DIR Return Create A Forum - Home
---------------------------------------------------------
SR Forum Veterans
HTML https://srveterans.createaforum.com
---------------------------------------------------------
*****************************************************
DIR Return to: Stories and RP
*****************************************************
#Post#: 8113--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mamma Mia 2: It's twice or nothing
By: OGluke Date: January 23, 2013, 4:33 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
- The last peace -
HTML http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pVYK_QXm8H0
*Saint Johns Hospital*
Quincy: Forgive me for sinning in your presence father. The
charges are primed and and ready to blow. i'm waiting on your
signal Zach.
Vic: How did they die? Fell from the sky onto a FBI cruiser!?
I'm gonna need some time processing this information, thanks for
calling Joe. James is dead but so is D'anthony, i don't know
what to think without getting frustrated but as a positive, The
Dividicos did win the war.
Quincy: I'm beginning to get pissed off, call already!
Vic: Who do you break the bad news to first Vic, James recently
widowed wife Suzanna or his wounded sister Mia.
Quincy: I'll show you whose fucking nanny i am prick, i got the
stupid message on your machine fucking call me!
Vic: I hadn't envisioned our victory to be cruel and filled with
depression, but we earned it fighting off those scumbags that
dared to step on our fucking shoes.
Quincy: Pick up the phone and call or i'm pushing this damn
button without your consent! You've got but five minutes before
everything goes kablam.
Vic: There has to be a happy ending somewhere. When Mia recovers
it'll be possible for the family to grow stronger and move
forward into the future. Yeah it's not that bad, we've still got
Mia and thank god for that.
Quincy: Our business has concluded you smuck, here comes the
full shebang.
BOOM
Vic: No, oh fucking no not you too Mia! The whole goddamn
hospital is in flames along with The Dividicos dream of a
unified Dianis City. Once The Commission learns of D'anthony's
death, they're gonna launch another counter-strike against every
surviving member that isn't apart of their elite branch. Heh, so
much for a happy ending. I refuse to live a fucking slave under
anyones ruling but my own.
BANG
#Post#: 8123--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mamma Mia 2: It's twice or nothing
By: OGluke Date: January 24, 2013, 1:08 am
---------------------------------------------------------
And so ends the tale of the stereotypes.
#Post#: 8126--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mamma Mia 2: It's twice or nothing
By: Gangstarr4 Date: January 24, 2013, 6:33 am
---------------------------------------------------------
I wish you hadn't ended so early :/ ...
But DAMN that story was OG.
James killed himself, D'angelo and his pops went out in a blaze
EVEN though his dad was a Rat. Then the lil Jon . Lol
#Post#: 8130--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mamma Mia 2: It's twice or nothing
By: OGluke Date: January 24, 2013, 1:03 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
Nobody lives except for Quincy as the BANG at the ending was Vic
shooting himself.
Mamma Mia was my understanding on what the life of a mobster
supposedly is and how it relates to their demographic although i
doubt many italians are that cold hearted, vindictive, greedy
and murderous but then again i'm not a mobster.
I had planned on making the story longer with the arrival of the
commission taking over dianis with only Mia to save the day but
i got other projects *in the works* so i couldn't be bothered to
continue as i feel the ending was significant in saying that
mobster life aint peaches and cream and that it's a very brutal
world to be apart of and that no matter how you spin it, there
aren't any happily ever afters for scumbags.
My moms ex boyfriend claimed his brother was a mobster and that
he chopped off a man's thumb because he was late on a payment
and that his bodyguard which was as gigantic as the bigshow from
wwe brutalized the poor man for borrowin protection money and
not paying it back on time, that to me is just wrong and i'm
thankful i don't belong to a group of savages that would remove
a man's finger due to he was late in paying back money to the
mob, as i've said before the mafia are scumbags but never the
less i do enjoying writting fanfiction and for something other
then SaintsRow i feel i did quite well with Mamma Mia.
#Post#: 8131--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mamma Mia 2: It's twice or nothing
By: Gangstarr4 Date: January 24, 2013, 1:44 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
The ultimate difference between me & half the forum... I live
that life . I, just not as cold hearted .. God showed me the way
to the rapper career and I've been doing fine ever since. Can we
I corporate New Diana's Into our story universe? You know for
future stories between writers. Like we k ow what's going on
between each others cities
#Post#: 8134--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mamma Mia 2: It's twice or nothing
By: OGluke Date: January 24, 2013, 3:45 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
[quote author=Gangstarr4 link=topic=358.msg8131#msg8131
date=1359056699]
The ultimate difference between me & half the forum... I live
that life . I, just not as cold hearted .. God showed me the way
to the rapper career and I've been doing fine ever since. Can we
I corporate New Diana's Into our story universe? You know for
future stories between writers. Like we k ow what's going on
between each others cities
[/quote]
I'm OGluke without the OG not a gangster but i do feel for
anyone thats struggling to survive.
You're welcomed to include Dianis City into your stories G4, i'm
not even using it for future stories.
#Post#: 8142--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mamma Mia 2: It's twice or nothing
By: Wetbizket Date: January 25, 2013, 6:38 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
Luke, you went balls out with these stories, I just caught up
and finished! Your a true OG in my book, you have been banging
out great stories since Vsing first starting the stories thread!
8) your story was like a dark comedy, it made me laugh it made
me cry. These two are defiantly going into my great reads list
when the time comes!!!
Of course I would of liked to see Mia wake from the coma, but
you gotta do what you gotta do! it was intense!
#Post#: 8146--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mamma Mia 2: It's twice or nothing
By: OGluke Date: January 26, 2013, 12:06 am
---------------------------------------------------------
Awe shucks bizket :)
I had planned for their to be a third part with the commission
coming down and attacking the dividcos family and having Mia
avenge her lost brother james and put an end to the commission
once and for all but to me, it's happend already in so many
other movies, games and TV shows. With this i wanted do
something original not yet done before and while the final
ending is a huge slap in the face to organized crime families,
it's how business is naturally carried out, no happy endings if
your in the mafia.
#Post#: 8149--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mamma Mia 2: It's twice or nothing
By: Wetbizket Date: January 26, 2013, 12:33 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
It was still good though, it makes you think! 8)
*****************************************************
DIR Previous Page
DIR Next Page