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34 calendars (finished)
By: cali soul Date: April 8, 2012, 10:24 pm
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Sunday night 8:45 pm bakers street SteelPort Phil's Bbq.
The night was dark and windy the moon was shining down on the
city. I was sitting down at the Bbq joint waiting for my
brisket sandwich to be done.
I could smell it it was so good along with the smell of roses
from the fields near by where the melons and other things grew.
The night was beautiful people were walking young couples and
old couples i even saw a homless man beat up bad torn up
burgundy sweat shirt ripped dirty jeans no shoes and a rough
beard he smiled at the sight of the city.
My sandwich was done i payed the man cooking. Walked off and
gave the homeless man 200 bucks. He smiled and said god bless
you sir i smiled and nodded.
A car pulled up a black cadillac. My brother Goldie arrived to
meet me about a job we were going to do he even brought paul and
candy two of our good friends.
Paul brought a bag of ski masks gloves guns rope etc basic
robbery equipment. Candy was there to break into the security
system she was an expert at that kind of stuff.
Yeah we thought we were bad ass and so smart and just for extra
back up our friend jimmy and his little crew of four guys were
waiting down the street incase it got hectic.
It was going perfect we broke through the doors i ran up hit the
guards with a knife to the chest punched the clerk told him put
the money in the bag.
Paul and goldie held people hostage while shooting out with a
few security guards. Candy ran to the security room and hacked
the system after what seemed forever she broke the code and the
vault was opened.
After getting the money from the cash registers me psul and
goldie ran to the vault. Grabbed the money bit by bit took over
5oo billion dollars.
You're probably thinking oh yeah they're going to get away
right? Wrong! We got the money in the bags then proceeded to
run out of the vault on the way back to the entrance we heard
five gun shots.
Thinking candy shot people we realized she took the shots.
She layed there on the floor dead five to the head from a police
officer officer cruising by that noticed us walking in with
masks.
I lost it and in a rage i ran up and rushed the cop i beat him
to death. Goldie told me calm down we knew this might happen i
know you loved her but man we got to go.
I wiped my tears then we ran out to the car and called our back
up. Arriving to the scene was the chief of police and ten swat
cars.
I grabbed an ak47 and shot at the cops my bullets hit the ground
and ricochet back and hit two police in the back of their legs i
blasted again and took their heads off.
Goldie took the money and ran while me and Paul shot at the cops
and they shot back. Jimmy and his crew were shooting with us
until his crew got wiped put by a swerving cruiser.
I ran up and took ten shots to the chest yelled goldie paul get
away. They made it to the next town and took off to mexico the
next day so i've heard. Goldie changed his name Jimmy and me got
shot after taking out a few pigs.
Jim died two years ago in his cell he had cancer. That was over
thirty years ago i havent heard from Goldie or Paul since They
are billionaires made some product and became more rich.
I never saw a penny from either one not a call not a letter in
thirty years. I wrote them not one reply. Well one but that was
Goldies wife telling me fuck off.
These nights get lonely but thirty four years in the joint will
get you used to it.
Jose: Damn og you been here that long and your brother and
friends forgot you?
Carl: Yeah they don't need me they got the money all i did was
take ten shots and thirty four years for them.
Carlos: Man Carl you should have them ran up on.
Carl: No. They can have their shit i care not... If i get out
they better hope i don't find them though.
Later that night.
Carl Vasquez wake up *bangs on cell* Wake up boy the guard
yelled.
What do you want ? Asked Carl. You just got some good news You
old spic the guard replied.
What your moms going to blow me? Fucking Mick said Carl.
That's enough of that the guard replied. You just got bailed
out. The judge believes you've served long enough time congrats.
What?! Yelled Carl with excitement. Thirty Four years and i'm
free after being sentenced to life.
I've got alot to plot said Carl
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Re: 34 calendars
By: OGluke Date: April 8, 2012, 11:37 pm
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carl took the fall for those bitches!??? and now goldie and
paulie are rich druglords and both candy and jim died for
nothing.
serving time changes a man, question is.. what has carl
become??? sure he's vengeful after losing it all and ready for
some payback
aint seen a story from you in awhile great to see your writing
still and hope lifes been treating you good cal
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Re: 34 calendars
By: cali soul Date: April 9, 2012, 2:51 am
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Thank you bro. Hope all is well with you as well. I was
inspired by a song i heard yesterday it touched my heart so i
made this.
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Re: 34 calendars
By: cali soul Date: April 9, 2012, 3:39 am
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Carl gathered his stuff and walked out through the prison until
he hit the front gate. He looked at the guard and said it seems
like just yesterday i was coming in here.
Yeah i remember you kid you'll be back always come back i give
you 4 days replied the guard.
Maybe right now said Carl as he reached out towards the guard
and made him flinch ....Ha ha said Carl.
Carl walked out to the steelport plaza....He saw an old friend
named Jacky. *smiles* Hey Jacky what's up? She smiled is that
you C i haven't seen you in forever she replied.
Yeah it's been years J Carl said. How have you been? She asked.
I've been better but Thirty plus years behind steel bars isn't
exactly supposed to be fun he replied.
How have you been though ? Carl asked her. I been really good C
just working at the flower shop on Ava ave Jacky said.
They continued chatting and walked to Jacky's work .... Carl
bought her some flowers and she blushed pushed him and said
thank you.
After Two weeks out of the joint Carl found himself with a job
at Lauren's flower shop a now Girlfriend who was once his
brothers best friend and money in his pocket with his feet
planted on the ground.
Success was coming to Carl he had legit money a relationship a
car and his freedom. With so much joy in my life now i don't
need revenge i don't need the anger.
I've been there before drunk sleepless nights. No more i'm happy
now...He grabbed his coat and walked out side took a walk to the
park he sat and watched nature and thought.
Carl made a choice he went to church and prayed he even got
baptized. The now Christian changed man even applied to be a
police officer.
A couple months later he was now a soon to be father Jacky was
three months pregnant.
Carl was denied the police job but that didn't stop him from
doing his part to keep the community safe
he rescued five children from a burning fire and gave cpr to an
old lady.
Carl had became a hero then he was offered a police job but he
turned it down.
Jacky walked up to him one evening and told him about rumors his
brother was in town and asked what would he do about it.
Carl hugged her and said when that time comes i'll know but for
now let's just enjoy the night dear i love you.
The next morning at the shop Carl saw a black Cadillac pull up.
Jacky: oh no.
Carl: Don't worry. I got this.
Lauren: Carl you better not start shit here. Take that silly
bullshit else where.
Carl told Lauren to calm her self he has it under control.
As the Window rolled down and smoke blew out Carl walked up to
the car and asked how may i help you?
A man with scars all over his face laughed and said Carl long
time no see . This is for you Mi hermano...He handed Carl a box
then drove off.
Carl was confused and not so happy he looked in the box and it
had a piece of candies hair. Carl cried and walked into the shop
just as he opened the door a gun shot went off and everything
went black.
The sound of Lauren crying and people running up was all he
could hear.
When he finally woke up he realized he wasn't hit or scared
nothing. He turned his head to find Lauren in a daze and Jacky
laying dead on a stretcher.
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Re: 34 calendars
By: Yossi Date: April 9, 2012, 10:11 am
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This sounds awesome man, keep it up!
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Re: 34 calendars
By: Wetbizket Date: April 9, 2012, 3:22 pm
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Hey hey, good to see yuh back Cali!!!
Man this story is great! Kinda gruesome in the beginning!! The
next chapter made me happy, well until the end! I cant wait to
see how the rest of this goes!
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Re: 34 calendars
By: cali soul Date: April 9, 2012, 4:52 pm
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Thanks guys :) Glad you like it. Good to be back bro.
#Post#: 5289--------------------------------------------------
Re: 34 calendars
By: cali soul Date: April 9, 2012, 5:57 pm
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Carl now shaking with tears rolling down his eyes walked over
to Lauren and hugged her as they both watched Jacky carried
away.
Lauren was Jacky's older sister she was Forty Eight Jacky was
Forty Two. Carl whispered in Lauren's ear it'll be okay as he
hugged her tight then let go and walked out of the store.
He left her Five hundred dollars and headed out to the local gun
store 100 rounds.
The old Friendly Fire was bought by some old country man and
his family. Carl walked into it slammed 100 dollars down how
much will this get me? he asked.
The man at the cash register pulled down two ak47's two shot
guns two vice 9's and two big boxes of ammo.
Free of charge the man said if you need back up me and my two
brothers can go with you and i'm sorry about your loss.
Thank you and that would be great Carl replied. The man shook
Carl's hand and said Names Ted Bundy i'll take you to meet my
brothers they're at the gas station.
Carl followed Ted to the Low price high quality gas station on
the corner of Ava Avenue.
When they got there a tall man about seven foot five was
loading gas into barrel's He then smiled and said hey Carl
Vasquez nice to meet you I'm John Bundy.
Nice to meet you sir Carl said reaching his hand out to shake
John's.
John: This is Carlos our little brother and Tony our cousin.
Carl: Nice to meet you two.
Carlos: Woah Carl it's me man from prison. Good to see you're
okay man.
Carl: Hey carlos you look different haha good to see you too
buddy.
Carlos: Yeah man i let my hair grow and i got a mustache now.
Tony: Carl when we go to this place be ready i know you've seen
bsttle before but these cats don't play.
Carl: I know my brother and Paul i've heard how they are now.
Tony: Yeah they killed their own friend just so they wouldn't
have to share.
Carl: I'm ready.
Just then a woman showed up with food baskets. You might need
these you have a long road ahead of you she said.
Thank you ma'am they all replied. More people showed up and gave
them stuff...This is mighty nice of you all thank you Carl said.
Yeah carl this town looks out for each other after that shit
with stag and the zombie invasion cleared up ...We had to hang
in there and all pitch in Said Ted.
Carl before i forget Lauren went to the hospital they are going
to try and help the baby survive through her. They are going to
put it in her Said a local woman.
Carl smiled.
A women began singing and a man playing the guitar and another
matching beat box sounds and drums.
Woman: Feel it coming in the air hear the screams from every
where i'm addicted to the thrill it's a dangerous love affair
can't be scared when it goes down got a problem tell me now
only thing that's on my mind is who's gonna run this town
tonight!
The people: WE ARE YEAH I SAID WE ARE!
The boys were off on their way and the people prayed for their
safety.
Ranchero Town Barker Ave 12:38 pm.
Donald: He's going to come see us and he's bringing friends.
Paul: I don't care i can kill them.
Donald: Goldie doesn't know a thing huh?
Paul: Greg is doing a Ten year bid in the joint he don't expect
a thing.
Donald: Does he even know Carl's free? Well this plan was good.
Paul: Nope. Yeah I've planned this since we were only Fifteen.
Carl stole Candy from me.
Donald: Ha ha he thinks i was his brother. I shot her the glass
made him pass out but he wasn't damaged.
Paul: Want to laugh? That baby ain't even his i banged Jacky
one night when he was gone.
Donald: What?! You're cruel and i love this!
Paul: Yeah she was drunk but she knows it isn't his Lauren even
knows.
Donald: Man if Goldie knew our plot that all those letters all
the visits all the money he sent and everything was ambushed so
Carl would think he didn't care he'd kill us.
Paul:He won't find out. Judge is on a pay role so If i want him
to do Ten more years he'll do ten more.
They both laughed.
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Re: 34 calendars
By: OGluke Date: April 12, 2012, 9:52 pm
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goldie bout to get his locks chopped off! tell them bitches
whats up!!!
you owning this cali, greatjob!!!
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Re: 34 calendars
By: Wetbizket Date: April 14, 2012, 12:37 am
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Damn, thats a big payback!!! the big payback lol. Anyways this
story is bangin, I cant wait for more, theres is gonna be some
major bloodshed coming soon!
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