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POWER Chap1[Welcome!]
DIR By: yourGrandmother
Date: January 5, 2012, 2:10 pm
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POWER
Money. Drugs. Power. The only things a man needs in order to
survive in the streets of Miami. Power is a beautiful thing, but
sometimes power can take control of you, and turn you into
something you never imagined.
George: MARSHALL!!! It's so good to see you again brother!
Marshall: George i'm so happy to be here with you! Were is Mom
and Jenah?
George: That is why i invited you to Miami. Mom needs help.
Marshall: What is it? George...TELL ME!
George: Marsh calm down! They found dad's killer.
Marshall: I knew this day was coming...were is Mom?
George: She is at the Police department with Jenah.
POLICE DEPARTMENT.
Jenah: Marsh! Oh my it's so good to see you again!
Marshall: Jenah! Sister i haven't seen you in years!
Jenah: What brings you here?
Marshall:.... Vacation... i guess. Where is mom?
Jenah: Mom is getting interviewed about dad's murder.
Marshall: So, do they know who killed him?
Jenah: Yes, a man named Tony Mozerreli.
George: OOHhhhh I know mhmh....
Jenah: George, what are you eating?
George: A biscuit. It seems to be wet...
TO
BE CONTINUED.
(This is my first
story so i'm a bit rusty on this. Please leave an honest
opinion. Thank you.)
#Post#: 2899--------------------------------------------------
Re: POWER Chap1[Welcome!]
DIR By: OGluke
Date: January 5, 2012, 2:57 pm
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Its your first man, youll get the hang of it
nice opening
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Re: POWER Chap1[Welcome!]
DIR By: Gangstarr4
Date: January 5, 2012, 3:02 pm
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*Wipes Tear Iff Face*
I knew.. I knew this day was coming.. Welcome to the
Family..Granny
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Re: POWER Chap1[Welcome!]
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: January 5, 2012, 8:06 pm
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Lol, I see ;D what you did there!
I cant wait to see how they track down their killa, I hope you
add some more description and what are characters look like,
that way we can paint a picture whilest we read!
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Re: POWER Chap1[Welcome!]
DIR By: jameson18
Date: January 17, 2012, 10:02 am
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Pretty good so far
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