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Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: Wetbizket Date: June 13, 2012, 11:19 pm
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[center]Redline Rebels
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Welcome to Tempest City, a Mecca for anyone with an engine and
the itch for racing. The days are hot and the nights are cool,
the black top is as smooth as glass,and the city is a mixing pot
for all kinds of vehicles. Hot rods, muscle cars, imports, low
riders, 4 X 4’s, choppers, street bikes, concepts, luxury, you
can find any kind of car on the streets. If the streets had
checkered flags at the end of every cross section or coping
around every corner you could confuse it as a race track, the
city was built for racing. Located right in the middle of
Tempest is down town Villreal, a district filled with sky
scrapers and businesses, a good place for circuit races where
there are many tight corners and tricky turns. You can cruise on
over to the freeway were you can run into someone willing to
play a little Highway running for a wager.
Above Villreal is Braxxton Heights, the suburbs placed in the
hills of Tempest, the long winding roads make for great sprints.
To the south is the industrial district, big factories, twisting
streets, good for losing your opponent in a game of Roll. Then
right over is the old industrial district, abandoned factories
and storage bays litter the whole district making it easy to
hide from any police hot on your tail, the empty lots make great
drifting tracks and good room for scenes and meets. On the
outside of Tempest are the outskirts, just long strips of two
lane blacktop, a drag racers paradise, once you reach the
outskirts anything can happen.
…Finally, I and my friend Cooper have been waiting for a phone
call all day to signal that we were accepted into a tournament
we put in for; this would be our first time attending an event
this big. About 12:30 we received a phone call from a guy saying
that my friend Cooper was in the lineup to race in the tourney,
he gave us instructions to meet his driver at a location then we
are to follow the driver to the race! We don’t know where the
race is being held, or who was going to be racing, so we have no
idea what to expect.
Me and Cooper have been fine tuning his all black 1990 Corvette
all day, I was quite proud of all the work we have done to it,
every single part to the engine was brand new, even the bolts
and screws. Cooper was a good racer, he has been in countless
races around the city and was getting known, I race occasionally
too, but I’m better at crashing cars than racing them so I’m
letting Cooper take this one.
We met the driver and followed him all the way to the outskirts
of Tempest; we drove away from the bright city lights and out
into the middle of the desert, we turned off the main road and
followed a tiny dirt road to an abandoned air field, to our
surprise it seemed like every one in the street racing scene was
there! Rows upon rows of every kind of car and person were lined
up all along the edge of the air field. The driver led us to a
little spot where the tourney competitors and there crews were
at, we were able to get out and talk with the other racers
before the race, there were 5 other racers, each had an equal
chance of putting up a good fight during the race.
But we didn’t have long to chat because the tournament was
starting soon, there was some high ranking racers competing
along with us, one of the best racers in Tempest was running, he
goes by the name “Rain”, and he runs with a pretty notorious
crew “The Hashiriya’s” that is known to start trouble and some
of their means of winning races is pretty aggressive.
A guy in a suit gave the notion that the race was starting, the
competition was going to be a three course race, first a 3 lap
circuit race around the air strip, then a drag, then a sprint to
the industrial district to finish it off. Cooper got in his
Corvette and started it up, I ran up to him and leaned in the
window, “Good luck man, don’t do anything crazy, were just in
this for the fun right!” I said over the hum of the engine.
Cooper looked at the rest of the racers preparing for the race;
one of them was a rich guy from Braxxton heights driving a
Ferrari California. “I don’t think you have much to worry about
him, his car may be fast and all dressed up be cant race for
shit, he probably spends more time washing his car than driving
it.” I said looking at the guy as he gets surrounded by a bunch
of girls.
The next racer had a black and red BMW Coupe, he was a well know
circuit racer in Villreal. I pointed to a guy by himself getting
into a silver Nissan Skyline, “Look out for that skyline, those
things have great acceleration and can handle corners pretty
good, but I don’t think I’ve ever seen him around before.” I
yelled out as the other racers were starting their cars. “I
think the only guy you have to really keep your eyes on is Rain;
He is driving an Audi TT rs, once he hits 6th gear that thing
can fly, expect him to take tight turns and block the lane, I
seen two full cans of Nos in his car, and I’m sure he’ll use
them late in the race to get a stiff lead.”
Cooper put on his helmet and pulled up to the starting line
along with the other 5 racers, the roaring of the engines was
both obnoxious and exciting. Everyone heard the cars revving
started to gather around the line as the race was about to
begin.
TO BE CONTINUED BY AUSSIEBOY!!! THIS ONES GONNA BE GEWD Y’ALL!!!
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Re: Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: Aussie Boy Date: June 14, 2012, 8:21 am
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I sat in my Skyline, I was silent, this is my first big race and
I was racing one of the best racers in the city, but I'm not
scared. I only have to worry about Rain in the Audi because the
other 3 don't look they would be a challenge; I heard the
Ferrari rev loudly, I put my foot down and my 4 inch exhaust
gave the V6 a nice note. I looked along the line, the dude in
the Corvette and the Ferrari driver were both wearing helmets
now, it was weird because some of them wear in racing gear and I
didn't even have my shirt buttoned up.
A women in short shorts and a bikini ran out and held out a red
rag and looked across the cars, I put my skyline into gear and
revved it and stared straight forward at the opening straight, I
had to beat Rain to the corner, I need the hole shot; the
hole-shot was the most important thing, Rain blocked the corners
and the amount he probably has under the Hood of his Audi I
wouldn't catch him on the straights if he was in front of me.
The Woman dropped the rag and stood still as we all roared
forward, I red lined and hit second, I red line and hit third, I
red lined and hit fourth I roared into the corner nearly at the
top of fourth, I tapped the brakes and pull the handbrake on and
started sliding, I went wide to avoid the guy in the corvette
cutting up the inside, next to Rain who was trying to take the
corner wide, but had me and the corvette on either side and
couldn't block the corner. We came out of the corner and my tail
end started sliding on the dirt on the side of the circuit.
I dropped it to 3rd and pulled it back on the track and stayed
on the outside of the track for the left hand corner coming up,
because I would be on the inside, I throw it in fourth, Rain was
out front now, I was keeping up with surprisingly, I hammered
down the straight, getting a slight lead over the Corvette, he
went up a gear and over took me again.
We hit the corner, I went up the inside and stuffed my gears up
and the BMW came up the outside of me, with more speed out of
the corner, I put my foot down and hand braked into the next
right hand corner and stayed in the same gear. I came sideways
around the last right hand corner onto the straight, I was
competing for second place with the Corvette and BMW, the
Ferrari was catching us on the straights but losing us in the
corners.
Coming down the straight, the track took a diagonal left hand
turn onto dirt, we took that, Rain almost lost it and the
Corvette got out in front, the BMW spun out into the dirt, after
hitting a soft spot in the dirt track, we hit another diagonal
corner to the right and Rain cut me off and got the Corvette
going around a big sweeper and back onto the track, I over took
the Corvette and got myself a comfortable place in second, I
looked backwards the BMW was coming up quickly behind the
Ferrari, he was using nos, to catch us, we hit the end of the
straight and started backing down the gears and go through the
sharp, tight right hand turn back onto the starting straight, I
cut across the track and took Rain on the inside and put myself
in first, I held first place along the straight, halfway along
it, I hit a 120 as I started my second lap.
I dropped it to fourth as I approached the corner and touched
the brakes, then to third and touched the brakes again, Rain
came up the inside of me and forced me out wide, he took the
lead from me, I lost second to the Corvette around the next
corner, I fought with the Corvette for second spot around the
next 2 corners and down the straight back onto the dirt, I
powered around the sweeper and got second and kept it right to
the finish line, we started our final lap and the Corvette took
me near the end of the straight.
He stomped on the brakes to get around the corner, where I did
them easier but he still stayed a head of me, I decided to try
that and went very wide and sideways off the track, I dropped
gears to try and stay at high revs, while I got back onto the
track, I had lost all hope of winning this one, but I could get
second if I tried.
I chased the Corvette throw the corner, I could see Rain was
slowly increasing the gap between us, I could tell he was using
his nos supply now, I had none in my car because I didn't know
how to set it up properly. We hit the dirt section and the
Corvette started adding space to the gap between us, I was in
top gear at full revs as we roared around the sweeper, I hanging
on for dear life trying to keep Skyline on the track, I'm sure
Rain and corvette driver were doing it harder than me, we came
onto the second last stright and the Corvette put 2 car lengths
between us.
Rain was way ahead, we weren't going to catch him now and I'm
sure we both knew it, The Corvette slowed down really quickly
coming to the last corner, I stopped later and almost gained the
lead, but he had more speed coming out of the corner, I sat on
his tail, weaving from side to side, to try and get around him
before the finish line.
It was approaching quickly and my front wheels were in line with
his back wheels, I had the pedal on the floor and I was in top
gear now, trying to catch him, but it was hopeless we crossed
the line like that. I slowed down up the track, drove off the
track and down the side of it back to the line, I followed the
Corvette down there, the BMW had crossed the line and the
Ferrari was the last one, everybody was crowding around the cars
now, Rain was standing next to his smirking at the rest of us.
I got out and looked at the Corvette driver and nodded, he
nodded back and I turned away as a tall skinny guy started
talking to him, I popped the hood and checked out my motor,
while I was waiting for the next race, "Cops!" I heard someone
scream and then sirens and a helicopter. I slammed the hood down
and got back in my skyline and started it, people were running
everywhere, cars were roaring all over, I put my foot down and
raced through the crowd, dodging people as I went.
I seen someone roll over the roof of a silver Mazda out of the
corner of my eye, I narrowly avoiding a Charger heading straight
for me, I turned left sharply as a Mustang was trying to avoid
getting T - Boned by a cop cruiser, I raced up the track I just
raced on and spun around as 2 cop cars were heading straight for
me, I took of in the opposite direction with 2 cruisers after
me. I swerved and missed a cop car chasing a pick up truck,
covered in people, a guy hanging onto the cop car roof.
I headed for the gate now, I drove off a small ledge, the car
hit the ground and lost power for a second, "Fuck!" I shouted, I
put my foot right down and the car gained power again and it
jumped forward. I turned right I felt all the weight off the car
go onto the left side, then I flicked it right to avoid Rain who
was heading straight at me and weight of the car shifted to the
right and I felt it was too late.
The car rolled, the roof was pushed and some of the windows
smashed, I was thrown into the passenger seat, the car rolled
over again and landed on its roof, I laid on the roof lining,
then I felt the car jolt, spin and roll on it's left side doors
and then back onto its roof. I looked out the shattered
windscreen, A cop was stopped near by, with a smashed up front
end.
I tried to crawl out from the car, but I couldn't move my left
arm, it was stuck in one place, I dragged myself out with my
right arm and a cop tried to grab me, I hit him in the face to
avenge my car, He fell down and another cop grabbed my arms to
try and put me in handcuffs, I elbow him in the stomach as soon
as he grabbed my left arm, and then turned and round decked him.
A third copper sucker punched me and put the handcuffs on,
quickly while I was on the ground, I was in mass amounts of pain
from my left arm.
I looked around at people fleeing and the cops chasing, there
were now 2 helicopters flying around I recognized the new one as
a news helicopter, if we weren't here, you'd mistake this for a
riot.
I noticed my car mirror near by, I looked at it, I had blood
trickling all over my face, I sighed rubbed my arm with left
hand as best I could without starting to hurt again, I felt a
deep gash in my arm. I felt myself get dragged to my feet and I
looked their was a police van sitting near by, I was walked over
to it and put inside, I sighed in relief when they put my
handcuffs in front of me and chain them to the floor. I wasn't
in pain anymore. I looked around, the van was full of other
people, some were busted up like me and others, were just
sweating. "God Damn it" I said with a sigh.
YOUR TURN WETTINGBIZZYKITTY
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Re: Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: Wetbizket Date: June 14, 2012, 1:18 pm
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Awesome chapter Aussie, I see we haven't lost our touch since
our last story which was a long time ago!
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Re: Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: OGluke Date: June 20, 2012, 1:20 pm
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this stories racing to the finish line of success!!! bra
nice cars getting trashed, BMW bad motherfucking wheels
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Re: Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: Wetbizket Date: June 21, 2012, 12:46 pm
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Hahaha, good one luke. You see that, thats my Bad Muthafucka!
hopefully I should have time on the weekend to write my chapter,
so sorry for the long wait Aussie, you know I'm a slow poke!
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Re: Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: Wetbizket Date: June 25, 2012, 2:00 am
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[font=andale mono]“In the Jail House”[/font]
It’s crazy on how many people were at this event and
to think no one even seen the police coming in for the kill,
there must have been just as many cops as there were of us, the
raid reminded me of the part of the movie from the warriors when
all the cops raided all of the gangs.
I sat in a holding cell at the county jail with about 20 other
people from the tournament; all of the holding cells were full
to the brim. When the police first came at us right after Cooper
passed the finish line I jumped in the car, I could tell Cooper
was seriously angry, he stomped on the pedal as hard as he could
and furiously shifted gears. I didn’t know if he was mad because
he lost the race or the police were coming in ruining
everything, but he wasn’t himself because he did something I
would have never expected from him, as we were heading for the
exit gate a police officer jumped in front of our path aiming
his gun right at us, Cooper gave a deadly lifeless stare at the
officer and never let his foot off the pedal. The cop didn’t
have time to get out of the way and was rammed.
I came out of my daze when a cell door slammed shut and the
sound of people hollering and shouting, I stood up to see what
everyone was looking at, I looked over to see two police
practically pushing Rain down the hallway, I was shocked to see
that the police got to him. The last I seen of him was his car
swerving around the driver in the Silver Skyline and making off
into the desert night.
A minute later everyone was settled down in the holding cell and
minding their own business, I gave a long sigh and laid my head
against the concrete brick wall and closed my eyes, just then I
heard someone shuffle up next to me “Your friend is a pretty
good driver.”
I kept my eyes closed for a second before opening them to see
who was talking to me; I looked over to see the driver of the
BMW for the race earlier, He had a black eye and was holding the
side of his face with his fingertips. “He did a good job on
keeping the corvette in control when going around those turns;
those things have a tendency to spin out when taking tight
turns.” He said sitting down on the bench next to me.
I cleared my throat “Yeah, I was impressed too.” I briefly said
as I was starting to get tired, I didn’t know what time it was
but it was defiantly about 2 A.M.
The BMW driver played with the puffed up ring around his eye
then cringed at the pain as he poked it “Damn, someone needs to
show that egotistical asshole Rain that he isn’t really as is of
a hot shit as he thinks he is, that guy’s head is so big he can
wear the moon as a hat.” He said then quietly chuckled at his
joke.
… “So what do you think they’re gonna do to him?” I asked
leaning my head back on the wall and closing my eyes.
… “Probably give him a slap on the wrist and send him on his
way, the guys father is some rich executive for some useless
stock company, and Rain gets treated like a royal prince…
nimrod.” The BMW driver said in a sarcastic tone.
I took a breath through my nose “I meant my Friend Cooper?” I
said in monotone.
… “What do you mean, what did he do?” The driver asked.
I quickly answered “I think he killed a cop” I said praying that
it wasn’t the case.
The BMW driver hesitated before answering “…Well shit….” He
quietly said.
After thet we remind silent, and after a while I must of dozed
off for a good time, I awoke to a buzzer going off down the
hall. I noticed I fell asleep in an uncomfortable position and
tried to ease myself out of it, but without any luck a felt the
soreness of sleeping all twisted up like that as I sat up. I
looked around with my dry eyes and seen a ray of sun light
shining out in the hallway, then a row of prison guards step in
front of our cell, one guy stepped forward “Alright wake up were
heading out in 5 minutes” He yelled out almost piercing my ears.
Later everyone in my cell was hauled off by the prison
bus to a courthouse where we were all lined up in a tiny little
court room, inside was a lady sitting at a desk with a type
writer and a couple of people in suits on some benches. A
bailiff walked in and called out the judge, he handed the judge
a stack of papers, the judge shuffled through them one by one as
he called out names of the people from the tourney last night
then gave them all sorts of fines, some guys got sent to jail
for have prior arrest, some got their cars impounded, some were
fined about 5000 dollars for being involved in the affairs from
last night. I grew more nervous as more and more guys were
escorted from the room, finally my name was called “Leon Taylor,
step up to the stand.” The judge said while looking at a piece
of paper.
Mr. Taylor, I am suspending your license, you will owe 500
dollars for attending an illegal street racing event, and you
will be held in jail for 3 to 6 months for your involvement in
the races and attempt to evade arrest.” The judge quickly
rattled off the slapped his gavel on his desk, my face lit up
like a roman candle under the suspense I was being sent to jail
and getting all these fines.
Later I was taken to the Tempest City Prison along with
the BMW driver and a few other people that were involved in the
same stuff as I. My pictures were taken, they took my finger
prints, stripped me of all my belongings which was my wallet and
few little items I had in my pockets at the time, they even took
my clothing along with my favorite grey fedora hat. They hosed
me down then gave me an orange jumpsuit to wear, I was yelled at
and scolded by the guards, I was forced to remember a number,
which I was going to be called from now on instead of my birth
name. Then I was put into a small cell along with another guy
that was at the races, I was scared, I should have been more
prepared for something like this since I was getting involved in
illegal street racing and such, but I wasn’t. I was also a
worried for Cooper; I don’t think the judge will be light on him
for trying to run over a police officer.
TO BE CONTINUED. REMEMBER KIDS STREET RACING IS ILLEGAL AND
DANGEROUS! Aussie boy, take the wheel!
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Re: Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: Aussie Boy Date: July 9, 2012, 2:25 am
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Sorry it's taken me so long, shit has been crazy the past couple
of weeks
"Fight in the Yard"
I looked at this guy they put in my cell, he stood near the door
and he looked very worried, "First time in here buddy?" I asked,
he looked at me and kept watching the walkway, like he was
waiting for someone to walk past, that's when I recognised him,
he was the skinny guy talking with the Corvette driver. "Not my
first time" I said trying to start a conversation, "I got into a
fight at a party, beat him to a bloody pulp, I was drunk and
high, I stole his car keys and stole his car, I crashed into a
police drug testing truck" I said, laughing near the end of my
story.
He looked over at me and grinned but then went back to watching
the walkway, "I'm Jack Strayer" I said extending my hand, He
looked at me again and nodded and shook my hand while he said,
"Leon Taylor"
"Who's your friend, the one driving the Corvette?" I asked
hoping he would talk, "That was Cooper" He said while watching
the walkway once again, "You looking out for him are you?" I
asked Leon, "Yeah" He said in the same style, "Why you so
worried about him?" I asked, "I think he killed a cop" Leon
stated. I looked at him and realized why he was so worried and
at that I had nothing else to say.
"Hey is that Jack Strayer I heard talking?" A voice came from
the cell next door, I got up and walked to the bars and looked
out, "Yeah who are you?" I asked, "It's Damien, Damien Campbell"
He said, "Damien!" I said surprised, "I haven't seen you since
Juvie" I added, "Na man, I was out for a week, but a put my PO's
head through a wall" Damien said, I laughed trying to stay quiet
so the guards wouldn't come down and listen to us talk.
"Why?" Leon asked him, "He spelled my last name wrong" Damien
said, Leon didn't say anything and went back to watching the
walkway, "Hey, the whole Prison has yard time at the same time,
you should be able to find him when we go outside" Damien
explained, Leon looked a little less worried after he heard
that.
"Thanks Damien, we'll catch up when the cells open" I said,
"Okie Dokie" Damien said and I went back and sat down, "Hey
don't worry man" I said to Leon, he nodded and finally came away
from the bars and went laid on the bottom bunk of the bunk bed,
I sighed and rested my head back against the wall.
I fell asleep and woke to the doors opening and the a guard
yelling at us to get out of the cell and go out to the yard, I
got up and followed Leon out into the walkway and we walked in a
liner with everybody else on block outside into the prison yard,
It felt great to be out in the fresh air; I was aching all over
from rolling my car last night and then fighting with the cops,
there is a year in this shit hole or parole in 4 months, because
I claimed the police attacked me first and almost everybody else
in the courtroom at the same time agreed. Just to get back at
the cops.
I saw Leon going off by himself, I decided to follow him and
keep him safe, poor bastard doesn't seem to know anything about
prison, you don't just go walking around by yourself, you may as
well paint a bulls eye on your back, especially around here.
I started following him when I heard someone yelling, I looked
and it was Rain, "You there with long hair, get over here!" he
demanded, "Fuck you, you arrogant piece of shit" I yelled back
at him aggressively. "Oh Yeah" He and a few of his cronies walk
towards me in a group, "Whats the matter, daddy hasn't bailed
you out yet?" I yelled at him, he glared at me, as they
surrounded me.
"I don't need my father!" He screamed at me, "Yeah?" Someone
yelled, I glanced in the direction of the voice, it was Leon, he
was walking towards, "You do need Nos, to win every god damn
race you enter!" He yelled, "Someones looking for ass kickin' "
Rain yelled, "You have to go through me to get to him" I yelled
pushing Rain backwards into a couple of his goons, I saw Damien
out of the corner of my eye, ready to jump in.
"You think you're a real big shot don't you!" Leon yelled at
him, "I don't think, I know I am, I'm the best racer in this
city!" Rain proclaimed, "Hell, Cooper must be a good driver, he
almost beat you, in fact, he probably would have, if you didn't
spray nos, near the finish. "Who the fuck is Cooper!" Rain asked
violently, "The driver of the black corvette last night!" I
yelled, "How in the fuck would you know!" Rain yelled at me,
Cause I was in the skyline last night" I stated, "Pfft, I was
toying with both of you" Rain stated trying to talk himself up.
"You looked like trying your hardest when I passed you" I said,
"You passed me?" Rain said still in an aggravated tone, "Yeah, I
was in the Skyline, remember, after the race you cut me off and
made me flip my car" I said angrily, "If your suck a brilliant
driver why didn't avoid me?" Rain yelled at me, "I never said a
was a brilliant driver, I was saying you're a bad one" I said.
Rain took a swing at me, I stepped backwards and he missed and
then he stood their glaring at me, "Fuck off, before I actually
try and hit you" Rain threatened, "That's the problem with you!"
Leon yelled as he joined back in the argument, you think you can
boss everyone around and threaten everybody, and if something
doesn't go your way, you make excuses, you're just a spoiled
brat" Leon yelled at him. "Kill both of thse fuckers" He ordered
his goons, "That's exactly what I'm talking about" Leon yelled
at Rain as he backed up to avoid the fight.
"You sure you want to do this?" I asked one of the goons, he
just glared at me like he and the others had been the whole
time, Damien stepped into the impending fight, as did 2 others
guys I recognized from the night before. "Stop!" Yelled a guard,
I glanced quickly and saw a few Guards running over to us with
pistols drawn, they got in between Us and Rains Gang. "You 5,
get before charge you again" One of the guards ordered us, we
slowly walked away from the fight in a group
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Re: Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: Wetbizket Date: July 10, 2012, 2:22 pm
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awww man, it was just getting good! I cant wait for more. Oh
wait, I have to write the next part lol! ;D
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Re: Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: Wetbizket Date: July 16, 2012, 2:13 am
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[font=impact]“B Block Breakdown”[/font]
Being a prisoner is a hard thing to adjust too, the whole first
day went by in a blur, it could have been because of all the
anxiety, or just because I only got 2 hours of sleep the night
before. Later that night my cell mate and new friend Jack “Who
at first I was very intimated by, mostly because he had told me
he had been in jail before for beating some guy senseless then
stealing his car and taking it for a joy ride.” Ended up talking
all night.
During the night before lights out we laid in our bunks and
talked the whole night, Jack taught me some pointers and gave
some tips on how survive in jail, then we ended up talking about
cars and racing till a guard had to come by and tell us to shut
up.
The next day was a little more relaxing; during recess our
little group stayed on one side of the courtyard and Rain and
his goons stayed on the other, the whole time Rain stood in the
corner leaned up against the wall. We would make jokes and point
and laugh at him, even though he was too far away from us to
hear what we were saying we would notice a big scowl on his
every time we would look over at him.
After that we all went to the cafeteria for diner, I was the
last one to the table where there was only one more spot left
for me, I sat down and looked at the array of strange food on my
tray, then Damien spook up.
… “Hey Leon, have you seen your friend Cooper yet?” He asked
while picking up a biscuit and quickly taking a bite of it.
I sighed “Naw, I have no idea where he is.” I said remembering
that when eating in jail you have to eat your meal quickly.
…. “You know, I could ask around, I have eyes and ears all
around this hell hole, I’ll talk to some friends and see if
they can find him!” Damien softly said then put the rest of his
biscuit into his mouth and swallowed it whole.
Just then one of the other racers that went to jail with us
leaned over the table “Look out, here comes our buddies” He said
in a sarcastic tone.
He pointed his eyes to the left suggesting us to look; Jack was
the first to turn around. Coming around the corner was Rain with
his squad following close behind him. Everyone anticipated him
to come out to our table and start shit, we knew Rain couldn’t
keep his mouth shut; he always has to get the last word.
Rain stopped at the end of our table and looked at everyone, I
noticed one of his cronies carrying an extra try on top of his
own, he must be carrying Rains try for him.
Jack gave a long breath out of his nose and placed his hand on
his chin “What?” he asked looking Rain directly in his eyes.
Rain sucked on his teeth for a second “Well… I thought I would
be the bigger man here and I just wanted to apologize for my
behavior from yesterday, I know we were all a little up tight
from all the commotion from the other day and I was a tad
arrogant to you guys.
We all sat there and waited for Rain to continue, we knew he was
up to something.
… “I seen you guys pointing a laughing at me and I realized that
we shouldn’t be fighting with each other, it’s hard enough
living in here just regularly, and it would only make it harder
for us if we were fighting with each other every day!” Rain
paused and looked at us and folded his arms.
… “So I am apologizing for anything I did to offend you guys and
I want to make amends with you all.” He said with a sly smile on
his face.
We were all silent for a good second until Jack spoke “Hmm, I
think I know why Mr. Rain here is being so nice and trying bring
the peace with us.” He said with his fist still placed under his
chin.
… “……. He was raped in the shower.” I said in a monotone voice.
Rain gave me a smug look “ N-no, that’s not it! I just don’t
want to spend my time in jail fighting with each other damnit.”
Jack turned and looked at all us guys at the table then back to
Rain “So guys what do you think, should we let bygones be
bygones?”
It went quite again “I still think he was raped” Someone quietly
spoke out which made us all start to giggle.
Jack sat up straight “Ok, ok guys. You know what…if you…”
Jack paused to think for a second “If you say that you are a Nos
abuser and are not the best racer in Tempest City, we will sign
your proverbial peace
treaty!” Jack said in a slick tone folding his arms waiting for
a response from Rain.
Rain gave a nervous grin “Yeah, your real funny, but seriously,
I don’t got all day, dinner’s almost over.” Rain said folding
back his arms again then giving us all a dirty look.
… “Yeah, if you repeat what I just said we will stop messing
with you!” Jack said giving off a slight laugh which made the
rest of us giggle.
We could see Rain really thinking hard, he was grinding the
gears in his head “You guys are ignorant assholes, I man up and
accept that I came off strong the other day, and you fucks make
jokes at me and don’t take what I said seriously. You just
kicked the hornets’ nest” Rain snarled out while giving Jack a
deadly stare.
The table grew quite again until Damien coughed out “Rape” Which
made us bust out laughing.
Rain snapped, I seen him twitch his neck muscles and ball up his
fist, he bolted for Damien but was put to a halt as Jack stood
up in front of him and stopped Rain by putting his hand on his
chest. Rain slapped Jacks hand from off his chest.
Jack still feeling silly stood his ground in front of Rain “If
you’re looking for a fight, you fight me pretty boy, INFACT!”
Jack said then balled up his sleeves. “Go on, punch me. I’ll
give you the first hit.” barked out Jack.
Rain snarled and looked back at his goons. “Come on; hit me as
hard as you can.” Jack sternly said seeming like the toughest
guy on earth right now.
Rain looking away from Jack “You asked for it” Rain yelled out
then whipped around swinging his fist right into Jacks chest
letting out a thump, Jack wiggled
backwards the gained back his composure, I watched Jack give
off a big smile.
… “Alright, how about another hit, but don’t use your purse this
time!” Jack said, we all started laughing which made Rain
Furious!
Rain went after Jack, his goon threw down their lunch try and
prepped for a fight, everyone at our table stood up, I joined
flipping over my chair making it bounce rapidly off the floor.
Damien ran up and shoved one of Rains thugs making him fall into
the other thugs, everyone in the cafeteria caught attention and
was watching anxiously as Jack and Rain fought. But the guards
quickly responded by shoving their guns to all of our faces,
Rain and Jack jumped off each other and gained their composure,
Rain had a red mark along his cheek where Jack hit him, but
nothing serious happened during the 10 second fight.
Just then the warden walked into the cafeteria and the whole
room grew still, the warden stopped a few feet in front of us
and a small wall of guards, “Mr. Taramota, we have posted your
bail, please come with us.” The Warden said looking at a piece
of paper in his right hand, then to Rain giving him the evil
eye.
“You’re being bailed out!” One of Rains thugs whispered to Rain
who was trying hard not to rub his cheek where Jack hit him, but
Rain kept his deadly stare at Jack.
… “What about us?” One of the other goons said to the warden.”
… “The warden raised his eyebrow, No, just Mr. Taramota.”
Rain slicked back his hair with his hand “Saved by the guards
again, you’re Lucky Jack, I could have killed you.”
Jack then returned to his silly mood again “Looks like daddy
came to the rescue again!”
Rain twitched “ I DON’T NEED MY DAD!” He yelled out then charged
at Jack but was stopped by the guards.
… “Come now damnit!” the warden hollered out at Rain “Your only
here one day and you already got into 2 fights.” He said under
his breath.
Rain was hauled off and the room returned to normal.
… “ALIRHGT DINNER IS OVER! GET IN LINE.” A guard yelled out.
Everyone in the group gave a little celebration; I was relieved
that the Warden didn’t do anything to us. We watched Rains goons
run around with their heads cut off without their boss around to
tell them what to do, after all that we went back to our cells,
I had my hopes up that Damien could find Cooper and I didn’t
have to worry about Rain trying to start fights with us anymore.
TO BE CONTINUED MY FRIENDS!!!
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Re: Redline Rebels {Joint Story}
By: OGluke Date: July 19, 2012, 1:00 am
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thats a closely accurate and scary representation on how life in
prison really works nicely done man.
couple key aspects you nailed on the head
1. You stand a better chance at surviving in prison by forming
alliances and makings friends - The Main Character conversing
with Jack a seasoned inmate and cell pal was a smart move.
2. To acknowledge rape as normal behavior - The Main Character
brings up the topic of rape as if it's an everyday discussion,
which in prison it is. Getting violated in prison means your
somebodys bitch and most if not half the prisons population are
bitches.
3. Eat quickly when in prison - Jack tell the MC this because in
the prison's cafateria any number of things could occur from
stabbings to riots as its setting is treated like a jungle.
Don't procrastinate with lunch because it could be your last
meal.
Again, fantastic job on paying attention to details such as
these.
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