he
actually had a different motive though.
That ends the kick ass dream i had and another story.
maybe i'll dream even bigger next time.
#Post#: 8771--------------------------------------------------
Re: Throwback
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: April 23, 2013, 5:45 am
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Story is awesome bro, need I say more!
#Post#: 8772--------------------------------------------------
Re: Throwback
DIR By: OGluke
Date: April 23, 2013, 5:48 am
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that was the ending of the story.
i only wished i dreamt longer damn me for waking up.
#Post#: 8775--------------------------------------------------
Re: Throwback
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: April 23, 2013, 6:07 am
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Fuck haha, I didn't read the last chapter bro, how'd I miss
that?
Your dreams are awesome, have more, just keep sleeping and
dreaming.
#Post#: 8776--------------------------------------------------
Re: Throwback
DIR By: OGluke
Date: April 23, 2013, 6:33 am
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--- Quote from: Aussie Boy link ---
>
> Fuck haha, I didn't read the last chapter bro, how'd I miss
that?
>
> Your dreams are awesome, have more, just keep sleeping and
dreaming.
>
--- End Quote ---
I know it doesn't seem like much but dreams are what you make of
it said someone famous.
#Post#: 8948--------------------------------------------------
Re: Throwback
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: May 26, 2013, 10:13 pm
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Haha, you should of make big blake wake and his sister ask
"Whats Wrong" and have him say it was just a nightmare, like in
all those movies where you think the whole story was really
happening but it was just a dream the whole time!!!!! ::)
I actually used bits and pieces of my dreams in some of my
stories. I think one idea I never got to use, but it was
supposed to be in one of my zombie stories where they all reach
their destination they were going to, where a ship was supposed
to take them somewhere safe across the water but the ship had
left them behind, and one of the guys says "Well, I'll see you
on the other side" then jumps into the ocean and swims off into
the morning sun, and the other 2 guys decide to stay behind and
trying living in the zombie filled city.
#Post#: 8961--------------------------------------------------
Re: Throwback
DIR By: cali soul
Date: May 30, 2013, 2:32 pm
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great dream lol
#Post#: 8963--------------------------------------------------
Re: Throwback
DIR By: OGluke
Date: May 31, 2013, 9:37 am
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you may jump for joy gents
theres a sequel planned based off another dream
it continues with a new MC and takes place again in Aberdale.
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