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Robotnik Rises!
By: Sonic Date: January 19, 2014, 1:33 am
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Art from google and various artists on the forum. Each character
and drawing is property of the respective artist or creator
(Notable mentions Miss V,Nova The Fire
Dragon,Sapphire,Ajax,Miyuki)
Description
Okay guys welcome to the first Story Arc. I call it Robotnik
Rises.This is a highly structured story venture that will
encourage you to work together in order to overcome harsh
obstacles and defeat your common foe.
You have all been beamed upon the Doctors space station and must
work together or alone if you prefer to take down Robotnik. He
lies in the heart of the flying fort protected by an unbreakable
barrier.The only to get to Robotnik is to find and destroy the 4
hidden generators then the barrier will break and you can face
the doctor. If the space station reaches orbit a beam is fired
down at the city and everybody below is Robotasized.
Every thread and post that was a part of Robotnik Rises is
listed below in the ordered structure most of it took place in.
Opening
Robotnik Rises:
HTML http://sonicspotlightrp.createaforum.com/mobotropolis/re-head-drama!/msg808/#msg808
North:
HTML http://sonicspotlightrp.createaforum.com/mobotropolis/north-gate/
South:
HTML http://sonicspotlightrp.createaforum.com/mobotropolis/south-gate/
East:
HTML http://sonicspotlightrp.createaforum.com/mobotropolis/east-gate/
West:
HTML http://sonicspotlightrp.createaforum.com/mobotropolis/west-gate/90/<br
/>
Overtime locations
The Core:
HTML http://sonicspotlightrp.createaforum.com/mobotropolis/the-core/
The Upper Level:
HTML http://sonicspotlightrp.createaforum.com/mobotropolis/re-the-core/<br
/>
Final act
Catching up:
HTML http://sonicspotlightrp.createaforum.com/mobotropolis/catching-up/
Justice:
HTML http://sonicspotlightrp.createaforum.com/mobotropolis/justice!/)<br
/>)
Did you guys enjoy it. Did you like taking part? This took a lot
of planning preparation time and fast typing to keep you all
entertained. Please leave a comment or a review on what you
liked loved or hated. I want all your comments feedback advice
for future praise and complements.
Your Pal
Sonic Spotlight founder
Sonic
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Re: Robotnik Rises!
By: Sapphire Date: January 19, 2014, 2:22 am
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I loved it, it was so much fun!
I like how you made it more challenging by adding in badniks and
how our attacks where decided by you, it made it harder but more
exciting! :D
I also liked how we had to work together to achieve things,
Sapphire made a few more friends (or allies) while doing this
Story Arc. And it was a great way to get all the characters
introduced to each other.
I hope we get to do more Story arcs. Like this one!
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Re: Robotnik Rises!
By: Forte Date: January 19, 2014, 9:33 am
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I agree with Sapphire.
This Arc was planned out. It wasn't just about one character.
It was about different characters no matter the background
willing to stop a common foe.
Because of the arc a lot of characters established rivalries,
friendships and by the time "Justice!" was around.. Enemies.
Here's hoping the next Arc will be just as Amazing!!
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Re: Robotnik Rises!
By: Karahl Date: January 19, 2014, 12:36 pm
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I loved the arc very much so, really exciting, well planned out
and I've felt that you have grown as a writer as well since June
last year - you're getting even better and better so quickly!
Well done! My only regret was to have so many shifts at work to
miss out on half of the action-bits! Ah well, maybe next time!
:P
The Good:
- Everyone's contributions and actions mattered, working
together really made this exciting
- In the Justice thread, the controversy of whether or not to
let Robotnik live grabbed everyone's attention and kept me at
the edge of my seat even if Karahl really didn't give a damn xD
- How everyone, not just you, acknowledged and respected each
character's capabilities without constantly trying to one-up
each other. e.g. I remember that characters have acknowledged,
whilst not necessarily lost courage to, that Karahl's silent
stare was quite intimidating and that her skills as a Jonin are
a force to be reckoned with.
- Each character was given an opportunity to shine.
- Crowd and environment control. This was something I was using
as well on the pony board, controlling the bad guys and
environment whenever fights or other interactions between
characters took place. This keeps everyone in an even playing
field without the whole thing spiraling out of control.
- Relationships between characters have been established:
friends, foes, rivals or mutual.
- Your arc was simple and straight to the point, which makes
everything a whole lot easier for you as an Arc Host as well as
allowing flexibility as to what happens in it based on
characters' actions.
- Your arc has inspired me to think of one of my own. I have a
couple of ideas but I don't know if I still have the confidence
in going ahead with this one after my first arc on another board
became a flop. xD
The Not-So-Good:
- Really can't think of anything! I think my only comment on
this section from your Vesper Arc was that the end result was
pre-planned and that others' actions didn't matter so much. But
that's not the case in this one, so yay! :D
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