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Unarmed & Lucky
By: Wetbizket Date: November 30, 2011, 7:29 pm
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[glow=red,2,300]Yeah buddie, my first story on here! I gonna try
to pay tribute to OG luke and add some pics enjoy![/glow]
Unarmed & Lucky
CHAPTER 1 "Henry Was A Renegade"
… I’m gonna need you back in 21 minutes, and not a minute
later!” My boss yelled as I made my way to the back of the store
and left out the back exit into the alley behind the grocery
store.
I shut the heavy metal door and noticed my friend Sushi, whose
nickname which would be rather prejudice if he didn’t have the
words “Sushi King” Tattooed onto his knuckles. Sushi is quite
the character, he came from Japan when he was 8 years and went
to the same school as me; his English is pretty good but could
use some adjustments. Being the typical Japanese student he
idolized American culture and watched too many urban gangster
movies and thought the way they talked was the coolest thing
ever so tries acting and dressing like the characters in those
movies, and somehow he is able to pull it off.
… “Damn, I think I reached the final straw. I’m gonna have to
start turning tricks, I can’t live my life being broke all the
time! I said smacking my palms against the building
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… “Yo, is that why we’re hanging in this alley?” Sushi asked
walking up to me from a crossed the alley.
I shook my head and giggled a little “No, I dont think I’m cut
out to bang fat lonely chicks on a dirty matress in the back of
an alley. BUT! I might know how to get ahold of some big money
quicker than pizza being eaten at a fat camp!” I said taking off
my bright blue apron and tossing it on the ground.
… “Cool, but let’s talk about it while we get some grub, I’m
starving like Marvin right now!” Sushi said yanking on my
sleeve.
… “NO TIME!” I snipped
I stepped forward resting my foot on a turned over cardboard box
“Say, whatever happened to your brother when he robbed that
store?” I asked slickly.
… “That fool got 2 ta 4?” Sushi said in a confused tone. “Why
are you asking about my bro Henry?”
I put my hand on my chin and raised my eyebrow “I’ve been
thinking of a get rich quick plan!” I said standing up on the
cardboard box.
Sushi stepped back and looked up at me “Wait, are you planning
on holding up a ma’fuckin store or something crazy like that!?”
Sushi exclaimed.
I jiggled my head “I’ve been thinking…”
… “Yo, I think all the time, I think about if an elevator smells
different from a little persons perspective or if sense a tomato
is a fruit, would ketchup be more like a smoothie. NOT ABOUT
ROBBING A STORE DUDE!” Sushi barked out.
… “Just hear me out first, I got this thing planned out to a
“T”! “I said as the box I was standing on squashed down under my
shoes.
… “Ai’ght homie, I can trust whatever you got goin on, but I
might have to throw in my two cents.” Sushi said in his foreign
accent while putting his hands in his hoodie pockets.
I stepped forward “It’s easy, every Friday night my boss stays
late at work, he organizes and counts all the money the store
made for the week and gets it ready for the armored car guys to
come collect it the next morning, that way it’ll be ready for
when they come. Sooo” I said taking a breath then looked around.
… “All we do is sneak into the store while he’s counting the
money, take him down and-“ I was cut off my Sushi.
… “YO I AINT KILLIN NOBODY “G”!”
I rolled my eyes “I didn’t mean kill him, I just meant tying him
up or something, then grabbing the money and taking off, there
is only one security camera by the entrance of the store so we
don’t gotta worry about cameras watching our every move!” I said
with a district look on my face.
… “But how are we gonna get it in the store when it’s all locked
up and shit?” Sushi asked.
I sat down on the smashed up box “That’s the only problem I
haven’t worked on yet.” I said looking up at sushi.
… “Eh, we could sneak in through the roof and come through the
vents, Mission Impossible style dawg, that would be mad as
hell!”
… “I don’t think that would work, but maybe I can sneak into my
boss’s office and find the keys to the store… Then have them
copied and sneak it back into his office.”
Sushi attitude started to grow from curious to excited… “Anyway
way we do it, we gotta be fuckin ninja’s! A fly on the wall, no
one can know about our master plan!” Sushi said shifting into a
karate pose.
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Just then a voice came from out of nowhere “I could leave the
backdoor open before leave.”
The voice startled us and we screamed like little girls as we
froze and turned to the person!
It was Levy, the girl that works at the grocery store with me!
She stood with her arms behind her back with a very innocent
look on her face. Levy was always a nice little girl who was
quite; I had a thing for her; I liked that she was innocent and
cute with the little freckles on her face and pigtail she always
puts her hair in.
… “How long have you been here?” I asked raising my voice
… “The whole time.” She said cracking a smile.
Sushi raised his arm and pointed at her giving her the evil eye
“No way man, she was spying on us!”
Levy shrugged “I was sitting over there and eating my lunch.”
She said nodding over to a set of steps behind some wooden
racks.
… “She’s lying, she was plotting down our master plan and was
gonna use it for herself and kill us!”
Levy Grimaced at Sushi “What, I was eating lunch, here’s my
bag!” She said holding out a brown paper bag.
Sushi snatched the bag out of her hand and searched through it
rapidly, “She aint lying, there’s food in here.” Sushi looked
back into the bag “Yo, Can I have your Ding dong?” He asked
looking up with a big grin on his face.
Levy walked up closer to us “I want in, I hate our boss and I
hate this store, I never got a raise and I’ve worked here for 3
years!” she said taking back her lunch bag from Sushi.
… “I don’t trust her, she can hide behind her looks, IM ON TO
YOU!” sushi said while shoving the mini chocolate cake roll into
his mouth.
Levy scanned the alley with her eyes “To tell the truth, for
some reason I’ve always want to do something like this, my life
is dull and boring. I probably would have just sat and said
nothing but thinking about getting payback to the dumb over
sensitive prick gets me kind of excited to see what’s going to
happen!” She said looking back and forth at me at sushi.
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… “What do you think guys?” She asked while giving “puppy dogs
eyes”
I scratched the front of my scalp, I couldn’t say no, I liked
the girl and fell for her looks “Yeah you’re in, plus going in
through the back door is a lot easier than coming through the
roof.” I said laughing at the idea of us coming down from the
celling from ropes.
Sushi pointed at “So are we doin this for real?!” He asked with
a big smile on his face.
… “Yeah.” I replied.
Sushi ran up to me and gave me a hug “BAAAMMMM!” he yelled out
jumping back from me, Levy just stood there and laughed at
Sushi.
… “Ok, we’ll meet at your house tonight at 10:00 and start
planning!” I said grabbing my apron back from the ground and
strapping in around my waste.
… “I can’t wait dawg, were gonna become famous outlaws, they’re
gonna make a movie about us!” Sushi said skipping backwards down
the alley “But first “I” gotta eat something, I’m dying!”
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Re: Unarmed & Lucky
By: Aussie Boy Date: December 1, 2011, 12:38 am
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Epic of the Puriest level bro.
I always loved your style of writing and got very sad when you
stopped writing stories, but now your writing again and it 's
fucking awesome bro. The characters are funny and entering and
Sushi is just awesome.
The pictures are good and help describe what we are looking at.
I am really looking forward to the next chapter and awful lot.
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Re: Unarmed & Lucky
By: Wetbizket Date: December 1, 2011, 2:52 pm
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I actually think I lost my touch lol! I wrote a little over a
half of this chapter a few days ago and came back and looked it
over, and i had to fix a whole lot of it. But I should get my
groove back and hopfully write a good story for everyone to
read!
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Re: Unarmed & Lucky
By: Gangstarr4 Date: December 1, 2011, 3:20 pm
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I Think this story is mad funny. So much description so I can
tell how they look and then the pictures as Aussie Pointed out.
Whatever touch you lost is finding its way back. Keep on Truckin
DinoMan!
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Re: Unarmed & Lucky
By: Wetbizket Date: December 11, 2011, 6:00 pm
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Chapter 2 “Planning Then Action”
After work I wrote down Sushi’s house address and gave it to
Levy and told her that I’d meet her there. I was almost excited
to see what Levy was like out of work, I think I’ve only seen
her once, and that was when she was picking up her paycheck. She
is very mysterious, it’s hard to read her thoughts and guess
what she acts like, she’s never talked about what she does on
the weekends or most importantly, if she has a boyfriend.
I walked to Sushi’s house, luckily I don’t live to far from it,
and as I walked up the front path I noticed someone walking down
the street, I stopped and looked letting my eyes adjust to the
darkness of the street, As the person walked down the side walk
the faded streetlights lite up a faint silhouette of them, I
recognized Levy’s figure. I decided to meet her halfway and
walked to her, the night air breezed a cool breath and there she
was, Glowing under a streetlight Levy stood, she looked
beautiful and flawless, she had a blue dress on that flowed with
the waves of air, there was a notebook resting by her waist
which stopped the bottom of the dress from flying up. She looked
one with the night, like she belonged to be on this old rotten
street, she seemed at peace.
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… “Perfect timing!” I joyfully said looking up at the
streetlights.
Levy looking down at her feet “Yeah.” She said.
We stepped up to Sushi’s porch and I knocked on the front screen
door. I heard some shuffling around and the door swung open,
Sushi’s little brother Miro pressed his face up against the door
and looked up at me then turned around and yelled out “MR.
BOOGER’S HERE!”
I smirked “Yeah, its me.” I said then looking over to see Levy
snickering. “I don’t know why but he calls me Mr. Booger.” I
said shaking my head around.
Sushi came walking up to the screen door unlocking it
“BoogNastey! My boy whats up!” He said opening the door for us.
“Sup” he said as Levy walked passed him.
Miro ran up to me with a plastic T-rex dinosaur toy and started
ramming me in the leg with “Look at my new toy!” Miro said
slowly pieceing each word together as he was still learning how
to put syllables together. Sushi runs up and smacks the toy out
of Miros hand “dude Lil B, Go chill out somewhere else, we got
important stuff to do!” He said while picking back up to toy.
We went into Sushi’s room and instantly got into the discussion.
… “So what’s the plan Henry?” Sushi asked.
… “Alright, First Levy cracks the back door open making sure
it’s not noticeable for anyone to see that its open and shut it,
Second we wait for Levy to meet us at the burger Tank parking
lot a crossed the street and give us the word. We will have to
wait 10 or 15 minutes to make sure Boss has taken out all the
money all the money out.
I notice Levy writing notes in her notebook. She looks up “It
should be around 11:10 when I get out of work, but shouldn’t I
change my clothes so he doesn’t see its one of us that works
here?” She says looking back and forth at me and Sushi.
… “Yep, were gonna bring a pair of clothes, that you can put
on.” I said sitting down on top of Sushi’s desk.
Sushi jumped in “Dude, lets all wear some badass black suits
with adidas and black glasses and shit!”
… “I don’t think that’s necessary, but we should probably wear
something black.” I said.
“I got a black suit!” Sushi said as he stood up and started
looking through his closet.
… “Whatever.” I said
Levy Jumped in “Ski masks?” She asked pointing her pen at me.
… I nodded “ski masks.”
… “Next step once we get inside, enter bosses office and secure
him so he cant get away or call the police.
Levy looks up again “Rope?” She asks waiting for me to make a
decision.
I had to think a second “ No, Duct tape, that way we can put it
over his mouth and stuff.”
Levy scribbles down Duct tape. Sushi pops out of the side of his
closet “Bring rope, you dope!”
… “We don’t need any rope!” I said folding my arms.
… “Rope always comes in handy, just in case we gotta go mission
impossible style!” Sushi barks out.
… “Rope” I said in a dull tone.
Levy repeats me but doesn’t write anything down.
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… “Next we gather all the money; We need a good sized cardboard
box with holes on the side so we can pick it up easier, then a
garbage back to go inside the box.” I said mainly to Levy
because it seemed like she was writing down a supply list, plus
Sushi was in his closet looking for his suit.
… “Box, and garbage bag.” Levy sounded out as she wrote in her
notebook.
… “Next we gotta hide the money; there is a state park about an
hour away where were gonna bury the box, we go home and let
things blow over.” I said standing up
… “What if Boss gets smart and tries to fight back?” Levy asked
looking back up from her notebook.
Just then Sushi’s voice rang out from the closet “I got that
covered, look under my bed, I got some firepower tucked away.”
Me and Levy looked at each other then looked under Sushi’s bed
and seen to 2 pistols lying on the floor.
… “Don’t I remember hearing you say you didn’t want to kill no
one?” Levy asked still looking under the bed.
… “Air won’t kill anybody.” Sushi said still tucked away in his
closet.
I grabbed them and looked at them “Their just airsoft guns” I
said holding them up.
Levy took the big desert eagle from my hand and looked down the
sights “It looks like the real thing.”
… “Yeah, the desert eagle is mine, and Henry you get the glock.”
Sushi said while clunking around in his closet still.
Levy’s jaw drops “What do I use then?” She said in a stern
voice.
… “Dude, I still don’t think having with us is a good idea, but
Henry thinks you’re alright, so you’re lucky you get to tag
along with us G’s!
Levy slaps her hands on the floor … “Wait a second, heres a
though “G”. How are you guys gonna get around town, let alone to
the state park? Do any of
you guys own a car?” She says looking down to the floor while
blushing.
… “What’ch you sayin?” Sushi’s voice cracks out from the closet.
Levy shrugs “We can use my brothers car!”
… “I think I’m startin to like this girl.” Sushi says.
… “Anyway, what do you all think?” I said holding out my hands
like it was a big finish to a magic show.
Just then Sushi steps out wearing a black suit and tie with a
pair of black sun glasses “I think were about to rob a mutha
fuckin store!”
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Just then the radio turns on and loud music begins playing.
TO BE CONTINUED!>!>!>!NOLJASDNGLSDJFNSLDJFNLASDFNL
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Re: Unarmed & Lucky
By: Aussie Boy Date: December 17, 2011, 8:41 pm
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Hahahaha, Awesome. Sushi is just so awesome haha.
These feels so real, that kid hitting him with the toy, it just
feels real.
Also did I find a hint at the Boondock Saints when they wanted
rope...
I did comment on this because I was going to read it and my
mate needed some help, so I had to go and help him and never got
around to reading it.
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Re: Unarmed & Lucky
By: Wetbizket Date: December 18, 2011, 12:58 am
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Lol, yeah I had to put that in there lol!
I'm getting ready to write the next chapter but in SR3 all my
saves are stuck in the frickin day time, so now I gotta figure
out how to make it go to night so I cant take some more pics!
:-\
Oh yeah, I wanted it to seem like these guys are just ordinary
kids living regular lives.
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Re: Unarmed & Lucky
By: Wetbizket Date: December 21, 2011, 4:26 pm
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Chapter 3 “The Moment We’ve Been Waiting For”
After the meeting at Sushi’s house we split up, we decided to
split up the tasks on getting ready for the heist. Levy said she
might have some masks lying around her house and I was gonna
gather up the rest of the supply’s tomorrow before we rob the
store.
The next day me and Sushi went to Levy’s house to pick up her
brothers car. We caught her as she was getting ready to leave
for work, Levy greeted us with a nod and lead the way to her
room.
… “I thought we had some old ski masks but we didn’t I’m sorry”
She said scurrying around her room.
Then she went to her dresser “But I found 2 of these old
wrestling masks.” She said thinking that me and Sushi were gonna
be mad at her.
But Sushi turned into a 6 year old and ran up to her and
snatched a mask out of her hand “Aw! Those are awesome!” He said
putting the mask on, it took him a while to match up the correct
holes with his eyes.
… “But you could only find 2?” I said remembering the ordeal
when we only had to guns to use.
Sushi started jumping around like he was in a wrestling ring
then started to do a wrestling taunt.
Levy then gave a slick to me “Which means that ones for me and
the other one is for you!” She said while grinning.
Sushi stops what he was doing and grows disappointed “Oh I see
how it is! Just because only me and Henry get the use the guns
means you get to keep the masks huh?!” Sushi barks out while
fixing his mask.
Levy puts her hands on her hips and nods her head “Yep, but I
did find a rag for you to put over your face.”
Levy tosses Sushi a yellow bandana; he shrugs and takes the
luchadore mask off. “Yeah, I guess that will work.”
I noticed as we were about to leave, Levy seemed a bit tense and
nervous, I wanted to make sure that she was really ready for
something this serious.
I walked up behind Levy and grabbed her hand “Are you ok about
this?” I asked.
She turned around and looked at me, her cute face made me smile
even during this serious matter. She looked at the ground and
nodded “Yeah, I was just
thinking about everything.” She briefly said.
… “We’ll don’t worry, were doing this together and everything is
going to be alright.” I said reassuring her and even myself.
After that she gave me the keys to her brothers car “Are you
sure your brother is alright with us taking his car?” I asked
while looking for the right key.
… “He won’t even know it left its spot in the driveway, he’s out
of town.” Levy said as we walked outside.
I was expecting her brother’s car to be a piece of crap rust
bucket, but instead it was a brand new Quasar! Sushi ran up to
his car and put his hand on the hood “Damn, this thing is a pimp
mobile!” He said looking at himself in the reflection of the
rims.
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… “We’ll see you at 11:15 then?” I asked giving a smile to Levy.
She nodded giving me a smile back.
Sushi opened the door to the SUV “Come on, let’s roll!” He
yelled out as he jumped in the passenger seat.
… You better not wreck this thing” Levy said as we all got into
the car.
We drove off, I dropped levy off at the grocery store and me and
Sushi went out to buy the rest of the supplies for the heist,
then we waited. At 11:00 we went to the parking lot a crossed
the street from the store and waited for Levy. The streets were
dark and empty as me and Sushi scanned them while we sat in the
SUV. It was a little over 11:15 when we caught Levy comeing out
of the store, I flipped on the lights for her to spot us.
She came walking up to the SUV with a stern face and looked into
the passenger side window, me and Sushi silently waited for her
to say something.
She looked at us “So are you ready?” She asked raising her
eyebrows.
Me and Sushi looked at each other and smirked “Yeahhhh.” Sushi
said as he handed Levy her clothes.
She went behind the car and changed into her outfit, part of me
wanted to see if I could catch anything good, but my other part
wanted to respectfully give her privacy. But of course sushi
casually peeks out the back window and smirks “Yeah check that
out.” He whispers then taps my arm. I rolled my eyes then peeked
behind me to catch a dark silhouette of her back and her bra
strap going around her shoulders. Even though I only seen her
back that made me imagine what the rest of her would look like
nude.
She finished up and we got ready for the “job”, I opened the
back trunk and pulled out me and Levys masks and Sushi’s
bandana. “Damn, I wish I had a sweet ass mask, but all I get is
this dumb bandana.” He said as he tied it around his face.
… “Yeah, well at least you get a mask; I’m stuck without a gun!”
Levy smugly said shaking her head at Sushi.
… “You probably can’t even use a gun anyways!” Sushi replied
back
Levy gave a frustrated look on her face “I bet you don’t even
know what I kind of gun that is!” She said.
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I got annoyed at the argument they were having “The gun isn’t
even real!” I exclaimed.
… “Boss doesn’t know that!” She hissed back.
Sushi tilted his head “Fine miss Rambo! How about I trade you,
my gun for your mask!” Sushi said pointing the airsoft gun at
Levy.
… “What does it matter who has a gun, its not like were actually
using them!” I said putting on my mask.
Levy yanked the gun out of Sushi’s hand then handed him her
mask.
… “Jeez…Bitch” Sushi mumbled out.
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Levy frowned then shot Sushi with a pellet that was inside the
airsoft jump. It flicked off Sushi’s hand which made Sushi jump
up and down shaking his hand to relive the stinging pain.
That made the both of them start to bicker and argue. “Guys! I
just want to let you know that whoever doesn’t have the gun, has
to help tie up the boss!” I said in the middle of Levy and
Sushi’s little argument.
Sushi stopped what he was doing and tossed back the mask to Levy
“fuck that dawg! You can tie up the dude!” He yelled out.
Levy tossed the gun at Sushi; he fumbled to catch it “HEY DON’T
DROP IT!” He yelled getting a grip back onto it.
… “Yeah! Now I’m gonna bust a cap at you!” Sushi said pointing
the airsoft gun at levy’s face.
Levy weaves her face around as Sushi aims the gun at her “If you
shoot me with that I’ll punch in the face so hard, you’ll
swallow your eyeballs!”
… “Are you guys done arguing?” I asked while keeping myself from
laughing from how dumb those 2 sounded, Levy was a lot feistier
than I expected her to be.
… “Yeah, let’s do this.” Levy said putting the mask over her
face.
… “Are you cool sush?” I asked
Sushi nodded while putting on his sunglasses “You know it!” He
said.
… “Well, what are we standing around for?” Levy said as she
grabbed the cardboard box from the truck.
I slammed the truck shut “Let’s do this!”
TO BE CONTINUED!
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Re: Unarmed & Lucky
By: OGluke Date: January 2, 2012, 5:39 pm
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hahahaha
thats some funny stuff and thanks for tributing me for the pics
but you was the first to use em, dating back to your warehouse
story. Those pictures are hilarious.. especially the fat guys
crane pose. whos he trying to fool. lol
ive only just now started reading the first chap. but i
definately think you should continue..
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Re: Unarmed & Lucky
By: Gangstarr4 Date: January 3, 2012, 3:47 pm
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mhmm i like that
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