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Saints Row - The Begining... By Ayngel
DIR By: Ayngel
Date: November 8, 2011, 3:05 pm
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Ok This is my first time creating a story , so please hold on
tight until I get the story I have in My head on paper so to
speak. Its a kind of preuel to Saints Row with a twist.... It is
a short'ish story it wont be too long
Saint's Row - The Begining
[glow=red,2,300]
Chapter One - A New Start[/glow]
"Danny … Danny wake up" I unwillingly opened my eyes to the
sound of my mom's voice bellowing through the hallway "Ok OK!
I'm up" I shouted as I dragged myself out of the bed. As I
opened my curtains I looked upon my new surroundings, and was
overwhelmed with the feelings of relief and uncertainty, which I
quickly shrugged off as I walked to the Kitchen to have my
breakfast.
"Danny you have to finish your breakfast quick, You will be late
for your first day at school" What a great start to the day, not
only was I in a new home in a new town, I had to go to a new
school to top it all off.
As I walked to my mom's car I started to feel as if my legs were
going to seize up, I thought to myself I really need to man up,
It may not be as bad as I think it's going to be…. Well I'd
hoped.
When we pulled up next to the school my mom smiled "You will be
ok son" her reassuring voice made me feel
slightly more nervous as I've heard those words uttered many
times before, I smiled back and made my way to the school.
I was shown to my registration class by the receptionist who
seemed rather dismissive when I introduced myself at the front
desk, when she opened the door of the class room I was startled
by the loud voices streaming out of the room “ Go on then, get a
seat” the receptionist grumbled.
I sat at a desk still shell shocked from the receptionists
attitude then all of a sudden I felt a hand lightly placed on my
shoulder “Well you must be the new kid” I slowly looked up “I am
Mr Jackson, your registration teacher” He said with a cheerful
voice, which quickly changed tone when someone threw a book at
the black board “Right that’s enough class, can we all calm down
an sit quietly for registration” Mr Jackson shouted outraged by
the behaviour of the rebellious pupils.
The class halted to a stand still as if they had some form of
respect for Mr Jackson, I was certainly surprised, it was surly
something I have never experienced. But I then thought to myself
what will happen next? Am I yet to be forced to stand in front
of the class and give them a full insight on my life and what
brought me here, I waited anxiously .
Mr Jackson made his way to his desk and promptly sat in his seat
"Now class as you may have noticed we have a new kid with us to
day His name is Danny and I'm sure you will all make him feel
welcome" He said with a slightly uncompromising voice, I was
relieved to say the least, it was almost like he understood how
I must have been feeling.
I won’t bore to death with rambling on about my first day at
school, it mainly consisted of going from one classroom to the
next, constantly repeating myself with the usual introductions.
Before I knew it was home time, and as always my mom is bang on
time outside the school gates, I could see the other kids
looking at me as I walked to the car with dubious looks on their
faces which in turn made me walk faster urging my legs to get me
to the car quicker.
I took a sigh of relief as I sat in the car “How was your first
day at your new school son” mom said with great interest “Huh it
was ok I guess” My mom turned to me with a sympathetic look on
her face “I understand this is not easy for you, and I wish we
could have stayed where we once lived. But I hope you will one
day understand the reason why we had to go"
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter Two - When Realism Hits[/glow]
When we returned home my mom was very keen to know how I was
feeling “Danny are you ok? You have hardly said a word to me
since you got into the car” she said tentatively “Mom I’m fine”
I said in a somewhat abrupt way “Look son, I don’t mean to pry
but I know when something is on your mind” she paused waiting
for me to open up to her “For god sake mom, how the hell are you
expecting me to be feeling right now” I shouted.
My mom sat down at the dining table looking shocked by the way I
had addressed her, she put her head in her hands and began to
cry. I felt dreadful for reducing my mother to tears “Mom I’m
sorry, but you don’t know how hard it has been for me the past
few weeks” She looked up at me and placed her hand on mine “I
don’t even care about the fact I have lost my friends, The home
I grew up in, But to lose my Fucking dad!” I said exploding with
resentment.
I sat down next to my mom holding back my tears “ I will find
the People who killed my dad and make them pay for what they
have done” I could see by the look on my mother’s face she
probably wished she never asked me what I was feeling .
"Danny that won’t change what happened to your father, please
calm down and think about what you’re saying” she said wiping
her tears from her cheeks, my body felt like it was itching with
fury I could not sit there any longer. I stood up, put on my
jacket “Mom I love you and I don’t want to hurt you, but this
has been eating me up inside” I walked to the door “Danny Pease
don’t” Mom shouted nervously “I have to go mom I’m so sorry” I
ran out the door and with a quick glance back at the house I
could see my mom standing there looking inconsolable, I felt bad
about causing her this distress, but I knew inside I would not
rest knowing that gang was still there on the streets.
I wandered the darkened streets, beginning to show no concern in
regards to how long it would take for me to return back to
Stilwater. I walked long and hard through the night all I could
think about was the night my father died. When I was woken up by
the sound of what I thought was my dad’s car pulling up into the
drive way, but when in actual fact it was my dad’s partner
pulling up in his cop car. I knew something was wrong, but it
wasn’t until I heard my mother howling with despair that I knew
he must be dead.
He was called in to assist a drugs bust in the run-down
industrial area and was killed when things got out of hand by a
member of the Los Carnales.
BEEEEP BEEEP!
My time of reminiscence was brought to an end when a car pulled
up behind me on the highway, I turned round hesitantly thinking
it could be the cops but to my surprise it wasn’t. A man popped
his head out the window of a gray hatchback “Hey kid do you need
a ride” Feeling quite nervous about getting into some random
man’s car I thought ‘Hey fuck it’ I decided to take my chances.
I sat in the car feeling slightly uneasy about the decision I
made “What the hell you doing wandering along the highway at
this time of night son” The man said with a concerned tone to
his voice “You can get some crazy assed mother fuckers around
here, Where are you heading to?” He then sparked up blunt and
passed it my way and I felt obliged to take it “Um I am going to
Stilwater” The man smiled “Hell son that’s where I’m going, got
to pick me up some weed” Then he went on to have an extreme
coughing fit, but all in all he seemed harmless enough, all he
interested in was smoking his weed and singing along to tunes on
The Kronic radio station.
[glow=red,2,300]
Chapter Three - Road Trip[/glow]
An hour and a couple of blunts later the man cleared his throat
“Hell I don’t even think I introduced myself, I’m Andre but my
friends call me Mista Krunk” I had no need to question why that
was his name, as from what I had witnessed over the past hour
clarified that for me “My name is Danny” Andre shook my hand and
smiled at me “Well Danny what’s your story, you look kinda young
to be wandering a highway at 12 midnight” “Hey I’m not that
young, I’m nearly 18 years old in a few days time” I said
defensively feeling a little offended that he thought I was just
a kid , Well I kinda still was at but at the time I didn’t seem
to think so “Whoa there Playa , no need to get snappy wasn’t
meaning to upset you son” Andre then paused for about a minute
or two before he randomly suggested he was in need of food and
made a detour to Freckle Bitches.
As we pulled in to Freckle Bitches parking lot the place was
infested with large groups of hooligans hanging around their
cars, I followed Andre towards the establishment avoiding eye
contact at all costs. We stood at the counter just about to make
an order then all of a sudden the door slammed open and I could
hear the sound of someone pulling the trigger of a gun “Oh Shit”
Andre uttered under his breath. I stood there like a rabbit
caught in the head lights, my body just froze “Nobody fucking
move or I’ll blow your god damn brains out” a males voice said
aggressively I could see the people around me cowering in fear.
“You behind the counter give me all the fucking money or I’ll
kill your ass” the man persisted, the man behind the counter
stumbled towards the cash register with beads of sweat rolling
down his face as he began to empty the money from the till into
a paper bag.
“That better be it all fucker” the man snapped as he grabbed the
bag of money, the door then proceeded to smash open once again
“Come on man let’s get the fuck outta here before the fucken
cops come” another man shouted.
Both men fled Freckle Bitches leaving everyone rather relieved,
I gazed over at Andre who was standing there in total
disbelieve. I placed my hand on his shoulder “Uh Are you ok
Andre” I said thoughtfully “Eh Mm Yeah son I’m cool, we better
hall ass outta here” Andre said anxiously, we made our way to
the car immediately.
I could hear the faint sound of the sirens as I closed the car
door, Andre proceeded make a quick exit way from Freckle
Bitches. “We are about five minutes away from Stilwater Danny,
so what business do you have there” Andre questioned, “It’s a
long story Andre, Just have to sort out a few thing’s” “Uh ok
son didn’t mean to pry” Andre said, I think he understood that I
did not want to open up about my reason for returning to
Stilwater.
I went on to stare out of the car window I could see a few
familiar buildings in the distance, my heart began to race as we
got closer and closer. “Well here we are, Good old Stilwater”
Andre said cheerfully, he stopped the car and looked at me “Are
you going to be ok out here on your own” he said sounding rather
concerned “Yeah Andre I’ll be ok, Thanks for everything you’re a
cool guy” I said appreciatively.
I stepped out of the car and before I got the chance to close
the door Andre turned off the radio “Look kid , It’s rather late
to be wandering around, Your welcome to tag along with me to my
friends house n chill a bit before you embark on your crazy
assed adventure in Stilwater “ he stated.
“Fuck it why not , It is getting kinda late” I replied jumping
back into the car, I really did need some time to gather my
thoughts and think about what I was going to do next and This
seemed the perfect opportunity.
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Re: Saints Row - The Begining... By Ayngel
DIR By: Amaris
Date: November 8, 2011, 7:41 pm
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Very nicely done Ayngel, very nice! :D
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Re: Saints Row - The Begining... By Ayngel
DIR By: californiasoul
Date: November 10, 2011, 2:49 am
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Good story ayngel ;D
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Re: Saints Row - The Begining... By Ayngel
DIR By: Aussie Boy
Date: November 19, 2011, 8:08 am
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Nice work, this story bloody awesome
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Re: Saints Row - The Begining... By Ayngel
DIR By: Ayngel
Date: November 20, 2011, 7:15 pm
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Thanks Guys :-)
I will finish it soon
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Re: Saints Row - The Begining... By Ayngel
DIR By: Amaris
Date: November 23, 2011, 8:35 pm
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Awesome, I can't wait Ayngel! :D
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Re: Saints Row - The Begining... By Ayngel
DIR By: Farynthane
Date: December 14, 2011, 11:16 am
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Very nice Ayngel. :)
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Re: Saints Row - The Begining... By Ayngel
DIR By: jameson18
Date: December 14, 2011, 1:32 pm
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Great story Ayngel ;D
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Re: Saints Row - The Begining... By Ayngel
DIR By: Gangstarr4
Date: December 14, 2011, 8:01 pm
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Mhmm I like That..
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