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Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: April 3, 2012, 12:52 pm
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That damn Dalu! He's gonna pay, I'm loving this story, its good
to see an old story from back in the day get a fresh start.
I remember back in the day on the SR forums I wanted to make a
little thread list all of the best created gangs they we have
made for our stories, I was going to make the SSW and GR at the
top then probably. Hmmm, maybe I'll go back do that! If anyone
is interested in that.
Luke I think you will get a blast of inspiration and come up
with an awesome story and everything, just give it time!
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Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: Yossi
Date: April 3, 2012, 3:15 pm
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Hell yeah Wetbizket, that would be awesome, I'm with you on that
idea.
Wetbizket's right mate, time is the only essence needed in
making a good story, it'll come to you.
#Post#: 5199--------------------------------------------------
Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: Yossi
Date: April 5, 2012, 11:39 am
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Part 1: Chapter 3
The tension built in the room. A random SSW Thug watched as
Chris entered the hideout in an angry mood.
"Argh! Kelly... Hey you, where's Kelly?"
"I dunno Chris... I think she's in the office?"
Chris looks at the office door and rushes to it, he enters
viciously. Kelly shockingly turns around to look at Chris from
the computer.
"What's up Chris?"
"Dalu! That's whats up. The Krimson Riders!"
"Oh... I see. I got some information on them."
"It's a bit too late for that... I was nearly killed..."
"Calm down Chris! I found out that Dalu is one of the
lieutenants of The Krimson Riders. His girlfriend, Latoya, she's
a lieutenant too."
"And?"
"She's a cagefighter!"
"Oh... Who the fuck is the leader then?"
"Um... Let me just check... Some guy called Nyl."
"What sort of fucking name is that?"
"I dunno. Do you know where Luke is? He's been a while trying to
find us some lieutenants for the city."
Luke simultaneously walks into the office followed by three
other people. Chris looks impressed by Luke's efforts.
"Chris, my main man, I got you some lieutenants."
"Well done Luke, care to... introduce?"
"Of course. This is Kinky... he's one of the most well known
pimp's around this city."
"How'd you do... Kinky?"
"Sup playa? I heard this gang is alright... I guess my services
can be used to good measure.", said Kinky.
"Why are you called Kinky if I may ask man?"
"I decided to have an exotic name... kinda makes sense cos' I'm
a pimp."
"True."
"Chris, this is Charlotte DeLuca. She can get you any sort of
weapon at any stock. Can't you Charlotte?"
"Totally. Nice to meet you.", said Charlotte.
"Oh, nice to meet you... I can tell that... you're a
professional?"
Chris accidentally takes a peep at her breasts. He refocuses on
the situation.
"And last but not least, the man you wanted. Carshan De Maire!"
"Carshan? Nice to see you again pal."
"Hey man, it's a pleasure, I was surprised that you wanted me to
join, I mean we've been rivals in the past."
"Yeah, in the past man."
Chris and Carshan shake hands and respect each other. Chris
smiles at Luke. The random thug from the entrance enters the
office followed by a random figure.
"Chris... I've got someone who wants to see you."
"Oh yeah. Who?"
Bert Benedict appears from behind the thug and walks over to
Chris. Kelly smiles while Chris shakes his hand.
"Chris Walker... it's been a long time."
"Oh... Bert... this is a surprise."
"I heard you were looking for lieutenants. There any places
left?"
Kelly looks at Chris and grins with excitement. Chris gives in
to Kelly.
"Yeah sure man... what can you bring to the gang?"
"Chris please... I'm a top hitman and can get reliable
assassains to help us..."
"I guess you've got the job, well done!"
Chris, Kelly, Luke, Bert, Carshan, Charlotte and Kinky sit down
at the table in the office and begin to discuss plans.
"Right, here's your assignments..."
"Hey man, can I take out The Wildhogs?", said Kinky.
"Who the fuck are they man?", said Chris.
"They're a gang that's causing a lot of trouble at the north
part of the city."
"Yeah sure whatever, any other gangs I need to know of apart
from The Krimson Riders?"
"Um... no... well...", said Kelly.
"Well what Kelly?"
"There is The Leone Family!".
Chris paused for a minute and began to speak again.
"Impossible... The Leone Family's already been taken care of."
"Wrong, Scott Leone must have brought the gang back and started
in Granite Shores."
"Fuck sake."
"Hey man, I'll take The Krimson Raiders if you want.", said
Carshan.
"I thought you were mates with them?"
"Ha, no fucking chance... I hate that bastard Dalu!".
"Fine then... Charlotte you and I can handle The Leone Family.",
said Chris.
"Okay boss."
"Good. Look's like this meeting is over."
The gang disperse.
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Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: Yossi
Date: April 7, 2012, 4:11 am
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*bump*
#Post#: 5235--------------------------------------------------
Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: Yossi
Date: April 7, 2012, 3:51 pm
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Part 1: Chapter 4
Kelly remained at the computer desk looking up files. Chris was
sat on the sofa, a thug came into the office.
"Hey Chris, you've got a visitor."
"Oh yeah?"
Chris' sister, Jennie walks into the office and looks around
impressed.
"Jennie! Jennie... wow, it's been a long time."
"I know, where've you been?"
"Around... What are you doing here?"
"I've moved to Granite Shores Chris. I just wanted to know if
your okay."
"Yeah, I'm fine. How are you?"
"Good, I've got myself a job, a good man... And... I'm pregnant
Chris."
"That's awesome... I'm going to be an uncle."
Kelly gets out of her seat and walks over to Jennie.
"Hi there, I'm Kelly Benedict."
"Hi! Oh wait, are you Chris' girlfriend?"
"What... oh... um."
"Nah."
"Oh... that's a shame... you two suit..."
"Haha... thanks Jennie.", said Chris.
"Who's the father then?", said Kelly.
"The father is...".
Luke rushes into the office and interupts Jennie.
"Chris man... I got us a plan to get our fight club business
going."
"Oh yeah?"
"Yeah, there's an old abandoned gym nearby... if we take it...
we can set up a fight club there man. What d'ya say?"
"Sure... Jennie... I'll see you around okay?"
"Okay Chris. I'll go then."
Jennie nervously leaves followed by Luke and Chris who are ready
to go reclaim the old abandoned gym. Charlotte walks in and sits
down on the sofa.
"What are you looking at?", said Charlotte.
"Some ugly bitch with her tits out."
"You're just jealous!"
Kelly leaves the office while Charlotte smiles.
#Post#: 5236--------------------------------------------------
Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: Gangstarr4
Date: April 7, 2012, 3:55 pm
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Ugly bitch lmfO. Good story
#Post#: 5247--------------------------------------------------
Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: April 8, 2012, 1:14 am
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yeahyeahyeah, this story has so much going on, I'm always
excited whats around the corner! Sounds bad ass starting up a
fightclub!
#Post#: 5274--------------------------------------------------
Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: Yossi
Date: April 9, 2012, 10:10 am
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Part 1: Chapter 5
Chris and Luke park up outside the abandoned gym and get out of
the car. Chris observes it closely while Luke looks for some
sign of gratefulness.
"It'll be perfect."
"Yes... Haha, guess we'll have to clean it up a bit first
though?"
"Yeah. Call some guys down to help you clean it up. I'm meeting
Carshan at The Bowling Alley. Keep tight Luke."
"Yep, will do Chris."
Simultaneously at The Krimson Riders hideout.
"Nyl man, what's up with you, we need to take out the Silver
Stoned Wolves!"
Nyl raised his hand then put it back down onto his desk. Latoya
looks shocked.
"I'm not TAKING them OUT Dalu. This gang has far more greater
goals to achieve."
"But they'll take over man... why you being a pussy?"
"If your a smart guy Dalu... and I'm pretty sure you are... you
wouldn't repeat what you just said. Now that's my final
decision."
"I agree with Dalu on this though Nyl, if we don't take them out
sooner or later they'll destroy us."
"Well to be honest... I'm pretty sure they won't. You've got a
professional career in Cagefighting and..."
Nyl looks at Dalu with hesitation.
"Well, you're just going to be a fucking junkie for the rest of
your life."
"Fuck you say?"
"You heard me... now get the fuck out there and help our boys
carry them boxes in here!"
Dalu evily glares at Nyl as he walks out. Latoya slowly follows
but stops at the door.
"What's wrong with you? He's only trying to help!"
"No he's not... he's causing more problems... and just because
your his girlfriend doesn't mean you have an opinion in here.
Now get out!"
"Whatever, don't expect an invitation to my fight on friday
then."
Latoya struts out of the office while Nyl looks back at the
newspaper on his desk.
"Don't worry, I wouldn't come even if you did send me an
invitation."
At the Wildhogs hideout, Roscoe is pacing up and down the
warehouse and turns his attention to one of the gang members.
"You..."
"Yeah?"
"When was this delivery supposed to be again?"
"3pm Mr. Roscoe."
"Good... and just call me Roscoe man, okay?"
"Okay!"
The delivery truck approaches the warehouse. The driver gets out
to sign some paperwork with Roscoe.
"You're a bit late aren't you?"
"Sorry Mr. Roscoe... The traffic's awful..."
"Oh really? Why what's happened?"
"Another bust up with The Krimson Riders... and some new gang
called The Silver Stoned Wolves?"
"Ha, what sort of names that?"
"Well... I think it's kinda catchy... I mean it's better than
The Wildhogs."
Roscoe finishes singing and looks at the driver with a
threatening look.
"Anyway, I think I better go... say hi to Cole when you see him
Roscoe."
"Don't worry I will."
The driver rushes back to the van and drives it away.
"Look's like I'll have to find out about these Silver Stoned
Wolves. You..."
One of the thugs come over to Roscoe.
"Yeah?"
"Tell Cole that I'll be out for the rest of the afternoon, I'm
going to find out a bit of... information."
"Okay Mr. Roscoe."
The thug rushes off to tell Cole. At The Leone Mansion.
"Joy, Kenny... I never expected you two to join in with the
family business?"
"We have to Uncle Scott... it's the best way to live nowadays!",
says Joy.
"Haha, we will raise our empires once again. And there's no
stopping us this time.", said Scott.
Frances walks into the living room.
"What's up Frances?", said Kenny.
"We've got a problem Scott... It's the Silver Stoned Wolves,
they're here in Granite Shores.", said Frances.
"For fuck sake... No! Every fucking where I go... Fine, if
anything happens get ready to fight... all of you!".
"Yes uncle Scott.", said Joy and Kenny simulatenously.
Back at the Silver Stoned Wolves hideout. Bert and Kelly are sat
in the office along with Kinky.
"So, how many bitches you slept with then Mr. B?"
"One..."
"Oh, haha and how many playas you slept with Kelly?"
"Two. How many... erm... women... have you slept with?"
"Oh hunny... there's too many I can't keep track."
"None. Haha", Bert whispers to Kelly.
Chris enters.
"What's up?"
"Nothing. Oh, I got a call from Jennie, Chris. She said that she
wanted to see you later on.", said Kelly.
"Okay thanks. See ya later then guys."
The gang disperse.
#Post#: 5277--------------------------------------------------
Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: April 9, 2012, 3:12 pm
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Another fun filled chapter from yossi!!! Those wildhogs better
know what they are doing if they wanna mess with the SSW
#Post#: 5284--------------------------------------------------
Re: Take A Life 4!
DIR By: cali soul
Date: April 9, 2012, 4:53 pm
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Love it!
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