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Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: cali soul Date: September 22, 2012, 11:30 am
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This is a rewrite of my story from still water stories called
"Jumped in: The new guy".
7:42 am tuesday Stilwater 3rd street.
*the old church*
Flaco: Hey you come here.
Carlos: What you want man?
Flaco: Are you ready ese?
Carlos: Por Que?
Flaco: The pumpkin patch ride.. The War in the hood homes what
you think?
Carlos: I think you can go fuck yourself Pancho i'm not down for
that gang shit bro.
Flaco: Aww mija don't cry. Join me and Los cobras ese.
Carlos Vato what part of "NO" don't you understand i'm through
with that life carnal.
Flaco: Pinche vato loco los carnales aren't nada but a bunch of
washed up punks. This is mexican turf ese not columbian.
Carlos: Look Flaco it's all sensless killing drugs and pimpin
and what not i had enough. Okay ese?
Flaco: You'll come to your senses when vatos are shooting up
your casa homes.
Carlos: Whatever and by the way i was in the Saint's not the
Carnales pendejo.
Flaco: You were a Santo? A pinche Santo?!
Carlos: Si loco i was a saint! Happy now puta?
Flaco: Vato you gotta take me to meet these eses.
Carlos: lost contact with every saint since That time. I wasn't
offically a saint i was a one fight helper ha ha.
Flaco: Que? then how would you know what gang life is about mi
hermano?
Carlos: My Jefe was a saint and my carnal was a vice king. Not
a good mixture.
Flaco: Ese i gotta go gang needs me. Alrato.
Carlos: Yea later brother.
Carlos walked on and soon found himself in a varrio known for
drive by's and stabbings. A car full of Los cholos locos(the
crazy gangsters) pulled up beside him.
They were a local gang known for skinning people shooting
innocent pedestrians robbing and just causing disasters.
The Cholo locos were around for many years.
Their leader left Mexico on a boat to come to America for a new
start back in the 50's. He was a farmer who was tired of being
treated like crap so he decided to start a pandilla to help
Mexicans come up and earn respect.
Not long after his rise in the Latin crime world others copied
in his foot steps.. His name was Victor Hernandez
he had soldados up and down each street every valley every city
he was slanging mota and robbing every one in sight.
The power got to him at first it was just him and a few friends
working and protecting their families now it's disaster.
Los cobras were long time enemies of the Cholo Locos. Los Cobras
were founded by a man named Benito Martinez Chavez a local
store owner tired of the trouble Los Cholos were causing so he
and others stood up to them.
That turned into something bigger then they had planned
resulting into one of the biggest rivalries in stilwater
history.
Paco a veterano for Los Cholos with a scar through his left eye
jumped out the car he threw up his gang sign and said what
varrio you claim ese? what set vato?
Carlos chuckled and yelled out El pollo loco cholos(the crazy
chicken gangsters) homes.
we are the baddest fried chicken makers ese don't mess with me!
Carlos said reaching into his pocket. I got fried chicken wings
ese i'll hurt you.
Paco looked at his homeboys in the car then back at Carlos with
a crazy look.
Chico another veterano for the cholo locos reached his hands out
the window and threw up another sign then paco pulled out a
knife.
Carlos with with a little fear in his eyes yelled out let's
throw down then vato simon ese let's get loco as he pulled out
his fierro.
Carlos and Paco both took swings at eachother till finally a
couple shots went off and the cholos dropped.
Caine said Carlos.
Yeah that's my name kid and that's johny he just saved your ass
thank him later. Hows that scratch of yours? asked Caine.
it's kinda big hurts a little Carlos replied.
Eh it'll be alright said Cain. Look kid come see me and johny at
the church on third street tomarrow morning okay. Alright said
Carlos.
Johny drove Caine back to the church and Carlos went home to get
some rest.
#Post#: 6720--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: OGluke Date: September 22, 2012, 6:58 pm
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OLE!
yous the king at writing about them essas cali.
There was a gang i had planned to use for one of my stories,
Hueros 90, dont know wat it means if anything but you can put
them into your story if you'd like. and stick around for longer
this time we miss having you around although your social life
can keep you busy, what im saying tho is that we love u. :)
#Post#: 6721--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: cali soul Date: September 22, 2012, 7:44 pm
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Thank you bro that means alot to me and i'd be honored to use
that gang in my story. I love all you guys too. I miss you :)
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Re: Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: cali soul Date: September 24, 2012, 12:27 am
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The night was young the moon was out bright. Saint's were
walking around the row purple flags and all black to match the
night.
Purple was in the air gun shots and arguing yelling out sets
ribs cooking on the bbq. You could tell what was happening all
around by the smell in the air.
Carlos woke up grabbed a beer from his mini freezer and took a
swig. He ironed his tan dickies and his white shirt threw them
on grabed his creased pano(flag) and his loc shades tied up his
black and white nikes then headed out to a local bar called the
meowing cat.
Crazy name right? but hey it had pretty kitties all around it if
you get what i mean.
Carlos walked in ordered a few beers then went into the corner
to sit and enjoy his beer and the view.
The corner was a good place to hear conversations watch women
strip and dance and just think . he noticed Dex an ex saint.
Oh so sellouts come here too He thought to himself. A man in an
all black tux with a bright grey suit case walked up and
greated dex.
Hola mi amigo he said. Hola carnal como estas? asked dex Bien
homes said the man.
Carlos became curious so he got closer and started to rub on
dancer at the bar miss kitty was her stage name she was the
best dancer at the bar.
So how's it going mija? Carlos asked. *miss kitty purrs* Pretty
good papi she anwserd and yourself? Muy bueno mami he replied.
What time you getting off? Carlos asked with a smile. Miss kitty
smiled back got close and kissed on Carlos neck. He smiled
bigger and told her mija careful you're going to start a gun
battle my cannons loaded.
Kitty whispered not here papi later hit me up i get off at
twelve but for now i gotta work oh and i'm not a cheap Whore so
you better be respectful she said.
Carlos laughed and was amazed at what he was hearing from Dex
and this man with the suitcase.
Dex: Yeah i'm planning on blowing this place up and getting out
of here and off to Jamica.
Man: Yeah but this will blow your cover they'll know it was you
Dex.
Dex: Forget them they aren't smart enough to know that walter.
Walter: Okay man but this is going to run you about five
billion.
Dex: Not a prob i'll have my people send you a check you know my
word is good.
Walter: Yup.
As soon as dex left he whispered in kitty's ear "slip it in his
drink".
Kinda odd Carlos thought. I was just talkin to her i was
gettin action and listening at the same time. I'm good he said.
Walking out of the club he heard the man with the suitcase gag
then fall out of his chair so he walked out only to see another
man running gasping for air.
The man bumped into him and said help me ppplease.... Damn it!
said Carlos. Flaco! what happend carnal? Hold on homes i'll call
911.
Carlos made a phone call but it was interupted by Gomez the
new leader of the cholo locos. *gun shots go off* Well if it
isn't the baboso from the other day heard about you the santos
saved your ass said Gomez.
Tu madre yelled out Carlos as he charged Gomez to a wall he
shanked him 17 times then sliced another cholos neck and stabbed
a few in the throat.
chavalas! He yelled.
Los cobras rolled up the rest of Los cholos locos Hueros 90 the
saints and the carnales. One look started the biggest shootout
in history.
For Seven hours the gun shots echoed through the city and got
louder as other gangs jumped in and pedestrians.
Finally in a act of fear anger and courage Carlos yelled out
stop and blasted his cuete in the air.
Everyone stopped and looked at him like he was crazy.
What have we turned into he said. What is this pedo? This damn
war between us latinos and latinas? Raza? he said to another
local gang called Raza warriors.
You think this is raza?! This ain't raza homes this is some damn
bull shit ese! Carlos yelled!
We should be fighting together not against one another ese's we
need unity and love a fight for our people to survive holding
eachother together making us as latins stronger standing
together arm in arm against all who oppose that's raza!
If this is raza now then i don't wanna be a latino ese. Que
paso vato locos? Mi hermano is dead he bled to death i tried to
save him but you barbarians had to come with your cuetes and
flags and dickies and jerseys and loc's are you afraid or
ashamed to let those eyes show to let your face be seen
baboso's?!
You know deep inside i'm right you all should be ashamed he
said shedding tears picking up flaco and walking off into the
night.
All the gangs looked at each other los cholo locos members spoke
out.
My name is Cruz and he's right i just wanted to say we are all
idiotas for kiling each other ese's let's unite raza.
Si my name is Marcos i'm with uniting.
javier is my name ese's we should be raza not caca.
The cholos all laughed and hugged.
#Post#: 6745--------------------------------------------------
Re: Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: Gangstarr4 Date: September 24, 2012, 4:09 pm
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action packed !! dudes being stabbed and poisioned. changes in
ganf structures and i understsbd the spanish. great story. can
my gang "Azul Diablos" be un?
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Re: Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: cali soul Date: September 24, 2012, 6:12 pm
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Thanks bro. ofcourse they can i'd be honored :)
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Re: Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: Wetbizket Date: September 25, 2012, 6:01 pm
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Damn good story bro!!! I just wish i could understand all the
Latino slang lol! But it does sound pretty badass. Keep this
story goin it great!
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Re: Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: cali soul Date: September 27, 2012, 3:15 pm
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thank's bro! I will start using subtitles from now on sorry
about that.
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Re: Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: cali soul Date: September 28, 2012, 2:38 am
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In the cemetery Carlos looked down on Flaco's grave.
It was big bright shiny white head stone art work.
Tattoo's on his arms now rest in peace tat's and Tear drops on
his eyes. Carlos had grown a big beard he shed a tear and he was
dressed like a pure cholo from the varrio(neighborhood).
The gangster life and depression got to him he was all about La
vida loca (The crazy life) now.
He took a swig of his Beer and poured the rest of it out on the
grass so Flaco could drink.
it had been Five years since he last saw his homeboy die in his
arms.
The pressure of losing his best friend made him give in and go
insane.
Moose walked up and layed flowers down on the ground at a grave
a few steps down from where Carlos was. Hey you're a
santo(Saint) said Carlos yeah you. Me a what? asked Moose.
A santo homes a saint! Carlos yelled.
Yeah essay i'm a saint say it in english not spanish said Moose.
Callese (shutup) puto (bitch) i'll dust you Carlos replied.
Look vato you ain't on my level i know who you are Carlos don't
make the mistake of stepping on toes of those who are stronger
and more capable of destroying Said Moose.
Ey dawg go jump some rope said Carlos.
Shut up go shave geez you look like a bum go suck on a gat punk
replied Moose.
Moose walked off and laughed as Carlos threw his bottle at a
grave stone. Carlos went home showered shaved his beard off got
dressed in his sharpest outfit and headed to the church on
third street
Caine was sitting talking to his right hand man Johny gat.
Caine: So you agree right? No way hall and oats can be beaten by
madonna man!
Johny: They both are good but the temptations smoke them both.
Caine: Not even the same category but yeah that's true but man
earth wind and fire takes the whole cake.
Johny: Definitely!
-They both began to sing lets groove tonight then Carlos walked
up-
So you came after Five years? I told you meet us here Five
years ago said caine. I want in said Carlos canonize me i wanna
be a purple flag a santo (saint) a 3rd street rider ese.
Look ese this ain't no joke third streets on top homes said
caine.
I know loco let me get down with los santos (the saints) replied
Carlos.
They took him out back and beat him senseless. He got back up
and beat most the saints down they rose up and smacked him down.
He rose up again and kicked their asses with big right hooks to
the jaws of a few saints and a few kicks to the guts of other
saints.
Caine and Johny approached Carlos. Caine punched him in the
chest and gut and Gat kicked him from the back.
Caine drop kicked his face while gat grabbed him by the shirt
before he hit the ground and elbowed his neckto the concrete
floor.
They beat his lights out then dropped him in the grave yard to
rest.
He earned his spot but for now let him rest said caine.
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Re: Mi Pandilla (My Gang)
By: Wetbizket Date: September 28, 2012, 11:26 am
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Thanks for the subtitles Cali ;D
This story reminds me of the good ole days! I cant wait for
more!
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