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Re: Dark Corners
DIR By: iC3xM4n
Date: December 9, 2011, 12:59 pm
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Update: I have racier version of this story that's slightly
longer for some friends that liked it, but wanted to read
something a bit more......erotic, and I was planning on
submitting one of these to deviantArt, but I don't know which
one. Personally, I like the original (the one shown here) and
feel like the erotic scenes cheapen the story (although well
written IMO), but I don't know what people would like to read
more.
So, thoughts/opinions?
#Post#: 1718--------------------------------------------------
Re: Dark Corners
DIR By: Wetbizket
Date: December 9, 2011, 1:57 pm
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I cant read stuff like that and keep a straight face, We aren't
no womens, we dont need no soap opera.
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Re: Dark Corners
DIR By: iC3xM4n
Date: December 18, 2011, 9:59 pm
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Working on the next part. Decided I'd share something in the
mean time. I have been reading a web comic strip called
Ctrl+Alt+Del, and pretty much fell in love with chef brian
(
HTML http://v.cdn.cad-comic.com/comics/cad-20080105-b35d3.jpg)
and
instead of doing some random monologue, I decided to do a random
poem week, and here is today's. Not as random as I would wish,
but I've still got six more days to get it right.
Subliminal Massages
I'm sharper than you think
My wit cuts clean
But what you may not know about me
Is the butter pâté is stealthier than it seems,
The lemon king still searches for his queen.
Miss rosamund of puréed green,
The Hatter is not madder than me
For I'm as quiet as a screaming spleen.
Chop, chop the carrots to bits
Dump in some rum and boil 'em to grits.
For cheese is the way of the yellow brick road,
Now put on the shoes and pass me the toad.
#Post#: 2418--------------------------------------------------
Re: Dark Corners
DIR By: iC3xM4n
Date: December 22, 2011, 2:52 am
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Okay guys, having serious writer's block. I'm wanting the story
to flow much like a dream, as in I want it to have kind of a
relaxing mood, but be random in the way that it makes complete
sense while reading it, but when you think back on it afterwards
you automatically go "what the fuck?" but I'm not having much
success. If anyone wants to give some pointers or any
suggestions just to get my mind working, that would be much
appreciated.
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Re: Dark Corners
DIR By: OGluke
Date: December 22, 2011, 3:35 am
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writers block sux
and whats worse is when your writing a story you cant really
focus on anything else but maybe you could try clearing your
mind think happy thoughts and if lucky eventually something will
come to you.
thats all i got in the way of advice, the story is wicked bro
never read anything like it kinda puzzles me but in a goodway,
very nice.
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Re: Dark Corners
DIR By: californiasoul
Date: December 22, 2011, 3:22 pm
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nice
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