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#Post#: 6720--------------------------------------------------
Character Endings - Banished
By: Karahl Date: February 24, 2014, 6:48 am
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Here are the endings of characters whom have been pulled out of
Part IV due to their choices made throughout the arc.
- They will remain here until Part IV is over and the Conclusion
threads begin.
- Characters cannot escape without Arc Host's permission.
- You can RP here if you like.
- Characters banished here are in no danger, are not dead, do
not have permanent damages/injuries without permission.
- Characters are automatically fully healed.
- Not all characters will make it to see the end of Part IV
simply because the structure of how their characters must act to
be IC and how their RPers RP. This is nothing personal, it is
simply a conflict of interests and as an Arc Host it is my job
to make sure that the arc does not derail and that the story
part of it does not lose its meaning, purpose and impact.
Unfortunately with RP, not everything can be predicted and in
order for this arc to be successful some elements need to be
controlled. From the start and right through to parts 1 to 3, I
gave you complete freedom within reason, so I will justify to
say that I have been fair.
#Post#: 6723--------------------------------------------------
Re: Character Endings - Banished
By: Karahl Date: February 24, 2014, 7:16 am
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Ty the Hedgewolf
Conclusion Title: Beserker
Ty the Hedgewolf and the style of which he has been RP'd as, has
made both positive and negative impacts on the arc. His
personality type makes him a fordable fighter and a good
contributor to the team.
Positives:
[list]
[li]One for coming up with strategies when facing bad odds.[/li]
[li]Acknowledges the threat the Songbirds posed against him.
(BIG PLUS!!!)[/li]
[li]Acknowledges damage and challenges presented to him without
a quick fix. (i.e. Not God-Modding.)[/li]
[li] Loyal ally to Karahl and Snow-Claws.[/li]
[/list]
Negatives:
[list]
[li]Only suited to combat RPs, doesn't appear to contribute much
more than being the muscle. Seems to have the attitude of "I
must defeat my enemy in a fight to win." (Feel free to prove me
wrong.)[/li]
[li]RPer has a tendency to not read prior posts which then
disrupts flow of RP and immersion. [/li]
[li]Inconsistency and unpredictability makes it difficult to
place him correctly within the arc best suited for his
character. Moderately high risk of derailing arc.[/li]
[/list]
Best Posts:
[quote author=Ty the Hedgewolf]
"your right Blaze..this is a one shot deal its the only chance
we got right now" Ty sad as he looks at the path of Ice that the
wolf is currently standing and then quickly observe the wolfs
spinning blades then comes up with an idea. "Blaze...I want you
to melt the ice just enough for it to turn into water..then I
want you to electrify it...Ajax me and you will provide a
distraction and we need to keep him pinned to the ice while
Blaze do his job and if this plan works..he will be severely
weakened and we can all deal the finishing blow" Ty said knowing
the full risk of putting himself and Ajax in great
danger..especially Ty.
....
"alright..Blaze..take your position on the ice.ill give you the
signal when to fire..Ajax come with me to hold him down long
enough for this to work..we have to do this quickly and make no
mistakes..now lets go" Ty said as he was giving them
instructions on what to do and then he takes off running to
attempt to hold the wolf down hoping he wouldn't put up much of
a struggle though was completely unaware of the potential
possibility that the spinning blades may pierce them all if they
execute the plan too slow.
#Post#: 6724--------------------------------------------------
Re: Character Endings - Banished
By: Karahl Date: February 24, 2014, 7:20 am
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After being englufed by the Goddess' wrath, Ty was sent to a
secret chamber within the Songbird Sanctuary. The Goddess took
pity upon him, despite his brash actions and healed him of all
his injuries and restored his strength. Despite this, it appears
that there is no way out by direct intervention from someone
outside the Songbird Cult... but he can see and hear everything
that is happening back in the Chapel of Priuella via a
mysterious orb at the centre of the empty room.
#Post#: 6729--------------------------------------------------
Re: Character Endings - Banished
By: Ty the Hedgewolf Date: February 24, 2014, 8:14 am
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Ty is suddenly warped to a mysterious room by the goddess as he
is now placed inside an empty room with a mysterious orb in the
center just so he can watch everything his injuries are fully
healed and now his demon transformation is gone due to the
possibility either the goddess reverted him back to normal, or
that the forms timer ran out. After observing his surroundings
for a moment it appears that there isn't a way out so he then
decides to stands there straight and watching through the
mystery orb
#Post#: 6779--------------------------------------------------
Re: Character Endings - Banished
By: Karahl Date: February 26, 2014, 1:20 am
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Ajax
Conclusion Title: Chaos Commando
Ajax has always been an interesting character to be thrown into
the mix of the RP. Unpredictable, offering interesting and
creative solutions to problems as well as for bringing in
something new to offer in the arc as opposed to normally in
previous RPs - i.e. the Mech Suit.
Positives:
[list]
[li]Offering successful, creative solutions to problems
presented in RP.[/li]
[li]Acknowledges the threat the Songbirds posed against him -
towards the end. (BIG PLUS!!!)[/li]
[li]Acknowledges damage and challenges presented to him without
a quick fix. Leaving some injuries and broken equipment makes it
feel more believeable.(i.e. Not God-Modding.)[/li]
[li]Detailed posts, particularly when encouraging for more
information to be squeezed out without me needing to give
everyone an information dump on my own accord.[/li]
[li]Eventually choosing a side.[/li]
[/list]
Negatives:
[list]
[li]Persistently brought up enemies from his own lore and make
the arc's threat come across as nothing by comparison. (Mostly
at the start and towards the middle.) This is a very high risk
element to derail another person's arc, despite being
In-Character.[/li]
[li]Going down the path of choosing neither side at the start
and through to half way of the RP was highly discouraged and
thus lead to this ending. As you could tell, it's made a very
significant impact. [/li]
[/list]
Best Posts:
[quote author=Ajax]
Ajax kept an eye on the camera feed, but acknowledged Sonic's
question. "We can see what little Bulb can see from at least a
few kilometers away. As odd as it sounds, they were actually
built to be launched from a cannon to do exactly what you're
suggesting." He paused the camera feed on the image of the heavy
duty rope, then pushed a small button to call the drone back. It
scuttled along quickly, now paying no heed to what was around
it.
As Sonic was hanging off the side of the tower, Bulb slowly made
its way up Sonic's side and dug its legs into the tower, in an
attempt to give Sonic something else to hold on to.
Ajax watched closely from his camera feed. "Come on, Bulb...
Don't let us down..."
...
Seeing the generator before him, Ajax smashed his fists against
it repeatedly, not caring what it took to break it; all that
mattered to him was if he could destroy it, and if power would
cut off.
(This made me giggle!)
...
Ajax had stood in shock the entire time, staring at the young
child who had grabbed his arm; why would someone defend this
unholy figure? "I... I do not understand... This is true..." He
seemed to hesitate, the child clearly altering his view. "I
could never understand... It is hard to do so, when the truth
has been twisted... I was given the belief that she meant only
death to those who did not follow... Yet, you are a child, and
you follow her on your own accord?..
He had not believed Priuella was an actual goddess at the start,
just a person they may have revered as a hero. Now, it seemed
out of place; the Songbirds hadn't told them everything. He
looked again to Piruella. "You say you do not thrive upon
bloodshed?.. That you merely exist because it does as well?.."
#Post#: 6807--------------------------------------------------
Re: Character Endings - Banished
By: Ajax Date: February 26, 2014, 1:42 pm
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As Ajax fell into the dark chambers, he caught himself and
landed feet first on the floor; he had expected Priuella to do
this. He looked up to, what he assumed was, the ceiling and
simply sighed. "[shadow=darkred,left]You are tainted... The
stain shall never wash out... The sun will never shine upon you
again... Tainted, broken little toy of greed and
desire...[/shadow]"
He looked to the mysterious orb in the center of the room and
walked over, his arms crossed. He watched everything as if a
dutiful sentry, the only words ever uttered from his mouth
being, "[shadow=darkred,left]Prove to her that she is nothing
but an ungrateful child of ignorance and desire...[/shadow]"
#Post#: 6809--------------------------------------------------
Re: Character Endings - Banished
By: Ty the Hedgewolf Date: February 26, 2014, 3:26 pm
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Ty having been leaning against the wall with his arms crossed
apparently feeling bored of having been inside that room for
possibility an hour or so sees Ajax seemingly appear in the room
with him. "she got you too huh.." Ty had said to the lynx
speaking rather casually which is odd considering that there is
no way out for those two.
#Post#: 6811--------------------------------------------------
Re: Character Endings - Banished
By: Ajax Date: February 26, 2014, 4:11 pm
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"[shadow=darkred,left]In a manner of speaking. She cannot,
however, avoid the inevitable...[/shadow]" He seemed unconcerned
with his location, or with anything but Priuella's demise it
seemed. He simply watched the events unfold, his presence
distant. "[shadow=darkred,left]She will come full circle,
banished inside another prison at this point or
another.[/shadow]"
#Post#: 6812--------------------------------------------------
Re: Character Endings - Banished
By: Ty the Hedgewolf Date: February 26, 2014, 4:27 pm
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Ty looked at the lynx with a look that spells curiosity while at
the same time a look of a glimmer of hope which isn't seen on
the stoic hybrid before and he also continues to remain at his
spot on the wall while keeping up with his current posture. "you
know they can win against her?" he asked the lynx.
#Post#: 6813--------------------------------------------------
Re: Character Endings - Banished
By: Ajax Date: February 26, 2014, 4:48 pm
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Ajax turned to him, with a look on his face mirroring that as if
Ty had just called him a jackass and then made Natasha cry.
"[shadow=darkred,left]What the hell is that question supposed to
mean? Of course she can be beaten; Karahl's ancestors beat her
once, it will be no different to beat her again. Granted, this
does not involve killing her, as much as I wish it
did...[/shadow]" He turned back to the orb.
"[shadow=darkred,left]I swear, you're just like Cyrus; don't pay
attention to anything but the explosions...[/shadow]"
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