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The Final Chapter WIP
By: jameson18 Date: November 13, 2012, 7:42 pm
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[center]PLAY BEFORE
READING![/center][center]
HTML http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvsX03LOMhI
HTML http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvsX03LOMhI[/center][center][font=calibri]The<br
/>Final Chapter[/font][/center][center][font=calibri]
WIP[/font][font=calibri] [/font][/center]“Earth
provides enough to satisfy every man's needs, but not every
man's greed.”
― Mahatma Gandhi
HTML http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/4467789.Mahatma_Gandhi
[font=calibri]Unnamed Char1“There are no leaders anymore… only
disappointment.”[/font]
[font=calibri]*Night time in Steelport- a now sleeping city,
cars few and far between parked on the side of the road. One
lone car slowly making its way up the street to the Saints HQ*
[/font]
[font=calibri]Unnamed Char1 “We aren’t family anymore… only
acquaintances.”[/font]
[font=calibri]*The car begins to stop, in front of the entrance
now… Two men, getting out of the purple Range Rover*[/font]
[font=calibri]Unnamed Char1 “This is where we draw the line… We
joined back when it meant something to be a Saint. A Third
Street Saint.”[/font]
[font=calibri]*They walk towards the back of the SUV, start to
raise the hatch. Tank tops getting soaked in the rain.[/font]
[font=calibri]Unnamed Char1 “Third…Street…Saint… I wore my title
with pride all over my body… Now, it takes everything I have in
me not to scratch these tattoos off…”[/font]
[font=calibri]*The words roll out of (Name here)’s mouth slowly,
sadly… Both men now grabbing the UZI’s they have in the back,
one for each hand…*[/font][center][font=calibri]*Fades to
Black*[/font][/center][center] [/center][center]
[/center][center][font=calibri]From this do you guys want me to
continue?[/font][/center]
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Re: The Final Chapter WIP
By: OGluke Date: November 13, 2012, 7:57 pm
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gandhi was wise
yes please continue so far its good
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Re: The Final Chapter WIP
By: Aussie Boy Date: November 13, 2012, 8:00 pm
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Write more hoo hoo, like now.
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Re: The Final Chapter WIP
By: jameson18 Date: November 13, 2012, 8:03 pm
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Thanks guys, I'm working on the characters list now. I'll be
working on it off and on, I also have classes too now. I'm going
to try getting the first chapter up by sometime next week.
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Re: The Final Chapter WIP
By: jameson18 Date: November 13, 2012, 8:10 pm
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[font=calibri]Characters List:[/font]
[font=calibri]*o**** *** (Unnamed Char1 to be revealed)[/font]
[font=calibri]Shaundi[/font]
[font=calibri]Protagonist[/font]
[font=calibri]Pierce[/font]
[font=calibri]Oleg[/font]
[font=calibri]Dex [/font]
[font=calibri]Troy[/font]
[font=calibri]***i** **t*** (to be revealed)[/font]
[font=calibri]Benjamin King[/font]
[font=calibri]***** (To be revealed)[/font]
[font=calibri]More characters to come, these are just the names
that will be in the first few chapter…[/font]
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Re: The Final Chapter WIP
By: Aussie Boy Date: November 13, 2012, 8:38 pm
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Awesome, do you reckon you could make the writing bigger, it'll
be easier to read that way.
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Re: The Final Chapter WIP
By: OGluke Date: November 13, 2012, 8:44 pm
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i was gonna say the text is too small but didnt wanna come off
as an ass
the list is coming together nicely troy and BJ i still cant
believe duncan is gone.
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Re: The Final Chapter WIP
By: jameson18 Date: November 13, 2012, 8:49 pm
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I know, he was an amazing actor :'(
Sorry about the text, I've been doing it in word... I'll make it
larger when I upload the first chapter... Gotta teaser coming
along ;D
If you can read it then you'll be ahead.
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Re: The Final Chapter WIP
By: jameson18 Date: November 13, 2012, 8:56 pm
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HTML http://i1188.photobucket.com/albums/z415/invalid_user1/WIP.png
I am hard at work on the first chapter. This is just an overview
of what I've go so far... On I side note, I know it's hard to
read. That's the point ;D ;D
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Re: The Final Chapter WIP
By: OGluke Date: November 13, 2012, 9:05 pm
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looks really nice written on paper cant wait for the final
chapter of the first chapter lol
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