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ALPHA-LAND
By: Wetbizket Date: January 31, 2012, 11:18 pm
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[center][font=impact]ALPAH-LAND[/font][/center]
The pale grey sky holds no emotion as a dreary mist of
rain wisps down to the city streets, the buildings; decaying and
crumbling; showing all signs of defeat and agony but still stand
tale like giants. In the middle of the city sits a bank
surrounded; gathering all the attention of everything that
surrounds it, basking in the glory of the landscape the bank
glows from the warmth and begs for power. Long pillars hold up
the roof, white bricks keep the walls sturdy, Tall marble
statues of Roman warriors protect the perimeter of the bank,
still so young and untouched; the bank holds its ground
showing it has something to prove amongst all of the battle
hardened on looking buildings surrounding it.
Outside of the bank sits a dark van engine running but the
lights are off; a mere man walks up the set of steps leading to
the doors that resemble castle doors with his head lowered to
the ground. Inside employees of the bank interact with customers
and the customers receive. Decorated with gold and lavish
furniture it is memorizing and can seduce the average unknowing
civilian but others who see in black and white see no such
royalty. A man steps into the bathroom holding a black brief
case, a bank teller calls up the next person waiting in line to
deposit a check. Another man sits on a sofa in the back of the
room letting his eyes wander at all the furnishings. Everything
remains in motion as the security guard watches it all, from
underneath the black tinted sunglasses his eyes watch the man
sit on the sofa, it’s not that he doesn’t trust him, the
security guard trusts nobody.
I stand at the front doors of the bank overwhelmed by the size
of them; I turn around and look at the old tall buildings behind
me for reinsurance “This bank is all bark and no bite”
… “Ok, I’m here, is everyone ready?” I asked speaking into a
microphone cleverly disguised as a gold watch.
A familiar voice chimed in through my tiny hidden earpiece “I
just sat down; everything seems to be in place.” The deep
soothing voice calmed me.
Another voice echoed in and disturbed the peace “No one’s in the
bathroom…. Well, except me, but that don’t count. Um yeah, so
I’m ready!”
A blip of static came over the head set then another voice rang
in “All is well, let’s get moving the longer I sit still the
more nervous I get, and the more I begin to think.”
After that another voice interrupted with a quite hum of a motor
running in the background “Alright, keep it clean and fast,
don’t get greedy.”
All of these voices belonged to my small group of friends, all
still young and ready to make mistakes. We are part of a small
time mob all the way at the south end of Tempest City, A big
crippling and diverse city with a lot of characters running it.
I grabbed onto the large door handles with vice like grip “Lets
kick ass and take names” I cockily said into the headset then
pushed open the fortress doors sending a whoosh of misty rain
into the entrance of the bank, the cold gust of air traveled all
the way to the front of the bank and hit everyone in its path
getting the attention of everybody.
I held up my automatic sub machine gun and saying nothing,
hopefully the gun blasts where the only things that were going
to be doing the persuading for me.
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A’ight, that was just the epilogue for muh story, I wanted to
start it a little different and pay attention, the city and the
bank are a symbol, this is some deep shit yo!
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Re: ALPHA-LAND
By: Gangstarr4 Date: January 31, 2012, 11:55 pm
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Dark Grimey batman flash hitman type iish
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Re: ALPHA-LAND
By: OGluke Date: February 1, 2012, 5:31 am
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this must be your story idea for unknowns game.
Its looking good, sensing a vibe between dog day afternoon and
heat two verygood movies about bankrobbery, but not as
enthralling as this story of yours.
sickness didnt ware you down at all you back in fullforce homie
:D
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Re: ALPHA-LAND
By: Aussie Boy Date: February 2, 2012, 5:23 am
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I enjoyed that, even the way you wrote it, it sounds deep.
I can't wait for the story to go boss, get it done.
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Re: ALPHA-LAND
By: Wetbizket Date: February 7, 2012, 11:11 pm
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[font=impact]CONTINUED…[/font]
As I walked up to the front of the bank everything that I and
the guys planned for step 1 (Getting control of the bank) went
perfect! Moe was the first to act pulling out his gun and
shooting through the glass making it explode in pieces all over
the floor and counters. Second Flinch bursts out of the bathroom
taking care of the 2 security next to where he was. Ray was
already halfway across the room grabbing onto one of the floor
managers. I ran up to the security guard on the left side of the
bank and bashed him with the butt of my gun which I had no need
to as he showed no sign of fighting back.
The security guard wheezed and slid to the cold marble floor and
hugged it “You got some balls slick, showing your face in here.”
He said looking up at me with his eyes watering in pain. I
scratched my chin itching my course beard.
Just then I heard Ray shout from across the room “Step 2! Step
2!!” He had the floor managers hands cuffed and tapped behind
her back. I looked over to Moe then 2 Flinch and nodded.
Step 2 (Gain access to the vault)
Moe came out from around the counter shoving another manager to
Ray who grabbed the manager and cuffed him also. “We’ll cover
here, you go get the money.” Moe said jumping behind the long
wooden counter.
I ran up to Ray and grabbed the male manager by the shoulder and
pushed him towards the employee’s hallway. “Ok, I know you 2 are
managers of this place, but can you take orders?” I calmly asked
the 2 of them.
The guy manager was the first to respond “Yeah, yeah, yeah!” He
said under his breath, the female followed after by nodding her
head.
… “Ok, were going to be moving fast fast fast, no slowing down,
no acting on your own, no smart moves, we tell you what to do!
Got it!” I said squeezing my grip on the manager’s shoulder.
They both nodded.
I kicked the back of the manager’s shoe making his leg kick
forward “To the vault!” I said looking at Ray and smiling. We
started to head down the hallway
“Come on move!” I said shoving the manger making them pick up
the pace.
As we paced down the hall we went past the lunch room, I looked
into the room see’ing a little group of workers stacked against
the frame of the door, they looked at me and Ray with bug eyes
as we walked past, I didn’t bother with them because I knew they
weren’t going to do anything to stop us.
We turned down the hallway following the red and gold carpeting
to a door with a cage placed in front of it I shoved the manger
up to the door “Get those keys out, go go go!” I said grabbing
his hand and helping him reach onto his keychain that is clipped
around his belt.
The manger nervously flipped through the key ring looking for
the right key he found it and stuck it into the lock and
unlocked the single door. I slapped his hand back “WHAT DID I
TELL YOU! DID I SAY YOU COULD ONLOCK THE DOOR!” I shouted into
his head from behind him.
The manager began to mumble “I-I-I, did you want me to---“
… “The only thing you’re allowed to do without my permission is
breath….. Now open the door!” I said while poking him with the
tip of my gun. I pushed the door open and we shuffled up to the
vault door. Me and Ray gazed at the big steel door, I was truly
excited to see what was behind it, I fantasized something like
from Aladdin, a room filled with money in big stacks and rows of
Jewelry shining from the lights in the room.
… “Alright you two get your keys out for the vault and open it.”
I said still looking at the vault door, the managers flipped
through their keys and both pulled
out a big skeleton looking key, one manager went to the left
side of the big handle and the other went to the right, the
simultaneously stuck their keys into the hold and twisted them,
you seen and pole on the vault door slide down and move a
pulley, they pulled open the vault to expose the room, there
were boxes filled with neatly stacked and wrapped money and few
counters in the room.
… “Alright you 2, I want you to that corner and fill up these 2
duffle bags please.” I said pointing to the right corner of the
vault.
The 2 ran over to the corner and started filling up the 2 grey
duffle bags I gave them, then the male manager spoke up “Did you
say please?” He said still filling the bag with money.
Ray stopped what he was doing “What did you say?”
The manager continued to put money in the bag “When you told us
the fill these bags you said please to us like you were trying
to be nice to us.” The manager said without looking at us.
… “I did say please, what are you trying to say?” I asked
setting down my duffle bag and walking over to the managers.
… “I just seems like your being a smart ass, your robbing a bank
and forcing us to follow your directions like a drill Sargent,
but then you say please to us like were obligated to or
something. You don’t have to be a smart ass.” The manager said
still with his head turned to me.
Furiously I grabbed onto the managers should “Alright, I’m going
to be blunt then! We are robbing your bank and taking as much
money as we can, I and my friend are going to shoot you if you
disobey our orders one more time; we were just being kind for
the sake being nice, not killing you was our second option
before not killing you useless ass’s. Now without being a
smartass, fill those god damn bags up with money!” I said
shoving the manager around.
We finished taking all the money from the vault and putting it
into the duffle bags, I made each manager carry 1 of the 4 bags,
me and Ray took the other bags, as were heading back into the
lobby our driver Toby came in through the headset
… “Hey hey! There are guys coming!”
We kept jogging “You mean the police are here?” I asked over the
head set.
… “NO SOME MOTHERFUCKERS WITH GUNS. Wait no, I— “
Toby was cut off by what sounded like a gun blast or a boom,
“Are you there, who’s here!” I shouted into the head set. Me and
Ray looked at each other, with worried looks on our faces. We
ran into the lobby, Moe and Flinch were still there guarding the
lobby; Flinch looked at us “What’s going on?” He asked running
up to us.
I handed Flinch my duffle bag, Ray tossed his to Moe who dropped
it when from the weight of it. “Where getting out of here!” I
said grabbing the duffle bag from the manger.
Just then the front doors busted open kicking a big breeze of
cold wet air into our faces, and group of about 5 men came
dashing into the bank “STOP WHAT YOUR DOING AND HIT THE FLOOR,
THIS IS A MOTHERFUCKING ROBBERY!!!” A big Burly man shouted.
Everyone in the bank froze up as the group of robbers noticed us
standing there.
… “Imm-fucking possible.” Moe Whispered.
… “WHO THE FUCK ARE THERES ASSWHOLES!!” the big man shouted.
I aimed my gun at the group of robbers, the rest of the group
followed except Flinch who was still frozen. “Who the fuck are
you, this is our job!” I said looking down the sights of my gun.
… “I DON’T THINK SO DICKHEAD!” The big man said still in a
furious shout.
I shook my head “Your 10 minutes too late”
Just then Rays voice came through the headset “ Is plan 3 still
in effect.
Plan 3 (Run like hell and escape)
I shifted my eyes to the upper left and thought “Yeah.” I
silently said into the headset.
The big man spoke up “THANKS FOR GATHERING THE MONEY TOGETHER
FOR US, NOW TOSS OVER THE BAGS.” He yelled out, I could see the
veins popping out of his neck!
… “You forgot to say please.” I said then looking over to the
manger and smirking at my own joke.
… “FUCK YOU!!!!” The big man shouted out then began to fire is
assault rifle, everyone went into action. Just then Moe reached
into his coat pocket pulling
out a flashbang grenade, I threw it into the group of opposing
robbers, a boom went off and a flash stunned them, but not the
big man, he stumbled to his knees but had his eyes wide open and
focused onto me! A shootout began, but everyone in my group was
more focused onto our plan (Get out of the bank!) And we did!
We dashed to the exit of the bank shooting at the robbers
distracting them as we busted out of the big doors and ran down
the flight of steps, Flinch tripped and tumbled down the last
few stairs and struggled to get back onto his feet, I helped him
get up then seen the robbers open the doors I blindly fired my
sub machine gun in their general direction then continued to
help Flinch, we ran down the sidewalk, our getaway van was
insight, Ray turned around and shot at the robbers as his jogged
backwards, Moe got down behind a mailbox and gave covering fire
as me and Flinch ran for the van, Ray and Moe got up and ran
with us.
I jumped to the van and swung the passenger side door and jumped
in tossing my duffle bag down “Toby!” I shouted looking over to
see him slumped down in his seat with blood splattered against
the window and a bullet hole in the interior of the car.
… Shit!” I said tugging Toby’s dead body out of the driver’s
seat and into the back of the van, Flinch ran past the van and
opened the back doors and
shuffled in noticing Toby’s dead body “Holy fuck!” Flinch
muttered out. “What happened to Toby?!” He asked with a grossed
out look on his face.
… “I don’t know!” I said starting up the van as Ray and Moe came
running up, Ray jumped into the passenger seat as Moe jumped
into the back and shut the van doors behind him.
I head Ray mutter something “What the hell happened to Toby” Ray
asked.
I pounded the steering wheel “Don’t know!” I grunted out.
The van shook as the group of robbers shot it, bullets bounced
off the windshield, I put the van in reverse and slammed on the
gas making the van screech its tires as we flew backwards, I
spun the wheel around and the van slid 90 degrees around, I put
the van in drive and maneuvered the van back onto the road, I
looked into the rearview mirror to see the robbers were not
giving up, a group of black sedans were giving pursuit.
… “You better reload your weapons boys!!!” I shouted up slamming
my foot on the gas pedal!
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
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Re: ALPHA-LAND
By: Aussie Boy Date: February 8, 2012, 4:43 am
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Man this is great, I'm keen as, to see what happens to next
them. Oh No poor Toby!
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